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Gail L. Plummer
Department of English
Master of Arts
seven short stories which focus on the child and his viewpoint:
the seer of the truth of love and of religion, and the sentimp.n-
Gail L. Plummer
English 600b
August 5, 1968
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@) Gail L. Plummer 1969
<X>NTENTS
Preface
Innocence.
"Teddy,"
to Wisdom."
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·' Chapter VII The Artist as a Child: Truman Capote's
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.' Preface
of The New Yorker magazine and the two short stories which were pub-
lished there. One was about Australia, which is not surprising, for
inter est to me. To emphasize too much the fact of its inclusion
constitutes what has been termed "the New Yorker short story," a
to say:-that The New Yorker has been at the forefront in the publi-
cation of the short story during the last few decades and that it
often indicates trends both in style and content. Many of our most
magazine are excellent. That The New Yorker has published such a
short story and that previously it has printed many which are
the last thirty years (Conrad AÏken's "Silent Snow, Secret Snow"
Welty's "A Memory" (1937), Jean Stafford's "The Shorn Lamb" (1953),
and Conrad Aiken's "Silent Snow, Secret Snow" (1934). Although the
these stories contain more than one or the major threads or interest
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movies, records, clothes, and books. But the fetish has entered
cent, or purports to do SOt Children are not only seen and heard,
of lite.
the child?
It is necessary first to note that the subject matter of such
fiction is far from new although it has only recently been incor-
porated into the short story forme The traditional view of the child
between the Eden-child and our basic instincts and desires, to the
helplessness, a sympathy for other human beings and for animaIs, and
• during the past two hundred years. Our vision of the child has
the view of the child since primitive times as found in many differ-
these are what Boas considers the unchanging contribution o:f the
image o:f the child for our culture. An interest in youth is closely
allied to the preoccupation with indians, the insane, and rural folk.
According to these standards, today's hippies and yippies are as
writing o:f the child the modern author is also searching, through
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this less complicated being, for the basic forces which can have
• universal truth.
It is customary to believe that romantic focus on the child
tion of a need to socialize and educate the child, certain char ac-
that, by 1628, John BarIe could consider the child a copy of Adam,
tradition the previous two hundred years have focused upon the child
Barrie, James Joyce, and Dylan Thomas have aIl made use of his fresh-
interest.
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Boas, p. 43 •
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nature" and "The nonchalance of boys who are sure of a dinner," who
who give "an independent, genuine verdict,"S sets the stage for an
idealization of boyish frankness which continues through this cen-
tury. "A boy is in the parlor what the pit is in the playhouse,,6
pieces as Hawthorne' s "The Gentle Boy" (1832), but this milder view
Bad Little Boy" (who makes very good) was rejected by william
Dean Howells, then editor of The Atlantic Monthly for this very
reason, although its hero is simply performing his function, estab-
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Stephen E. Whicher (Boston, 1957), p. 149 •
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Emerson, p. 149.
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for grown-ups who have ~ boys.,,9 Other American writers did not
Lewis considers that there has been probab1y but one true Adamic
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bably because of this nnew world" attempt now three centuries old,
Il Lewis, p. 129.
12 Ihab Hassan, Radical Innocence: studies in the Contemporary
American Novel (Princeton, N. J., 1961), p. 37
explain the compulsive interest in the child which has haunted our
depicts the death of the American wilderness but leaves its archi-
It was as if the boy had already divined what his senses and
intellect had not encompassed yet: that doomed wilderness • • •
through which ran not even a mortal beast but an anachronism
indomitable and invincible out of an old, dead time, a phantom,
epitome and apotheosis of the old, wild life. • • -- the old
bear, sOlitary, indomitable, and alone • • • • 15
Only Ike and the primitive figure Sam know instinctively what he
must do to see the bear. Ike even knows that he cannot fight the
the last act on a set stage. It was the beginning of the end of
than his place in the organic view of growth. Nick Adams matures
proven; the results are pain and loss, yet there is a gain of a
The two threads of the story, the drab half-lives of the boarders
at the Pension Luarca and the bull-fight dreams of Paco, come into
The boy Paco had never known. • • what aIl these people
would be doing on the next day and on other days to come.
He had no idea how they really lived nor how they ended.
He did not even realize they ended. He died, as the Spanish
phrase has it, full of illusions. He had not had time in his
life to lose any of them, nor even, at the end, to complete
an act of contrition. 17
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carried over into the modern image of youth from the previous
child, while at the same time freeing themselves from the specifi-
The fact that these authors are also allying the child with
still a child" are the highest prai~e he can give to someone who
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the innocence of children. Her story frees the "child" from any
"child," the person who is for some reason, at any moment in time,
on the other side of the barrier which separates the civilized
and rational from the natural and emotional. The truth and worth
child •
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"A Miserable Merry Christmas," touch upon events which the authors
designed to recall "the good old days." As Huck Finn's raft exis-
His stories portray lire berore the destructive mechanical age, or,
more exactly, berore his awareness or such an age. These are part
country berore the typical move to the city or suburbs, for the
and Walter de la Mare, ror example) make this time or lire the
.' topic ror volumes or short stories. Graham Greene goes so rar as
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• to state that the child is the only true reader; here are lines
Stories such as these Ïorm the "entering wedge" Ïor the child's
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Graham Green, The Lost Childhood and Other Essays
(London, 1951), p. 13.
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Capote's early work was concerned with his youth. The sensibility
that of Colin in The Grass Harp and the "1" of this story. The
Dolly Talbo" and her sister Verena, who is not an "easy woman" (1
use their Harp names), apparently had enough impact to haunt Capote
and supply him with fictional material. Like the grass harp he
must be "always telling a story," for the harp "knows .aU the
stories of aIl the people on the hill, of aIl the people who ever
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lived, and when we are dead it will tell ours too."
2
Van Wyck Brooks, The Ordeal of Mark Twain (New York,
1920), p. 175.
3 Truman Capote, nA Christmas Memory," Breakfast at Tiffany's:
A Short Novel and Three Short·Stories (Toronto, 1966). References
will be to this edition. The story was originally published in
Mademoiselle, 44 (December, 1956), 70-71+.
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Truman Capote, The Grass Harp (New York, 1951), p. 4 •
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the tale, verbs are in the present tense, and there is a clear
pull the buggy home." (p. 116) Some of these miss the speech of
that flew to heaven!" (p. 118) Other such techniques are lists
and parentheses:
5 Hassan, p. 235.
6 Truman Capote. These words are credited to Capote but no
source is given in the Ïollowing article: Paul Levine, "Truman
Capote: The Revelation of the Broken Image," The Virginia
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• Here are a few things she has done, does do: Killed with a hoe
the biggest rattlesnake ever seen in this county (sixteen
rattles), dip snuff (secretly), tame hummingbirds (just try
it) till they balance on her finger, tell ghost stories (we
both believe in ghosts) 50 tingling they chilI you in JUly,
talk to herself, • • • (p. 117)
EIders are "Those who Know Best." There are question, abrupt
which has been evident, but, I think, not strained. But that the
answer. The woman "friend" who has no other name, and who resem-
.' lyricism, Capote has placed a great burden on his prose style.
save the work from coming painfully close to the nostalgie tales
of lesser writers.
As regards the child (and those who, like "the friend," are
away from it. And they, too, suddenly hated being grown up.,,7
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The Story of J.M.B. (London, 1941) by Denis Mackail which is
mentioned in Coveney's bibliography, but page numbers are not given •
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wave from a bus every àay, or the extreme kindness which the
who at the end 0;[ the tale is now a "grown-up" in a boarding school
or college, has also lost the spontaneity and freedom of his youth,
.' of a conclusion.
"A Memory," as both Alfred Appel (the author of' the only book-
Robert Penn Warren have pointed out, is a key story in the exposi-
tection of Lher7 dream" and the ugly beach scene of reality. She
need not choose. For the adults of the rest of the volume, Mrs.
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the arrivaI of' the bathers, the beach scene and the enveloping
of' the normal balance of' the narrator's "dual lif'e, as observer
and dreamer": "1 still wou1d not care to say which was more
rea1 -- the dream l cou1d make b10ssom at will, or the sight of'
into premature b100m f'or a great occasion." (p. 145) But the
caught inside her bathing suit is the epitome of' the bather~s~
collective inhumanity:
• She bent over and in a condescending way pulled down the rront or
her bathing suit, turning it outward, so that the lumps or mashed
and rolded sand came emptying out. l relt a peak or horror, as
though her breasts themselves had turned to sand, as though they
were or no importance at aIl and she did not care. (pp. 150-151)
clings to her dream, "the shudder or /ber/ wish shaking the dark-
ness like leaves where Lshe7 had closed /her7 eyes," but it will
not, ror a time, return. She can only open and shut her eyes,
"pit Y suddenly overtake" her as she sees the remaining "small worn
that the incident only supplements her love. She thinks or the
ruture (not, as al ways berore, the past) when she will see "the
boy /She7 loved walking into the classroom, when /she7 would
10 Appel, p. 101.
Il Appel, p. 100.
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Robert Penn Warren, se1ected Essays (New York, 1951), p. 163.
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• watch him with this hour on the beach accompanying /her7 recovered
For the child the vision does not end~ the dream or the
the boy she loves, "speechless and innocent," "solitary and unp:r.o-
tected," as she insists in seeing him, and other people with whom
she comes in contact. Like Buddy and his "friend" of "A Christmas
Memory" she finds it easiest to love those she sees least, whose
and dreamer" (the words, Miss welty's, are from the story). The
required of the child, that this age is reserved for thought and
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• c. Summary.
the short story writer. He states that the short fiction work
should strive for the creation of "a certain single effect.,,13
Wben the author has decided upon this "he then combines such
events, and discusses then in such tone as may best serve him
elaborate prose does not hide this facto Yet it is not hard to
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haps the only group with which l am concerned here which must
Memory" from his Quite Barly One Morning volume are typical lyric
this seldom happens. Closely knit, with evident theme and "single
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time oÎ the related incident and the time oÎ the writing oÎ the
but others, suchas Miss Welty's tale, leave his identity more
nothing more. Such stories Îorm the basis Îor what l term
liA Memory" views the events Îrom a wiser and sader stance out-
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the mystic values the attainment of love. While what has become
ever-after" heterosexual love has been the topic for the mass of
fashion. In some works the equation of God and love has taken on
love presented by the three stories dœtfer greatly, but they have
of love •
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References to Hannah are in the third pers on, but the author has
made every attempt to enter her consciousness and view the inci-
dent through her eyes. Both the child's static physical and
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• lead her back to the thought of her neglect; what ~ her curIs,
comment into the narrative where it does not distract the reader,
now "the privileged cat' s place beside her mother. ,,2 Now she is
left outside like the winter bird she pities in the "frozen,
and structured order, being fussed over, and being left alone.
For example, there are three times "the baby" of five years old
remembers when she "and her hair had been the center of attention."
or food. The first "hour" Hannah remembers, the time of tea and
candied orange rind before the fire, holds for her "the thought of
her mother's golden hair in the firelight, and the smell of her
perfume in the intimate warmth, and the sound of her voice saying,
'Isn't this gay, Miss Baby?'" (p. 217) The hour of morning
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and "bosomy" bed, but other adjectives which describe this object
and fat as the gelded white Persian cat," and has "silky depths"
Five. But for the child the bed is love and it is only necessary
to note the irony of the fact that it represents this quality only
runnels" of her tears, for her mother, who has been the most
is perfect for her role here. Lazy and exotic, she represents aIl
this ho ur with her smoky, loving voice and her loving fingers. • • •
~sometimes her hands would leave the child's head and go to her
an entire world for the child who has failed to recognize the
love; indeed, he and the other men mentioned by her mother seem
to be its negation.
fact that love for the person has been disp~aced to the haire
curIs was symbolic of the cutting of her own and her gesture of
phere such as this the child cannot but follow the pattern. The
cepts of "bad form" and the fact of the five children. Neither is
the "friendship" between the mother and Rob a mature one. It simply
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the male "epees" on the wall.
I:f love, :for Hannah, is beauty and sensuous warmth, its absence
where !Üle now sits, shut out like a winter bird, shut in like the
"stingy and lonesome" bees. Loss o:f love involves a loss o:f
phrases and epithets. Only the narrator uses her personal name.
The boys calI her a "skinned cat," and a "mushroom~' :for example,
and the members o:f the household, in general, treat her as "the
o:f being seen and listened to and caressed were ebbing away.
invisible." (p. 224) A:fter Mattie's rejection o:f her love, she
does to Paul o:f Conrad Aiken's "Silent Snow, Secret Snow." Its
some o:f the subtle shades o:f intuitive understanding and rational
"How could you care about one girl? Have yibu ever cared about one
leaf?"~ and Dolly ramembers her "first loves, .. • • " a dried honey-
Buddy and his "friend" who are so similar to the Co1.in and
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Capote, Harp, p. 76.
6 Capote, Harp, p. 75.
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being educated in the love of the smal! things first -- the wainuts,
The adjectives used to describe these and other objects show, even
confound it, what gets my goat is not being able to give somebody
but Capote has adapted it to his own purposes, changing it into one
only they, a child and his simple-minded cou.sin, are able to love
his ide al friend is aiso the end of this talent, and again we note
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world. Capote's search for the truth of love in this story fails.
"Best friends" the two may be, but mature lovers of people they
love in his short story "Teddy." When the author observes that
Teddy has "too little of that cute solemnity that Many adults
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readily speak up, or down to," however, he states a parad~which
ideas. l have said that the child, for our century, has become
than Hannah and Buddy. A mystic is, after aIl, a mystic, at what
ever age. Yet the fact that he is young adds another level of
apple which is the act of freeing oneself from "logic and intellec-
innocence is lost soon after birth and in its recovery one moves
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Ihab Hassan, p. 276.
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opened up wide enough." And this is the reason for Teddy's death.
means of "stopping and staying with God, where it's really nice."
(p. 191) The ending implies that he, of aIl the children we are
considering, finally encompasses his conception of love.
not confuse the externality of their views of life with their selves.
• that such people "love their reasons for loving us almost as much
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• as they love USa" (p. 187) This, Salinger is saying, is how the
demands and receives one token kiss. Her use of the words "Darling"
and "lover" rapes them of aIl affection. Both sne and the narcis-
ment of true love has been elevated from its place in this reservoir
discounts such zesponsci.s entirely. They simply are not "good" for
"things that have no emotions" such as poetry. This does not seem
d. Summary.
but they have made it outstandingly clear what they are rebelling
lack of love rather than actual emotion are shown to be the com-
behavior.
mother. She is the youngest of these loving young people, and the
.' StafIord views the child as having the capacity to give himselI
to love.
dance when they are happy, are swayed by changes oI weather, and
than endow him with them. The majority oI the adults oI this
oI these analyzed here, Ior in Buddy and his "Iriend" the reader
Salinger discounts the selI and its wants entirely -- but it seems
that this quality is not a native emotion, for these are discounted
as useless. The reader never knows exactly how one learns to love
as Teddy can, but, as with Hannah and Buddy, the action involves
the entire being and cannot be divorced Irom other segments oI his
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The assumption that the child is best able to perce ive religious
joy, mildness, and native sympathy which Blake adds to the concept
Blake's chimney sweep or his little black boy. Here are lines
oÎ God that has been used by Flannery O'Connor, Philip Roth, and
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William Blake, ed. F. W. Bateson (London, 1961), p. 25.
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only one o:f these short stories, Salinger's "Teddy." For the child
o:f this story lines such as these :from the Ode would be relevant:
education rather than gained. The simple belie:f that God "is
lament the ruin o:f the initially :fEee person who simply "is a
certain way."
"1 see :from the standpoint o:f Christian orthodoxy. This means
Christ and that what l see in the world l see in relation to that.,,3
analysis o:f her short story "The River." This tale o:f a small boy
who walks into a river in the hope o:f :finding there "the Kingdom o:f
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though l suspect that the story has elements or both irony and
faith colors the tone or I!The River" and, indeed, aIl her riction.
and one where there are I!no jokes." Although it is evident that
f.i::7 was a word like ' oh' or 'damn t or 'God ' ,,4 AS an inexper ienced
• words of the preacher impress him. The red and the gold col ors
with which Miss O'Connor has painted the image of the preacher
"There ain't but one river and that's the River of Life, maàe
out of Jesus' Blood. That's the river you have to lay you pain
Love, in the rich red river oÎ Jesus' Blood, you people!" (p. 151)
he goes under the river he does not "go back to the apartment" and
telling the people, for it was true comprehension, but in the fact
that for him and for everyone this "place" is death. As a child,
stories here: that the only escape Îrom the burden of reality lies
in the sleep of death. Teddy, Hannah, and Paul also withdrew from
through the eyes of the boy. Although her perceptions are not as
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submerged in his as those of Aiken's are in Paul's, she enjoys
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child Harry's age, a technique she uses again in "A Temple of the
Holy Ghost" of the same volume. Through her exact and unpretty
ability to carry away one's pain and sorrow. His phrases, imagi-
and "an old boulder." Even color shows his position in the tale:
moral decay -- as weIl as the orange of his gas pumps and soda are
picked up by "the orange and purple gulley beside the road." (p.149)
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the twisted creatures sh. portrays does coincide with the use of
ments of "the inner horrors of sin."S Her own words support these
assumptions, for .he has explained what others have termed her
are repugnant to him, and his problem will be to make these appear
and steals, yet this vision of the grotesque is the final weight
in her fiction, where "My God" and "for Christ's sake" mean two
beatific child Jesus disputing with the eIders and continues through
boy who asks why the kipg has nothing on in "The Emperor's New
child. His "clouds oÎ glory" come Îrom his own actions, not
were born with such misty halos, not just one, and the other boys
convinced that God can do anything, and this belieÎ neat1y destroys
Binder, who attempt to limit his power, "don't know anything about
God." (p. 146) His steady belieÎ puts his mother and the rabbi to
shame.
the question, then, what qualities oÎ the child prompt his argument?
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ability to question der ives from the primacy of his ideas, which
humor. These and the epithets "bull" and "bastard" used in connec-
tion with his question, and the witt Y comments such as those applied
to Itzie undercut what might be a sober story. The final halo image
and her words, "A martyr l have. Look! • • • • My martyr," (p. 155)
which reduces the action to the purely factual level. Ozzie is,
after aIl just a boy who has accidently found himself on a roof.
:friends. But isn't this the same thing as being a "ill;lrtyr" rather
than live where the ultimate power o:f God is denied? It' is no
last image o:f Ozzie's jump into "the center o:f the yellow net
that glowed in the eveningts edge like an overgrown halo" (p. 158)
c. J. D. Salinger's "Teddy."
Teddy's convictions, like those o:f Ozzie and Harry, reach their
are, i:f we are to believe salinger, his own. His link to God is
chapter on the child and love for this reason. For Teddy, aIl
answers, "lt isn't a theQry, it's as much a part --" (p. 188)
and unarguable facto One doesn't debate this because it does not
"1 was six when l saw that everything was God, and my hair
stood up, and aIl that. • It was on a Sunday, l remember.
f>ly sister was only a very tiny child then, and _he was drinking
her milk, and aIl of a sudden l saw that she was God and the
milk was God. l Mean, aIl she was doing ;as pouring God into
GOd' if you know what l mean." (p. 189)
This happening, what Bob Nicholson terms lia mystical experience,"
words that one meditates, and, if one does this weIl, one is
allowed to "stop and stay" "with God, where it's real1y nice"
is where his cunning and somewhat shoddy use oÎ Zen comes in. Zen
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..Las h·10n.', Il l gather that Steiner chieÎly deplores any sim-
oÎ his way oÎ liÎe. Why, Îor example, iÎ you are "making good
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• lacks a sense o:f humor, 50 when Salinger puts such words in his
mouth it's aIl too serious. The prophecies and Teddy's death
noti~ble in "Teddy," where there are few big words and many
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phrases such as "get the heck out of your body," and l never saw
handsome" aligator belt and his use of the word "lady." But it
The chi Id Teddy has worked his way through the intellectual maze
and come out with his basic ideas on the nature o:f "God," "love,"
d. Summary.
The children of these three short stories are performing their
mit y to God directly stated. For both Miss O'Connor and Philip Roth
make his critical action rather than his native closeness to God.
basic concepts.
We know even less about the origin of Itzie's relationship to
God, but it is obvious that Roth places ev en less value than Miss
sion of God is necessarily eclectic, drawn tioth from his own inti-
• and sincerity he needs to ask the question which will undermine the
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• existing religion.
Teddy still asserts that the concept of God is uncomplex. The less
lives in, the more he is able to comprehend the nature of God. His
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to Wisdom."
Like Thomas Mann, whose short story gives this chapter its
upon the subtle effect of family and social disorder upon the
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no direct bearing on its life. , The child's first entry into prose
was in this ;o.uù, but the stress was placed, not on his reactions,
but upon the society which his sadness comments upon. For Dickens,
for example, the child preserved the innocence and freedom from
Harry, who is "four or five years old," has not the initial vision
of right and wrong to guide him and he is lees bold in his criti-
badgering over the day's experiences we sense that they are care-
toenails. She was lying on halÏ the soÏa, with her knees crossed
in the air and her head propped on the arme She didn't get up."
(p. 154) Her"red toenail~' and "long black satin britches" May be
rudely, and "My God! what a name." Her careless use oÏ "God"
places her in the category oÏ those Ïor whom such words are simply
Ïact that neither she nor the Ïather have religious belieÏs (she
despises baptism), nor have they instilled them into their child.
.' undoubtedly a black mark in Miss O'Connor's book. She does not
comment upon the lack oÏ standards in the couple; she merely allows
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• Harry's comments upon his home life to reveal the parents' conduct.
His thought "Where he lived everything was a joke" (p. 153) implies
a world with no :fixed moral values. This may be only one dissolute
couple, but, since the other people at their party seem little
Their amoral state has its effect upon their child. since Harry
Clauses such as "You found out more when you left where you lived l1
(p. 149) are evidence of her neglect. But when Miss O'Connor tells
do at any time but eat" (p. 157), we realize that Harry' 5 major
Secret Snow," the child's withdrawal from the world centers about
his rejection of the mother. When she enters Harry's room to calI
him back from his oblivion in sleep, .he takes the same hateful
tance for the young, sensitive child. Hannah, unlike Harry, has
received this love, but its abundance and sensuality have kept her
mother is able to laze about in bed gossiping and drinking tea aIl
day. She is "woman as queen"; her bed is her throne. Yet this
offer any real haven for either the mother or the child. (He speaks
• tive force, and talks of the "lambencies" of the hair in "a state
does not get his own way. He set a bad example for his children
the family into "belligerent" camps and that the children often
ease. The mother who lounges aIl day in her soft bed is somewhat
way we can Miss O'Connor's. These are two mismated people pampered
by their wealth.
Hannah is bored -- her long days and her loss of a reason for
existence point to this. And we have seen that her loss is mani-
1ess evidenc~ of this. They too are bored, and have become
estranged from their real selves. Janie runs "like a dog," and
they, more than anyone, calI Hannah by otller names (she is a "mush-
• room" and "a skinned catIT). The original tit1e of the story, "Cops
a:ffection: not real people. The mother is a "brood mare," and the
father a "weasel." The people with whom the family comes in con-
the men in the barbershop resemble the "fat stut"fed skunk" regarding
between the purely romantic story of the pathetic child and the
world through his eyes requires discipline and perception. For the
most part Miss Porter succeeds. Sae lapses once into a glimpse of
Frances' mind and she does comment upon Stephen occasionally, but
Maisie was unwanted. His only value for other Îamily members is
stephen; the mother quick to exploit any emotion. Stephen has seen
her tantrums and he compares them with his own: "His mother's voiee.
rose in a terrible scream, screaming something he could not under-
stand, but she was furious; he has seen her clenching her fists and
stamping in one spot, screaming with her eyes shut; he knew how she
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1 Katherine Ann Porter. "The Downward Path to Wisdom," The
Leaning Tower And Other Stories (New York, 1944), p. 81 •
Subsequent references will be to this edition. This short story
was originally collected in this volume.
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• which "b10ws over" 1ike a sudden raine Her mother's words, "1 hope
more meaningfu1 than that between the "dec1ines" of Hannah and her
can be taken as any indication of her conduct when they were young,
either of you. l'm sick of you both. Now let me alone and stop
disorder.
much of him" and "it's in the b100d." Old Janet, too, remarks,
feels guilty about taking the teapot and hides -- but he takes it
• mother who babies Stephen and gives him pet names as Hannah's
mother did nor the ridiculously moral uncle have the right moral
view. The child, between two opposing Ïorces, suÏÏers the pain
this point ·"he is able to reject aIl his home and Ïamily. Like
d. Summary.
The authors of these thxee short stories, then aIl view the
and reacts accordingly. Event5 which seem minis cule to the adult
children are not resilient. perhaps they are too young and
joyÏully, Hannah sadly, and Stephen desperately, cast off aIl that
• in objecte In the last story we see the final view of the romantic
does Miss Porter allow the pathos or the other two staries. When
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and Conrad Aiken's "Silent Snow, Secret Snow" are the viewpoints
the male and the female which fascinates Betsy, while in Aiken's
• is more exact to say that, aIl too often, the interest in psychology
Both removed the concept of the child from emulation by the adult
• change •
IBoas, p. 61.
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gotten /In the amnesia which hides our childhoodl have nevertheless
left the deepest traces in our psychic lite, and acted as determin-
2
ants for our whole future development," which has revolutionized
child care and education, has also great fictional potential. The
long, flexible novel form could trace the evolution of the person-
The short story could play with the analysis of one specifie event
lines of development and the relationship between the child and the
adult, which blast the concept ,of "original innocence" for the
or Freud and psycho1ogists such as Jung and Adler was upon writing
areas ror fictional exploration for various authors and become part
Sherwood Anderson were only a few or the authors who used the
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than in the adult, so that the components o:f ~he childfs mind can,
with more ease than those o:f the adult mind. The most enjoyable
Dante, heat, damp, smell and song are aIl 1inked in a pattern of
association which might exist within the mind o:f a small boy.
Original as the style was at the time the book was written, the
1897, Henry James's What Maisie Knew. The fact o:f the child's
p1ex medium :for viewing the story, yet the mind of the little girl,
ness," it has the capacity :for expansion during the course of the
book. Mamsie remains able "to resist. • • the strain o:f observation
and the assaul t o:f experience;'S but she dE:f:tni tel y begins at one
.' level of childish :fears and illusions and matures to a more realistic
Beach has pointed out, are those o:f a child;6 as the "ironie
that l include it here. In his descent into the inner mind James
was before his time, but his inbred and allusive style restricts
authors (such as Conrad Aiken and James Joyce) have done. Perhaps
• Golding has shown the workings o:f a sort o:f "original sin" as
is part o:f a traditional search :for the discovery o:f the common
Animal Farm •
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insight into the nature of the creative person has a tradition with
the child than others, and aIl contribute in some way to the growing
• upon the lake. The concept that these occurrences do shape the
1 Wordsworth, p. 499.
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the beginning or the next century. His stress upon the chi1d as
"father of the artist" is important for our time, but his state-
ment that Uthe chi1d is father of the man'" is in some way the
basis for nearly aIl the modern short stories that rocus upon the
chi1d.
fiction. The foundation for the movement still lies in The Prelude,
now the movement broadens not only to "the existing artist as child"
but also to the non ... autobiographical studyor "the child as artist."
Zaoas, p. 83.
Some "child as
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a sensitive child.
the most obvious work in this forme The importance placed upon
tion and patterns of imagery throughout the novel make this the
of the Artist as a Young Dog (1940). The reader can easily tire
Fight."
Although the three stories l shall deal with here vary in the
nickles and a tugging kite, and the taste of whiskey are aIl
fireside in the rirelight," (p. 116) and "a large log cabin fes-
tooned inside and out with chains of garish-gay naked light bulbs
and standing by the river's muddy edge under the shade of river
trees where MOSS drifts through the branches like gray mist." (p.IIS)
•
Perhaps it is the diction, however, that is the Most striking •
Capote loves the shape and texture or words. He often records them,
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and raisins and walnuts and whiskey and • • • • " (p. 116) His
"coils of frazzled tinsel gone gold with age, one silver star,
used by the "nostalgie" writer. Thus the iron stove "g10ws like a
lighted pumpkin," the paper kites twitch "at the string like sky-
fish as they swim into a wind," and dollar bills are as "tightly
crumbling logs, carefree as the wind in the chimney. l' These have'
narrator.
sensitive to the nature around him, but purely sensory data and
the words to describe and compare them are only part of what makes
is not until he slides deeper into his snow world that the contrast
chief advocate in Ann Grossman, who has explicated the reading from
• Sophocles and the final cold seed image in terms of artistic expres-
• From the first lines of the story Paul is set apart by his
analogies, and his vocabulary. And these, Aiken has deftly given
us to believe, are not his own (Aiken's) but those of the boy.
in Paul, even though the s~ory remains in the third person. From
There is, for example, the walk homeward, in which each detail
ultimately take second place for Paul. "There were more important
xurther than the natural fact to what~ever principle may lie behind
has not the lyric interest in words and their combinat ions to be
a poet in the sense that capote would have it, of stylistic worth
4Conrad Aiken, "Si1ent Snow, Secret Snow," Among the Lost People
(New York, 1934), pp. 141-142.' Subsequent references will be to
this edition, in v/hich this story was f"irst collected.
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:fruit left in leaÎless trees." "A li ttle deI ta of fil th': lies in
tower retreat of one who cannot make his peace with reality. His
(p. 144) The contrast of reality and illusion becomes more striking
lifts "long v.hite arms," "puts on its manners,1I whispers and laughs.
tion" Paul, ta talk hin; out of his clream, are what amounts ta attempts
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The passage which Paul reads to the doctor has been identified
evidence that the passage links Paul and oedipus as persons "tragi-
sciousness has chosen which marks his creative bent. with aIl its
• 6Grossman, p. 127.
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• aIl his being, as "He loved it -- he stood still and loved it"
Aside Îrom this poetic aptness oÎ the cold seed image, this
"How love1y! • • • the long white ragged lines were driÎting and
siÎting across the street, across the Îaces oÎ the old houses,
was "getting deeper and àeeper and silenter and silenter." with
• the Ïirst and primary line oÏ the withdrawal Ïrom adult reality.
"Ever since !She/ had begun taking painting lessons," Miss Welty
tells us, she has been viewing things th~Q~gh such Ïrames, and the
secret o:f life 7 " an intimation both of what is within herself and
also "projected' ! into the outer world she then observes. Any art
pleasing to the eye. As the boy Joyce creates poetry by the forming
"frame."
The narrator has told us that when events occurred which did
not "comorm" to her ideal she was terrified. And her relation
the artist, always fresh, that he will never have the ultimate
"say," that reality will constantly surprise him and alter even
Seldom does the narrator definitely state the fact of the group's
ugliness, yet the clever use of adjectives and analogies have the
which shatters her ide al. Her fantasy, "the undefined austerity
"everything /the boyï did, trying to learn and translate and verify,"
her vision and her ideal have not been incompatible. Her illusion
contains the story's only image of beauty, the rose which "blossoms
sight of the child's blood, which makes her faint, must have been
the essence, the ideal quantity which remains when aIl the super-
.,.
considers this disillusionment as one of Many which occur in the
d. Summary.
stories of Capote and welty are "memories," but whether the latter
sane Paul who constructs this lovely snow fantasy, or is its beauty
words and phrases :for its description. "Buddy" (or the older
he rejects the prosaic place he has found his world to be for the
polarize the child and adult worlds. For both there is a vital
her new concepts with her dream in some way. For both Paul and
the dreamers who can mold experience into an ideal more tangible
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after recounting the time when the boy she loved had a nosebleed
and she fainted, "Does this explain why, ever since that day, l
have been unable to bear the sight of blood?" (p. 295) The answer,
chapter its title, has analyzed the various r.omponents of such novels.
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their use of the internaI monologue. This form has been adapted
method of presentation.
The bulk o:f Miss Porter's work does not show su<:"h an involved
The little boy had to pass his father on the way to the door.
He shrank into himself when he saw the big hand raised above him.
"Yes, get out of here and stay out," said Papa, giving him a
little shove toward the door. It l'las not a hard shove, but it
hurt the little boy. He slunk out, and trotted down the hall
trying not to look back. He was afraid something was coming
after him, he could not imagine what. Something hurt him aIl
over, he did not know why.
He did not want his breakfast; he would not have it. He sat
and stirred it round in the yellow bowl, letting it stream off
the spoon and spill on the table, on his front, on the chair.
He liked seeing it spill. It was hateful stuff, but it looked
Although the narrator is clearly not the child and the factual
about Stephen, "This was the rirst real dismay or his whole lire,
and he aged at least a year in the next minute, huddled, with his
deep serious blue eyes rocused down his nose in intense specula-
ract that this short story, written partially rrom a child's point
he cries after hearing Uncle David scold him, we see how he feels.
The events or the entire story obviate the necessity for the "quiet,
As "Old Janet" says, "It certainly is bad, • • • aIl this upset aIl
. '
1 William L. Nance, S. M., Katherine Ann Porter and the Art
or Rejection (Chapel Hill, North Carolina, 1964), p. 7 •
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• the time and him such a baby." (p. 87) She fails to connect the
the paragraph about his concern over "a little end of him fl which
Porter means to show the harmful inhibitions that a little boy can
also stressed by Freud. His suspicions are put in his own terms:
fi • • • inside his clothes there was something bad the matter with
him. It worried him and confused him and he wondered about it.
The only people who never seemed to notice there was something wrong
with him were Mommanpoppa. They never called him a bad boy • • • • fI
who came at night and stood over him and scolded him when he could
not move or get away." (p. 84) The face is aIl too obviously that
stiff white band." (p. 84) This dream, evidently meant as a pro-
Although Miss Porter does not overstep the point where art is
•
The story was first collected in this edition •
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tales of Miss Porter and Aiken. He has used Freudian theory for
the enrichment of his story and the result illustrates the trap
the pathos of the Porter short story, but he has yet to integrate
Aiken has done. As the one true adolescent touched upon in this
which have led the short fiction writer to concentrate upon the
young people of her age group. She must be her age to have such
analysis. 3 AlI are sexual and aIl point to the blighting of the
•
Hall (New York, 1952), pp. 156-177. The copyright date of
the original edition is 1920 •
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this story, but l shall mention only the most obvious ones which
such items. Hands, war, horses, Mr. Speed's hat and cane, and
even the .flames of the fireplace are connected with this world.
and softness of her room. (p. 109) Even the .fact that the house
the Benton boys enter Betsy's sitting-room and even that she her-
self enters the men's den. The incident of Mr. Speed's admission
by which a man (her brother) ascends to her room. (p. 113) There
and the use of the word "game" in her good-bye to Henry Benton.
the story and each makes use of the Freudian theory of displace-
story, "It was only the other night that l dreamed l was a little
girl on Chur ch street again and that there was a drunk horse in
ment. (The narrator regrets ber hast y action and would like to
relive it and correct her error.) The image of the horse out-of-
mind. The other dream of the enlarged hands, (p. 119) which
wish for the male penis, for hands too, are named sex symbols
.' The plot action is almost wholly dependent upon the revelation of
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symbol of the beginning of doomed lire and the shadow it has cast
the nature of "the egg" and its impression upon the mind of a
small boy.
uncommon attempt has been made to view the- world from the inside
the reader would recognize the analytical bias oÏ this tale. Paul
Porter and Peter Taylor, those of "Silent Snow, Secret Snow" are
They never undermine the narrative in the way that Taylor's do.
'-Je are never quite "outsidel! paul's mi'!ldj whan he laughs, for
scene and the use of rhetorical questions within Paul's mino which
seem to be in his OVin "voice" help to keep the tale l'Ii thin the
four scenes from one day -- the schoolroom, the walk hOli1eWard,
the "inquisition" in the living room, and the retreat into the
point.
narrator. The fact that thLs being is "outside" Paul allows him
limited use of \\Tords could do. When Paul, upset and frightened
Miss Porter, after aIl, has limited herse1f unfairly. The narrators
that he is a genius, for his age can only be about eight years
of the fact that his narrator is another person. \'lith the third-
person, after aIl, one cannot wholly fuse subject and object, and
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to label him a genius •
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AÏken, like Miss Porter, has chosen a young person because the
of an adult mind. Paul, for example, has few tasks and worries.
the tendencies for the person to divide his lire between illusion
and reality can be easily explained, but Aiken has sought the
setting is almost too quiet, too idyllic. The reader soon realizes
that Paul has magnified the distasteful things of this world into a
that the rantasy posed no problems ror Paul; he did not dread the
wants "a secret place or his own." The snow says "peace,"
trees, mere elms • • • • Beyond the thoughts even or his own shoes,
his b09Y and mind known by others, for such erforts reduce him to
The homeward walk and the inquisition bring his world or home
world. We have seen in the chapter on the artist and the chi Id
that Aiken has so constructed his story that this can be done.
•
7 Leo Hamalian, "Aiken's 'Silent Snow, Secret Snow,'"
The Explicator, VII (1948), 17.
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• d. Summary
this. Miss Porter, on the other hand, has begun in the opposite
"clues" which are meant to lead him to the song of hate at the
an unreal child.
not from their methods of composition, but from the fact that
psychiatric study has been used at aIl. One can probably say
helped the writers to gain their desired "effect," yet why have
• Part C. Conclusion.
Maxwell Geismar has remarked upon the facts that "the New
his quarrel with Salinger in particular and "the New Yorker school"
opposite concern with the chilcL There is aIl the difference between
• 2 Geismar, p. 209 •
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interest in the child may meet: at just what point does selr-
and modes or thought? It is ror this reason one can discuss the
tradition of our century remains allied with the forces dI., good.
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hood. Perhaps his chier value ror the authors of these representa- /
aspects or his body and his behavior cannot help but be revealed.
His reactions are pure. Even the child or rive or seven years
many defects leads to the emulation of those values not found there.
their opposite in the image (ir not the actuality) or the country
the "romantic" tradition will oppose it and the child will remain
the critic and saviour. His initiation into the necessary problems /
one that has influenced many of the writers to some degree. The
new impetus to the inherited pattern, Ior it has validated the con-
of the short stories l have analyzed here. Unlike Paul Dombey, the
those who live, such as Paul and Hannah, are twisted in ways which
so, they have lost the original brashness and ruggedness of the
Huck Finn tradition. But they have found the same integrity.
nature of their comment upon the society within which the y existe
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Taylor, Peter. A Long Fourth and Other Stories. New York, 1948.
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