WRITING Paragraph structure: Review

Nowadays, the music has been losing the modesty, a lot of songs have a bad content,
they often offend the women how will our future be? We need a lot of changes, we
have lost the innocence. For example, artists like Bad bunny with his songs introduce
many teenagers to the sex, that’s terrible, this is the answer to many cases of teen
pregnancy, Most of them think that a few minutes of pleasure don’t put their future in
danger, It’s necessary changing our mind and knowing where we’re going to go, We
can’t continue allowing this bad influence in our world, The child need to grow up
innocent, with good thoughts, Let’s think like God, His Thoughts are not like our, His
thoughts are of peace, In Summary, I think that if we will continue allowing this kind of
things in our society, we won’t have future.