LO3 & LO4 FEEDBACK

Jack Binns 17/6/18

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.

Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

LEARNING OUTCOME 3.

Current Grade for LO3: Distinction

The materials produced (photos and written copy) are a high technical standard and quality.
Conventions of the chosen genre are followed, within the intentions of the production. The
production techniques and/or processes are used to good effect to enhance meaning,
within the intentions of the production.

LEARNING OUTCOME 4.
Current Grade for LO4: Distinction
Your front cover and magazine double page spread and contents page is proficient, bordering on
excellent - you have used the application of post production additions in In-Design effectively to
create meaning. The final original media product you have made is generally of an excellent
standard and quality.

● Add pull quote to double page spread

● Consider moving the month / year on the cover, so it meets the end of Urban.

● Need to add and annotate layout edit log - THIS IS A REQUIREMENT

● Add in your feedback done in class and annotate. Explain what you will do as a result of this
(if anything).

Final Deadline: Wednesday 20th June.