Arellano 1

Dalia Arellano

Professor Holly

English 101

4 June 2018

Reflection

For my Literary Analysis Essay there were some things I had to change to make my essay

sound better. One of the main things I did change my verbal abuse paragraph and made into 2

paragraph one being the things that happened in the book, and another being a real life scenario.

I also looked for my grammar mistakes and tried to fix them to make it less distracting for the

reader. Something else that I did do was that for some of my tittle from the articled I was using I

set them up wrongly because I had the titles I realized when I didn’t have to put them like that. I

also took a look at my works cited page and notice that for some of the things I was missing

quotations makes, so I fixed that. I also noticed that I had too much spacing in the margins the

paper and change them because they were wring before.