Common Mistakes (Task One)

The evaluation is made according to the scoring rubric in page

196.
Outlines:
1- ignoring to use some ideas in your paragraph.
2-not making a logical groups of ideas.
3- Using off points ideas.
4-missing details or evidences that consolidate your point of view.
Format:
1-You should have a title and it comes at the center of your paper.
2- first line should be indented.
Punctuation:
1- Full stop or period after every sentence.
2-Capital letters used correctly.
Examples:
Pronoun (I) is capitalized at any part of the sentence.
Start every sentence with a capital letter.
Do not start every line with a capital letter.
Names of countries: England, Japan, Turkey.
Names of Languages: English, Japanese, Chinese.
Names of Days and months: May, Friday.
Names of monuments: Egyptian Museum, Luxor Temple, Big
Ben, Tower Bridge.

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Directions: East, North, South, West
Names of people: Ahmed, John, Sara
(W) capital letter (w) small letter
(T) capital letter (t) small letters
Spelling mistakes:
Futur (X) future √ Gaving (X) giving √
Useing (X) using √ Cloth (X) clothes (what you wear)√
Profitional (X) professional √ Brances (X) branches √
Every body (X) everybody √ Every one (X) everyone √
Realize v.s Release Sew (X) saw √
Event V.S invitation Proude (X) proud √
Advices (X) advice √ Informations (X) information √
Benfit (X) benefit √ Proude (X) proud √
Defferent (X) different un fortunately (X) unfortunately √
Hapit (X) habit √ Dsire (X) desire √ (better to use wish)
Don't (X) do not √
Choice of Words:
Domesticity goals (X) ….personal goals √
Sports goals (X)……athletic goals √
Do not use Arabic structure
( to a constructive nation) (X) (it is not in my hands) (X)
Redundancy and repetition of ideas

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Subject- verb agreement:
I does not (X) I do not √
She talk |(X) She talks √
I using (X) I am using √
Topic Sentences:
-Some topic sentences are missing.
-Do not start with a generalization:
Everyone should have a dream
All people has a target
- Don not start with clichés:
I want to talk about
No one can deny
This topic is very important
Supporting sentences:
Writing unconnected sentences.
Lack of conjunctions and coordinators
I want to graduate. I want to get a good job. I wish to travel
abroad. I want to marry a good man.
Writing irrelevant or pop- up ideas.
Conclusion:
Do not introduce new ideas.
Do not use the same topic sentence as a conclusion.

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Use concluding signals ( To sum up, Consequently, Accordingly,
Finally, ...)
Punctuation:
Firstly,
Secondly,
Finally,
For example,
Such as
, and
, so
Never Use Slang:
I am gonna (X) I am going √
I wanna (X) I want √
Leave spaces between words:
Iwanttogotoschool,becauseIhavealotofreserachestodo.
I want to go to school, because I have a lot of researches to do.