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Danielle Bauman-Epstein
Dr. Todd DeStigter
English 481
Fall 2017
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Notes:
v All page numbers in the play are based on Othello: Texts and Contexts by William
Shakespeare, edited by Kim F. Hall, Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2007.
v All lesson plans use the Google Slides presentation, “Othello Unit Plan,” viewable at:
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1hiFkRY4C1YYKGJ0VDcc3n6myPX1OvzC-
9l8rvguP3ik/edit?usp=sharing.
TABLE OF CONTENTS
Section Page(s)
1. Unit Rationale 2-3
2. Essential Questions and Unit Mastery Objectives 4
3. Supplementary Materials 4
4. Five-Week Plan 5-9
5. Lesson Plans 10-33
v Lesson Plan A: “Iago, the Villain of Venice” Lecture 10-13
v Lesson Plan B: “‘What Makes Iago Tick?’: An Investigation” Cooperative 14-19
Learning Activity Part One
v Lesson Plan C: “‘What Makes Iago Tick?’: An Investigation” Cooperative 20-21
Learning Activity Part Two
v Lesson Plan D: “‘Dear Diary’: An Introduction to Journals and Diaries” 22-29
v Lesson Plan E: “‘Good’ and ‘Evil’ in Othello” Discussion 30-33
6. Final Project Description 33-34
7. Bibliography 35
1. UNIT RATIONALE
Essential Questions
v What is a villain?
o What role do villains play in our stories?
v What motivates human behavior?
o How do we react to threats and why?
v What is jealousy?
o What are more humanizing alternatives to jealousy?
Mastery Objectives
v Students will be able to describe a villain in their own words by completing a worksheet
about the archetype of the villain
v Students will be able to identify and use inference to analyze six instances of textual
evidence that explain Iago’s motivations
v Students will identify the audience, purpose(s), and necessary elements of the
diary/journal genre by analyzing two supplementary texts
v Students will write a minimum of four journal entries (totaling four typed or five
handwritten pages) from the perspective of a character in Othello to provide insight into
the character’s motivations and emotions, using textual evidence as a foundation
3. SUPPLEMENTARY MATERIALS
WEEK TWO
Weekly Objective: Students will examine the text to consider characters’ motivations and natures, as well as the role of the villain. They will also rework language in
the play to better understand it and take ownership over its meaning (and style).
Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Friday
Homework for Read: finish 1.3 (p. 63-71) Read: 2.1 (p. 71-82) Read: 2.2 (p. 82) Read: 2.3 (p. 82-94)
today
What we’ll do Lesson Plan A: Lesson Plan B: Lesson Plan C: 1. Free write and discussion: 1. Discussion:
today “Iago, The Villain of Venice” “‘What Makes Iago Tick?’: “‘What Makes Iago Tick?’: When have you deceived Shakespearean language:
Lecture An Investigation” An Investigation” someone? Why? Do you think What we understand, what
Cooperative Learning Cooperative Learning it was justified? we don’t
Activity DAY ONE Activity DAY TWO 2. Interview activity: students 2. Show clip of Othello: The
will act out interviewing Iago Remix (5:00), a hip-hop
and Roderigo to show what version of the play.
each character knows and why 3. Activity: “remix” a scene
they are behaving as they are from the play so far in
another style—hip-hop,
opera, another rhyming style,
etc.
Why we are I want students to begin As part of examining In this second day of “What I want to connect Iago’s deceit As a kind of break in moving
doing this reflecting on Iago as the villain characters, I want students to Makes Iago Tick?” I’d like to the motivations that make us forward in the play, I want
in two ways. First, I’d like begin to think deeply about students to extend the textual all prone to deception for a students to revisit a scene
them to think about the characters’ motivations. This analysis they began the day range of reasons. I aim to they found confusing or
uncertainties that come with will help students better before to examine a scene they show that while Iago is “a compelling and think about
our usual understanding of understand why characters pick independently. I hope this villain,” he also shares human reworking it so that they can
villains, such as whether they behave the way they do and will allow for them to become traits with the rest of us. both become experts in the
are “all bad” or perhaps only make certain choices, and will more comfortable with Additionally, the interview scene and take ownership of
deeply flawed but redeemable. add complexity to later thinking about motivation activity will allow students to its style. I hope this will
Second, I want them to think discussions about characters based on inferences from the better understand what each encourage students to feel
about the role villains play in being “good” and “evil.” text. Allowing them a choice character believes and why, more comfortable
stories, and consider why we as Additionally, this activity asks about which scene to analyze preparing them to embody a interpreting a scene based on
a culture seem to be entertained students to practice textual will hopefully give them character in the journal project. their own judgement.
by villains. This speculation analysis through inference, ownership over the work and
will help prepare students to which will become important show them that readers can
think through Iago’s for extending the text to create make inferences in any text.
motivations and his extra-textual journal entries for
perspective. the final project.
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WEEK THREE
Weekly Objective: Students will become familiar with the genre of journals/diaries to prepare to connect the text to first-person writing for the final project.
Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Friday
Homework for Read: 3.1 (p. 94-96) and 3.2 (p. Read: start 3.3 (96-107) Read: Journal B excerpt, from Read: finish 3.3 (107-114) Read: 3.4 (p. 114-122)
today 96) Joseph Dole, The Prison Diary
of Joseph Dole (+ annotations)
What we’ll do 1. Present remixes from Lesson Plan D: “‘Dear 1. Discussion of Dole excerpt 1. Free write and discussion: 1. Discussion: Jealousy
today previous class Diary’: An Introduction to focusing on the information What is jealousy? What kind continued
2. Activity: Understanding Journals and Diaries” communicated and the purpose of emotion is jealousy? How is 2. Individual student work:
“Honesty”: examination of of the writing it different from or similar to What speaks to us? Students
Othello’s trust in Iago, and an 2. Student writing: Students other human responses? What will begin to search the play
introduction to irony in the will begin diary entries about are our experiences with for a scene and/or character
play. Students will find and their own lives, reflecting on jealousy? that moves, perplexes,
analyze references to Iago’s something that has occurred in 2. Reader response group annoys, intrigues, etc. them.
honesty throughout the play to the last few weeks. They will activity (Burke): Analysis of Students will have the option
consider the effect this need to describe an event and and reactions to 3.3 to to choose a passage that
characterization has based on explain their feelings and understand the role of jealousy connects to their journal
who calls him honest, and in reflections. in this play. entries from Wednesday.
what context. Students will complete a
worksheet to capture lines
from the text that produce
these responses.
Why we are I know that irony can be This lesson is designed to This lesson will serve as a I would like students to focus This is in preparation for the
doing this challenging for students, so I introduce students to the genre continuation of the subject of on the role of jealousy in 3.3, diary-writing project.
want us to work through why of the diary/journal entries. I the previous day’s introduction as Iago importantly introduces Students will begin to think
Shakespeare has Othello call hope that students will connect to diary-writing. In discussing jealousy into Othello’s about the parts and
Iago—the “villain”—“honest” their previous knowledge of the important content of Joseph consciousness while characters of the play that
so often. I would like students and experience with this kind Dole’s diary entry, students simultaneously warning him of are most moving, baffling,
to consider why Shakespeare of writing with the final will identify and question the threat of “the green-eyed upsetting, etc. to them to
made this choice, and how it project. Providing an example components integral to the monster” (3.3.180). This hone in on the character they
shapes how we see both from Anne Frank, The Diary of genre of diary-writing examination falls within the would like to write about for
characters, and the plot that a Young Girl, is intended to including audience, purpose, larger discussion of what the final project. Identifying
will follow. This will prepare allow students to begin to style, and other crucial motivates us as humans. This specific lines in the text will,
students to consider the gaps examine closely the features of elements. Students will also activity will be based on both I hope, begin to direct them
between the words on the page this genre. This is in begin writing a journal entry textual analysis and reader to the moments in the play
and the action taking place. preparation for the final about their own lives so that response so that students can that are most meaningful to
project, diary entries from the they can practice this form of draw on their own experiences them as readers.
perspective of one of the play’s writing using a familiar in thinking about this theme.
characters. subject—themselves—and try
to experiment with using the
form.
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WEEK FOUR
Weekly Objective: Students will continue to think about characterization and motivation, and will develop a plan for writing journal entries from the perspective of a
character in the play.
Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Friday
Homework for Read: 4.1 (p. 122-132) Read: 4.2 (p. 132-141) Read: 4.3 (p. 141-144) and 5.1 Read: 5.2 (p. 150-165) Complete: graphic organizer
today (p. 145-160) for a journal entry about a
Select character for final scene in the play
project
What we’ll do Lesson Plan E: 1. Model diary-writing based 1. Free write: Why did you 1. Discussion of 5.2: How does 1. Partner and whole-class
today Good and Evil Discussion on 4.2, completing a short choose the character you did? this change our view of discussion about the graphic
Lesson exercise as a class What questions do you have characters? Is this a just or organizers
2. Group activity: Writing a about this character and their unjust conclusion? What 2. Individual work beginning
diary entry based on another behavior? actions surprised us? to draft a journal entry based
section of 4.2. Students will 2. Group activity based on 2. Individual activity on scenes on the graphic organizer
‘translate’ textual evidence to chosen character to discuss students would like to write
descriptions from the first- their motivations and about. Students will select
person perspective to practice decisions, and the resulting scenes and reflect on why they
diary-writing. consequences are significant for the
character.
Why we are In connection with an This lesson is intended to I want students to think I would like students to have Before students begin a
doing this exploration of the theme of continue to allow students to through the motivations of the the opportunity to discuss the journal entry, I want them to
villainy, I would like students practice diary-writing, and to characters they’ve chosen, final scene of the play based on check in with both a partner
to consider their own have practice in ‘translating’ hopefully seeing more fully the their initial, emotional and me (via a whole-class
relationship to ideas of good the action of the play into a nuances in the character responses. Additionally, I discussion) to make sure
and evil from their personal, first-person reflection. The through hearing their peers’ hope that the emotion of the they’re on the right track and
cultural, and religious modelling activity will allow differing perspectives. While final scene will lead them to to address uncertainties or
backgrounds. My hope is that students to observe me doing the final project will be think about the character confusions they may have.
students will consider these this kind of work, and to test individual, the issue of they’ve chosen for their final Then, individual writing time
terms in their complexity, out ideas about how this can be characters’ motivations is project, and consider if this will allow students to begin
seeing that even “a villain” done. The group activity will complex, and group work will changes their view of them. their final project with the
might not be all evil. This will allow them to try doing this allow students who may not The individual activity is teacher present so that they
add nuance to students’ themselves, supporting and have a strong handle on their intended to support students in can ask questions or check
understanding of various being supported by their peers chosen character’s motivations using textual evidence as the their work as they go.
characters for the final project. as they experiment with the to continue to learn about and basis of their journal entries.
form. reflect on the character. While they will be allowed to
Additionally, students who feel write about events we don’t see
certain about a character’s or know about, the text of the
motivations may benefit from play should be the foundation
hearing differing views of the for their journal.
same character.
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WEEK FIVE
Weekly Objective: Students will develop and complete their final project, creating multiple journal entries from the perspective of a character in the play. They will give
and receive peer feedback.
Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Friday
Homework for Write: one page of a journal Write: another journal entry Write: another journal entry Revise: journal entries Complete: final project
today entry (continued from class)
What we’ll do 1. Individual work continuing 1. Individual work continuing 1. Individual work continuing 1. Group work: workshop 1. Class gallery walk of
today journal entry or entries journal entry or entries journal entry or entries journal entries journals. Students will share
2. Partner check-in about 2. Group work: workshop in- 2. Mini conferences with each their work with peers.
journal entry and class FAQ progress journal entries student
about form, difficulties,
challenges, etc.
Why we are Like the previous class, I want After allowing students to While students work on their After having revised their I hope this project allows
doing this students to have the continue to work on their final project, I will meet with journal entries, I hope that the students opportunities for
opportunity to work on their journal entries, I’d like each one to check in on their workshop will allow students creative interpretation, and I
final project with support (from students to work in groups to progress, address questions and to ask questions and give want them to be able to share
peers and the teacher) give feedback on their drafts. concerns, and give suggestions about directions their unique work with their
available. The peer check-in is This will allow students a individualized feedback. This their peers have taken with the peers. The gallery walk will
intended for students to answer greater range of feedback than will provide one-on-one journals. Meeting with the allow each student the
one other’s questions and see their previous partner work, support for students and same workshop groups as chance to discuss their
one other’s progress. The FAQ and will help students learn provide an opportunity to previously, students can completed project with
will allow peers to gather from one another about correct serious problems as comment on each other’s multiple classmates and to
questions they’d like to present approaches to the project. well as give encouragement. progress and changes. see others’ approaches to the
to the class and teacher about assignment.
their ongoing work.
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5. LESSON PLANS
Lesson Plan A:
“Iago, the Villain of Venice” Lecture
Week Two, Monday
Central Focus:
Students will be introduced to the question of understanding Iago as a villain through
lecture and discussion. They will then broaden their examination of Iago’s traits to consider the
archetype of the villain more generally, discussing the topic and completing a worksheet on the
characteristics and the role of villains in order to demonstrate their understanding.
Objectives:
v Students will be able to identify and explore characteristics that define the archetype of
“the villain.”
v Students will identify five traits of a specific villain, and, using that villain as an example,
explain “villain” in their own words.
Common Core Standards:
v CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.9-10.3
Analyze how complex characters (e.g., those with multiple or conflicting motivations)
develop over the course of a text, interact with other characters, and advance the plot or
develop the theme.
Procedure:
Time Learning Activity
5 min. Warm-up
- Free write [projected]: Who is your favorite villain from TV, movies, comics,
literature, or oral stories?
- Discussion: Ask 5-6 students to share their response with the class
Ø Additional questions:
§ How do you know they’re a villain?
§ Could a character be both a hero and a villain, or a “good
guy” and a “bad guy”? How could that be possible?
§ Are there any common traits you notice about these villains?
§ Is that character a “good guy” or “bad guy”?
15 min. Lecture (Part A)
- Lecture: Focus on significance of Iago being named as “a villain” in the
Dramatis Personae
- Discussion: Introducing Iago as a villain—ask students to discuss effect of
this labeling.
Ø Additional questions:
§ Why is Iago described as a villain in the Dramatis Personae?
§ Did you believe that Iago was a villain because it said so in
the DP?
§ How did it affect your approach to this character when you
began reading Act 1, Scene 1? Did you believe Iago? Did
you trust him?
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§ Why is Iago is villain? What have you seen in the play so far
that would suggest he is a villain?
§ Do you agree with this characterization of Iago as a villain?
10 min. Partner work
- Worksheet: “What is a Villain?”
- Each student fills out a worksheet, working in pairs. The worksheet will
entail analyzing the characteristics that make a favorite villain villainous.
- Students will then begin brainstorming characteristics of villains more
broadly.
10 min. Class discussion
- Whole-class discussion: What is a villain?
- Discuss characteristics of students’ favorite villains
- Discuss characteristics of villains more generally
- Draw students’ attention to tensions in their definitions of a villain, such as
conflicting traits: pure “evil” versus traumatized, victimized, etc.; physically
versus psychologically violent; likeable versus unlikeable; capable of reform
versus permanently “bad”; relatable versus not relatable; kind to some people
versus at odds with the entire world; sensitive versus callous; cartoonish
versus truly frightening; etc.
- Ask students to compare Iago to the favorite villains they have discussed
Ø Additional questions:
§ What does it mean that that villain has contradictory
character traits?
§ Do you ever sympathize with / feel badly for that villain?
§ Do you like that villain at all? Why?
§ What do you hate about that villain?
§ Do all villains share that trait? / Is that a common trait for
villains?
§ What is the definition of “villain”?
§ Why do you think we’re identifying contradictory traits in
villains?
§ How can a villain be likable?
§ Do you ever root for the villain? Why?
§ What kind of villain is Iago?
§ What favorite villain is most similar to Iago? Which traits do
they share?
§ Which villain is least similar to Iago and why?
10 min. Lecture (Part B)
- Lecture: How does the villain drive the plot?
- Review of concepts of conflict and protagonist
- Introduction to the idea that Iago drives the plot of Othello
- Discussion: How do villains drive plots? Do stories need villains?
Ø Additional questions:
§ What is the role of the villain? What’s their “job” in the
story?
§ How does the villain affect the way we see the protagonist?
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Assessments:
v Oral questioning: I will ask students questions during both the lecture and discussion
sections of this lesson, checking for understanding of both the text and the archetype of
the villain. I will pose questions about the meaning of Iago being identified as “a villain”
in the Dramatis Personae in Step 2 (lecture/discussion), the characteristics of Iago and of
villains more generally in Step 4 (discussion), and the role of the villain in stories/plots in
Step 5 (lecture/discussion).
v Directed paraphrasing : I will ask students to explain in their own words specific points
about the text, including the characteristics and role of a villain in Steps 4 and 5. This
will include asking students to paraphrase ideas put forth by peers.
v Worksheet: “What is a villain?” I will assess learning and fulfillment of the objective to
identify and explore characteristics of a villain by circulating while students address this
question with their partner and fill out the worksheet. I will listen to discussions and look
at what students write, asking questions and giving guidance where needed, in order to
assess understanding (Step 3). I will collect it to more closely assess their understanding
of the characteristics of a villain.
v Examples: I will ask students to return to their favorite villain after they have suggested
characteristics of a villain to confirm or deny that “their” villain demonstrates those traits,
questioning what it means if their villain does not match that description (Step 4). By
asking students to return to their examples, I will be able to assess if students are able to
extend the work of defining a villain to understanding the variations between the general
(informal) types of villains (i.e., villains we sympathize with, villains we hate, villains
who make us laugh, villains who disturb us, etc.)
Materials:
v Othello: Texts and Contexts by William Shakespeare (Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2007 edition)
v Google Slides “Othello Unit”
v Computer + adapter
v Projector
v Worksheet: “What is a Villain?” (one/student)
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Name ________________________
WORKSHEET: What Is a Villain?
Which 5 of the traits you described above are most important to the character being a villain?
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
How is this villain like other villains? Give at least two examples of other villains to explain the
traits they share.
How is this villain different from other villains? Give at least two examples of other villains to
explain how they are different?
Lesson Plan B:
“‘What Makes Iago Tick?’: An Investigation” Cooperative Learning Activity
PART ONE
Week Two, Tuesday
Central Focus:
As a class, students will analyze a passage of Othello to examine Iago’s motivations.
Then, working in groups and fulfilling specific roles, students will examine another scene of
Othello to identify motivations using textual evidence as support.
Objectives:
v Students will be able to identify and explain three pieces of textual evidence to interpret
the motivations for Iago’s actions in a scene by completing a graphic organizer
v Students will work cooperatively in groups to analyze and explain a scene of Othello
Procedure:
Time Learning Activity
10 min. Video, free write, and discussion
- Watch 2-min. clip from the movie Mean Girls (2004), “How to Destroy
Regina George”
- Free write [project]: What motivates the characters Cady, Janice, and Damian
in this scene? Whether you’ve seen the movie or not, what parts of this scene
give you a clue about their motivations?
- Discuss (whole-class): What motivates these characters, and how do we
know? What evidence do we see in this scene?
- Introduce idea of inference [project]: definition (“drawing a conclusion from
known or assumed facts or statements”; “reasoning from something known or
assumed to something else which follows from it” [“Inference, n.”]) and
purpose
1.1.7-34
Roderigo:
Thou toldst me thou didst hold him in thy hate
Iago:
Despise me, if I do not. Three great ones of the city,
In personal suit to make me his lieutenant,
Off-capp'd to him: and, by the faith of man,
I know my price, I am worth no worse a place:
But he; as loving his own pride and purposes,
Evades them, with a bombast circumstance
Horribly stuff'd with epithets of war;
And, in conclusion,
Nonsuits my mediators; for, 'Certes,' says he,
'I have already chose my officer.'
And what was he?
Forsooth, a great arithmetician,
One Michael Cassio, a Florentine,
A fellow almost damn'd in a fair wife;
That never set a squadron in the field,
Nor the division of a battle knows
More than a spinster; unless the bookish theoric,
Wherein the toged consuls can propose
As masterly as he: mere prattle, without practise,
Is all his soldiership. But he, sir, had the election:
And I, of whom his eyes had seen the proof
At Rhodes, at Cyprus and on other grounds
Christian and heathen, must be be-lee'd and calm'd
By debitor and creditor: this counter-caster,
He, in good time, must his lieutenant be,
And I—God bless the mark!—his Moorship's ancient.
Ø Notes: Show what we can infer from the bolded lines above. Ex:
Iago has told Roderigo he hates Othello (which is true), because
only if Roderigo knows Iago hates Othello will he believe that
Iago would help him try to woo Desdemona
§ Complete analysis of above passage with students
Ø Notes: Questions to ask:
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Assessments:
v Free write about inferences of motivation in Mean Girls, shared with class during
discussion
v Class analysis of Act 1, Scene 1, completed as a group to model activity
v Group worksheet, completed by the scribe representing four students’ analysis of one
scene
Materials:
v Othello: Texts and Contexts by William Shakespeare (Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2007 edition)
v Video clip from Mean Girls (2004), “How to Destroy Regina George”
v Part One of Worksheet (below)
v Google Slides “Othello Unit,” computer + adapter, and projector
v Online version of Othello (to project): http://www.folgerdigitaltexts.org/html/Oth.html
v Students’ notebooks and pen/pencil
Note: Some of the roles and role descriptions in the worksheet are direct quotes from:
Manis, Chad. “Cooperative Learning: How to Assign Meaningful Tasks to Group Members,”
Daily Teaching Tools, 2012, http://www.dailyteachingtools.com/cooperative-learning-
tasks.html. Accessed 8 November 2017.
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PART ONE
Directions: Examine Act 2, Scene 1 of Othello to find at least two pieces of textual evidence that
support a claim about Iago’s motivation. Explain how this evidence supports that motivation (the
warrant).
Act 2, Scene 1
Textual evidence (including Meaning of quote Motivation it represents (and
act, scene, and lines) warrant)
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PART TWO
Directions: Choose a passage from another scene in Othello that shows something about Iago’s
motivations. Use at least two pieces of textual evidence to support a claim about his motivation.
Explain how this evidence supports that motivation (the warrant).
Act/scene: _________________
Textual evidence (including Meaning of quote Motivation it represents (and
act, scene, and lines) warrant)
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Lesson Plan C:
“‘What Makes Iago Tick?’: An Investigation” Cooperative Learning Activity
PART TWO
Week Two, Wednesday
Central Focus:
Students will present their groups’ findings of textual analysis from the previous day.
They will then choose their own passage to examine to complete the same exercise again.
Students will ultimately reflect on what they know about why Iago acts as he does, and what are
the limits of inference in this text.
Objectives:
v Students will be able to identify and explain three pieces of textual evidence to interpret
the motivations for Iago’s actions in a scene by completing a graphic organizer
v Students will work cooperatively in groups to analyze and explain a scene of Othello
Procedure:
Time Learning Activity
10 min. Class discussion
- Share groups’ analyses from previous day (role: spokesperson)
- Project passage and annotate according to students’ ideas
- Conclude Part One of activity
Assessments:
v Group worksheet, completed by the scribe representing four students’ analysis of two
scenes
v Presentation of and discussion about groups’ analysis of both the pre-selected passage
and the one they chose themselves
Materials:
v Othello: Texts and Contexts by William Shakespeare (Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2007 edition)
v Parts One and Two of Worksheet (above)
v Google Slides “Othello Unit,” computer + adapter, and projector
v Online version of Othello (to project): http://www.folgerdigitaltexts.org/html/Oth.html
v Students’ notebooks and pen/pencil
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Lesson Plan D:
“‘Dear Diary’: An Introduction to Journals and Diaries”
Week Three, Tuesday
Central Focus:
Students will write about and discuss the genre of journal/diary entries to consider the
features of this genre. They will then read and annotate an entry from Anne Frank, The Diary of
a Young Girl, noting specific components of this example such as descriptions of events,
background information, and self-reflection. Students will also analyze this entry in a written
response and/or in discussion (depending on the time it takes them to read).
Objective:
v Students will be able to identify five components of a journal entry in an excerpt from
Anne Frank, The Diary of a Young Girl as part of becoming familiar with the
journal/diary entry genre
Procedure:
Time Learning Activity
10 min. Free write and discussion
- Free write [project]: Do you write about your life outside of school?
o If so, what form does it take? Why do you do it?
o What other ways do you express yourself, including the problems you
face in life?
- Discuss (whole-class): Response to free write
o How do you express yourself? Does anyone use music, art, or other
forms to comment and reflect on their life?
o What are or might be the benefits of writing about your life in diary
form? What might be possible drawbacks?
10 min. Introduction to journal/diary genre
- Discuss (whole class) journal/diary by asking questions about the genre
[project]:
o Why do/have people keep/kept diaries?
o What can we learn from diaries?
o What information do people include in a diary entry?
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Assessments:
v Free write about journal/diary writing, shared with class during discussion, as a way to
gauge students’ knowledge of and familiarity with the genre
v Whole-class discussion of journal writing to assess familiarity with the genre, including
audience, purpose, and components
v Student annotations of Journal A
v Student written responses and discussion in response to Journal A
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Materials:
v Othello: Texts and Contexts by William Shakespeare (Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2007 edition)
v Google Slides “Othello Unit,” computer + adapter, and projector
v Students’ notebooks and pen/pencil
v Journal A, excerpt from Anne Frank, The Diary of a Young Girl (1947)
v Journal B, excerpt from Joseph Dole’s Anne Frank Center Prison Diary Project (2011)
(homework)
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Journal A
From Anne Frank, The Diary of a Young Girl (1947)
Writing in a diary is a really strange experience for someone like me. Not only because I’ve
never written anything before, but also because it seems to me that later on neither I nor anyone
else will be interested in the musings of a thirteen-year-old schoolgirl. Oh well, it doesn’t
matter. I feel like writing, and I have an even greater need to get all kinds of things off my chest.
“Paper has more patience than people.” I thought of this saying on one of those days when I was
feeling a little depressed and was sitting at home with my chin in my hands, bored and listless,
wondering whether to stay in or go out. I finally stayed where I was, brooding. Yes, paper does
have more patience, and since I’m not planning to let anyone else read this stiff-backed notebook
grandly referred to as a “diary” unless I should ever find a real friend, it probably won’t make a
bit of difference.
Now I’m back to the point that prompted me to keep a diary in the first place: I don’t have a
friend.
Let me put it more clearly, since no one will believe that a thirteen-year-old girl is completely
alone in the world. And I’m not. I have loving parents and a sixteen-year-old sister, and there
are about thirty people I can call friends. I have a throng of admirers who can’t keep their
adoring eyes off me and who sometimes have to resort to using a broken pocket mirror to try and
catch a glimpse of me in the classroom. I have a family, loving aunts and a good home.
No, on the surface I seem to have everything, except my one true friend. All I think about when
I’m with friends is having a good time. I can’t bring myself to talk about anything but ordinary
everyday things. We don’t seem to be able to get any closer, and that’s the problem. Maybe it’s
my fault that we don’t confide in each other. In any case, that’s just how things are, and
unfortunately they’re not liable to change. This is why I’ve started the diary.
To enhance the image of this long-awaited friend in my imagination, I don’t want to jot down the
facts in this diary the way most people would do, but I want the diary to be my friend, and I’m
going to call this friend Kitty.
Since no one would understand a word of my stories to Kitty if I were to plunge right in, I’d
better provide a brief sketch of my life, much as I dislike doing so.
My father, the most adorable father I’ve ever seen, didn’t marry my mother until he was thirty-
six and she was twenty-five. My sister Margot was born in Frankfurt am Main in Germany in
1926. I was born on June 12, 1929. I lived in Frankfurt until I was four. Because we’re Jewish,
my father immigrated to Holland in 1933, when he became the Managing Director of the Dutch
Opekta Company, which manufactures products used in making jam. My mother, Edith
Holländer Frank, went with him to Holland in September, while Margot and I were sent to
Aachen to stay with our grandmother. Margot went to Holland in December, and I followed in
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February, when I was plunked down on the table as a birthday present for Margot.
I started right away at the Montessori nursery school. I stayed there until I was six, at which
time I started first grade. In sixth grade my teacher was Mrs. Kuperus, the principal. At the end
of the year we were both in tears as we said a heartbreaking farewell, because I’d been accepted
at the Jewish Lyceum, where Margot also went to school.
Our lives were not without anxiety, since our relatives in Germany were suffering under Hitler’s
anti-Jewish laws. After the pogroms in 1938 my two uncles (my mother’s brothers) fled
Germany, finding safe refuge in North America. My elderly grandmother came to live with
us. She was seventy-three years old at the time.
After May 1940 the good times were few and far between: first there was the war, then the
capitulation and then the arrival of the Germans, which is when the trouble started for the
Jews. Our freedom was severely restricted by a series of anti-Jewish decrees: Jews were
required to wear a yellow star; Jews were required to turn in their bicycles; Jews were forbidden
to use streetcars; Jews were forbidden to ride in cars, even their own; Jews were required to do
their shopping between 3 and 5 P.M.; Jews were required to frequent only Jewish-owned
barbershops and beauty parlors; Jews were forbidden to be out on the streets between 8 P.M. and
6 A.M.; Jews were forbidden to go to theaters, movies or any other forms of entertainment; Jews
were forbidden to go rowing; Jews were forbidden to take part in any athletic activity in public;
Jews were forbidden to sit in their gardens or those of their friends after 8 P.M.; Jews were
forbidden to visit Christians in their homes. Jews were required to attend Jewish schools,
etc. You couldn’t do this and you couldn’t do that, but life went on. Jacque always said to me,
“I don’t dare do anything anymore, 'cause I’m afraid it’s not allowed.”
In the summer of 1941 Grandma got sick and had to have an operation, so my birthday passed
with little celebration. In the summer of 1940 we didn’t do much for my birthday either, since
the fighting had just ended in Holland. Grandma died in January 1942. No one knows how
often I think of her and still love her. This birthday celebration in 1942 was intended to make up
for the others, and Grandma’s candle was lit along with the rest.
The four of us are still doing well, and that brings me to the present date of June 20, 1942, and
the solemn dedication of my diary.
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Journal B
Joseph Dole, resident of Tamms Correctional Center, Tamms, Illinois
Part of the Anne Frank Center Prison Diary Project
Editor’s note from the Mississippi Review (2013): “At the Tamms Supermax Prison, in southern
Illinois, prisoners are kept in solitary confinement for twenty-three hours a day. When the
facility opened in 1998, officials claimed no inmate would stay longer than a year. Joe Dole
stayed for ten. In June 2012, Illinois Governor Pat Quinn announced he was closing Tamms for
good, but in September a judge blocked the closure, ruling it violated union contracts.”
I never imagined that I would be writing a diary, especially in prison. A friend had suggested it
once and I immediately dismissed the idea. I figured it would just be another item the guards
would steal to get a rise out of me, or that it would be lost during a transfer, etc. I only write one
now because I have been asked by The Anne Frank Center USA, as part of their Prison Diary
Project. I always try to encourage prisoners to write more and get their voices heard out in free
society to try and combat some of the tough-on-crime rhetoric and knee-jerk demonization of
prisoners. Therefore, passing up this opportunity would have made me a hypocrite.
The letter that accompanied the material from The Anne Frank Center stated that the goal of the
project was to educate people “on both sides of the wall.” I assume it means educate those on
the outside about what it is like to be in prison. Those of us on this side already know what it is
like. The hard part has always been trying to convey what it is like to someone who has never
experienced it before. I’ve tried numerous times and always feel incapable of articulating what it
is truly like.
How can I communicate what it is like to get arrested when you have one four-month-old
daughter and a second daughter on the way, and then be sentenced to a term of life without the
possibility of parole after your first felony conviction, by way of a theory of accountability, for a
crime you didn’t commit? How can I depict what it feels like now to have two daughters who
are twelve and thirteen years old whom I haven’t held in over nine years because I’m confined in
a supermax prison for my sole legitimate disciplinary infraction? A prison which Amnesty
International, Human Rights Watch, and Tamms Year Ten all condemn because they consider
the conditions here as amounting to torture. The English language lacks adequate terminology
for such an endeavor.
The first time I ever really wrote anything was shortly after I arrived at Tamms (the supermax
prison where I’m currently confined). I wrote an essay. I had never written an essay before, not
even in school as far as I can remember. Yet desperate for money, I tried my hand at it. There
was an essay contest being put on by a death row inmate and a good Samaritan. The theme was
“Who Am I?” I learned of the contest from another prisoner who yelled out the details from
down the gallery. I had to send it in that night in order to make the deadline. I simply wrote
down the first thing that came to mind. Surprisingly I won first place and fifty bucks, even more
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than the ten dollars promised to every entrant. More than anything though, it inspired me to
learn how to write better. In prison good writing skills are essential for just about everything—
keeping in contact with your family (especially here in Tamms where they still won’t allow us to
make phone calls); presenting your appeals in concise, coherent arguments to the courts;
advocating for change; filing grievances; etc.
In that first essay I briefly touched upon what it is like in prison. I wrote: “Most people’s
conceptions of being locked up are completely wrong. It’s not the physical things that you’re
without that make it so hard to be incarcerated for life. It’s the fact that you’re helpless to take
care of your family when they’re sick, to raise your children, to help in their times of struggle,
and to give back to your community. Instead you’re a burden, a charity case, someone to pity. It
strips you of your self-esteem and your self-respect. That is what breaks a man, not the absence
of good food, alcohol, sex, or any of the other inconsequential thing we may often wish we had
to temporarily give us pleasure.”
I still find all of that true. Yet, after being confined and isolated for the past 9 years in a
supermax prison, I’ve also come to realize that the little things add up too. There are a million
little stressors and injustices that prisoners must endure on a daily basis that can also break a
man. These are what I will try to describe with this diary. Each one may seem minor, but the
cumulative effect of them all is what drives so many here insane. I’m not sure how accurate the
word “insane” is, but it definitely causes a variety of mental illnesses. A recent report by the
John Howard Association claims that 95% of inmates in Tamms suffer from a diagnosable
psychiatric problem. Up to a point I wonder if this figure is just rhetoric or propaganda put out
by the administration to further slander and stigmatize us in the eyes of the public, similar to how
they call us the “worst of the worst”. I can hear them now, “not only are they the worst of the
worst, but they’re all crazy sociopaths!” At the same time it disturbingly seems plausible to me
that so many here are mentally ill. Numerous studies have shown that as little as three months in
solitary confinement can cause deterioration in one’s mental health. I wonder what the past nine
years here have done to me? What psychiatric problem have they surreptitiously diagnosed me
with?
I’m not sure how much I’ll have to say today. I really didn’t want to get out of bed this morning,
and I’m still half asleep waiting for the “mocha” to kick in. I’m not sure if “mocha” is the
correct word, it’s not in the dictionary and I never drank any coffee before coming to Tamms.
What I do is mix one spoon of Maxwell House coffee with 2 spoons of hot cocoa mix and 2
sugar substitutes. So whatever it is; “mocha,” “cappuccino,” etc., I’m not sure—it’s what helps
me stay awake when I can afford all the ingredients.
Yesterday I got my legal boxes by the skin of my teeth, and was just able to make my filing
deadline. First, in the morning the guard told me I had a pass to the satellite law library (a small
room the size of a walk-in closet with about a hundred outdated, half-destroyed legal books; it’s
also the only place we are allowed to access our excess legal property boxes) and that pass said I
was supposed to have my #1 and #2 boxes, but that no-one had brought them from the Personal
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Property department because there was no one working in that department. Luckily a halfway
decent guard was working and he did me a favor and called the watch commander who pulled
someone from the mailroom to get the boxes and bring them down here, at about ten or eleven
o’clock. (If I hadn’t gotten my boxes I would not have been able to make the filing deadline).
Then when I was supposed to be put in the law library at about eleven-thirty, someone acted out
and all the guards had to suit up and go in an inmate’s cell for some reason. So they stopped all
movement and there was no one to transfer me to the law library. Then when things settled
down I was told I’d be escorted out to the law library at 1:30, then at 2:30, then when they were
getting ready to move me one of the guards got called to an emergency on another pod and there
weren’t enough guards to transfer me. Then I had to wait until after shift change. They finally
transferred me to the law library at like 3:40. When I was trying to get back to my cell the
guards were again called to another pod twice right as they were about to transfer me back. Then
when I finally got back to my cell I had to scramble to write the petition, handwrite three extra
copies, and mail them out. Today I have to write yet another petition and 3 copies, and
tomorrow I have to write a reply to a Motion to Dismiss, plus a bunch of letters, an essay, an
article, this diary, etc. It’s never-ending.
Today is Saturday, which means tonight I usually only sleep from like 4:30 a.m. Sunday to 7:00
a.m. Sunday[, t]he reason being is that I stay up to watch Saturday Night Live, Stargate
Universe, and Stargate Atlantis. Then after sleeping for 2 ½ hours after breakfast I get up for the
news and political shows like This Week, Face The Nation, etc. There’s so much going on in the
world right now. I used to have a subscription to The Economist magazine but it ran out. The
group Tamms Year Ten has a good program to help us get a subscription. People can donate
airline frequent flyer miles which are used to buy each Tamms inmate one subscription. I got a
subscription to the Wall Street Journal newspaper which helps me stay up on the news and what
is going on around the world. I won’t go into all the stuff happening in Japan, North Africa, the
Middle East, etc. as that’s not the purpose of this diary, but, man, so much is happening right
now! It really makes one feel useless just sitting here unable to help anyone in Japan, or give
support to people fighting for democracy.
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Lesson Plan E:
“‘Good’ and ‘Evil’ in Othello” Discussion
Week Four, Monday
Central Focus: Students will explore the concepts of “good” and “evil” in relation to their
cultural, religious, and personal backgrounds, and as applied to our understanding of the
characters in Othello.
Objectives:
v Students will be able to explore the concepts of “good,” “evil,” and morality as a whole
in both familiar and unfamiliar ways
v Students will be able to explain in writing whether Iago is “good,” “evil,” or neither,
using at least one example of textual evidence and a warrant to support their claim.
Assessments:
v Free write about “good” and “evil” as an indicator of knowledge students already possess
about the topic (glanced at while students are writing, shared by students during
discussion, reviewed in more detail after class)
v Student contributions to discussion about good, evil, and morality as a whole
v Students’ individual short writing responses (indication of understanding of themes of
good and evil in the novel and in relation to Iago’s character, indication of use of textual
evidence)
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Materials:
v Othello: Texts and Contexts by William Shakespeare (Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2007 edition)
v Students’ notebooks and pen/pencil
v Google Slides “Othello Unit,” computer + adapter, and projector
The final project for the study of Othello will be journal/diary entries from the
perspective of a character in the play. Students will choose the character whose perspective they
would like to adopt, and will be encouraged to base this decision on unresolved questions and
ambiguities they see in this character. Throughout the unit students will consider characters’
motivations for their actions and the larger essential question of what motivates humans, and will
therefore be expected to express these motivations in their writing. Students will write about
events that occur in the play from the perspective of a character reflecting on what has occurred
during their day, referring specifically to events and dialogue while providing a view into their
emotions and thoughts. Students may also choose to write about events that are implied but not
shown directly (such as Othello’s near-death experience at sea) or create events or conversations
that are absent in the play. These additions will be encouraged, but it will be important for
students’ creative supplements to be consistent with the textual evidence of the play. So,
alternative interpretations of events and characters represented in the play need to be supported
by textual evidence. (For example, if a student wants to show that Iago is actually less villainous
than we believe, they need to present information about the scenes where we see Iago’s
treacherous behavior in a way that supports this alternative view.)
This unit has been designed to support students in working toward this final project by
allowing the class to examine questions of motivation, good and evil, and emotional responses
such as jealousy. The first week focuses on students’ personal connections to themes of the play
and introduces questions of good and evil, and motivation as a whole. The second week allows
students to go deeper into these subjects by focusing more on the role of the villain and
examinations of Iago’s motivations. The third week introduces students to the genre of journals
and diaries through supplemental texts. The fourth week continues discussion of the concepts of
good and evil, and sets up students to choose and more fully examine a character from whose
perspective they would like to work. And, the end of the fourth week and the whole fifth week
scaffolds students’ work on their journal entries from the perspective of a character. This design,
I hope, will provide support for students to explore the unit themes in relation to the character
they choose for their final project, and then to use textual evidence as a foundation for their
character’s journal entries.
The final project will be assessed on the following criteria: character development,
explanation of motivations, meaningful reflection from the perspective of the character, and
textual support. (See rubric below.) Students may choose to type or handwrite the project, and
will be encouraged to add creative details such as pictures, notes, and the addition of scenes that
the audience/reader does not see directly in the play. Students will need to produce at least four
journal entries totaling five handwritten pages or four typed pages.
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