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Active voice:
Laura invited Nancy to a party this Saturday night at 8:00.
Robins eat huge amounts of earth worms every spring.
Farmers predominantly raise corn and hogs in Iowa.
Scholars have translated that book into sixteen different languages.
Passive voice:
Nancy was invited to a party this Saturday night at 8:00.
Huge amounts of earth worms are eaten every spring by robins.
Predominantly, corn and hogs are raised in Iowa.
This book has been translated into sixteen different languages.
Usually, good writing uses the active voice and shuns the passive. However,
sometimes the active voice is awkward or inappropriate. We use the passive voice
frequently in speaking and writing--quite appropriately.
The first sentence, above, about the party, is a good example of this. The active voice
sentence focuses on Laura, the person who did the inviting. The passive voice
sentence focuses on Nancy, a potential party attendee. Deciding which sentence is
best depends on your focus--what you wish to stress. When considering the last
example sentence (the one about the book translation), the passive voice version
actually sounds much better because we wish to focus on the book (which received the
action of translation) not on the agent or person who performed the action.
As a general rule, however, the active voice is shorter, more direct, and more dynamic
than the passive voice.
Examples:
The agent is common knowledge:
George Washington was elected in 1789. After serving two terms, he decided not to
run again. A custom was established at that time to serve for no longer than two
terms. It was not until President Roosevelt was elected to his third and fourth terms
that this custom was changed.
PASSIVE PRACTICE:
Put the following sentences in the passive voice: