LO1 & LO2 FEEDBACK

Evie Wood LO1 & LO2 Feedback. 5/6/2018

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

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Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.

Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

LEARNING OTUCOME 1.

Current Grade for LO1: Fail

Evie, you would benefit from another idea, two isn’t considered a ‘range’. Can you also
please ensure you use the audience terminology on the ideas document, Explain the
demographics, socio-economic groups and psychographics of the magazine, for each idea.
The moodboard doesn’t load (I’m not sure this has been added) – please do this. Without
this work, I cannot pass this learning outcome.

LEARNING OUTCOME 2.
Current Grade for LO2: Pass
Some excellent work here Evie, Well done.

The resubmission deadline for both learning outcomes is: June 15th