English paragraph-

Harper lee’s to kill a mockingbird forces the reader to recognise human goodness, innate
goodness and childhood innocence. First person narrative perspective from Scout’s point of
view helps us see everything from Scout’s perspective and allows harper lee to show
prejudice, and how scouts refusal to prejudice allows harper lee to show that not all humans
are prejudice. Through the use of a flashback and the metaphor “she may as well have been
asking to go to the moon” we can compare the aunts perspective to prejudice to scouts.
Through this harper lee shows human goodness, innate goodness and childhood innocence.

Excellent work! Try and discuss narrative perspective in a more sustained and concise topic
sentence. Furthermore try and make a more succinct link to the overall theme rather than just
rephrase the topic sentence.

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