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HENRIETTE A N N E K L A U S E R
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The author gratefully acknowledges permission to reprint from the following
works: The Dragons of Eden: Speculations on the Evolution of Human Intelligence,
by Carl Sagan. Copyright © 1977 by Carl Sagan. Reprinted by permission of
Random House, Inc. Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain, by Betty Edwards.
Copyright © 1979 by Betty Edwards. Reprinted by permission of Jeremy P.
Tarcher, Inc. The Garfield cartoon on page 30 is reprinted with the permis-
sion of the United Feature Syndicate, Inc. The Origin of Consciousness in the
Breakdown of the Bicameral Mind, by Julian Jaynes. Copyright © 1976 by Julian
Jaynes. Reprinted by permission of Houghton Mifflin Co. Plain English for
Lawyers, by Richard Wydick. Copyright © 1979 by Richard Wydick. Reprinted
by permission of Carolina Academic Press. The Reading Teacher's Book of Lists,
by Edward B. Fry, Jacqueline K. Polk, and Dona Fountoukidis. Copyright ©
1984 by Prentice-Hall, Inc. Reprinted by permission of Prentice-Hall, Inc.
The Shoe cartoons on pages 42 and 43 are reprinted with the permission of
Jefferson Communications. Spinning Inward, by Maureen Murdock. Copyright
© 1982 by Maureen Murdock. Reprinted by permission of Peace Press. The
Fog Index instructions were adapted with permission from "How to Take the
Fog Out of Writing," by Robert Gunning and Douglas Mueller, Copyright ©
1985 by Gunning-Mueller Clear Writing Institute, Inc., Santa Barbara, CA
93110. Apple II Reference Manual. Copyright © 1979. Reprinted with the
permission of Apple Computer, Inc.
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To Jim, my own true love, who combines logic and sensitivity, reason and
intuition, gentleness with strong masculinity: you are one of the most naturally
whole-brained people I know.
Preface ix
1. F r o m Panic to P o w e r : M a s t e r y o v e r the W r i t t e n W o r d 1
2. T h e H a i r o f the D o g T h a t B i t Y o u 15
3. Right Brain/Left Brain: What's It A l l About? 25
4. Rumination: Daydreaming and Nightdreaming 36
5. B r a n c h i n g : T h e W h o l e - B r a i n e d Way t o O r g a n i z e Y o u r
Material 47
6. P r o c r a s t i n a t i o n : N o t Just A r o u n d b u t B e h i n d I t 56
7. A s s e r t i v e n e s s T r a i n i n g : D e a l i n g w i t h the C a l i b a n C r i t i c 69
8. Re-Vision: C a l i b a n Returns, at Your Invitation 88
9. G o i n g t o the M o v i e s : C r e a t i v e V i s u a l i z a t i o n a n d W r i t i n g 118
A p p e n d i x 1: Whole-Brained Spelling 132
A p p e n d i x 2 : W r i t i n g o n B o t h S i d e s o f the B r a i n w i t h a W o r d
Processor 137
Notes 140
Preface
A r e y o u a b u s i n e s s p e r s o n w h o i s t i r e d o f w a s t i n g v a l u a b l e t i m e labor-
i n g o v e r w r i t t e n w o r k , a s t u d e n t w i t h five t e r m p a p e r s d u e i n o n e
w e e k , all left until the last m i n u t e , a f r e e l a n c e w r i t e r w i t h a s e c r e t
d e s i r e to w i n a P u l i t z e r P r i z e ? T h i s b o o k is for y o u . It will show y o u
h o w to m a k e p r o c r a s t i n a t i o n w o r k for y o u i n s t e a d of against y o u , h o w
to c a p i t a l i z e on t i m e s of i n c u b a t i o n w h e n y o u r i n s p i r a t i o n is at a p e a k .
D i d y o u e v e r w a t c h a c o l l e a g u e in y o u r office d a s h o f f a m e m o or
c o m p o s e a m a j o r r e p o r t w i t h a p p a r e n t e a s e , a n d w i s h t o yourself, " I f
only I had such c o m m a n d over words! If only I could write more
c o n f i d e n t l y ! " T h i s b o o k i s for y o u . I t will c h a n g e the n a t u r e o f y o u r
r e l a t i o n s h i p w i t h w r i t i n g forever.
H a v e y o u e n v i e d t h e novelist w h o h a s j u s t p u b l i s h e d h e r t h i r d novel,
h a s sold t h e m o v i e r i g h t s t o the h i g h e s t bidder, a n d i s e a g e r l y w o r k i n g
o n n o v e l n u m b e r f o u r ? T h i s b o o k i s for y o u . I t will i n c r e a s e y o u r
w r i t i n g p r o d u c t i v i t y d r a m a t i c a l l y a n d t e a c h y o u h o w t o tell the s t o r y
inside of you in y o u r o w n unique voice.
T h e basis for this b o o k i s the b e l i e f that w r i t i n g a n d e d i t i n g a r e t w o
s e p a r a t e b r a i n f u n c t i o n s a n d that the p r o b l e m s w e have w i t h e x p r e s s -
i n g o u r s e l v e s fluently i n w r i t i n g a r i s e f r o m d o i n g b o t h tasks s i m u l t a -
neously. T h e p u r p o s e o f this b o o k i s t o g i v e y o u a n e w a p p r o a c h t o
w r i t i n g , o n e that will first free u p y o u r c r e a t i v e side a n d h e l p y o u t o
p r o d u c e y o u r best w r i t i n g e v e r a n d t h e n will h o n e y o u r e d i t i n g skills,
w h e n t h e y a r e p u t i n their p r o p e r p l a c e , t o a k e e n e d g e . T h i s a p p r o a c h
will p r o v i d e y o u w i t h w r i t i n g tools a n d t e c h n i q u e s that will s e r v e y o u
well f o r t h e rest o f y o u r life.
Writing on Both Sides of the Brain g r e w o u t of the w o r k s h o p s I h a v e
g i v e n o v e r the p a s t s e v e r a l y e a r s , w h e r e p e o p l e w h o felt a n x i o u s o r
u n h a p p y a b o u t their w r i t i n g a p p l i e d t h e s e t e c h n i q u e s a n d d i s c o v e r e d
d r a m a t i c d i f f e r e n c e s i n the way they w r i t e . T h i s b o o k offers the w o r k -
s h o p in b o o k f o r m ; it p r e s e n t s the s a m e t e c h n i q u e s I offer t h e r e a n d
c a n p r o v i d e the s a m e l o n g - l a s t i n g results for y o u .
Writing on Both Sides of the Brain will t e a c h y o u h o w to fish, a n d will
f e e d y o u for a l i f e t i m e .
X / WRITING ON BOTH SIDES OF T H E BRAIN
W H A T T H I S B O O K W I L L D O FOR YOU
I f y o u h a v e a c a r p i n g v o i c e i n s i d e o f y o u that c r i t i c i z e s y o u r w o r k
a n d e d i t s e v e r y t h i n g as y o u w r i t e it, Writing on Both Sides of the Brain
w i l l t e a c h y o u t o t a l k b a c k , t o t u r n y o u r I n n e r C r i t i c into y o u r ally.
Y o u will k n o w w h e n t o e d i t a n d w h e n not t o e d i t a n d h o w t o g o a b o u t
it m o s t effectively.
I f y o u n e e d t o w r i t e a s a n i n t e g r a l p a r t o f y o u r j o b , w r i t e for
p u b l i c a t i o n , o r i f y o u s i m p l y f i n d y o u r s e l f s t y m i e d b y t h a n k - y o u notes
a n d o r d i n a r y c o r r e s p o n d e n c e , Writing on Both Sides of the Brain will
h e l p y o u g e t r i d o f the s i n k i n g s e n s a t i o n b e f o r e a b l a n k p a g e . I t will
s h o w y o u h o w t o i n c r e a s e the s p e e d o f c o m p o s i t i o n , i n t r o d u c e y o u t o
a n i n n o v a t i v e a p p r o a c h t o o u t l i n i n g , a n d h e l p y o u u n l e a r n the w r i t i n g
h a b i t s that i n h i b i t y o u .
My i n t e n t in w r i t i n g this b o o k is to c h a n g e y o u r life. I am not a f r a i d
t o b e s o b l u n t , s i n c e I h a v e s e e n the p r i n c i p l e s o f w r i t i n g d e t a i l e d h e r e
w o r k w o n d e r s i n p e o p l e ' s lives. B u s i n e s s p e o p l e , l a w y e r s , f r e e l a n c e w r i t -
e r s , d o c t o r s , t e a c h e r s , s t u d e n t s , a d m i n i s t r a t o r s , lobbyists, e l e c t e d offi-
cials and government e m p l o y e e s — p e o p l e from a diversity of
professions—have taken my writing workshop and applied these tech-
niques to their professional and personal writing with astonishing
r e s u l t s . T h e s e c o n c e p t s h a v e r a d i c a l l y c h a n g e d the way they a p p r o a c h
w h a t e v e r writing they are doing. "Writing has ceased to be a problem
for m e , " o n e o f m y f o r m e r s t u d e n t s said m a t t e r - o f - f a c t l y w h e n I m e t
h e r a g a i n f i v e y e a r s a f t e r she h a d t a k e n m y class. " I s i m p l y w r i t e
whatever I need to write and move on to other things."
S o t h a t i s m y intent: t o c h a n g e , r a d i c a l l y a n d p e r m a n e n t l y , the way
y o u feel a b o u t w r i t i n g a n d , c o n s e q u e n t l y , t o i m p r o v e the p o w e r a n d
persuasion of your finished product.
B u t t h e r e a l p o w e r o f this b o o k lies i n s i d e o f y o u . W h a t i s y o u r
i n t e n t i n r e a d i n g this b o o k ? I n d o i n g the e x e r c i s e s ? W h a t w o u l d you
like t o s e e h a p p e n , p r o f e s s i o n a l l y a n d p e r s o n a l l y ? W h a t a r e y o u r
g o a l s ? B e specific. W r i t e t h e m d o w n .
T a k e full r e s p o n s i b i l i t y for w h a t o c c u r s w h e n y o u r e a d this b o o k , d o
t h e e x e r c i s e s , a n d i n c o r p o r a t e the ideas into y o u r d a i l y w r i t i n g . M a k e
i t y o u r i n t e n t t h a t this will b e the m o s t p o w e r f u l , influential, e x c i t i n g ,
m i n d - b e n d i n g b o o k that y o u h a v e e v e r r e a d . ( I h a p p e n t o t h i n k that
this i s a u s e f u l a t t i t u d e t o w a r d a n y b o o k y o u a r e r e a d i n g , a n y c o u r s e
y o u a r e e m b a r k i n g o n . ) D e c i d e that the c h a n g e i n y o u will not b e j u s t
a s l i g h t o n e b u t a 1 8 0 - d e g r e e t u r n a r o u n d . M a k e that y o u r i n t e n t i o n ,
o w n it as a g o a l , a n d t h e n go for it, all the way.
I d i d not i n t e n d this b o o k to be a l i b r a r y r e f e r e n c e work or a c o f f e e
table s h o w p i e c e . Y o u h a v e m y p e r m i s s i o n t o w r i t e i n its p a g e s , tack u p
o v e r y o u r c o m p u t e r or w o r k s p a c e the charts that a p p e a l to you,
PREFACE / XI
d o g - e a r its e d g e s , b e n d d o w n its c o r n e r s , u s e r u b b e r b a n d s a n d
clips to m a r k o f f sections to r e t u r n to. Follow Francis B a c o n ' s
injunction:
Read not to contradict and confute; nor to believe and take for granted;
nor to find talk and discourse; but to weigh and consider. Some books are to
be tasted, others, to be swallowed, and some few to be chewed and digested.
T h i s b o o k w a s d e s i g n e d to be d e v o u r e d . I trust y o u h a v e a v o r a c i o u s
appetite.
A b o o k t h a t c o n c e r n s itself w i t h the p r o c e s s of w r i t i n g o w e s a d e b t
to its r e a d e r s to say h o w it g o t w r i t t e n . I a m , after all, d o i n g w h a t I
a m t a l k i n g a b o u t d o i n g , a n d i n that way the p r o c e s s i s d i f f e r e n t f r o m
l e c t u r i n g . I am a t t e m p t i n g to do for m y s e l f w h a t I set o u t to h e l p y o u
d o for y o u r s e l f . I n e e d t o d r a w o n all o f m y o w n d e v i c e s i n o r d e r t o
get these words on paper. Without practicing my o w n injunctions, I
w o u l d h a v e s o o n lost h e a r t , a n d this b o o k w o u l d not b e .
D i d y o u e v e r h e a r s o m e o n e say, " I ' d like to w r i t e a b o o k , b u t I d o n ' t
h a v e the time"} I n today's h u r r i e d a g e , p e o p l e u s u a l l y d o n ' t w r i t e b o o k s
b e c a u s e they h a v e the time to do it. I w r o t e this b o o k w h i l e s t o p p i n g
at a r e d l i g h t , w a i t i n g in line at the p o s t office, sitting by t h e e d g e of
the p o o l d u r i n g the c h i l d r e n ' s s w i m lessons. I w r o t e it d u r i n g inter-
m i s s i o n s a t the o p e r a , i n the b a c k o f d a r k e n e d m o v i e t h e a t e r s , d u r i n g
b a n q u e t speeches and l u n c h e o n lectures, in between family dental
a p p o i n t m e n t s a n d p i a n o lessons a n d s o c c e r p r a c t i c e . I h a v e a r e v e r e n c e
for p a p e r a n d d a i l y bless its C h i n e s e inventor. I b u y p a p e r by t h e
r e a m s a n d still n e v e r h a v e e n o u g h o f it. I w r o t e this b o o k o n n a p k i n s ,
o n the c o r n e r s o f p l a c e m a t s , o n the b a c k s o f e n v e l o p e s , o n Post-it p a d s
o f all sizes a n d c o l o r s , i n the several n o t e b o o k s , b i g a n d s m a l l , that I
c a r r y w i t h m e . I w r o t e w i t h a n y t h i n g h a n d y ( a l t h o u g h I do h a v e my
f a v o r i t e t o o l s , a m o n g t h e m two Mont B l a n c s a n d a 1 9 2 2 E s t e r b r o o k ,
o b l i q u e n i b ) . Later, I fed the w r i t t e n w o r d s into a c o m p u t e r , a n d
s o m e t i m e s I h a d the l u x u r y o f c o m p o s i n g a t the k e y b o a r d . I b e g a n
each chapter with branching, a system of generating ideas and o r g a n -
i z i n g m a t e r i a l e x p l a i n e d in c h a p t e r 5. I d i d all my b r a n c h e s in m u l t i -
c o l o r a n d s o m e t i m e s u s e d p i c t u r e s a s well a s w o r d s t o c a p t u r e m y
thoughts.
I c a n w r i t e v o l u m e s in the m i d s t of c o n f u s i o n , a n d I c a n easily w r i t e
on t h e r u n . B u t I do n e e d s o l i t u d e in o r d e r to e d i t . It is h a r d for me
t o take the c o n f u s i o n o u t o f m y w r i t i n g w h e n I a m s u r r o u n d e d b y
c o n f u s i o n . M y e n v i r o n m e n t n e e d s t o reflect m y mind's w o r k . W h e n I
was in g r a d u a t e s c h o o l , I w o u l d go to the c a m p u s l i b r a r y — e s p e c i a l l y
m y favorite r o o m u p s t a i r s , w h e r e I was o f t e n s o l i t a r y a n d c o u l d l o o k
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THANKS
T h a n k you.
CHAPTER 1
I reread and scratch out everything as I go along. It takes forever, and I hate
the way it sounds when it's done.
I was taught that the opening sentence is the most important. It has to catch
your reader's attention, set the mood and style, anticipate the ending—all that
in one sentence. Sometimes I spend forty-five minutes to an hour just getting
that first sentence down, and even then I often don't like it. It's discouraging.
Why does it take so long for me to write? When I speak, I handle myself
pretty well. I wish I could write as easily as I talk!
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I n t h e s p a c e below, w r i t e d o w n t h r e e w o r d s o r p h r a s e s that c o m e
immediately to your mind when you think about writing.
N e x t , p u t d o w n w h a t y o u w o u l d like t o c h a n g e a b o u t y o u r w r i t i n g ,
w h a t b u g s y o u m o s t a b o u t it, w h a t y o u a r e p u t t i n g u p w i t h n o w t h a t
y o u would rather not put up with.
4 / WRITING ON BOTH SIDES OF T H E BRAIN
F i n a l l y w r i t e d o w n w h a t y o u w o u l d like t o g e t o u t o f r e a d i n g
b o o k a n d d o i n g the e x e r c i s e s . B e specific. W r i t e d o w n p e r s o n a l
professional goals.
I t w i l l b e i n t e r e s t i n g t o g o b a c k o v e r this list w h e n y o u h a v e f i n
this b o o k .
«M PANIC TO POWER / 5
T H E C H A L L E N G E A N D T H E PROMISE
T h i s , t h e n , i s m y p r o m i s e : Y o u c a n b e f r i e n d s w i t h the side o f y o u r
b r a i n that i s o u t t o g e t y o u a n d y o u c a n b e i n c h a r g e o f the i n s p i r a -
tional p a r t o f y o u , t o o . Y o u c a n l e a r n t o s e p a r a t e the w r i t i n g f l o w f r o m
t h e e d i t i n g o r c r i t i q u i n g p a r t o f the w r i t i n g p r o c e s s t o p r o d u c e the
b e s t f i n i s h e d p r o d u c t y o u have e v e r w r i t t e n . Y o u c a n m a k e y o u r s e l f a
f l u e n t , c o n f i d e n t , a n d e f f e c t i v e w r i t e r for the rest o f y o u r life. C a l i b a n
a n d A r i e l e a c h h a v e their p l a c e , a s l o n g a s y o u a r e the o n e i n c o n t r o l .
L e t i t b e said f r o m the start: this b o o k w o u l d n o t h a v e s e e n the l i g h t
of d a y h a d I n o t in w r i t i n g it e m p l o y e d the v e r y t e c h n i q u e s that I am
i n v i t i n g y o u t o u s e . F o l l o w i n g m y o w n p r e s c r i p t i o n , I was a b l e t o
r e l e a s e the c r e a t i v e f l o o d g a t e s a n d let i d e a s f l o w — f r o m the b r a i n t o
t h e p a p e r . T h e e d i t i n g was a s e p a r a t e p r o c e s s . C a l i b a n c a m e b a c k a t
my i n v i t a t i o n a n d t r e a t e d me w i t h r e s p e c t as I set o u t to r e v i e w a n d
revise, tighten and correct. A n d there was an excitement and an
e n e r g y a b o u t b o t h p a r t s , the s a m e e x c i t e m e n t a n d e n e r g y that I will
train you to generate about your writing. Your relationship with writ-
i n g will n e v e r b e t h e s a m e a g a i n .
_j,ROM P A N I C TO POWER / 7
D E C E M B E R 31
P u t i n t e r m s o f the b i g p i c t u r e , i t b e c o m e s c l e a r : a l p h a b e t i c a l w r i t i n g
d i d n o t e m e r g e u n t i l the last m i n u t e o f the last h o u r o f the last d a y o f
t h e c o s m i c y e a r — i n fact, n i n e s e c o n d s a g o . S o t h i n k o f y o u r b r a i n
a n d n e r v o u s s y s t e m a s still a d j u s t i n g t o this n e w p h e n o m e n o n , t o the
r e q u i r e m e n t s p l a c e d o n t h e m b y this n e w skill. A f t e r all, it's only n i n e
seconds old.
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T h e r e a s o n that w e try, w i t h d i s a s t r o u s r e s u l t s , t o e d i t a n d w r i t e
s i m u l t a n e o u s l y i s b e c a u s e o f the way w e w e r e t a u g h t . I a m d o i n g i t
now, w i t h all m y t r a i n i n g a n d b a c k g r o u n d ; e v e n t h o u g h I k n o w better,
i t i s a difficult h a b i t t o b r e a k . W h e n y o u f i r s t b e g a n t o w r i t e , y o u h a d
s o m e o n e s t a n d i n g o v e r y o u ("for y o u r o w n g o o d " ) , c o r r e c t i n g y o u r
f o r m a n d g r a m m a r a n d s p e l l i n g . A f t e r all, i f y o u r t e a c h e r d i d not tell
y o u f r o m the f i r s t d a y o f s c h o o l h o w t o m a k e that s e n t e n c e c o m p l e t e ,
s h e w o u l d not b e d o i n g h e r j o b , a n d y o u j u s t m i g h t g e t all the way t o
c o l l e g e w i t h o u t k n o w i n g a n i n c o m p l e t e s e n t e n c e i f y o u fell o v e r o n e .
K e e p i n m i n d that a t the t i m e you w e r e l e a r n i n g t o w r i t e ( c o m p o s e ) ,
y o u w e r e a l s o j u s t l e a r n i n g t o w r i t e (form letters o f the a l p h a b e t ) .
S p e l l i n g , g r a m m a r , f o r m , p l u s l e a r n i n g how t o s h a p e the letters t h e m -
s e l v e s — t h a t is a p r e t t y tall o r d e r for a s i x - y e a r - o l d w h o is a l s o t r y i n g
t o c o l l e c t the w o r d s t u m b l i n g o u t o f his i m a g i n a t i o n , c a p t u r e the ideas
i n h e r h e a d , a n d p u t t h e m o n p a p e r b e f o r e they r u n away,.
S o i t b e g a n . A s y o u will s e e i n c h a p t e r 7 , y o u n o d o u b t i n t e r n a l i z e d
a g r e a t d e a l o f this e x t e r n a l p r e s s u r e . Today, w h e n y o u sit d o w n t o
w r i t e , c h a n c e s a r e that y o u r t e a c h e r i s still w i t h y o u , s t a n d i n g o v e r
y o u r left s h o u l d e r , c o r r e c t i n g , c r i t i q u i n g , c i r c l i n g u p p e r c a s e letters
with her r e d pencil, and in other subtle and not so subtle ways dis-
c o u r a g i n g y o u f r o m w r i t i n g , g e n e r a l l y s t e m m i n g the flow o f w o r d s .
T H E L A N G U A G E LAB OF T H E HOME
If we taught our children to speak in the way that we teach them to write
everyone would stutter.
Mark Twain
W h a t h a p p e n e d w h e n y o u w e r e a little kid a n d w e r e f i r s t f o r m i n g
w o r d s ? I n s t u d y i n g that q u e s t i o n , l i n g u i s t s , w h o for y e a r s t r i e d t o
u n d e r s t a n d l a n g u a g e b y s t u d y i n g the s p e e c h p a t t e r n s o f c h i l d r e n j u s t
l e a r n i n g t o talk, d i s c o v e r e d that they h a d left o u t a n i m p o r t a n t p r e l i m -
i n a r y p l a t e a u — w h a t J a m e s A s h e r calls "the silent time." A s h e r , a
-"PROM PANIC TO POWER / 11
FOR A B A B Y , WORDS A R E P O W E R F U L
M O R E B A D NEWS
S i n c e w r i t i n g i s t a u g h t , t h e r e a r e r u l e s a n d r e g u l a t i o n s w e pick u p
a l o n g t h e w a y that a r e m e a n t t o g u i d e u s b u t o f t e n w i n d u p t h w a r t i n g
u s i n s t e a d . For e x a m p l e , I h a d a n E n g l i s h p r o f e s s o r i n c o l l e g e w h o
w a s fond of q u o t i n g Alice in Wonderland w h e n students a s k e d h i m h o w
t o g o a b o u t w r i t i n g this o r that p a p e r .
" B e g i n a t the b e g i n n i n g , g o o n until y o u c o m e t o the e n d , a n d t h e n
s t o p , " h e said.
FTfflM PANIC TO POWER / 13
S o that b e c a m e m y m o t t o , m y p e r s o n a l c r e e d , a n d I s u f f e r e d a n d
a g o n i z e d u n d e r the b e l i e f that s t e p b y l o g i c a l step was the only r i g h t
w a y t o a p p r o a c h w r i t i n g . I t t o o k m e m a n y y e a r s t o r e a l i z e that the
p r o c e s s o f w r i t i n g d o e s n o t always g o that w a y ; t o try t o p r e t e n d that
i t d o e s i s t o i m p o s e a n artificiality o n y o u r w o r d s that n e e d not b e
t h e r e . S o m e t i m e s y o u n e e d t o b e g i n i n the m i d d l e a n d g o b a c k t o the
b e g i n n i n g a n d t h e n w r i t e the e n d a n d t h e n s t o p . O f t e n y o u d o not
e v e n k n o w h o w the t h i n g b e s t b e g i n s until y o u h a v e f i g u r e d o u t the
end.
T h e advent of personal computers and word-processing programs
h a s h e l p e d i m m e n s e l y t o g i v e w r i t e r s f r e e d o m i n this r e g a r d . Even the
s i m p l e s t w o r d p r o c e s s o r p r o g r a m c a n " c u t a n d paste," a l l o w i n g y o u t o
r e a r r a n g e s e n t e n c e s a n d w h o l e p a r a g r a p h s . W e n o l o n g e r feel c o m -
p e l l e d t o t h i n k i n t e r m s o f a finished p r o d u c t . Even i f y o u d o not o w n
a p e r s o n a l c o m p u t e r , t h o u g h , the l e s s o n is c l e a r : allow y o u r s e l f to
w r i t e i n the o r d e r that t h i n g s o c c u r t o y o u a n d t h e n c u t a n d p a s t e ,
literally o r electronically, later. ( R a p i d w r i t i n g , e x p l a i n e d i n the n e x t
c h a p t e r , s h o w s y o u h o w t o d o that easily; a p p e n d i x 2 d e a l s w i t h w h o l e -
b r a i n e d w r i t i n g w i t h a w o r d processor.)
N O T B A D FOR A N E I G H T - Y E A R - O L D
A n n e lives i n M i s s o u l a , M o n t a n a . H e r w h o l e life h a s b e e n o n e n e w
l e a r n i n g e x p e r i e n c e after a n o t h e r . S h e g r e e t s e a c h n e w a d v e n t u r e ,
w h e t h e r it is b e c o m i n g a p l u m b e r or s t u d y i n g the v i o l i n , w i t h a positive
a t t i t u d e , a n " I - c a n - d o - i t " spirit. O n c e I a s k e d h e r w h a t h e r s e c r e t is.
S h e t o l d m e that w h e n e v e r she f i n d s h e r s e l f d o i n g s o m e t h i n g new, she
t h i n k s of h e r s e l f as a little kid w h o is l e a r n i n g that task for the first
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T h e essential i n g r e d i e n t t o b r a i n s t o r m i n g — w e c a u g h t o n t o this
y e a r s a g o — i s that i t m u s t b e n o n j u d g m e n t a l . A n y o n e i n the g r o u p i s
a l l o w e d t o toss i n e v e n i m p r o b a b l e a n d u n r e a s o n a b l e ideas w i t h o u t
fear o f b e i n g p u t d o w n o r r i d i c u l e d . T h e f r e e - f l o w i n g a n d o p e n - e n d e d
n a t u r e o f the e x c h a n g e c r e a t e s a c l i m a t e i n w h i c h g o o d ideas a r e
g e n e r a t e d ; in fact, s o m e ideas a r e b o r n that I g u a r a n t e e w o u l d n e v e r
have c o m e t o l i g h t h a d the g r o u p not insisted o n w a i t i n g until later t o
f i g u r e o u t their u l t i m a t e w o r t h .
So r a p i d w r i t i n g is like a p r i v a t e c o n f e r e n c e — b r a i n s t o r m i n g for o n e .
G e t all the ideas o u t o n the table, a n d tell the critical j u d g m e n t a l
m e m b e r o f the b o a r d ( y o u r C a l i b a n side) t o s u s p e n d c o m m e n t , t o
k e e p his m o u t h shut a n d his j u d g m e n t s to himself, for n o w at least.
G i v e y o u r s e l f p e r m i s s i o n t o w r i t e s o m e " j u n q u e " a s well a s w h a t e v e r
else c o m e s o u t . Y o u will b e s u r p r i s e d a t the q u a l i t y o f the g o o d p a r t s .
M U L C H FOR T H E M I N D
G i v i n g y o u r s e l f p e r m i s s i o n to w r i t e g a r b a g e is like h a v i n g a c o m p o s t
pile in the b a c k y a r d . It m i g h t s m e l l a little a n d e v e n l o o k yucky, but it
p r o v i d e s a fertile e n v i r o n m e n t for s o m e g r e a t s t u f f to grow.
A fellow in o n e of my classes h a d w r i t t e n only a few lines of p o e t r y
b e f o r e t a k i n g m y w o r k s h o p . S i x m o n t h s later, h e h a d w r i t t e n e n o u g h
p o e t r y t o p u b l i s h a b o o k o f p o e m s . H e sent m e a c o p y o f his c o l l e c t i o n ;
I was t o u c h e d a n d a m u s e d w h e n I r e a d the d e d i c a t i o n : " T h i s b o o k is
dedicated to Henriette A n n e Klauser, who first gave me permission to
w r i t e g a r b a g e , n o n e of w h i c h I trust is i n c l u d e d h e r e . "
We put extraordinary pressure on ourselves and even on our great
a n d f a m o u s t o w r i t e p e r f e c t l y all o f the t i m e . T h e t r u l y g r e a t s o f m u s i c
a n d l i t e r a t u r e have d i s r e g a r d e d o u r c o l l e c t i v e i n j u n c t i o n , s o m e t i m e s
a t the c o s t o f m u c h p a i n .
O n c e I w e n t to a p i a n o c o n c e r t w h e r e a brilliant R u s s i a n p i a n i s t was
p l a y i n g an e v e n i n g of F r a n z Liszt. He p l a y e d the Tarantella, the Don
Juan Fantasy, a n d Liebestraum. T h e m u s i c was c e l e s t i a l ; it t o o k the t o p
o f f m y h e a d . W h e n the h o u s e l i g h t s w e n t u p , I t u r n e d m y a t t e n t i o n t o
the p r o g r a m n o t e s . I was still s o m e w h a t d a z e d f r o m the p o w e r a n d
the majesty o f the m u s i c I h a d j u s t h e a r d . W h a t I r e a d t h e r e b r o u g h t
m e s h a r p l y b a c k t o the m u n d a n e w o r l d .
" L i s z t , " the p r o g r a m said, " w a s a t y p i c a l p r o d u c t o f the R o m a n t i c
A g e . . . . He p r o d u c e d m o r e than seven h u n d r e d works, i n c l u d i n g m a n y
that are e i t h e r u n e v e n i n quality, s u p e r f i c i a l l y c o n s t r u c t e d , o r d o w n -
right dull."
H a ! D o y o u see the press for p e r f e c t i o n w e p u t e v e n o n o u r g r e a t
c o m p o s e r s ? W e d o n o t a l l o w e v e n L i s z t t o h a v e m u l c h for his m i n d .
C a n y o u i m a g i n e w h a t i t w o u l d have b e e n like h a d L i s z t sat d o w n a n d
said, "I am not g o i n g to w r i t e a n y t h i n g at all. I am n o t g o i n g to w r i t e
THE HAIR OF T f f T DOG THAT BIT YOU / 17
o n e n o t e u n t i l I t h i n k of s o m e t h i n g g r a n d . Until I c a n c o m p o s e Lie-
bestraum w i t h o u t s t o p p i n g , do the Tarantella f r o m t o p to b o t t o m , until
1 c a n let my p e n fly a c r o s s the p a g e a n d n e v e r c r o s s o u t or w r i t e
s o m e t h i n g less t h a n c e l e s t i a l , I will n o t w r i t e at all. No way will I e v e r
p u t m y s e l f i n the p o s i t i o n o f h a v i n g s o m e p r o g r a m notes o n m y m u s i c
dismiss the bulk of my o u t p o u r i n g s as b e i n g dull, shallow, a n d uneven."
C h a n c e s a r e h e n e v e r w o u l d h a v e w r i t t e n the s o a r i n g music that
thrills t h e h e a r t today, 1 5 0 y e a r s later.
So w h e n you are writing g a r b a g e , think of Liszt. You may give
y o u r s e l f p e r m i s s i o n (or take m i n e if y o u n e e d it) to w r i t e at least 600
d o c u m e n t s that a r e e i t h e r u n e v e n i n quality, s u p e r f i c i a l l y c o n s t r u c t e d ,
o r d o w n r i g h t d u l l . O n c e y o u g e t that o u t o f the way, y o u a r e f r e e t o
d o t h e k i n d o f w r i t i n g that will m a k e y o u r h e a r t s i n g a n d m o v e y o u r
readers.
EXERCISE 2: R A P I D W R I T I N G
T a k e a c l e a n s h e e t o f p a p e r , a n d r a t h e r t h a n w a i t i n g for r e d sweat,
p l u n g e r i g h t i n a n d start t o w r i t e . I f y o u d o n o t k n o w w h a t t o say,
w r i t e that. W r i t e w h a t e v e r c o m e s t o y o u r m i n d , w h e t h e r i t i s o n the
s u b j e c t o r o f f it. I f y o u h e a r C a l i b a n s a y i n g that w h a t y o u a r e w r i t i n g
s t i n k s , t h e n w r i t e that d o w n , b u t d o n o t stop w r i t i n g . I f C a l i b a n t h i n k s
y o u h a v e c h o s e n the w r o n g w o r d , i n c l u d e that a s s e s s m e n t a l s o . C i r c l e
t h e w o r d , a n d k e e p o n w r i t i n g . I n c o r p o r a t e all the n e g a t i v i s m a n d
c r i t i c a l j u d g m e n t r i g h t a l o n g w i t h the c o n t e n t . T h a t i s h o w I w r o t e
this p a r a g r a p h . T h e n I w e n t b a c k a n d c r o s s e d o u t all the static.
If your p r e m a t u r e edit voice is particularly loud and interfering,
y o u c a n t a k e this f r e e d o m o n e s t e p f u r t h e r b y u s i n g w h a t I c a l l the
" I n v i s i b l e I n k A p p r o a c h . " P u t a s h e e t o f c a r b o n b e t w e e n two p i e c e s
o f p a p e r , a n d w r i t e o n the t o p p a p e r w i t h a d e a d b a l l - p o i n t p e n .
T h e r e w i l l b e n o t h i n g t o c o r r e c t , n o way t o r e r e a d w h a t y o u w r o t e
u n t i l y o u f i n i s h the p a g e a n d lift the c a r b o n .
W h e t h e r y o u w r i t e w i t h this m a g i c w r i t i n g m e t h o d o r u s e c o n v e n -
t i o n a l i n k o n p a p e r , k e e p track a s y o u w r i t e o f w h a t y o u r m i n d i s
t e l l i n g y o u a b o u t y o u r w r i t i n g . If, w h i l e y o u a r e w r i t i n g , y o u a r e a b l e
t o i d e n t i f y s o m e k i n d o f a c c o m p a n y i n g e m o t i o n , say s o . N a m e it. I f
y o u feel a n x i o u s o r b o r e d o r a n g r y o r e n e r g i z e d , w r i t e that d o w n a s
y o u g o a l o n g . L o c a t e y o u r f e e l i n g i n s o m e p a r t o f y o u r body. D o y o u
feel a t i g h t n e s s in y o u r h a n d s , a c o n s t r i c t i o n in y o u r t h r o a t ? Is t h e r e
a flip-flop in y o u r s t o m a c h , a set to y o u r jaw, an itch in y o u r n o s e ? Do
your eyes b e g i n to smart and water? Write it down.
I n c l u d e all y o u r w a n d e r i n g i d e a s a s well a s those that a r e o n t a r g e t .
P e t e r Elbow, in Writing Without Teachers, calls this a p p r o a c h freewriting
a n d r e m a r k s that w h e n y o u use this m e t h o d t o l a u n c h y o u r work, y o u
use up m o r e p a p e r but chew up fewer pencils.
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EXCELSIOR!
W h e r e w a s y o u r m a r k e r ? W h e n y o u w r o t e n o n s t o p for t e n m i n u t e s ,
did you find at eight point five minutes you wanted to stop? Were you
s u r p r i s e d t o f i n d a g o o d i d e a j u s t o n the o t h e r side o f that u r g e t o
quit?
M o u n t a i n c l i m b e r s tell m e that w h e n they a r e m a k i n g a n a s c e n t ,
w h e t h e r t h e y a r e n o v i c e o r e x p e r i e n c e d c l i m b e r s , they start o u t fresh
a n d e a g e r a n d t h e n , r i g h t b e f o r e the s u m m i t , they hit a w a l l , a n a l m o s t
p e r c e p t i b l e p l a c e o f w a n t i n g t o q u i t . T h e n o v i c e will t u r n b a c k , c o n -
g r a t u l a t i n g h i m s e l f o n g e t t i n g e v e n that far, u n l e s s h e r e m e m b e r s the
a d v i c e o f the m o r e e x p e r i e n c e d c l i m b e r a t base c a m p the n i g h t b e f o r e .
W a t c h o u t for the w a l l ! she told h i m . P u s h o n w h e n y o u w a n t t o s t o p .
T h e b e s t i s j u s t a r o u n d the c o r n e r . T h e s u m m i t i s yet t o c o m e . D o not
g i v e u p . D o not t u r n b a c k . E x c e l s i o r ! Ever u p w a r d !
T h o s e o f y o u w h o h a v e h a d c h i l d ren o r h a v e e v e r assisted a s l a b o r c o a c h
a t t h e b i r t h o f a c h i l d will r e c o g n i z e this a s the time o f t r a n s i t i o n .
T r a n s i t i o n i s the t i m e i n the b i r t h p r o c e s s w h e n the m o t h e r d e c i d e s
t h a t this i s m o r e t h a n she b a r g a i n e d for a n d d e c i d e s t o let s o m e o n e
e l s e h a v e this baby. T h e n the f a t h e r s m i l e s b r o a d l y b e c a u s e h e k n o w s
that this is the s i g n he h a s w a i t e d for, the c l e a r s i g n that the baby h a s
almost arrived.
S o w e l c o m e the w a l l . G o o d s t u f f lies j u s t b e y o n d . K e e p o n w r i t i n g
p a s t t h e e x h a u s t i o n o r the e m p t i n e s s , past the u r g e t o q u i t , a n d r e a c h
the s u m m i t . T h i n k o f m e , d o w n h e r e a t base c a m p , s h o u t i n g " E x c e l -
s i o r ! " — g o a d i n g y o u o n w a r d w h e n y o u feel a s t h o u g h i t i s e n o u g h , a s
THE HAIR OF 3 * E DOG THAT BIT YOU / 19
t h o u g h y o u h a v e n o t h i n g m o r e t o say. E x c e l s i o r ! Ever u p w a r d ! O n t o
the summit!
A r e a l - l i f e m o u n t a i n c l i m b e r i n o n e o f m y s e m i n a r s told m e that h e
plays a m e n t a l trick on h i m s e l f w h e n he hits the w a l l . He says to
h i m s e l f , " I k n o w that y o u a r e t i r e d , I k n o w y o u w a n t t o s t o p , j u s t k e e p
c l i m b i n g for ten m o r e m i n u t e s . A t the e n d o f ten m o r e m i n u t e s , i f y o u
still w a n t to q u i t , t h e n I will stop." P u s h i n g h i m s e l f that ten m o r e
m i n u t e s a l w a y s g i v e s h i m the " s e c o n d w i n d " h e n e e d s t o c a r r y t h r o u g h
to the t o p .
A d j u s t that trick t o y o u r w r i t i n g w a l l , w h e t h e r y o u r r e l u c t a n c e i s
b a s e d o n the flow o f i d e a s ( " T h a t ' s it; I've r u n o u t o f i d e a s " ) o r a c t u a l
t i m e ("Well, it's a l m o s t m i d n i g h t ; I've w o r k e d o n this l o n g e n o u g h " ) .
S e t y o u r s e l f a g o a l , " I w i l l w r i t e until the b o t t o m o f this p a g e , " o r " I
w i l l c o n t i n u e w r i t i n g for f i v e m o r e m i n u t e s . " A g r e e t o q u i t i f n o t h i n g
h a p p e n s . G o the e x t r a m i l e , a n d y o u m a y f i n d y o u r s e l f c o v e r i n g a
l e a g u e b e f o r e y o u k n o w it.
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a m o u n t a i n c l i m b e r on a c r o i s s a n t - s m u d g e d n a p k i n to show B e t h w h a t
s h e was u p a g a i n s t . I t w a s a s s i m p l e a s that. K e e p o n w r i t i n g , e v e n
t h o u g h y o u w a n t t o s t o p . Y o u c a n always g o b a c k a n d e d i t t h o s e p a g e s
later, b u t d o not let the r e l u c t a n c e t o m o v e f o r w a r d stop y o u now.
G o o d s t u f f i s j u s t a r o u n d the c o r n e r .
S o B e t h w e n t b a c k t o w o r k a n d r e s u m e d w r i t i n g . For t e n o r fifteen
p a g e s , she told m e later, h e r w o r k was p l o d d i n g a n d lifeless. S h e felt
a s t h o u g h h e r feet w e r e i n m o l a s s e s t a k i n g o n e slow, sticky s t e p a f t e r
a n o t h e r . S h e h e a r d m e s a y i n g " E x c e l s i o r ! " a n d k n e w that the i m p o r -
tant t h i n g was t o g e t b e y o n d the w a l l . S u d d e n l y , a g u s t o f w i n d f i l l e d
h e r sails. L o a n d b e h o l d ! the p e n s t a r t e d t o g l i d e a l o n g the p a g e . S h e
w a s like the A n c i e n t M a r i n e r h e a d i n g h o m e . T h e n e x t 2 5 0 p a g e s — t o
t h e e n d o f the b o o k — p r a c t i c a l l y w r o t e t h e m s e l v e s .
T h e n she w e n t b a c k t o that section o f m o l a s s e s p r o s e . T o h e r aston-
i s h m e n t , she f o u n d that it was not as terrible to r e a d as she s u s p e c t e d
w h e n w r i t i n g it. S h e d o c t o r e d i t u p h e r e a n d t h e r e , c h a n g e d a few
w o r d s , t o o k o u t s o m e e x t r a n e o u s w h i n i n g — a n d now h e r b o o k was
r e a d y for the publisher.
B e t h c a l l e d m e a n d said, " T e l l y o u r s t u d e n t s a b o u t the w a l l . A n d
tell t h e m that the d i f f e r e n c e b e t w e e n a w r i t e r a n d an a u t h o r is p a g e
53."
A writer c o m e s to p a g e 53 a n d t h i n k s he or she w a s n e v e r m e a n t to
w r i t e a b o o k a n y w a y ; t h e r e a r e a few g o o d articles h e r e . An author
p u s h e s o n past the w a l l .
E x c e l s i o r ! T h e best i s yet t o c o m e . T h i n k o f B e t h , a n d k e e p o n
writing.
AN EXAMPLE OF RAPIDWRITING
professors stay in one place, and generations of students adore (or fear and
hate) them. I am beginning to see myself as much more active than that—I
want to be part of what's happening—the A's teach, and the B's work for the
C's—so now I see myself in my wildest imaginings as a kind of Oriana—what
is her name—Fallaci, interviewing the great and the famous, feared and
respected—and I picture her of course with a camera, and epaulets of some
sort, if not on her London Fog, then certainly on her blouse—like that great
blouse I bought in Europe for the rail trip and every time I wear it, I feel
adventurous and courageous—it's a secret we share, me and that blouse—I
put it on and behind it, I am fearless (and "cool")—back to Fallaci—-she is
dressed in a blouse like that with long frosted hair pulled back with a long
scarf—and for her, it's okay to be forty, in fact, de rigueur.
I seem to be very resistant to using the many positive influences and input
I've had. All thru school I was told by teachers how bright and creative I was.
My stepmother is, I'm told, totally intimidated by what she perceives as my
great wit and intelligence. My father, a man I greatly admire, firmly believes
I am capable of doing anything I set my mind to. I was a teacher of positive
thinking. But still I manage to be uncertain and to intimidate myself with
fears of failure and of looking foolish.
I seem to live my life as if there were a panel of judges watching and taking
notes. I put on makeup when I intend to stay home alone. At the grocery
store I consider the impression given by the items in my cart. I even scope out
my garbage to see what an observer would think looking at that evidence. I
don't suppose it's too surprising that the idea of writing an article, a screen-
play, or even a (who would believe it possible?) novel, sends me straight to
watching / Love Lucy reruns.
T H E PROGRESS L O G
E d i s o n ' s story in m i n d . A l o g r e c o r d s a j o u r n e y , a n d p r o g r e s s i m p l i e s
a m o v i n g f o r w a r d . W h a t e v e r y o u note, w h a t e v e r y o u l e a r n is p a r t of a
p r o g r e s s , p a r t o f y o u r j o u r n e y . E v e r y e n t r y i s a s t e p f o r w a r d . S o the
P r o g r e s s L o g is a c o l l e c t i o n , a j o u r n a l , a d i a r y that r e c o r d s w h a t is
h a p p e n i n g a n d w h a t h a s h a p p e n e d w i t h y o u a n d this t h i n g c a l l e d
w r i t i n g . It c h r o n i c l e s y o u r p a s t h i s t o r y as a writer, r e c o r d s y o u r p r e s -
e n t s t r u g g l e s a n d t r i u m p h s , a n d anticipates the f u t u r e o f y o u r w r i t i n g
life.
T h i s i s u n l i k e the j o u r n a l s o m e o f y o u m a y k e e p already, w h e r e y o u
w r i t e y o u r daily events o r play a r o u n d w i t h n e w f o r m s , r e c o r d ideas
o r c o n v e r s a t i o n s , o r w a t c h the p a t t e r n o f y o u r d r e a m s o r the p a t t e r n
o f y o u r d i e t . J o u r n a l s o f that k i n d a r e v e r y u s e f u l , b u t w h a t I a m
t a l k i n g a b o u t h e r e i s a specific n o t e b o o k w h e r e y o u c h a r t y o u r c o u r s e
a n d y o u r p r o g r e s s as a writer. A n d y o u m a k e an e n t r y e v e r y day.
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"Nulla dies sine linea," says P l i n y — " N e v e r a d a y w i t h o u t a l i n e . " I
h a v e the m o t t o , in L a t i n , as a d e l i b e r a t e l y florid p l a q u e a b o v e my d e s k
a n d w r i t i n l a r g e letters a c r o s s the front o f m y P L . E v e r y d a y I w r i t e
s o m e t h i n g , a n d that s o m e t h i n g o f t e n d e v e l o p s into the u n e x p e c t e d .
S o m e h o w a n e n e r g y c o m e s j u s t f r o m k e e p i n g such a r e c o r d , e v e n
i f y o u d o not g o b a c k a n d p u l l the i n f o r m a t i o n all t o g e t h e r a n d
m a k e c o n n e c t i o n s . I c a n v o u c h for the e f f e c t i v e n e s s personally. I
u s e d a P r o g r e s s L o g for m a n y y e a r s b e f o r e d e c i d i n g I h a d m o v e d b e y o n d
t h a t s t a g e . T h e n o n e d a y I h e a r d m y s e l f e x h o r t i n g the p a r t i c i p a n t s
in o n e of my w o r k s h o p s to use the PL a n d to w r i t e in it e v e r y
d a y a n d t h o u g h t , " H o w c a n I tell t h e m to do it w h e n I'm not
d o i n g it?"
So I went back to my PL, and my writing output increased dramat-
ically. I c a n n o t e x p l a i n it, b u t j u s t k e e p i n g track o f w h a t was h a p p e n -
ing with me and my writing generated an energy. Mayor K o c h of New
Y o r k w a s k n o w n t o g o u p t o his c o n s t i t u e n t s o n the street a n d say
" H o w ' m y d o i n ' ? " I g u e s s t h e r e was a f e e l i n g o f w e l l - b e i n g i n k n o w i n g
t h a t h e w a s e v e n a s k i n g . T h e P L i s like that. Y o u feel g o o d j u s t t o
k n o w that s o m e o n e i s a s k i n g , a n d that i n itself will g i v e y o u the p o w e r
t o w r i t e . A l s o , y o u will n o t i c e p a t t e r n s e m e r g e . You will see q u i t e
c l e a r l y w h a t k e e p s y o u f r o m w r i t i n g y o u r best a n d i m p e d e s y o u r
f l u e n c y , a n d w h a t p r i m e s the p u m p a n d g e t s the w o r d s f l o w i n g . Y o u
will n o t i c e the t i m e s y o u w r i t e well a n d the a u d i e n c e s y o u w r i t e y o u r
b e s t for. O n c e y o u a r e a w a r e o f y o u r s t r e n g t h s a n d w e a k n e s s e s , y o u
are free to create your own moments of fluency.
THE HAIR OF T H E DOG T H A T BIT YOU / 23
When I was in the fourth grade, I won the Little Hot Spot medal for the
best essay on safeguarding the home against fire. I got the day off school and
went to City Hall where the mayor pinned the medal on my chest while the
Marine Band played.
Prof. W. did not like what I wrote. He tore up my paper in front of the
whole class. I can still feel that rip go through me and hear the class titter.
T h i n g s are slowing down now. Maybe I need to take a break, or have I just
hit the wall? Tell you what, self. Ten more minutes, and if at the end of ten
minutes, you still want to stop, then you can, okay?
With the rapidwriting, I found I was unexpectedly pleased with some of the
thoughts and wording. A bit of it might even be useful in current or future
writing. However I did feel a bit strained towards the end—my hand aching
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W h e n w e c o m e t o the c h a p t e r o n p r o c r a s t i n a t i o n , y o u will s e e h o w
d r a m a t i c a tool the P L c a n b e i n h e l p i n g y o u b r e a k t h r o u g h writer's
b l o c k . It's a l s o a u s e f u l t o o l for g e n e r a t i n g i d e a s . Its u n f e t t e r e d n a t u r e
s e e m s t o i n v i t e c o n c e p t s that p r o v e v a l u a b l e i n f u t u r e w r i t i n g , w h i l e
its f l u e n c y e n c o u r a g e s the s o r t i n g t h r o u g h o f ideas v a l u a b l e t o a n y
p r o j e c t . S e v e r a l t i m e s I h a v e g o n e b a c k to r e r e a d a PL f r o m y e a r s a g o
a n d found there a clue to my present writing.
I t i s b e t t e r n o t t o h a v e any p r e c o n c e i v e d notions, however, o f w h e r e
t h e P L i s l e a d i n g o r w h e r e i t m i g h t take y o u . G o w i t h the flow; I
p r o m i s e y o u r effort w i l l b e a m p l y r e w a r d e d .
T h r o u g h o u t the b o o k , I will ask y o u t o m a k e a d d i t i o n a l e n t r i e s i n
y o u r P L . L o o k for this s y m b o l : • Progress Log.
T h e s e t w o s i m p l e t e c h n i q u e s — r a p i d w r i t i n g a n d the P r o g r e s s L o g —
c o m b i n e t o r a d i c a l l y c h a n g e the way y o u w r i t e . T a k e i t f r o m a p r o w h o
h a s b e e n u s i n g b o t h for o v e r a d e c a d e : the m o r e y o u u s e t h e m , the
better they get!
C H A P T E R 3
In this c h a p t e r we will e x a m i n e t h i n k i n g — e s p e c i a l l y as it a p p l i e s to
w r i t i n g — i n the l i g h t o f this d e c a d e ' s e x t r a o r d i n a r y d i s c o v e r i e s a b o u t
the t w o sides of the b r a i n . I invite the r e a d e r to p o n d e r w i t h me the
wonder of what is h a p p e n i n g when thinking is taking place in o u r
m i n d s . T h i n k i n g : that m a g n i f i c e n t , u n i q u e l y h u m a n gift that y o u a n d
I s h a r e w i t h M i c h e l a n g e l o , L e o n a r d o d a V i n c i , B u c k m i n s t e r Fuller,
E i n s t e i n . H o w c a n w e l e a r n t o d o e v e n m o r e o f it?
T h i s c h a p t e r m a y h e l p p r o v i d e s o m e a n s w e r s t o that q u e s t i o n . First,
I will list the f u n c t i o n s u s u a l l y a s s i g n e d to the r i g h t a n d left h e m i -
s p h e r e s o f the b r a i n , a n d t h e n 1 will a r g u e for u s i n g y o u r w h o l e
brain—celebrating your particular proclivity and strength while ex-
e r c i s i n g the p a r t s o f y o u r b r a i n y o u are not u s i n g t o capacity. N e x t , I
will s h o w w h a t h a p p e n s i n w r i t i n g w h e n w e q u i e t d o w n the a r t i c u l a t e
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STYLES OF THINKING
sequential, simultaneous,
step-by-step multiple
verbal visual
analytical synthetical
rational intuitive
time-centered timeless
aggressive yielding
objective subjective
interested in details wants overview
linguistic musical
detects features notices patterns
THE BREAKTHROUGH
b e e n s h u t for t o o long. O u r s c h o o l s , o u r h o m e s , e v e n o u r b u s i n e s s e s
w i l l n e v e r b e the s a m e a g a i n .
T h e s t u d y o f r i g h t a n d left b r a i n puts t w e n t i e t h - c e n t u r y t h i n k e r s i n
t o u c h w i t h o u r o w n diversity. I t h o n o r s the d i f f e r e n t ways that p e o p l e
w o r k t h i n g s o u t , a n d i t p r o v i d e s a s p r i n g b o a r d for u s i n g u n c o n v e n -
t i o n a l a p p r o a c h e s t o s t u d y i n g a n d p r o b l e m solving.
P a r t o f o u r b r a i n was c u t off, n o t h o n o r e d , b y W e s t e r n c i v i l i z a t i o n ,
a n d i t w a s i n d a n g e r o f atrophy. R e c o g n i z i n g d i f f e r e n t t h i n k i n g styles
h a s p u t t h e w h o l e p e r s o n b a c k i n the d r i v e r ' s seat.
C A L I B A N A N D A R I E L A R E L E F T BRAIN A N D R I G H T
S o , t o s p e a k i n t e r m s o f r i g h t a n d left b r a i n (or h e m i s p h e r e s ) i s
a n o t h e r w a y o f e x p r e s s i n g the p h e n o m e n a that I have b e e n c a l l i n g
A r i e l a n d C a l i b a n , o f p a y i n g a t t e n t i o n t o the fact that o n e p a r t o f y o u r
b r a i n w o r k s b e s t for ideas a n d o n e p a r t h e l p s w i t h e d i t i n g a n d struc-
t u r e . T h i s d i v i s i o n of l a b o r is n o t strict, b u t it is a u s e f u l way of t a l k i n g
a b o u t a n d t h e r e f o r e c o m i n g t o g r i p s w i t h the m e n t a l p r o c e s s that g o e s
o n w h e n w e m o v e f r o m i d e a t o final w r i t t e n p r o d u c t , c o m m u n i c a t i n g
that idea to another h u m a n being.
T h e t r u t h is, m o s t o f u s a r e n o t u s i n g o u r b r a i n s t o capacity, n o t
b e c a u s e the capability is not there or because we are d u m b but because
w e h a v e n o t b e e n t a u g h t how.
T h e u n d e r l y i n g m e s s a g e o f all the s t u d i e s i s l o u d a n d c l e a r : w h a t
we a r e s t r i v i n g for is to be " w h o l e - b r a i n e d , " to e n c o u r a g e a m u t u a l
r e s p e c t , a s a society a n d a s a n i n d i v i d u a l b r a i n , for w h a t e a c h side o f
the b r a i n c a n d o , to h a v e a w i l l i n g n e s s to w o r k t o g e t h e r in c o o p e r a t i o n
a n d c o n f i d e n c e . T h e g o a l o f " w h o l e - b r a i n e d t h i n k i n g " i s a call for
b o t h sides o f o u r b r a i n t o w o r k t o g e t h e r for the c o m m o n g o o d .
D o n ' t b e c o n t e n t t o live i n the a n t e r o o m ! C o m e , e x p l o r e the m a n s i o n
of your mind.
T h e t w o h a l v e s o f the b r a i n a r e c o n n e c t e d , a t the c e r e b r a l ( u p p e r )
p a r t , by t h e corpus callosum, a m a s s of fibers b u n d l e d like a t e l e p h o n e
c a b l e . T h e p o w e r a n d the r a n g e o f activity o f this c o m m i s s u r a l b o n d
a r e far m o r e a s t o n i s h i n g t h a n a n y m e r e t e l e p h o n e c a b l e , however. C a r l
S a g a n , in The Dragons of Eden, refers to the c o r p u s c a l l o s u m as a
c o m p l e x c a b l i n g s y s t e m , " a b u n d l e o f two h u n d r e d m i l l i o n n e u r a l
fibers p r o c e s s i n g s o m e t h i n g like several billion bits p e r s e c o n d b e t w e e n
2
t h e two c e r e b r a l h e m i s p h e r e s . "
Ideally, w h a t w e w a n t (in fact, w h a t E E G ' s s h o w takes p l a c e i n a n y
h i g h l y c r e a t i v e t h i n k i n g ) a r e ideas t o c r a c k l e a c r o s s those w i r e s — a n
a l m o s t t a n g i b l e a r c o f activity, b a c k a n d forth, b a c k a n d forth, a s i d e a
a n d its i m p l e m e n t a t i o n e n h a n c e a n d e n c o u r a g e e a c h other, g e n e r a t i n g
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A s for o u r w r i t i n g , i t i s a t its b e s t w h e n w e k n o w h o w t o t a p i n t o
the r e s p e c t i v e s t r e n g t h s o f b o t h h a l v e s o f o u r b r a i n a t the a p p r o p r i a t e
t i m e s , w h e n w e r e m e m b e r t o a c k n o w l e d g e t h e c o n t r i b u t i o n that each
side m a k e s a n d h a v e t h e m w a l k a l o n g s i d e e a c h o t h e r a s c o m p a n i o n s ,
not as e n e m i e s in o p p o s i t i o n . U n f o r t u n a t e l y , t h e r e is a b l o c k a g a i n s t
this w h o l e n e s s , a n d that b l o c k u s u a l l y c o m e s f r o m the left h e m i s p h e r e
l o r d i n g i t o v e r the c o n t r i b u t i o n o f the r i g h t . A s I've n o t e d , i n W e s t e r n
society i n p a r t i c u l a r , r i g h t - b r a i n e d k i n d s o f t h i n k i n g — i n t u i t i o n , s p e c -
u l a t i o n , a n d o t h e r s o f that s o r t — h a v e g e n e r a l l y b e e n r i d i c u l e d o r
d o w n p l a y e d . S o b e f o r e w e c a n c e l e b r a t e this g l o r i o u s f r e e i n g unity,
most of us need to deal with a part of o u r brain (wherever it is located)
that d o e s not allow the o t h e r p a r t e q u a l play, that d o e s not s u p p o r t ,
e n c o u r a g e , invite, a n d c r e d i t the c o n t r i b u t i o n o f its o p p o s i t e n u m b e r .
SHINING STARS
W h e n w e q u i e t d o w n C a l i b a n , w e b r i n g A r i e l o u t o f h i d i n g . B u t the
e n t r a n c e i s tentative a n d t i m i d . Say B o o ! a n d the stars d i s a p p e a r . I n
this interaction b e t w e e n Jon a n d his w e l l - k n o w n cat, G a r f i e l d , c a r t o o n -
ist J i m D a v i s u n d e r l i n e s a t r u t h that is d e e p e r t h a n the s i m p l e i n j u n c -
tion " D o n ' t d i s c o u r a g e . " H e i s a l s o g i v i n g a d r a m a t i c a n a l o g u e o f h o w
the left side o f the b r a i n i n t e r f e r e s w i t h flow a n d c o n f i d e n c e .
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e v a l u a t i n g , e d i t o r i a l voice s i m u l t a n e o u s l y w i t h the p e r f o r m a n c e , w e
fall f l a t . W h e n y o u h e a r that v o i c e , y o u s t o p w r i t i n g . Y o u stop a n d
p o n d e r , y o u s t o p a n d q u e s t i o n , y o u s t o p a n d criticize, o r y o u simply
g i v e u p a n d stop a l t o g e t h e r . Y o u i n t e r r u p t the f l o w . R a t h e r t h a n g i v i n g
life a n d e n e r g y t o y o u r w r i t i n g , s u c h i n t e r f e r e n c e m a k e s i t p l o d d i n g
a n d p r e d i c t a b l e or, w o r s e , s t a l e m a t e d .
O n the o t h e r h a n d , w o n d e r f u l t h i n g s h a p p e n w h e n y o u q u i e t d o w n
the noisy left a n d let the stars s h i n e . H e r e a r e s o m e e x a m p l e s .
— M a y b e y o u c o u l d take a p i c t u r e . S o m e i n t e r e s t i n g lines t h e r e . B u t
it cannot be described in words, and even if it could, you wouldn't be
the o n e w h o c o u l d d o it.
J e r r y - M a c l i s t e n e d t o his c a r p i n g c r i t i c a l v o i c e a n d d i d n o t w r i t e the
p o e m inside o f him.
A f t e r h e h a d t o l d m e this story, I p o i n t e d o u t t h a t i t w a s n o t t o o
late t o w r i t e t h a t p o e m . Y o u c a n g o b a c k t o that t i m e , I told h i m , a n d
m a k e i t h a p p e n for y o u a g a i n ; y o u c a n b e a t the s c e n e o n c e m o r e , a n d
this t i m e , y o u c a n i g n o r e the v o i c e t h a t tells y o u n o t t o w r i t e .
I had h i m relax and i m a g i n e h i m s e l f back on that train, c a p t u r i n g
e v e r y d e t a i l p o s s i b l e i n his m i n d ' s e y e — t h e s o u n d o f the w h e e l s c l a c k -
i n g u n d e r n e a t h , t h e r h y t h m a n d s e n s e o f m o v e m e n t , the smell a n d the
s i g h t a n d the s o u n d o f it. N o w tell the i n n e r v o i c e t o b u g off, I said,
a n d w r i t e i n spite o f it.
T h i s is what he wrote:
you don't trade years of being put down yourself by putting down
a n o t h e r . S h e k n e w that, d e e p d o w n inside, H a r r y was a k i n d m a n w h o
only a c t e d r o u g h b e c a u s e h e h a d b e e n b r o u g h t u p that w a y ; h e d i d n ' t
k n o w h e h a d any o p t i o n s . I t w o u l d b e j u s t a s c r u e l t o b l a m e H a r r y for
y e a r s o f d o m i n a n c e a s i t w o u l d b e t o f a u l t H a r r i e t for y e a r s o f l a y i n g
b a c k . S h e also k n e w t h a t his c o n t r i b u t i o n s w e r e n e c e s s a r y t o their
u n i o n , his p r a c t i c a l i t y a n i m p o r t a n t i n g r e d i e n t i n any i m a g i n a t i v e p l a n
o f t h e i r s . H a r r i e t ' s i d e a s w e r e g o o d , b u t they w e r e u n f o r m e d ; she
needed Harry's help to make them happen.
A s for H a r r y , slowly the r e a l i z a t i o n hit h i m that h e h a d not v a l u e d
H a r r i e t for all the c o n t r i b u t i o n s she m a d e to their lives, for the p e a c e
she b r o u g h t , for h e r e n e r g y , for h e r p l a y f u l n e s s a n d spontaneity. I f
n o t for her, t h e y w o u l d n e v e r try a n y t h i n g new. N o w that h e t h o u g h t
a b o u t it, H a r r i e t h a d c o m e u p w i t h s o m e p r e t t y g o o d ideas, e s p e c i a l l y
a t the q u i e t a n d c l o s e t i m e s , w h e n they w e r e r i d i n g t o g e t h e r i n the c a r
o r s l e e p i n g o r t a k i n g a shower. H e h a d t o give h e r s o m e c r e d i t .
At first it w a s n ' t easy, they w e r e so u s e d to the o l d w a y s , b u t their
efforts p a i d o f f s o h a n d s o m e l y that they w e r e e n c o u r a g e d t o k e e p
w o r k i n g a t it. B o t h o f t h e m felt freer, m o r e u s e f u l , m o r e c o m p e t e n t .
T h e r e w a s a g e n e r o s i t y o f spirit a b o u t their interactions, a sense o f
m u t u a l p r i d e i n a j o b well d o n e ; they w e r e c o l l a b o r a t o r s i n s t e a d o f
competitors. Harriet's creative ideas were e n h a n c e d by Harry's plotting
a n d p l a n n i n g t o m a k e t h e m h a p p e n , a n d H a r r y ' s p e n c h a n t for p e r f e c -
tion g o t p l e n t y o f n e w m a t e r i a l t o w o r k o n . B o t h a d m i t t e d that they
w e r e r i c h e r for this n e w unity, h a v i n g e n h a n c e d their r e s p e c t i v e skills
t h r o u g h r e p e a t e d u s e a n d the g l o w o f a p p r e c i a t i o n .
T h e i r r e l a t i o n s h i p g o t the o l d s p a r k b a c k . N o l o n g e r d i d H a r r y have
t o t o u g h i t o u t a n d c a r r y the l o a d b y h i m s e l f ; n o l o n g e r d i d H a r r i e t
s l i n k a w a y h o l d i n g i n h e r f e e l i n g s a n d d r e a m s . H e r e c o g n i z e d the
f u l l n e s s o f his o w n p o w e r s w h e n u s e d i n the r i g h t way, not p u s h y o r
s u p e r i o r b u t h e l p f u l a n d k i n d ; she b l o s s o m e d u n d e r his a p p r e c i a t i o n
o f h e r c o n t r i b u t i o n t o t h e i r r e l a t i o n s h i p a n d his e x c e l l e n t g u i d a n c e a s
h e r f r i e n d . A n d the w h o l e w a s g r e a t e r t h a n the s u m o f the p a r t s .
H a r r i e t w a s still a d r e a m e r a n d h a d n o c o n c e p t o f time, a n d t h e r e
w e r e o c c a s i o n s w h e n H a r r y g o t i m p a t i e n t w i t h h e r a n d raised his v o i c e
a little, b u t n o w they b o t h c o u l d l a u g h at it a n d move o n . M o r e a n d
m o r e , H a r r y s t a r t e d l i s t e n i n g t o H a r r i e t ' s d r e a m s a n d p l a n n i n g the
l o g i c a l steps t o m a k e t h o s e d r e a m s reality. H a r r i e t loved h i m for it,
a n d h e l o v e d h e r i n r e t u r n for h e r i m a g i n a t i o n a n d sensitivity. T h e r e
w a s h a r m o n y a n d h a p p i n e s s a n d n e w life i n their r e l a t i o n s h i p . N o w
t h e y w e r e a t e a m ; h a n d i n h a n d they f a c e d all c h a l l e n g e s — a n d w e r e
e q u a l t o t h e task. T o g e t h e r , they m a d e d r e a m s h a p p e n .
It w a s lovely.
M o r a l o f the s t o r y : T w o h e a d s a r e b e t t e r t h a n one, w h i c h i s t o say,
o n e h e a d i s b e t t e r t h a n half.
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f r u s t r a t i o n w i t h f o r m i n g letters a n d t h i n k i n g a b o u t w o r d s a t the s a m e
t i m e — i n c h a p t e r 1 we t a l k e d a b o u t the e n o r m o u s p r e s s u r e on a little
o n e j u s t b e g i n n i n g t o w r i t e , a s h e f o r m s letters a n d ideas s i m u l t a n e -
ously. So I w o u l d sit w i t h J o r d a n a n d tell h i m that he d i d not h a v e to
w r i t e o u t his i d e a s , j u s t d i c t a t e t h e m t o m e a n d I w o u l d w r i t e t h e m
for h i m . " N o ! " H e p u l l e d away the p e n c i l that was c u t t i n g g r o o v e s into
t h e d e s k . " H o w a b o u t no story, b u t a list of w o n d e r f u l w o r d s ? " I t o o k
a s h e e t o f p a p e r a n d w r o t e "Jordan's W o n d e r f u l W o r d s " i n b i g letters
a c r o s s t h e t o p . "Just tell me w o r d s that y o u like, a n d I will w r i t e t h e m
d o w n . " S i l e n c e . " H o w about phosphorescence? T h a t ' s a w o r d E m i l y D i c k -
i n s o n l i k e d . " S i l e n c e . I w r o t e d o w n phosphorescence.
T h i s w e n t o n for s e v e r a l w e e k s . N o w I was the o n e f e e l i n g f r u s t r a t e d .
W h a t c o u l d I do to r e a c h this k i d ? W h y d i d I t h i n k that my a s s i g n -
m e n t , i n t e a c h i n g this first-grade class, was t o c a p t u r e a n d h o l d the
p o w e r o v e r w o r d s that they a l r e a d y felt? W h o w o u l d h a v e t h o u g h t that
a s i x - y e a r - o l d w o u l d h a v e writer's b l o c k ? I t r i e d e v e r y ploy I c o u l d
t h i n k of, b u t I c o u l d n o t g e t J o r d a n to w r i t e .
Now, w h e n y o u a r e a n a d u l t w h o hates t o w r i t e , y o u t u r n y o u r a n g e r
a n d f r u s t r a t i o n i n w a r d ; s i x - y e a r - o l d s a n n o y their n e i g h b o r s . I finally
t o l d J o r d a n that h e c o u l d stay i n class o n o n e c o n d i t i o n : h e was not
a l l o w e d t o b u g the kid sitting n e x t t o h i m . H e d i d n ' t have t o w r i t e . H e
c o u l d w a l k a r o u n d the r o o m , h e c o u l d sit i n a c o r n e r a n d r e a d , h e
c o u l d d r a w o r color. T h e only r u l e w a s , h e was not a l l o w e d t o hit,
p i n c h , o r d i s t r a c t the o t h e r c h i l d r e n .
T h i s a r r a n g e m e n t w e n t o n for s e v e n m o n t h s . E v e r y o n c e i n a w h i l e ,
I w o u l d m a k e an overture and be rejected. I tried everything. I b r o u g h t
i n u n u s u a l objects t o t o u c h a n d talk a b o u t ; w e d a n c e d t o m u s i c ; w e
l o o k e d a t p i c t u r e s . N o t h i n g . J o r d a n w o u l d not w r i t e . N o t e v e n a w o r d .
Finally, I let g o . I s t o p p e d t r y i n g to cajole h i m , to a m u s e h i m . I let
h i m b e . A s l o n g a s h e w a s n ' t b o t h e r i n g the o t h e r s , h e c o u l d stay i n
class. T h a t was it. S o o n I f o r g o t h e w a s e v e n i n the r o o m a n d j u s t
w e n t a h e a d a n d w o r k e d w i t h the o t h e r c h i l d r e n . S e v e r a l m o r e m o n t h s
p a s s e d . We p u t t o g e t h e r a little b o o k , a c o m p i l a t i o n of the class stories.
Jordan had no entries.
I t o o k the w h o l e class to see S h a k e s p e a r e ' s The Tempest. W h e n we
c a m e b a c k , t h e y w r o t e w o n d e r f u l stories a b o u t C a l i b a n ( " C a l i b a n was
m e a n . H e was a m o n s t e r . H e n e v e r b r u s h e d his t e e t h . H e h a d n o
f r i e n d s " ) a n d A r i e l ( " A r i e l w a s sweet. S h e " — t h e y always t h o u g h t that
A r i e l w a s a s h e — " w r i t e s t h a n k - y o u notes w h e n e v e r she gets a p r e s -
e n t " ) . W e t a l k e d a b o u t similes a n d c o m p a r i s o n s , a n d they c a m e u p
w i t h a n a l o g i e s that w e r e f r e s h a n d p i c t u r e s q u e . J o r d a n w r o t e n o t h i n g .
W e t a l k e d a b o u t s o u n d , listened t o n o i s e s , a n d w r o t e p o e m s a b o u t
s o u n d . W e t a l k e d a b o u t alliteration a n d c a m e o u t w i t h strings o f w o r d s
t h a t s o u n d e d m u s i c a l . A l l this time, n o t h i n g .
T h e n o n e d a y i t h a p p e n e d . I a s k e d J o r d a n i f h e w o u l d like t o d i c t a t e
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a s t o r y to me a n d I w o u l d w r i t e it d o w n . At first he said n o , b u t t h e n
h e r e l e n t e d . H a l t i n g l y , h e said s o m e w o r d s , a n d I p r i n t e d t h e m o n his
p a p e r i n b i g letters. S u d d e n l y , h e g r a b b e d the p e n c i l o u t o f m y h a n d
a n d s t a r t e d t o w r i t e furiously. T o m y a s t o n i s h m e n t , h e w r o t e i n c u r -
sive. I d i d n ' t e v e n k n o w that h e k n e w h o w t o p r i n t — I t h o u g h t that
t h a t w a s p a r t o f his p r o b l e m . B u t t h e r e h e w a s , w r i t i n g u p a s t o r m ,
a n d h e w a s w r i t i n g i n l o n g h a n d . A n d g u e s s w h a t ? E v e r y t h i n g was i n
there. Similes, sounds, alliteration—even Caliban and A r i e l . Every-
t h i n g that w e h a d t a l k e d a b o u t i n class. H e had b e e n p a y i n g a t t e n t i o n .
W h o w o u l d h a v e g u e s s e d it?
" J o r d a n ! " I said. " T h a t m u s t be a m a g i c p e n c i l ! Y o u b r o u g h t a
m a g i c p e n c i l t o s c h o o l t o d a y ! " H e l o o k e d a little s h e e p i s h , b u t h e w a s
g r i n n i n g . " S h e t h i n k s it's m a g i c , " h e said t o his r e g u l a r teacher. "It's
not magic."
A d a m h a d b r o k e n l o o s e . J o r d a n was n o w a b l e t o w r i t e f l u e n t l y a n d
w o n d e r f u l l y . A l l t h a t t i m e that h e w a l k e d a r o u n d o r r e a d , h e was
actually working. He was taking in information, without having to
p r o d u c e a n y t h i n g . W h e n h e was r e a d y t o p r o d u c e , h e was way a h e a d
o f t h e r e s t o f the class, w h o h a d b e e n w r i t i n g e v e r y w e e k for ten
m o n t h s . H e h a d b e e n a l l o w e d the l u x u r y o f a silent t i m e , a time o f
a s s i m i l a t i o n . A l l that t i m e , h e was l e a r n i n g , a c t u a l l y l e a r n i n g m o r e ,
a n d m o r e deeply, than he would have had he b e e n forced to p r o d u c e .
N o w J o r d a n i s the b e s t w r i t e r i n the class. I n fact, o n e o f his stories
w a s a c c e p t e d to p u b l i c a t i o n in Cricket, a n a t i o n a l c h i l d r e n ' s m a g a z i n e .
T h e r e i s a little bit o f J o r d a n i n e a c h o f u s . O n l y y o u k n o w h o w
much time you need. Forcing yourself to produce before you are ready
g u a r a n t e e s t u r g i d p r o s e . W h a t w e call p r o c r a s t i n a t i o n m i g h t well b e
incubation, a n d the i m p o r t a n c e o f p r e w r i t i n g — s o r t i n g things t h r o u g h ,
a s s i m i l a t i n g , m a k i n g c o n n e c t i o n s — h a s r a r e l y b e e n r e c o g n i z e d o r al-
l o w e d i n o u r s c h o o l s . R e m e m b e r the b a b y l e a r n i n g t o s p e a k . A l l o f
t h a t m i n d m a p p i n g , s y n t a x b u i l d i n g , c o n n e c t i n g a n d s o u n d i n g out, all
o f that g o i n g o n inside h e r h e a d well b e f o r e she s t a r t e d t o a r t i c u l a t e —
the c o m p r e h e n s i o n s t a g e c a m e f i r s t , b e f o r e p r o d u c t i o n . W i t h all o t h e r
learning, especially with learning to write, comprehension and pro-
duction are e x p e c t e d simultaneously.
I n o r d e r t o d o y o u r b e s t w r i t i n g , y o u n e e d t o a l l o w the r i g h t b r a i n
t o m a k e a c o n t r i b u t i o n t o y o u r w o r k . L e a r n t o r e c o g n i z e the times
that A r i e l s e n d s y o u m e s s a g e s , a n d b e o p e n t o those c o n t r i b u t i o n s .
O n c e y o u a r e a w a r e o f t h e m , c a p i t a l i z e o n those o c c a s i o n s a n d e v e n
stage them.
D o y o u g e t a lot o f g o o d i d e a s i n the s h o w e r ? W h a t ! a n d y o u g o i n
there without an underwater pen? How about w h e n you are j o g g i n g
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or d r i v i n g a l o n g a f a m i l i a r r o u t e ? Y o u k n o w the t i m e s : y o u r b r a i n is
o n a u t o m a t i c , a n d s u d d e n l y y o u s e e the stars. W h e r e a r e y o u r p e n
a n d p a p e r ? Francis B a c o n , the s i x t e e n t h - c e n t u r y p h i l o s o p h e r , k n e w
that y o u s h o u l d n e v e r b e w i t h o u t a w r i t i n g u t e n s i l . S a i d B a c o n :
A man would do well to carry a pencil in his pocket and write down the
thoughts of the moment. T h o s e that come unsought are commonly the most
valuable, and should be secured, because they seldom return.
E X E R C I S E 4: S I M U L - D R I V E
I h a v e a c o l l e c t i o n o f z a n y p e n s a n d p e n c i l s , all o f w h i c h a r e d e -
s i g n e d t o h e l p the w r i t e r c a p t u r e the e l u s i v e u n s o u g h t w o r d . T h e y
i n c l u d e a p e n that p e e l s o u t p a p e r f r o m its c a p (excellent for j o g g e r s ) ,
a p e n t h a t l i g h t s in t h e d a r k ( p a r t i c u l a r l y u s e f u l for e a r l y m o r n i n g
writing or when driving through dark tunnels), and a pen designed
b y N A S A t o w r i t e i n e x t r e m e s o f t e m p e r a t u r e , i n any d i r e c t i o n , u n d e r
w a t e r a n d o v e r butter. A p e n c i l that always gets a p l e a s e d r e s p o n s e is
m y w o o d e n s p o o n p e n c i l , w h i c h i s i n d i s p e n s a b l e for those o f y o u w h o
g e t g r e a t ideas w h i l e c o o k i n g .
A l l o f t h e s e tools h a v e o n e t h i n g i n c o m m o n : their p u r p o s e i s t o
r e m i n d y o u that the ideas that c o m e a t u n p l a n n e d m o m e n t s a r e fre-
q u e n t l y w o r t h s a v i n g , a n d i f y o u e q u i p y o u r s e l f w i t h a t o o l for n e t t i n g
t h e s e i d e a s , y o u will b e r e w a r d e d i n y o u r p u r s u i t . A h a n d y p e n will
h e l p y o u t a k e full a d v a n t a g e o f t h o s e times w h e n A r i e l ' s flights o f
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DELIBERATE STAGING
T H E E V A SHER M E M O R I A L R U M I N A T I N G C H A I R
In fact, I b e l i e v e so s t r o n g l y in the i m p o r t a n c e of p r e w r i t i n g , or
r u m i n a t i o n , that I w a n t y o u to set up two s e p a r a t e c h a i r s in y o u r
w o r k s p a c e . D e s i g n a t e o n e the W r i t i n g C h a i r , a n d the o t h e r t h e R u m i -
n a t i n g C h a i r . I f y o u d o not have the l u x u r y o f two c h a i r s , simply
d e s i g n a t e t w o d i f f e r e n t d i r e c t i o n s for the s a m e c h a i r ; p u l l o u t the side
slide i n y o u r d e s k for r u m i n a t i n g , a n d face front for w r i t i n g .
It is n o t a m a t t e r of " d r i f t i n g off" a n d t h e n " g e t t i n g b a c k to b u s i -
n e s s " — b o t h operations e n g a g e your mind in different ways. Setting
u p a R u m i n a t i n g C h a i r i s a n a c k n o w l e d g m e n t o f that fact.
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" S o m e t h i n g b e a u t i f u l is f o r e v e r a j o y . "
T h e story i s told that J o h n K e a t s f i r s t b e g a n his l o n g p o e m Endymion
w i t h this l e s s - t h a n - g r i p p i n g line. H e t h e n s t a r e d o u t the w i n d o w a w h i l e
r e a r r a n g i n g the w o r d s t o f i n a l l y click w i t h " A t h i n g o f b e a u t y i s a j o y
forever." Prof. C o s m o s F i s h a w k i s i n the c o m p a n y o f K e a t s w h e n h e
c o m e s b a c k w i t h his s n a p p y r e j o i n d e r t o his l e f t - b r a i n e d nephew,
Skyler.
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D e l i b e r a t i o n r u m i n a t i o n — s t a r i n g o u t the window, o t h e r w i s e i n v i t i n g
a n d e n c o u r a g i n g that i m p o r t a n t p r e w r i t i n g p e r i o d , a n d r e c o g n i z i n g i t
a s p a r t o f the process—cuts d o w n o n d e a d l y p r e m a t u r e e d i t i n g , the
t o o - e a r l y i n t e r f e r e n c e o f left-brain l o g i c w i t h r i g h t - b r a i n w r i t i n g .
W h e n I a m w o r k i n g w i t h y o u n g a u t h o r s , w e o f t e n s p e n d forty-five
m i n u t e s o f the a l l o t t e d h o u r t a l k i n g a b o u t the stories, d r a w i n g pic-
tures, listening to m u s i c — a n d only fifteen minutes writing. A n d what
w r i t i n g ! ! O n e first-grade class I w o r k w i t h o n c e a w e e k " p u b l i s h e d "
t h r e e f i f t y - p a g e b o o k s i n o n e year.
S o w h e n e v e r y o u ' r e lost for i d e a s , d o n ' t b e a f r a i d t o stare o u t the
w i n d o w o r m o v e t o y o u r R u m i n a t i o n C h a i r for i n s p i r a t i o n .
A n d d o n ' t call i t p r o c r a s t i n a t i o n . C a l l i t i n c u b a t i o n — i t ' s p a r t o f the
process.
PAY A T T E N T I O N T O Y O U R DREAMS
IS6TAU3T PA«ENM£....lTST/ME
MOWN? A mmiM
M s . B r a n d e s u g g e s t s that, w h a t e v e r y o u r n o r m a l r i s i n g t i m e , y o u
g e t u p a h a l f o r e v e n a full h o u r earlier. ( I c a n h e a r the g r o a n s a l r e a d y ;
p l e a s e r e a d o n . ) A s s o o n a s y o u g e t u p , start t o w r i t e . W r i t e w i t h o u t
reading, without having a c u p of coffee, without stopping to reread
w h a t y o u h a v e w r i t t e n — s i m p l y w r i t e . W r i t e w h a t e v e r c o m e s into y o u r
h e a d ; w r i t e t h a t this is a f o o l i s h a s s i g n m e n t at b e s t a n d an e x c r u c i a t i n g
o n e a t w o r s t . W r i t e t h a t y o u s e e n o p u r p o s e i n this, o r w r i t e the p a p e r
o r m e m o o r letter y o u h a d b e e n p u t t i n g o f f w r i t i n g .
W h e n I first s t a r t e d f o l l o w i n g B r a n d e ' s a d v i c e , m y w o r d s w e r e q u i t e
h o s t i l e . I w r o t e t h i n g s like "I simply c a n ' t b e l i e v e that my b r a i n is
e n g a g e d a t this h o u r o f the m o r n i n g w i t h o u t c o f f e e . " I r e s i s t e d a n d
r e s i s t e d a n d finally g a v e in to the s h e e r e v i d e n c e that I w a s w r i t i n g
m o r e i n less t i m e t h a n e v e r b e f o r e i n m y life.
T h e r e t u r n on y o u r d a w n investment is geometric rather than arith-
metic. T h e work that you do d u r i n g your reverie writing multiplies
i t s e l f t h r o u g h o u t the day. It w o r k s like a s e l f - c l e a n i n g o v e n ; o n c e y o u
h a v e set it, y o u d o n o t e v e n h a v e t o b e i n the s a m e r o o m w i t h i t — i t
g r i n d s away, d o i n g all the d i r t y w o r k for y o u . W h e n y o u start y o u r d a y
b y w r i t i n g , the r h y t h m a n d the a s s i g n m e n t stay w i t h y o u all day, e v e n
i f y o u d o n ' t g e t b a c k t o the p r o j e c t . B y the n e x t m o r n i n g , y o u r o u t p u t
i s d r a m a t i c a l l y i n c r e a s e d . Y o u will find that, w h e n y o u rise a g a i n t o
w r i t e , y o u h a v e a t y o u r f i n g e r t i p s m o r e t h a n d o u b l e , o f t e n t r i p l e , the
a m o u n t o f o u t p u t o f the d a y b e f o r e . Y o u r w r i t i n g will h a v e a n e n e r g y
a n d flow t h a t n o t o n l y p i c k s u p o n the w o r k o f the d a y b e f o r e b u t a l s o
s o m e h o w i n c o r p o r a t e s all the m e n t a l , possibly u n c o n s c i o u s m u s i n g o f
t h e t w e n t y - f o u r h o u r s i n b e t w e e n . B e f o r e y o u k n o w it, the p i e c e y o u
have been putting off is finished.
T h e r e is a reason why you don't reread what you have written, read
a n y o t h e r m a t e r i a l , talk t o a n y b o d y , m a k e a p o t o f c o f f e e , o r d o
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w h a t e v e r e l s e y o u u s u a l l y d o i n the m o r n i n g t o g e t y o u r s e l f g o i n g , g e t
y o u r b r a i n i n g e a r . T h a t ' s the p o i n t exactly. Y o u d o not want y o u r b r a i n
t o b e i n g e a r . Y o u w a n t the left side o f y o u r b r a i n t o " r e f u s e t o p r o c e s s "
t h e w r i t i n g that y o u d o a t this hour. T h a t way, y o u a r e f r e e t o c a p t u r e
w h a t B r a n d e calls y o u r o w n " i n t e r n a l h u m . " You a r e f r e e t o e x p e r i e n c e
w h a t i t i s like t o w r i t e o n the r i g h t side o f the b r a i n .
H O W T O M A K E A W R I T I N G W O R K S H O P HUM
W h e n I am g i v i n g a t w o - d a y w r i t i n g w o r k s h o p , the first n i g h t I
c h a l l e n g e m y s t u d e n t s t o g e t u p the n e x t m o r n i n g b e f o r e class a n d
w r i t e in this way. I q u o t e (or b l a m e ) D o r o t h e a B r a n d e , tell t h e m a b o u t
t h e i n t e r n a l h u m , a n d p r o m i s e that the r o o m will b e h u m m i n g the
n e x t m o r n i n g i f t h e y all a g r e e t o d o it.
A n d it is a b s o l u t e l y t r u e ; a s p e c i a l spirit is c r e a t e d in the r o o m the
f o l l o w i n g m o r n i n g , a n d t h e r e is a b i g s m i l e (a k i n d of s e c r e t smile) on
e a c h p e r s o n ' s face a s h e o r she w a l k s i n t o the r o o m . H u m m m m m m m .
H u m m m m m m m . T h e h u m is almost audible. T h e s e people have given
t h e m s e l v e s a gift, a n d t h e y feel h a p p y a b o u t that, b u t it is m u c h m o r e
of a g i f t t h a n they at first r e a l i z e . It is n o t simply that t h e y w e r e a b l e
t o w r i t e ; m o s t o f t h e m r e p o r t , w i t h n o little s u r p r i s e , that the e x e r c i s e
w a s f u n . W h a t most p l e a s e d a n d s u r p r i s e d t h e m i s w h a t c a m e o u t .
T h i s is exactly w h a t D o n a l d Murray, innovative and candid teacher of
w r i t i n g a t N e w H a m p s h i r e University, i s t a l k i n g a b o u t w h e n h e s p e a k s
o f t h e " m o m e n t s o f s u r p r i s e " that a r e i n t e g r a l t o any w r i t i n g w o r t h
reading.
M o s t i m p o r t a n t , w h a t the w o r k s h o p p a r t i c i p a n t s have g i v e n t h e m -
selves i s a n e x p e r i e n c e o f w r i t i n g w i t h o u t t h i n k i n g . ("Forget," says
B r a n d e , " t h a t y o u h a v e a n y critical faculty at all.") It is not the a m o u n t
o f w r i t i n g t h e y d o o r e v e n its q u a l i t y — w h a t they w r i t e i n the m o r n i n g
m a y i n d e e d b e g i b b e r i s h . B u t the e x p e r i e n c e o f s e p a r a t i n g the e d i t i n g
v o i c e f r o m the i d e a c r e a t o r g i v e s t h e m a p o w e r o v e r w o r d s that they
c a n call u p a t will. T h e p o i n t o f i n c l u d i n g this e x e r c i s e i n a w o r k s h o p
i s n o t o n l y t o g e n e r a t e t h e h u m , establish c o m m u n i t y a n d c a r i n g , a n d
get some words down o n paper, B U T T O G I V E A N E X P E R I E N C E
O F T H E S E P A R A T I O N , a m e n t a l shift that c a n b e c r e a t e d later,
m a k i n g the w o r k s h o p a m i c r o c o s m of w h a t c a n h a p p e n at the workplace.
T h e results are dramatic. T h e engine is h u m m i n g and revved up
w h e n I w a l k i n for d a y t w o . T h e w h o l e class i s o p e n t o the e x e r c i s e s
t h a t w e d o that d a y a n d e a g e r t o d i s c o v e r e v e n m o r e .
A n d the s a m e t h i n g c a n h a p p e n for y o u , i n the p r i v a t e w o r k s h o p o f
your own mind.
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L E T T I N G T H E L E F T IN, T O O
IN S U M
I o n c e h e a r d the c o m p o s e r A l a n H o v h a n e s s i n t e r v i e w e d , the c o m -
m e n t a r y i n t e r s p e r s e d w i t h s t r a n d s o f his h a u n t i n g m u s i c . O n e t h i n g
t h a t h e said s t r u c k m e p a r t i c u l a r l y . H e m e n t i o n e d that h e a l w a y s
c a r r i e s a little p a d w i t h h i m , a n d h e w r i t e s d o w n s n a t c h e s o f m u s i c
w h e r e v e r h e g o e s — o n the b u s , o n the street, w h i l e w a i t i n g for his
w i f e , in t h e dentist's o f f i c e — s o m e t i m e s j u s t a few n o t e s , s o m e t i m e s
e n t i r e c o m p o s i t i o n s . It s e e m s v e r y n a t u r a l that a m u s i c i a n s h o u l d h a v e
m u s i c p l a y i n g i n his h e a d . S o , t o o , the w r i t e r has w o r d s p l a y i n g . A n d
the w o r d s are not j u s t words, j u s t as Hovhaness's notes are not isolated
n o t e s . Y o u r w o r d s h a v e a p a t t e r n a n d a r h y t h m , a style a n d a flow, that
i s u n i q u e l y y o u r s . C a p t u r i n g that distinctive v o i c e m a k e s y o u r w o r d s
c o m e alive a n d d i s t i n g u i s h e s y o u r p i e c e f r o m a n y o t h e r ; that i s w h a t
m a k e s t h e r e a d e r h e a r a p e r s o n b e h i n d the w o r d s , n o t a m a c h i n e . It
i s that a s p e c t o f y o u r w r i t i n g that u l t i m a t e l y p e r s u a d e s , w h i c h i s w h a t
all w r i t i n g i s a b o u t , t o o n e d e g r e e o r another.
E a r l y m o r n i n g w r i t i n g , w r i t i n g o n the r u n , w r i t i n g w h i l e c o o k i n g o r
d r i v i n g o r s h o w e r i n g , the bits that y o u w r i t e w h e n , a s B r a n d e says,
y o u r " s u b c o n s c i o u s i s i n its a s c e n d a n c y " — a l l o f these, w h e n a d d e d
l a t e r t o the e d i t e d p a r t s , g i v e y o u r w o r k a n a u t h e n t i c r i n g a n d m a k e
the p i e c e c o m e a l i v e .
L e a r n t o listen t o the c o n t r i b u t i o n s o f y o u r r i g h t h e m i s p h e r e , y o u r
A r i e l v o i c e . L e a r n t o talk b a c k t o the left, the C a l i b a n side, w h e n i t
o f f e r s a d v i c e p r e m a t u r e l y . G e t o u t all the g o o d p a r t s o n p a p e r , a n d
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then invite the editorial voice back, at your discretion, to help with
s t r u c t u r e a n d g r a m m a r a n d p o l i s h . Separate the two functions when you
are writing. R e m e m b e r this p r i n c i p l e , a n d y o u will w r i t e well at will.
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Branching: The W h o l e -
Brained W a y to O r g a n i z e
Your Material
Yes, I will be thy priest, and build a fane
In some untrodden region of my mind,
Where branched thoughts, new grown with pleasant pain,
Instead of pines shall murmur in the wind.
— J O H N K E A T S , "ODE T O PSYCHE"
N o w t h a t y o u h a v e g o t all t h e s e w o r d s o n p a p e r , y o u n e e d s o m e
s t r u c t u r e . M a n y , i f n o t m o s t , w r i t i n g i n s t r u c t o r s insist t h a t y o u p r e p a r e
a n o u t l i n e b e f o r e y o u w r i t e . S i n c e the m a j o r i t y o f t h e m m e a n a l i n e a r
o u t l i n e , y o u a r e d o o m e d b e f o r e y o u start. T h e v e r y p r o b l e m s t h a t
p l a g u e y o u i n g e t t i n g w o r d s o n p a p e r will i m p e d e the fluency o f y o u r
ideas as you outline.
C h a n c e s a r e , w h e n y o u r t h i r d - g r a d e t e a c h e r t a u g h t o u t l i n i n g , she
t a u g h t y o u the l e f t - b r a i n e d , l i n e a r w a y t o o r g a n i z e y o u r m a t e r i a l .
A l i n e a r o u t l i n e is, by its n a t u r e , s e q u e n t i a l : B follows A; II follows
I . T h e m o s t i m p o r t a n t r u l e t o r e m e m b e r i s that y o u c a n n o t i n d i c a t e a
d i v i s i o n o f i d e a s u n l e s s y o u h a v e a t least two o f a k i n d , s o y o u a r e not
a l l o w e d to h a v e an (a.) w i t h o u t a (b.) or an (i.) w i t h o u t a (ii.). B o w i n g
t o t h a t r u l e , the l i n e a r o u t l i n e l o o k s s o m e t h i n g like this:
s p o n t a n e i t y ( r i g h t ) ; a t the s a m e t i m e , i t p r o v i d e s s t r u c t u r e a n d i n d i -
c a t e s l o g i c (left).
S o m e s u g g e s t i o n s o n p r o c e e d i n g (not t o b e m i s t a k e n a s r u l e s a n d
regulations):
B e g i n w i t h a c i r c l e o r a n o v a l i n the m i d d l e o f y o u r p a g e . I t i s
h e l p f u l i f all the i d e a s r a d i a t e o f f this o n e c e n t r a l p o i n t , t o s h o w their
r e l a t i o n s h i p t o the m a i n i d e a .
S t o p for j u s t a m o m e n t a n d c o n s i d e r the m a i n p o i n t y o u w a n t t o g e t
a c r o s s t o y o u r r e a d e r s i n the w r i t i n g task a t h a n d — t h e p u r p o s e o f the
letter, the r e a s o n for the m e m o , the k e y c o n c e p t o f the p r o p o s a l . W r i t e
t h a t i d e a , o r a s i n g l e w o r d e p i t o m i z i n g that c e n t r a l t h e m e , i n the c e n t e r
o v a l , or d r a w a p i c t u r e r e p r e s e n t i n g it, if y o u prefer. T h a t is the last
" c o n s c i o u s " t h i n k i n g that you do.
B r a n c h o u t for a minimum of ten minutes, i n c l u d i n g e v e n a b s u r d a n d
silly i d e a s .
T u r n the p a p e r a s y o u g o , i n s e r t i n g i d e a s a s they o c c u r t o y o u . D o
n o t w o r r y a b o u t s t r u c t u r e o r f o r m . D o not i m p o s e a p a t t e r n ; let the
p a t t e r n e m e r g e f r o m the m a t e r i a l itself.
A s a n e x a m p l e , h e r e i s w h a t a b r a n c h e d o u t l i n e o f this c h a p t e r
w o u l d look like:
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A D V A N T A G E S T O SPIRAL T H I N K I N G
T h e a d v a n t a g e s o f b r a n c h i n g will b e c o m e i n c r e a s i n g l y e v i d e n t the
m o r e y o u u s e this t e c h n i q u e a n d let its f l u e n t n a t u r e g e n e r a t e i d e a s
for y o u . For o n e t h i n g , i t o p e r a t e s b y p r o f u s i o n , i n v i t i n g n e w i d e a s i n
t h a t a b u n d a n c e . A p l e a s a n t s e n s e o f d i s c o v e r y a n d d e l i g h t o f t e n ac-
c o m p a n i e s this m e t h o d .
For a n o t h e r , b r a n c h i n g r e v e a l s a n y f l a w s i n y o u r l o g i c . S o m e t i m e s I
e v e n u s e it in r e v e r s e as an e d i t i n g d e v i c e , w h e n a p a r a g r a p h or a
w h o l e piece is not working. W h e n you put already formulated ideas
b a c k i n t o this w h e e l - a n d - s p o k e d e s i g n , the l a p s e s i n l o g i c j u m p r i g h t
o u t a t y o u , a l l o w i n g y o u t o easily r e c o n s t r u c t the a r g u m e n t f r o m the
e v i d e n c e i n front o f y o u .
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A n o t h e r a d v a n t a g e o f b r a n c h i n g i s its c o m p a c t n e s s . M y w r i t i n g
w o r k s h o p , for e x a m p l e , is ten h o u r s l o n g ; I c a n g i v e an o v e r v i e w of
the e n t i r e t w o - d a y session i n o n e p a g e o f b r a n c h i n g . A n y l a r g e - s c a l e
w r i t i n g p r o j e c t (a b o o k , for e x a m p l e , or a l o n g p r o p o s a l ) benefits f r o m
this holistic v a n t a g e p o i n t . W h a t m i g h t take six t o s e v e n p a g e s o f
l i n e a r o u t l i n e a n d lose the r e l a t i o n s h i p o f the m a i n p o i n t s t o o n e
another can be done in one page and be kept right beside you as you
w o r k . I k n o w a u t h o r s w h o have w r i t t e n e n t i r e b o o k s w o r k i n g f r o m a
s i n g l e sheet o f p a p e r .
B r a n c h i n g aids r e c a l l a n d r e t e n t i o n , w h e t h e r y o u u s e i t t o g e n e r a t e
y o u r o w n ideas o r t o follow the p a t h o f a n o t h e r ' s t h o u g h t s . I t k e e p s
y o u a l e r t a n d attentive, a n d i t c r e a t e s a k i n d o f positive e n e r g y that
g i v e s life to w h a t e v e r w o r k y o u a r e d o i n g .
I n t e r e s t i n g l y e n o u g h , b r a n c h i n g i n c o r p o r a t e s all f o u r o f the c r i t e r i a
u s e d t o e v a l u a t e g i f t e d c h i l d r e n i n c r e a t i v e t h i n k i n g skills: fluency,
flexibility, originality, a n d e l a b o r a t i o n .
PEOPLE I K N O W W H O C A L L T H E M S E L V E S B R A N C H E R S
M e n a n d w o m e n a n d c h i l d r e n , t o o , w h o take m y classes c o n t i n u a l l y
a m a z e m e w i t h the n e w a p p l i c a t i o n s they invent for b r a n c h i n g . S o m e
o f their uses m i g h t c r e a t e c o n n e c t i o n s for y o u . Feel f r e e t o e x p a n d o n
t h e i r ideas o r c r e a t e a few o f y o u r o w n .
Clarice, at the S e a t t l e B u i l d i n g a n d L a n d D e p a r t m e n t , u s e s it to
r e v i e w m a t e r i a l . A f t e r she r e a d s a c h a p t e r o f a b o o k o r e a c h s e c t i o n
of a r e p o r t , for e x a m p l e , she b r a n c h e s o u t all the i n f o r m a t i o n she
r e m e m b e r s . It h e l p s to l o c a t e at o n c e the a r e a s that a r e spotty for her,
the p a g e s she n e e d s t o g o b a c k over. B y b r a n c h i n g i m m e d i a t e l y a f t e r
r e a d i n g , she locks key c o n c e p t s i n h e r m i n d .
K.C., a h i g h s c h o o l s t u d e n t , u s e d b r a n c h i n g to h e l p fill o u t h e r
c o l l e g e a p p l i c a t i o n f o r m s . A l l that l i n e a r f i l l - i n - t h e - b l a n k s s t u f f was
q u i t e o v e r w h e l m i n g her, c u t t i n g o f f the flow o f w h a t t o i n c l u d e . I n s p i -
ration was at a low p o i n t , w h i c h only i n c r e a s e d h e r anxiety. W i t h
b r a n c h i n g , she r e m e m b e r e d t o i n c l u d e s o m e a s p e c t s o f h e r a c c o m -
p l i s h m e n t s a n d g o a l s that she w o u l d n o t h a v e c o n s i d e r e d o t h e r w i s e .
T h e n she w e n t b a c k a n d t r a n s p o s e d the i n f o r m a t i o n a b o u t h e r s e l f i n t o
the l i n e a r f o r m that was e x p e c t e d o f her. (P.S. S h e was a c c e p t e d a t the
college of her choice.)
Lois is a p o l i t i c i a n . S h e is o f t e n c a l l e d u p o n to g i v e s p e e c h e s . T e n
m i n u t e s b e f o r e h e r a p p e a r a n c e , she b r a n c h e s o u t o n a n i n d e x c a r d all
the points she n e e d s t o cover. T h e n , w o r k i n g d i r e c t l y f r o m the c a r d ,
she c a n g e t u p i n front o f the g r o u p a n d g i v e h e r s p e e c h w i t h o u t the
distraction of flipping t h r o u g h pages.
Bob is the W e s t e r n r e g i o n a l m a n a g e r of a l a r g e s h i p p i n g c o m p a n y .
H e u s e d a k i n d o f i n c r e m e n t a l b r a n c h i n g t o plot o u t a n d g e t the m o s t
benefit f r o m his a n n u a l visit to the c o r p o r a t e office in N e w Y o r k by
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h e l p i n g h i m t r a c k w h o m t o s e e a n d w h a t t o say t h e r e . T w o w e e k s
b e f o r e l e a v i n g , he b o u g h t a s m a l l p o c k e t n o t e b o o k a n d e s t a b l i s h e d a
s e p a r a t e b r a n c h i n g d i a g r a m for e a c h e x e c u t i v e officer h e n e e d e d t o
c o n f e r w i t h . A s q u e s t i o n s c a m e t o h i m s u r r o u n d i n g the visit, h e a d d e d
b r a n c h e s o n the p a g e s a p p r o p r i a t e t o the p e r s o n i n c h a r g e . H e k e p t
l i n e a r n o t e s o n the b l a n k p a g e s facing. T i m e w a s a t a p r e m i u m ; h e
h a d m u c h t o c o v e r a n d m a n y p e o p l e t o s e e . T h e e c o n o m y o f the
branched p a g e was exactly what he needed to keep him on target.
Later, in discussion with one manager, he might be given another
p e r s o n ' s n a m e t o f i n d o u t c e r t a i n vital i n f o r m a t i o n ; h e q u i c k l y a d d e d
a n o t h e r l i n e o n the e s t a b l i s h e d p a g e . A f t e r e a c h m e e t i n g , h e s p e n t
several minutes recapping what he had learned by writing again on
the s a m e p a g e w i t h his o r i g i n a l b r a n c h i n g . W h e n h e c a m e b a c k , h e
h a d all t h e i n f o r m a t i o n h e n e e d e d . H e told m e w i t h a b i g g r i n that i t
w a s the m o s t p r o d u c t i v e t r i p b a c k E a s t h e h a d e v e r h a d .
Emily likes to tell s t o r i e s in front of h e r class (she is in the t h i r d
g r a d e ) . S h e r e h e a r s e s for h e r p e r f o r m a n c e s b y b r a n c h i n g all the key
w o r d s a n d the d e s c r i p t i v e p h r a s e s i n h e r r e c i t a l . W i t h a p i c t u r e o f h e r
o w n b r a n c h i n g i n h e r h e a d , she d o e s n o t miss a b e a t .
Bill is an e n g i n e e r a n d a c o m p u t e r w h i z w h o s t a r t e d a class to t e a c h
t e e n a g e r s the basis o f c o m p u t e r o p e r a t i o n . H e n e e d e d t o k n o w h o w t o
distill his v a s t t e c h n i c a l k n o w l e d g e i n t o s o m e t h i n g t h e y c o u l d g r a s p
a n d u s e — w h i c h p o i n t s t o stress, w h a t t o cover, a n d w h a t t o leave o u t .
I n t e n m i n u t e s o f b r a n c h i n g , h e o r g a n i z e d a n e n t i r e t w e l v e - w e e k class.
S e v e r a l m o n t h s later, B i l l w r o t e t o tell m e t h a t h e h a d w r i t t e n a
h i g h l y t e c h n i c a l b o o k , e l e v e n c h a p t e r s l o n g , for i n - c o m p a n y d i s t r i b u -
tion, a n d that he h a d u s e d b r a n c h i n g exclusively to build it u p . "I
found that as I b r a n c h e d out, the material was more logically a r r a n g e d
in my m i n d , a n d I t y p e d a p r e t t y g o o d first d r a f t r i g h t f r o m the
d i a g r a m . I b r a n c h e d o u t for e a c h c h a p t e r as well as for the w h o l e
work, w h i c h collected my thoughts and separated major ideas. T h e
b e a u t y of it was that I had what would have b e e n many pages of linear
o u t l i n e o n o n e p a g e i n front o f m e a n d c o u l d g e t a n o v e r a l l view." B i l l
w a s p a r t i c u l a r l y g r a t i f i e d t o l e a r n t h a t the f i n a l r e p o r t w a s a p p r e c i a t e d
a n d u n d e r s t o o d by p e o p l e w h o usually do not read such technical
w r i t i n g , a n d h e c r e d i t s the p a t t e r n p r o v i d e d b y his o r i g i n a l b r a n c h i n g
for that lucidity.
Vincent u s e d b r a n c h i n g i n the w a i t i n g r o o m o f his t h e r a p i s t / T h e
c e n t r a l t h e m e i n the m i d d l e o f the b l o b w a s w h a t h e w a n t e d t o c o v e r
i n t h a t s e s s i o n . T h e n h e j u t t e d o u t all the t h i n g s that w e r e b u g g i n g
h i m , t h e s t r u g g l e s h e w a n t e d t o talk a b o u t . A s his p e n r a n i n circles
a r o u n d a n d a c r o s s the p a g e , h e s t a r t e d g e t t i n g i n s i g h t s into his p r o b -
l e m s , a n d h e saw c o n n e c t i o n s r e a d i l y that h a d n o t b e e n a p p a r e n t t o
h i m b e f o r e this. H e a m a z e d h i m s e l f a t the s t u f f that h e i n c l u d e d , a t
w h a t c a m e o u t . T h e n , w h e n i t w a s t i m e for his a p p o i n t m e n t , h e w e n t
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i n a n d h a n d e d t h e s h e e t t o his t h e r a p i s t . T h e r e s u l t w a s a n e x t r e m e l y
s a t i s f y i n g a n d p r o d u c t i v e session, a n d h e c l a i m s that b y c o n s i s t e n t l y
u s i n g this as a t o o l t h e r e a f t e r , he c o n s i d e r a b l y s h o r t e n e d his t r e a t m e n t .
Jim is a c o m m a n d e r in the U . S . N a v y . W i t h s e v e n o t h e r m i l i t a r y
leaders, he planned an entire two-week operation on a blackboard
u s i n g b r a n c h i n g . T h e w a y h e d e s c r i b e d it, they f o r m e d a " c o l l e c t i v e
b r a i n , " p u t t i n g t o g e t h e r e v e r y a s p e c t o f this m a j o r u n d e r t a k i n g . A s
t h e y finished a p a r t i c u l a r p h a s e , a y e o m a n in the front of t h e r o o m
w o u l d c o p y d o w n the b r a n c h e d d i a g r a m f r o m the b o a r d a n d r u n i t
o f f o n the c o p y m a c h i n e t o d i s t r i b u t e . T h e n they w o u l d e r a s e the
b o a r d a n d g o o n t o the n e x t p h a s e . A l l w a s s m o o t h sailing, w i t h a
" f a i r w i n d a n d a f o l l o w i n g sea," a n d J i m w a s a s t o n i s h e d b y the p o s i t i v e
e n e r g y a n d c r a c k l i n g o f i d e a s i n t h e r o o m . W h a t m i g h t have t a k e n
several lengthy and tense meetings was accomplished in one e n e r g i z e d
one.
L I S T E N I N G T O L E C T U R E S I N A NEW W A Y , W I T H A T T E N D A N C E
Y o u c a n u s e b r a n c h i n g t o t a k e notes a t a l e c t u r e . T h e t e c h n i q u e will
a i d r e c a l l i m m e n s e l y , a n d i t will k e e p y o u a l e r t a n d attentive t o the
s p e a k e r . A s a n i n s t a n t side benefit, i t will m a k e i m m e d i a t e l y o b v i o u s
a n y f l a w s i n the l e c t u r e r ' s p r e s e n t a t i o n . I f t h e r e a r e p o i n t s left u n d e -
v e l o p e d o r i r r e l e v a n t t h e s e s d r a g g e d in, y o u will have the e v i d e n c e
right in front of you.
A t t e n d i n g a w e e k - l o n g conference on learning, I used b r a n c h i n g
e x c l u s i v e l y t o r e c o r d salient p o i n t s o f the p r e s e n t e r s ' s p e e c h e s . I w a s
a b l e t o r e t a i n the b e s t i d e a s o f e a c h p r e s e n t a t i o n o n a s i n g l e p a g e ,
e v e n for t h e l e c t u r e s t h a t w e r e t h r e e h o u r s l o n g . W h e n 1 w e n t b a c k t o
m y r o o m e a c h n i g h t , I b r a n c h e d o u t all the m o s t u s e f u l a n d r e l e v a n t
c o n c e p t s t h a t I p i c k e d u p t h a t d a y a n d the u s e s I m i g h t m a k e o f t h e m .
I w a s a s t o n i s h e d a t the i n s i g h t s this m e t h o d o f r e v i e w g a v e m e a n d ,
later, a t h o w m a n y o f t h o s e i d e a s c o n t i n u e t o s e r v e m e w e l l .
I w a s f o r t u n a t e e n o u g h , e a r l y o n i n t h a t w e e k , t o sit d o w n n e x t t o
the m a s t e r m i n d m a p p e r , T o n y B u z a n h i m s e l f . H e o p e n e d o n his l a p
a n e n v i a b l e set o f t w e n t y - f o u r Pentel c o l o r s a n d r a p i d l y z i g g e d a n d
z a g g e d w i t h a n e n e r g y a n d d e l i g h t t h a t w a s c o n t a g i o u s . T h a t d i d it!
No m o r e black a n d white b r a n c h i n g for m e . I p u r c h a s e d , well, e i g h t e e n
c o l o r s a n d s t e p p e d i n t o a n e w w o r l d . I t w a s like D o r o t h y p a s s i n g
t h r o u g h t o the L a n d o f O z f r o m h e r m o n o c h r o m a t i c K a n s a s ; s u d d e n l y ,
all i s r a i n b o w - h u e d . N o w I e v e n p l a n m y d a y i n m u l t i c o l o r e v e r y
m o r n i n g ; s o m e h o w the c o l o r s t h e m s e l v e s h e l p m e t o r e m e m b e r m y
p l a n e v e n w h e n I d o n o t h a v e the d i a g r a m i n front o f m e ( C a l l w h o m ?
L e t ' s s e e , it w a s in b l u e . . . . O h , y e s , T o m ! ) . I m a g i n e this d a y p l a n in
color:
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B R A N C H I N G W O R K S — S O M E R E A S O N S WHY
W h a t f a s c i n a t e s m e m o s t a b o u t b r a n c h i n g i s the w a y i t b r i n g s o u t
i d e a s t h a t I k n o w I o t h e r w i s e w o u l d n o t h a v e t h o u g h t to i n c l u d e .
Sometimes those ideas are "obvious" ones, and I am astonished to see
that I h a d forgotten to consider them before branching; more often,
b r a n c h i n g invites the s p e c i a l i d e a , the u n i q u e a p p r o a c h , the u n c o n v e n -
t i o n a l , i n n o v a t i v e , u n e x p e c t e d a d d i t i o n . I t h a s a way o f f e r r e t i n g o u t
i d e a s that a r e h i d i n g i n c r a c k s , a f r a i d o f the l i g h t o f day. P e r h a p s its
f o r m l o o k s s o p l a y f u l ( e s p e c i a l l y w h e n y o u e x p e r i m e n t w i t h colors)
t h a t i d e a s let d o w n t h e i r r e s i s t a n c e t o c o m i n g f o r w a r d . B r a n c h i n g a l s o
g i v e s y o u a s e n s e o f f r e e d o m . I t takes the p r e s s u r e o f f b e c a u s e y o u
a r e n o t l o c k e d in; w h e n y o u m o v e o n t o a n e w b r a n c h , a n e w i d e a , y o u
k n o w t h a t y o u c a n a l w a y s g o b a c k . It's like l e a v i n g h o m e b u t k n o w i n g
y o u r p a r e n t s d i d n o t t u r n y o u r b e d r o o m o v e r t o y o u r little s i s t e r —
yet.
T h e m o s t e x c i t i n g r e a s o n o f all w h y b r a n c h i n g w o r k s i s b e c a u s e i t i s
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E X E R C I S E 7: M A K I N G UP A LIST
L o g . D o n o t b e m o d e s t o r c h i n t z y w i t h y o u r e n t r i e s . T h e l o n g e s t list
wins a prize.
W h e n w e d o this e x e r c i s e i n m y classes, these a r e s o m e o f the i t e m s
people come up with:
M o s t a d v i c e a b o u t p r o c r a s t i n a t i o n h a s a m a j o r d r a w b a c k : it treats
t h e s y m p t o m s , n o t the c a u s e . M o t i v a t i o n a l tricks g e t y o u m o v i n g a g a i n ;
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I am always l e e r y of a b s o l u t e s . Myself, I n e v e r u s e t h e m . L i k e J a n e
A u s t e n ' s E d m u n d B e r t r a m o f Mansfield Park, " I t r u s t t h a t a b s o l u t e s
h a v e g r a d a t i o n s . " Yet t h e r e is o n e a b s o l u t e I will a l w a y s s t a n d b e h i n d .
R e s i s t a n c e always h a s m e a n i n g . W h e n y o u f i n d y o u r s e l f r e l u c t a n t
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t o act, y o u r b o d y a n d y o u r m i n d a r e t r y i n g t o tell y o u s o m e t h i n g .
I w a n t y o u t o take y o u r P r o g r e s s L o g , t u r n t o a c l e a n p a g e , a n d
w r i t e t h i s l e g e n d i n b i g c o l o r f u l l e t t e r s : R e s i s t a n c e Always H a s
Meaning.
D o i t i n c a l l i g r a p h y i f y o u like, a n d p u t a b i g , f a n c y b o r d e r a r o u n d
it.
T h e m i n d a n d b o d y a r e s o i n t e r c o n n e c t e d that e v e n the s i m p l e
c o m m o n c o l d h a s s o m e m e a n i n g i n it, i f only y o u will q u i e t d o w n
e n o u g h t o let i t tell y o u its m e s s a g e . W h e n y o u d e l v e into the m e a n i n g
b e h i n d w h a t e v e r i t i s y o u a r e r e s i s t i n g , y o u will d i s c o v e r that t h e r e a r e
c h o i c e s u n d e r l y i n g the w o r k s t o p p a g e , a p a y o f f that m a k e s not w r i t i n g
s o m e h o w m o r e attractive t h a n w r i t i n g . M a y b e y o u r c o l d i s t e l l i n g y o u
t o slow d o w n a n d take b e t t e r c a r e o f y o u r s e l f o r p r o v i d i n g y o u w i t h a
h a n d y e x c u s e not t o have g u e s t s over. Y o u m a y b e r e s i s t i n g c o m p l e t i n g
a c e r t a i n w r i t i n g p r o j e c t b e c a u s e y o u d o n ' t w a n t t o face h a v i n g y o u r
boss tear it apart.
T h e r e s i s t a n c e that w e s p e a k o f h e r e i s a d i f f e r e n t k i n d o f r e s i s t a n c e
t h a n w e t a l k e d a b o u t e a r l i e r w h e n w e c a m e u p a g a i n s t the w a l l . T h e r e
the r e s i s t a n c e w a s a f r i e n d l y c h a l l e n g e ; a w o r d of e n c o u r a g e m e n t w a s
all t h a t w a s n e e d e d — l i k e B e a t r i x Potter's s p a r r o w t e l l i n g p o o r t r a p p e d
Peter Rabbit, "I implore you to exert y o u r s e l f — a n d wonderful words
lay j u s t b e y o n d . H e r e w e a r e t a l k i n g a b o u t r e s i s t a n c e that i s h a r d - c o r e
a n d m e a n . A n d i t d o e s n o t p a y t o f i g h t it. Yet e v e n a t the w a l l y o u d i d
n o t u s e f o r c e . I t w a s a k i n d o f y i e l d i n g , o f l e t t i n g g o , that got y o u p a s t
the w a l l to the g r a n d e u r of the s u m m i t , not a g i v i n g up or a g i v i n g
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T H E H E A D A C H E DISAPPEARING A C T
So first, relax.
" A h yes, here I am procrastinating again."
B e l i e v e i t o r not, t h e r e i s n o m o r a l i t y h e r e , s o take the m o r a l j u d g -
m e n t o u t o f it; s i m p l y a c c e p t y o u r p r o c r a s t i n a t i o n a s a s t a t e m e n t o f
fact. Y o u a r e n o t a n a w f u l p e r s o n a n d t h e r e i s n o t h i n g the m a t t e r w i t h
y o u ; you are procrastinating, pure and simple.
O n e w a y t o a c c e p t p r o c r a s t i n a t i o n i s t o give i t c r e d i t for b e i n g o f t e n
an i m p o r t a n t c o n t r i b u t i o n to the w r i t i n g , a time of i n c u b a t i o n (see
c h a p t e r 4).
G i v e y o u r s e l f p o i n t s for y o u r creativity.
" T h a t is a c l e v e r r u s e , self. R e s e a r c h is always a noble p u r s u i t . No
o n e c o u l d a c c u s e y o u o f s l o u g h i n g off."
R e s e a r c h is w o r t h at least ten p o i n t s .
O r , "It w a s c r e a t i v e o f y o u t o t h i n k o f c l e a n i n g y o u r d e s k r i g h t now.
N o r u n - o f - t h e - m i l l e x c u s e h e r e for n o t f a c i n g the p a d . A f t e r all, w h o
c a n w o r k w i t h a messy d e s k ? "
T h a t is worth eight points.
G i v e y o u r s e l f c r e d i t for b r i n g i t i n t o a w a r e n e s s .
" I ' m g l a d y o u b r o u g h t this d i v e r s i o n a r y tactic t o m y a t t e n t i o n . T h i s
t i m e I w a s o n l y X m i n u t e s into my favorite tactic # X . " ( U s e n u m b e r s
f r o m t h e list y o u c r e a t e d earlier.) R e d u c i n g t h i n g s to a n u m b e r takes
away t h e i r p o w e r a n d p e r s o n a l i t y , a s w e k n o w t o o well w h e n w e o u r -
selves a r e r e d u c e d t o a social s e c u r i t y o r s t u d e n t I D n u m b e r .
T H E PROGRESS L O G C O M E S I N T O PLAY
G E T B E H I N D I T A N D FIND O U T W H A T I T MEANS
N o w that y o u h a v e s t o p p e d f i g h t i n g y o u r p r o c r a s t i n a t i o n , f i n d o u t
w h a t it is t e l l i n g y o u a b o u t y o u r s e l f . O f t e n j u s t d i s c o v e r i n g w h a t is
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b e h i n d the r e s i s t a n c e i s e n o u g h t o p u l l the p l u g a n d g e t y o u w r i t i n g
again.
I n s o m e s e n s e , the w h o l e f i r s t h a l f o f this b o o k i s a b o u t p r o c r a s t i n -
a t i o n a n d h o w t o foil its c u r s e : any o n e o f the e x e r c i s e s i n o t h e r
c h a p t e r s u s e d t o p r o m o t e fluency will also s e r v e y o u well for b r e a k i n g
t h r o u g h the p r o c r a s t i n a t i o n b a r r i e r a n d g e t t i n g a t the m e a n i n g b e h i n d
it.
2. The BP Entry
A n o f t e n d r a m a t i c way t o g e t the e n g i n e h u m m i n g o n c e m o r e i s t o
turn to your Progress L o g and make a BP (Before Procrastination)
entry. T h i s a p p r o a c h w o r k s b e s t w h e n a p r o j e c t that has b e e n r o l l i n g
a l o n g s u d d e n l y s t o p s c o l d . W a n t t o g e t those w h e e l s i n m o t i o n a g a i n ?
W h y d i d y o u s t o p i n the f i r s t p l a c e ? R e s i s t a n c e h a s m e a n i n g , a n d o n c e
y o u k n o w the m e a n i n g , y o u a r e f r e e t o m a k e c h o i c e s .
L a b e l the e n t r y B P i n the m a r g i n , a n d a n s w e r these q u e s t i o n s :
O f t e n , t h e a n s w e r s y o u p r o d u c e w i l l m a k e the s i t u a t i o n a p p a r e n t
a n d c l e a r the a i r t o g o b a c k t o w o r k . A n a c c o u n t a n t i n o n e o f m y
c o u r s e s , for e x a m p l e , w a s w r i t i n g t o a client, d e t a i l i n g the activity o f
his i n v e s t m e n t . H e h a d the f i r s t h a l f o f the r e p o r t neatly d o n e a n d
t h e n k e p t p u t t i n g o f f g e t t i n g b a c k t o f i n i s h it. A B P e n t r y s o l v e d the
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1 . I t t e a c h e s y o u t o listen, s h o w i n g y o u h o w t o q u i e t d o w n e n o u g h
to hear what another person is saying;
2 . I t s h o w s d r a m a t i c a l l y w h a t t r u t h s c o m e forth w h e n y o u g i v e
a n o t h e r p e r s o n the total a n d c o m p l e t e gift o f b e i n g l i s t e n e d t o ;
3. It gives you, in turn, the e x p e r i e n c e of being listened to and,
within that reassuring space, helps you get in touch with your
own answers behind your procrastination;
4 . I t g i v e s y o u the w o r k i n g v o c a b u l a r y for c h a n g i n g f r o m a v i c t i m
t o a p e r s o n i n c o n t r o l , m a k i n g c h o i c e s , c a l l i n g the shots;
5 . I t t e a c h e s c o n c r e t e l y the p o w e r o f w o r d s i n s h a p i n g p e r s o n a n d
personality; and
6. It t e a c h e s y o u , by e x a m p l e , h o w effective it is to t u r n these
n e w f o u n d l i s t e n i n g skills i n w a r d .
A l l this i n f o u r t h r e e - m i n u t e s e g m e n t s !
Y o u w i l l n e e d a p a r t n e r . O n e w i t h o u t e x p e r i e n c e i s f i n e , for h e o r
she w i l l b e g e t t i n g O J T — o n - t h e - j o b - t r a i n i n g . A n d , o f c o u r s e , y o u
p r o m i s e t o r e t u r n the favor t o the l i s t e n e r — w h o w o u l d b e g r u d g e y o u
t h r e e m i n u t e s o f his t i m e k n o w i n g that y o u , i n t u r n , will g i v e h i m
three minutes of yours?
O n e of y o u is A a n d the o t h e r B. A is the first to s p e a k , w h i l e B
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Vocabulary of a Victim
should
ought
can't
it's really not my fault
I'm an awful person
W h e n w e d o this e x e r c i s e i n m y s e m i n a r s , the b o d y l a n g u a g e i s
w o n d e r f u l to watch. No matter how many A and B teams are talking
simultaneously, each l i s t e n e r m a n a g e s t o f o c u s totally i n o n the "listen-
e e " and screen out all the o t h e r v o i c e s . T h e p e r s o n l i s t e n i n g l e a n s
bb / W R I T I N G ON BOTH SIDES OF THE BRAIN
f o r w a r d , totally e n g r o s s e d ; the p e r s o n t a l k i n g l o o k s f r e e a n d s o m e -
w h a t s u r p r i s e d t o h a v e the full a n d u n d i v i d e d attention o f a n o t h e r
h u m a n b e i n g for t h r e e full m i n u t e s . T o g e t h e r , they m a k e a n intent
unit.
T h e n we s w i t c h a n d let B do the t a l k i n g , w h i l e A follows all the
g a m e r u l e s listed a b o v e .
A g a i n , A s p e a k s for t h r e e m i n u t e s . A g a i n , B is o n l y a l l o w e d a n o d ,
PROCRASTINATION / b7
Vocabulary of a Master
choose
choice
wish
prefer
responsibility
price
payoff
EXERCISE 9: T U R N I N G INWARD
O n c e y o u l e a r n h o w to listen to another, t h e n it is a s i m p l e t h i n g to
c l e a r a s p a c e i n s i d e for y o u r s e l f , w h e r e y o u c a n allow y o u r o w n r e a s o n s
for p r o c r a s t i n a t i n g to c o m e to the fore. T h e r e is a p u r p o s e in y o u r
p r o c r a s t i n a t i o n , a r e a s o n w h y p u t t i n g o f f w r i t i n g s e e m s safer t h a n
d o i n g it. A n d y o u r r i g h t b r a i n k n o w s the answer. T h e s a m e s u r p r i s i n g
i n s i g h t s i n s i d e o t h e r s that c o m e f o r w a r d in the q u i e t s p a c e s of the A
a n d B e x e r c i s e a r e i n s i d e y o u , t o o , a n d a r e y o u r s for the a s k i n g — a n d
the waiting.
G e t into a comfortable position. Close your eyes. Relax. Notice your
DO / W R I T I N G UN BOTH SIUKS OK IHt BKAIN
IN S U M
P e r h a p s y o u a r e s t a r t i n g t o s e e that p r o c r a s t i n a t i o n i s not a n o u t s i d e
force a n d y o u a r e n o t a h e l p l e s s v i c t i m . P r o c r a s t i n a t i o n c o m e s f r o m
r e s i s t a n c e inside, a n d y o u c a n m a k e c h o i c e s . Y o u a r e not a v i c t i m . Y o u
a r e i n c h a r g e . Y o u c a n take c o m m a n d o f the s i t u a t i o n , m o v e f o r w a r d ,
and write.
I n fact, w h e n y o u a r e n o l o n g e r e n c u m b e r e d b y the p s y c h o l o g i c a l
d r a i n o f p r o c r a s t i n a t i o n , y o u will b e f r e e t o d o y o u r b e s t a n d m o s t
f l u e n t w r i t i n g ever.
C H A P T E R 7
T h e G r e e k s h a v e a m y t h o l o g i c a l d e i t y n a m e d M o m u s , the g o d o f
m o c k e r y a n d f a u l t f i n d i n g . T h i s c a r p i n g f a u l t f i n d e r i s inside e a c h o f
u s , a n d , e s p e c i a l l y w h e n i t c o m e s t o w r i t i n g , this C r i t i c n a g s a n d
b o t h e r s u s a n d tries t o c o n v i n c e u s that s i n c e w e c a n n o t w r i t e effec-
tively a t all, w h y e v e n start? S u c h a C r i t i c c o n v i n c e s t h r o u g h r i d i c u l e ,
sarcasm, and name-calling, eroding our confidence and enveloping
o u r goals in a m i a s m a of inertia.
T h e C r i t i c I a m t a l k i n g a b o u t h e r e i s n o t the r a t i o n a l friend w h o
i n t e r c e d e s w h e n all i s said a n d d o n e , the voice o f r e a s o n a n d r e s t r a i n t
w h o h e l p s u s e d i t , w h o lets u s k n o w w h a t n e e d s t o b e k e p t a n d w h a t
n e e d s t o b e c u t . N o . T h e M o m u s C r i t i c i s the o n e w h o will n o t let u s
g e t s t a r t e d , the o n e w h o p u t s o u r s t o m a c h i n k n o t s w h e n w e a r e f a c i n g
a blank sheet and makes us think of a h u n d r e d and one other things
w e c o u l d b e d o i n g a t the t i m e . T h e M o m u s C r i t i c c o m m e n t s c a u s t i c a l l y
o n o u r c h o i c e o f w o r d s a n d calls u s " d u m b " a n d " s t u p i d . "
T h e M o m u s C r i t i c is a liar.
L e a r n i n g to d e a l w i t h that liar, to take away s o m e of its i n o r d i n a t e
p o w e r , t o c o p e w i t h its d e s t r u c t i v e d i a l o g u e , t o s t a n d u p for y o u r
r i g h t s a n d b e l i e f s , is w h a t this c h a p t e r is all a b o u t .
H I S T O R Y OF T H E C R I T I C : W H E R E DID HE/SHE/IT/THEY
C O M E FROM?
W h e r e d i d this critical v o i c e c o m e f r o m , a n d w h y d o e s i t h o l d u s i n
sway? W h y have we given it so much power? W h y do we constantly
i n t e r n a l i z e the C r i t i c ' s d e s t r u c t i v e p r o n o u n c e m e n t s a n d a c c e p t a t face
v a l u e its m o r a l j u d g m e n t s ?
In The Origin of Consciousness in the Breakdown of the Bicameral Mind,
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P r i n c e t o n s c h o l a r J u l i a n J a y n e s a d v a n c e d the r e m a r k a b l e t h e o r y that
e a r l y m a n h a d n o c o n s c i o u s n e s s b u t r a t h e r w h a t J a y n e s calls a b i c a m -
eral mind, "an executive part called a g o d , and a follower part called
m a n . " E a r l y m a n f u n c t i o n e d , i n fact, s u r v i v e d , p u r e l y t h r o u g h listen-
i n g t o the g o d - v o i c e w i t h i n .
T h e god-voice gave m a n advice, threatened him, criticized and even
m o c k e d h i m . S o m e t i m e s a v i s u a l a u r a a c c o m p a n i e d the a u d i t o r y o n e ,
a n d t h e g o d t o o k on the f o r m of an a n g e l , a d e v i l , a relative, or a
f a m i l i a r p e r s o n . J a y n e s s u g g e s t s that, b e c a u s e o f t h e i r a u t h o r i t y a n d
c o n t r o l , i t w a s v i r t u a l l y i m p o s s i b l e t o d i s o b e y t h e s e g o d s , a n d i n fact
he s h o w s l i n g u i s t i c a l l y (obey c o m e s f r o m the L a t i n obedire, ob- + audire,
" t o hear, f a c i n g t o w a r d " ) that l i s t e n i n g t o their d e c r e e s c o n s t i t u t e d
o b e d i e n c e a n d belief. S o m e v e s t i g e o f that u t m o s t a u t h o r i t y a n d c o n -
t r o l m u s t s u r e l y e x i s t t o d a y a s w e listen t o the C r i t i c ' s v o i c e a n d
p a s s i v e l y d e m u r t o his a d m o n i t i o n s , e v e n a s A c h i l l e s o b e y e d the a u -
t h o r i t y o f T h e t i s , a n d M o s e s f o l l o w e d Y a h w e h ' s c o m m a n d f r o m the
b u r n i n g bush. Jaynes writes:
How helpless the hearer! And if one belonged to a bicameral culture, where
the voices were recognized as at the utmost hierarchy, taught you as gods,
kings, majesties that owned you, head, heart, and foot, the omniscient, omni-
potent voices that could not be categorized as beneath you, how obedient to
them the bicameral man!'
T h e r e s i d u a l o f that o m n i p o t e n t g o d - v o i c e a u t h o r i t y f u n c t i o n s t o d a y
as w h a t H a r m a n a n d R h e i n g o l d , in Higher Creativity, call "the g u a r d -
i a n of the u n c o n s c i o u s . . . . the i n t e r n a l c e n s o r at the p o r t a l s of w a k i n g
2
consciousness."
T h i s c o l l e c t i v e h i s t o r i c a l p e r s p e c t i v e i s m i r r o r e d for m a n y o f u s i n
o u r i n d i v i d u a l e x p e r i e n c e . M o s t o f u s have h a d s o m e a u t h o r i t y f i g u r e
u n w i t t i n g l y u n d e r m i n e o u r c o n f i d e n c e i n w r i t i n g , u s u a l l y u n d e r the
guise of helping. I met a w o m a n n a m e d Erin at an out-of-town con-
f e r e n c e ; w e h a d a n i n s t a n t r a p p o r t . S o o n after r e t u r n i n g h o m e , I
r e c e i v e d a n o t e f r o m h e r that e n d e d :
I hope you can excuse my scribbles and overlook any misspl (good going!)
miss-spelling. My Grandmother always answered my letters with corrections
on my last letter. T h e n if I was away from home my mother did the same
thing. I told my mother that I thought she, at least, should be glad just to get
a letter. But I know it's good for me, otherwise I'd never learn.
P e r h a p s s o m e b o d y w e l l - i n t e n t i o n e d b u t d e v a s t a t i n g like that w a s
s h a p i n g y o u r Inner Critic early on.
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George: W h o are y o u ?
Critic: D o n ' t y o u k n o w by n o w ?
George: Don't answer a question with a question. W h o are you?
Critic: I am the p e r s o n y o u a l w a y s w a n t e d to b e . I ' m s m a r t e r , a n d
nicer, a n d I w r i t e b e t t e r t h a n y o u a n d u n l e s s y o u c a n d o all the t h i n g s
I c a n do ( a n d y o u n e v e r c a n ) , a n d w r i t e as p e r f e c t l y as I d o , no o n e
will e v e r r e a l l y like y o u .
George: W e l l , that's a fine m e s s y o u ' v e g o t t e n us into this t i m e , O l l i e . I
t h i n k I'll call y o u O l l i e b e c a u s e the i m a g e o f O l i v e r H a r d y i s h a r d l y
o n e that I find i n t i m i d a t i n g .
No matter what name or face you give your Critic, there seems to
b e a c e r t a i n c o m m o n a l i t y a m o n g these c r e a t u r e s o f the d e e p . T h e
C r i t i c ' s p e r s o n a l i t y i s o f t e n c a u s t i c a n d sarcastic, a n d h e likes t o d e -
m e a n y o u . A l o o f a n d s u p e r i o r , the C r i t i c h a s a t e n d e n c y t o talk d o w n
to you. She often makes your ears burn and your throat tighten. He
m a k e s y o u r h e a r t s i n k a n d t u r n s d o w n the b r i g h t n e s s c o n t r o l k n o b o n
y o u r e n t h u s i a s m a n d e x p e c t a t i o n s . B e i n g c a u t i o u s (for y o u r o w n g o o d ,
y o u u n d e r s t a n d ) , the C r i t i c w a r n s y o u a g a i n s t b e i n g v u l n e r a b l e , t a k i n g
risks, g e t t i n g h u r t . L i s t e n i n g t o the C r i t i c ' s a d v i c e takes the w i n d o u t
o f y o u r sails; y o u a r e d e a d i n the water. T h e C r i t i c s p e a k s i n a b s o l u t e s
a n d e m p h a s i z e s the n e g a t i v e . T h e v o c a b u l a r y the C r i t i c uses i s the
v i c t i m v o c a b u l a r y ( " s h o u l d , " " c a n ' t , " " o u g h t , " " a w f u l " ) , a n d she e n -
c o u r a g e s y o u t o u s e the s a m e d e a t h l y w o r d s . T h e C r i t i c l o o k s for
e v i d e n c e to support y o u r p o o r opinion of yourself and then h a m m e r s
y o u w i t h it. H e i g n o r e s p o s i t i v e steps y o u h a v e t a k e n o r d i s m i s s e s t h e m
a s i n c o n s e q u e n t i a l . S h e e x p e c t s g i a n t l e a p s a n d h a s little p a t i e n c e w i t h
b a b y s t e p s . H e has n o r e g a r d for s m a l l t r i u m p h s a n d w a n t s i n s t a n t
s u c c e s s . S h e likes t o call y o u n a m e s a n d p u s h y o u r low—self-esteem
buttons.
T h e Critic is not life-giving, energizing, or encouraging.
D o n ' t y o u think it is time you c a m e to terms?
E X E R C I S E 10: SAY H E L L O T O Y O U R C R I T I C
T h i s c r e a t u r e h a s b e e n l i v i n g i n s i d e o f y o u for t w e n t y - o d d y e a r s o r
m o r e ; I t h i n k it is a b o u t t i m e y o u m e t . F o l l o w i n g the l i s t e n i n g p r e s c r i p -
tion o u t l i n e d in the last c h a p t e r , g e t i n t o a c o m f o r t a b l e p o s i t i o n , c l o s e
y o u r e y e s , a n d q u i e t d o w n i n w h a t e v e r way w o r k s b e s t for y o u . B e c o m e
conscious of your breathing; use your breath as a p u m p , exhaling
t e n s i o n , i n h a l i n g p e a c e a n d r e l a x a t i o n . Stay i n that p e a c e f u l a n d q u i e t
state for a w h i l e , a n d t h e n , w h e n y o u feel ready, i n v i t e y o u r C r i t i c i n
for a c u p o f tea. Y o u j u s t w a n t t o see w h a t h e l o o k s like, t o h e a r the
s o u n d o f h e r v o i c e , t o n o t i c e w h a t they h a v e t o say t o y o u . Y o u j u s t
w a n t the f i g u r e t o c o m e f o r w a r d a n d identify itself. T h r e e m i n u t e s i s
quite e n o u g h time.
It is b e t t e r n o t to go into this e x e r c i s e w i t h any p r e c o n c e i v e d n o t i o n s .
J u s t let the i m a g e o f y o u r C r i t i c well u p i n s i d e o f y o u w i t h o u t y o u r
c o n s c i o u s m i n d t r y i n g t o f o r c e o r f o r m the i m a g e .
T A L K BACK!
GET T O U G H ! BE BRAVE!
T h e o b j e c t i s t o l e a r n t o s u p p r e s s y o u r C r i t i c , a t least t e m p o r a r i l y
( y o u will n e v e r l o s e the C r i t i c p e r m a n e n t l y ) , s o y o u c a n g e t o n w i t h
t h e b u s i n e s s o f w r i t i n g . T y s o n , a s c r e e n w r i t e r , told m e that h e r C r i t i c
w a s a c h i l d l i k e g r e m l i n that sat o n h e r shoulder, j u m p i n g u p a n d d o w n
a n d s q u a w k i n g , r a n t i n g a n d r a v i n g a n d s p i t t i n g o u t criticisms a s T y s o n
tried to work. She convinced him to move off her shoulder and d o w n
o n t o the t y p e w r i t e r — a n d t h e n she p r e s s e d the c a r r i a g e r e t u r n a n d
r a n g h i m off.
R i g h t n o w y o u h a v e a m o n o l o g u e inside, a b a r r a g e o f r e f u s e r a i n i n g
o n y o u r b r a i n . Y o u g e t s m a l l e r a n d s m a l l e r a s y o u a l l o w this d u m p
t r u c k t o u n l o a d o n y o u . T a l k b a c k ! P u l l r a n k . J u l i a n Jaynes's b i c a m e r a l
m a n a c c e p t e d the d i c t u m s o f the g o d s u n q u e s t i o n i n g l y ; w e n o l o n g e r
n e e d to a c c e p t the C r i t i c ' s voice as definitive. I am e n c o u r a g i n g y o u to
m a k e that m o n o l o g u e a d i a l o g u e , a n d g i v e a few a n s w e r s o f y o u r o w n .
D o n o t b e i n t i m i d a t e d . C a l l the C r i t i c ' s bluff. S t r i p away his p u f f a n d
t h u n d e r . R e m e m b e r in the Wizard of Oz h o w their k n e e s k n o c k e d as
D o r o t h y a n d her c o m p a n i o n s entered the Wizard's throne r o o m ?
( " P l e a s e , sir! A heart.") T h e W i z a r d s e e m e d s o o m n i p o t e n t a n d u n -
a p p r o a c h a b l e . T h e n T o t o p u l l e d d o w n the c u r t a i n s t o r e v e a l a v e r y
s m a l l m a n p u l l i n g levers a n d m a k i n g all k i n d s o f a m p l i f i e d noise.
O f c o u r s e , the C r i t i c i s o f t e n p r e s e n t i n m u c h that w e d o , n o t j u s t
w r i t i n g ; l e a r n t o t r a n s f e r o v e r t o w r i t i n g the ways y o u h a v e l e a r n e d t o
deal with him in other arenas. My cousin M a r y E d n a is a watercolorist
o f c o n s i d e r a b l e talent. H e r C r i t i c tries t o s a b o t a g e that ability w h e n -
ever possible. People are startled to hear her carry on an audible
c o n v e r s a t i o n w i t h h e r s e l f a s she p a i n t s .
" D a r k e r pigment. More magenta. N o . Yes. Be brave!"
I t i s this last r e j o i n d e r that gets h e r t h r o u g h a n d h e l p s h e r p r o d u c e
magnificent artwork. " B e brave! Be brave!" T h a t simple injunction
g i v e s h e r the c o u r a g e t o a p p l y m o r e paint, u s e b r i g h t e r c o l o r s , a n d
n o t b e w e a k - w i l l e d i n h e r b r u s h strokes. I b o r r o w e d h e r p h r a s e for
m y w r i t i n g a n d f i n d i t o f t e n h e l p s m e t h r o u g h a difficult p a s s a g e . B e
brave!
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USE D E A D L I N E ENERGY
A l r e a d y y o u c a n d i s c e r n h o w c o m i n g t o g r i p s w i t h the C r i t i c pulls
t o g e t h e r the w o r k y o u h a v e b e e n d o i n g t h r o u g h o u t the o t h e r c h a p t e r s
o f this b o o k . A f t e r all, the C r i t i c i s
• Procrastination
• Caliban
• T h e Premature Edit Mode
• Y o u r t h i r d - g r a d e t e a c h e r w i t h the r e d p e n
• T h e left b r a i n
• T h e wall
• J o n t e l l i n g G a r f i e l d that cats c a n ' t w a l k on their h i n d feet.
Stance
For this first official e n c o u n t e r , a few p o s i t i o n s n e e d to be e s t a b -
l i s h e d . Y o u w a n t t o g e t a t the Critic's identity a n d u n c o v e r his w o r k
h a b i t s , his m o d u s o p e r a n d i . You w a n t t o r e d e f i n e the p a r e n t - t o - c h i l d
a t t i t u d e , a n d y o u w a n t t o assert y o u r s e l f a n d p o i n t o u t that the C r i t i c
is standing on your toes. T h i n k of yourself as a journalist on assign-
m e n t ; this d i s t a n c i n g h e l p s , e s p e c i a l l y i n the f i r s t interview. R e c o g n i z e
t h a t y o u r s u b j e c t i s c o m i n g t o this i n t e r v i e w w i t h a lifetime o f p u s h i n g
y o u a r o u n d a n d g e t t i n g his o w n w a y i n e v e r y t h i n g . H e h a s a r e p u t a t i o n
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USE D E A D L I N E E N E R G Y
IT ALL TIES T O G E T H E R
A l r e a d y y o u c a n d i s c e r n h o w c o m i n g t o g r i p s w i t h the C r i t i c pulls
t o g e t h e r the w o r k y o u h a v e b e e n d o i n g t h r o u g h o u t the o t h e r c h a p t e r s
o f this b o o k . A f t e r all, the C r i t i c i s
• Procrastination
• Caliban
• T h e Premature Edit Mode
• Y o u r t h i r d - g r a d e t e a c h e r w i t h the r e d p e n
• T h e left b r a i n
• T h e wall
• J o n t e l l i n g G a r f i e l d that cats c a n ' t w a l k on t h e i r h i n d feet.
Stance
For this first official e n c o u n t e r , a few p o s i t i o n s n e e d to be e s t a b -
l i s h e d . Y o u w a n t t o g e t a t the Critic's identity a n d u n c o v e r his w o r k
h a b i t s , his m o d u s o p e r a n d i . Y o u w a n t t o r e d e f i n e the p a r e n t - t o - c h i l d
a t t i t u d e , a n d y o u w a n t t o a s s e r t y o u r s e l f a n d p o i n t o u t that the C r i t i c
is standing on your toes. T h i n k of yourself as a journalist on assign-
m e n t ; this d i s t a n c i n g h e l p s , e s p e c i a l l y i n the f i r s t i n t e r v i e w . R e c o g n i z e
t h a t y o u r s u b j e c t i s c o m i n g t o this i n t e r v i e w w i t h a lifetime o f p u s h i n g
y o u a r o u n d a n d g e t t i n g his o w n w a y i n e v e r y t h i n g . H e h a s a r e p u t a t i o n
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f o r b e i n g s u l l e n a n d sarcastic. W e a r e t a l k i n g b i g - t i m e i n t e r v i e w h e r e .
T h i s i s like O r i a n a Fallaci i n t e r v i e w i n g the A y a t o l l a h K h o m e i n i . S h e
n e v e r let h i m h a v e the last w o r d . T h i s i s s e r i o u s stuff, a n d y o u m u s t
n o t let t h e C r i t i c g e t the u p p e r h a n d .
Questions
P r o f e s s i o n a l i n t e r v i e w e r s k n o w n e v e r t o ask y e s - o r - n o q u e s t i o n s ;
instead, they p o s e questions that need detailed replies. R a t h e r
t h a n " A r e y o u h a p p y w i t h this d e c i s i o n ? " a g o o d i n t e r v i e w e r m i g h t
ask, " W h a t a r e s o m e o f the t h i n g s a b o u t this d e c i s i o n that p l e a s e
y o u ? " Similarly, in a p p r o a c h i n g y o u r Critic, do not ask, " C a n I
g e t r i d o f y o u ? " b u t r a t h e r " H o w c a n I g e t rid o f y o u ? " o r " W h a t a r e
some ways we could improve our working relationship?" Not " D o n ' t
y o u like t h e w a y I w r i t e ? " b u t " W h a t is it that y o u d o n ' t like a b o u t my
writing?"
W h e n y o u f o r m u l a t e y o u r q u e s t i o n s , c o n s i d e r these f i v e a r e a s :
1. T h e C r i t i c ' s identity
2. W h a t the C r i t i c sees a s y o u r p r o b l e m s i n w r i t i n g
3. W h a t tricks the C r i t i c uses t o p e r s u a d e y o u
4. H o w to g e t the C r i t i c to go away
5. A n y p o s i t i v e m e s s a g e s — c o m p l i m e n t s , gifts, etc.
The Wall
O n c e a g a i n , a s i n all the m a j o r e x e r c i s e s o f this b o o k , w a t c h o u t for
t h e w a l l . S u r e e n o u g h , r i g h t b e f o r e the g o o d stuff, the d e e p i n s i g h t ,
the h a n d l e , the s u m m i t , y o u r m i n d will try t o trick y o u i n t o t h i n k i n g
t h a t t h e r e i s n o t h i n g m o r e t h e r e . W h e n y o u ( t h i n k y o u have) r u n o u t
o f t h i n g s t o say, q u e s t i o n s t o ask, E x c e l s i o r ! T h a t d r y s e n s a t i o n i s y o u r
tip that the best i s yet t o c o m e . E x c e l s i o r ! A s k y o u r C r i t i c o u t r i g h t ,
" W e l l , I h a v e n o t h i n g m o r e t o ask y o u . A r e y o u h i d i n g s o m e t h i n g f r o m
m e b e h i n d the w a l l ? "
Closing—Three Steps
T h i s first interview needs to be a m i n i m u m of twenty minutes.
W h e n y o u r s i g n a l says that t i m e i s u p , d o t h r e e q u i c k t h i n g s b e f o r e
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e n d i n g . First, t h a n k y o u r C r i t i c for c o m i n g o u t o f h i d i n g a n d b e i n g
w i l l i n g t o talk w i t h y o u . I t i s o n l y r i g h t that y o u a c k n o w l e d g e that,
e s p e c i a l l y s i n c e y o u w a n t t o leave the lines o f c o m m u n i c a t i o n o p e n for
r e t u r n visits.
S e c o n d , r e u n i t e w i t h y o u r C r i t i c i n s o m e i n f o r m a l way. I d o n o t
w a n t y o u t o c o m e o u t o f this e x e r c i s e f e e l i n g s c h i z o p h r e n i c , a n d o f
c o u r s e , the C r i t i c is y o u . P r o s p e r o k n e w this in The Tempest. At the e n d
o f t h e p l a y h e d e c i d e s t o k e e p C a l i b a n o n the island w i t h h i m : " T h i s
t h i n g o f d a r k n e s s , I a c k n o w l e d g e m i n e . " A t the e n d o f y o u r t w e n t y -
minute interaction, reunite in simple fashion, saying, "We are o n e " or
" L e t ' s g e t b a c k t o g e t h e r now."
T h i r d , m a k e a n a p p o i n t m e n t t o m e e t a g a i n ; set a n a c t u a l , specific
d a t e a n d t i m e . M a y b e for b r e a k f a s t the n e x t m o r n i n g , that e v e n i n g
b e f o r e b e d , a t l u n c h o n W e d n e s d a y . A c t u a l l y e n t e r that a p p o i n t m e n t
l a t e r i n y o u r d a t e b o o k ; i t is, a s D o r o t h e a B r a n d e says o f any a p p o i n t -
ment to write, "a debt of honor to be scrupulously discharged."
M o r e t h a n i n any o t h e r e x e r c i s e i n this b o o k s o far, y o u n e e d t o
s u s p e n d j u d g m e n t a b o u t the o u t c o m e o r p r o c e d u r e o f this o n e . T h e r e
i s n o " r i g h t " w a y t o d o this a n d n o " w r o n g " way. W h a t e v e r h a p p e n s i s
w h a t i s r i g h t for y o u . M a i n t a i n a p l a y f u l p o s e , d e t a c h e d yet c u r i o u s ,
like t r y i n g a n e w e t h n i c r e s t a u r a n t t h a t smells i n t r i g u i n g w h e n y o u
p a s s it. N o risk, n o way t o b e w r o n g , a n d the g o o d c h a n c e that
s o m e t h i n g s a t i s f y i n g will r e w a r d y o u r w i l l i n g n e s s t o try.
N o w , set the t i m e r for twenty m i n u t e s , have a few set q u e s t i o n s in
m i n d , a n d t h e n r a p i d w r i t e y o u r w a y t h r o u g h the e n t i r e interview.
A l l the w r i t i n g d o n e d u r i n g m y w o r k s h o p i s p r i v a t e . S o m e t i m e s
p e o p l e a r e k i n d e n o u g h a n d g e n e r o u s e n o u g h t o s h a r e their w o r k w i t h
m e . I a m t o u c h e d w h e n e v e r a n y o n e d o e s t h a t b e c a u s e I r e c o g n i z e the
v u l n e r a b i l i t y i n v o l v e d , t h e l a y i n g b a r e o f self.
T h e p e o p l e q u o t e d below have given me permission to share their
i n t e r v i e w s w i t h t h e i r C r i t i c s i n the h o p e that t h e s e e x c e r p t s w o u l d h e l p
you deal with yours. T h e individuals represented here come from
d i f f e r e n t b a c k g r o u n d s a n d a m b i t i o n s , yet their i n t e r v i e w s have a r e -
m a r k a b l e c o m m o n a l i t y . N o n e o f t h e m has e v e r s e e n the o t h e r s ' inter-
views, but the same motifs appear.
V i c t o r y is a t h e r a p i s t w h o s e c r e t l y w a n t s to w r i t e a n o v e l ; R i c h a r d ,
a n a r c h i v i s t a n d P h . D . c a n d i d a t e w h o , a f t e r t a k i n g m y class, a l s o
b e c a m e a s o n g w r i t e r ; G e o r g e , a n a t t o r n e y w h o a p p l i e d his d i s c o v e r i e s
i n h a n d l i n g the C r i t i c d i r e c t l y t o his c o u r t r o o m i n t e r a c t i o n s . C l a r i c e
w a s a b u r e a u c r a t w h o , a f t e r t a k i n g my c o u r s e , r e a l i z e d a l i f e l o n g
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d r e a m : she q u i t h e r j o b a n d n o w s u p p o r t s h e r s e l f f u l l - t i m e w i t h h e r
freelance writing.
Victory: W h a t d o y o u l o o k like?
Critic: A w h o l e g r o u p o f f a m i l y — g r a n d m o t h e r s , u n c l e s , b r o t h e r s ,
stepmother.
Victory: W h a t do y o u h a v e to say to m e ?
Critic: T h a t y o u r w r i t i n g i s i n b a d taste. Y o u s h o u l d n ' t h a v e t o s t o o p
t o b e i n g c o a r s e — i f y o u h a d any talent, y o u c o u l d w r i t e the k i n d o f
work that would not offend anyone. T h i s use of v u l g a r l a n g u a g e and
b l a t a n t s e x u a l i t y s h o w s a lack of skill a n d a b a s e n e s s of p e r s o n a l i t y .
It's n o t that w e ' r e p r u d i s h ; it's that y o u r lifestyle, personality, a n d
m o r a l s a r e q u e s t i o n a b l e at best. I k n o w y o u t h i n k y o u see a n d live life
t o the fullest, b u t w e t h i n k y o u a r e a n e m b a r r a s s m e n t .
S t a n d u p for y o u r s e l f ; b e l i e v e i n y o u r s e l f . D o n o t b e b u l l i e d b y the
C r i t i c ' s s a r c a s m . D o n o t b e l i e v e h i m w h e n h e lies t o y o u . C a l l h i m o n
his lies a n d i n f o r m h i m s q u a r e l y that y o u will not tolerate a r e l a t i o n -
ship based on deceit.
T h e C r i t i c i s h u m b l e d i n the face o f s u c h s t r e n g t h , a n d C l a r i c e
e s t a b l i s h e s a n e x c e l l e n t r a p p o r t w i t h h e r C r i t i c e a r l y o n i n the inter-
v i e w — a n i c e g i v e - a n d - t a k e i s e v i d e n t . N o t i c e that the C r i t i c d o e s not
let C l a r i c e g e t away w i t h a n y t h i n g either.
A n d a g a i n , w h e n C l a r i c e sets a g o a l o f w r i t i n g e v e r y m o r n i n g u p o n
r i s i n g for at least fifteen m i n u t e s , the C r i t i c calls h e r on that.
T h e n h e h e l p s her, w i t h m o r e g e n t l e n u d g i n g , t o set h e r s i g h t s h i g h e r .
False Concessions
O n e r e c u r r i n g m o t i f c r o p s u p s o o f t e n i n i n t e r v i e w s w i t h the C r i t i c
t h a t I n e e d to w a r n y o u to be on g u a r d for it. I h a v e s e e n this d e c o y
a n y n u m b e r o f times i n i n t e r v i e w s w i t h m y o w n C r i t i c a n d i n v i r t u a l l y
e v e r y i n t e r v i e w that p e o p l e have s h a r e d w i t h m e . I t i s the " I ' l l - b e -
g o o d - i f - y o u ' l l - b e - g r e a t " b a r g a i n , a n d it is a w o l f in the c l o t h i n g of a
lamb.
It g o e s like this: the C r i t i c g r u d g i n g l y m a k e s a c o n c e s s i o n , s u p p o s -
e d l y g i v i n g y o u s p a c e a n d s u p p o r t , but t h e r e a r e s t r i n g s a t t a c h e d . T h e
a g r e e m e n t of support is a hollow promise, d e m a n d i n g unreasonable
e x p e c t a t i o n s on y o u r p a r t to fulfill. It is no b a r g a i n , b e l i e v e m e ! It is
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Critic: I m u s t be p e r f e c t a n d k e e p R i c h a r d p e r f e c t so he w o n ' t be
o p e n t o c r i t i c i s m . I w o u l d n ' t m i n d his w r i t i n g i f h e w o u l d j u s t w r i t e
perfectly, beautifully, wisely, p r o f o u n d l y . A f t e r all, a n y o n e c a n w r i t e ,
b u t R i c h a r d h a s t o b e g r e a t , like M a r k T w a i n , o r M a r c u s A u r e l i u s , o r
H e m i n g w a y , B o r g e s , S t e i n b e c k , all the s o - c a l l e d g r e a t s o f l i t e r a t u r e —
S h a k e s p e a r e — y o u n a m e it. T h e y w e r e s m a r t a n d p e r f e c t . I f R i c h a r d
w o u l d w r i t e like that, I w o u l d e a s e u p m y criticism o f h i m .
Y o u n e e d s u p p o r t f r e e a n d clear, a n d y o u d e s e r v e n o t h i n g less.
R e s p o n d t o the C r i t i c ' s p h o n e y b a r g a i n . A n s w e r b a c k ! C u t the s t r i n g s !
D o not a c c e p t t h o s e c o n d i t i o n a l t e r m s .
False Friend
T o m y m i n d , o n e o f the m o s t i n s i d i o u s a n d d e s p i c a b l e p o s e s o f the
C r i t i c is the " I - o n l y - w a n t - t o - b e - y o u r - f r i e n d " d i s g u i s e . T h i s is o f t e n a
d i f f i c u l t c h a r g e t o r e s p o n d to, b e c a u s e i t i s t r u e that y o u n e e d the
C r i t i c , b u t o n d e c i d e d l y d i f f e r e n t t e r m s . I f l i s t e n i n g t o his a d v i c e i s
k e e p i n g you from writing, he is no friend. Listen to George's Critic:
R i c h a r d ' s C r i t i c s i n g s the s a m e s o n g .
T h i s f o r m o f h i t - a n d - r u n d r i v i n g o f t e n t a k e s y o u r b r e a t h away. D o
n o t lie i n the s t r e e t s h a k i n g y o u r f i s t . G e t u p a n d r u n after the c u l p r i t .
For e x a m p l e , this was G e o r g e ' s a n s w e r w h e n O l l i e , his C r i t i c , t r i e d
that line:
George: I t h i n k y o u ' r e s c a r e d , O l l i e . Of c o u r s e , I a m , t o o . Y o u a r e
finding my d o u b t s — y o u should be able to because you've b e e n with
m e a n a w f u l l o n g t i m e . Y o u ' r e s c a r e d b e c a u s e y o u ' r e a f r a i d that I
w o n ' t n e e d y o u n o w that I've l e a r n e d y o u r g a m e a n d t h e r e f o r e y o u
w o n ' t c o n t i n u e t o exist. Y o u ' r e f i g h t i n g for y o u r life. D o n ' t worry.
W h i l e I may know your n a m e and your g a m e , I'm sure you'll continue
t o s h o w u p . A n d I k n o w I will c o n t i n u e t o p e r f o r m well, n o t b e c a u s e
o f y o u , b u t b e c a u s e I w a n t t o . I k n o w the p l e a s u r e that c a n c o m e f r o m
d o i n g a n y t h i n g w e l l . I like that f e e l i n g a n d I w a n t to e x p e r i e n c e it. I
w a n t t o b e t h o u g h t o f b y m y s e l f a n d o t h e r s a s a s u c c e s s , not b e c a u s e
s u c c e s s i s i m p o r t a n t o r b e c a u s e p e o p l e like y o u i f y o u a r e s u c c e s s f u l ,
b u t b e c a u s e it's f u n t o b e s u c c e s s f u l .
Hit-and-Run Driving
T h e C r i t i c likes t o s m a s h y o u a n d w a l k away, l e a v i n g y o u w o u n d e d .
S e t n e w s t a n d a r d s : n o h i t - a n d - r u n d r i v i n g a l l o w e d ! D o not l i m p si-
lently away. A c k n o w l e d g e the b l o w s that y o u c a n l e a r n f r o m ; deflect
b a c k the o t h e r s .
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Critic: Y o u a r e t o o a f r a i d o f f a i l u r e t o r e a l l y b e s u c e s s f u l . Y o u c a n b e
a s m a l l - t i m e w o n d e r . You c a n d o t h o s e t h i n g s that a r e easy a n d f o r e -
s e e a b l e for y o u , b u t y o u ' r e t o o a f r a i d t o fall o n y o u r f a c e , p a r t i c u l a r l y
w i t h e v e r y o n e w a t c h i n g , t o r e a l l y g o for the b i g t i m e .
George: G o o d o n e , O l l i e . I h a v e t o g i v e y o u c r e d i t . Y o u c e r t a i n l y hit
m e t h e r e . I k n o w I've s t o p p e d d r e a m i n g o f the t h i n g s I c o u l d d o o r b e
a n d h a v e o n l y l o o k e d a t w h a t I k n o w that I c a n a c c o m p l i s h . I ' m g o i n g
to c h a n g e t h a t — b u t in a realistic m a n n e r . First, I h a v e to d e a l w i t h
you.
A n d I h a t e t o s e e y o u s t o o p t o this, b u t n a m e - c a l l i n g w o r k s b o t h
ways.
Critic: G r e a t P h i l o s o p h e r , e n l i g h t e n m e o n the r o a d t o h a p p i n e s s . Y o u
get y o u r s e l f c a u g h t up in ideas of h a p p i n e s s — o f how you are going
to write great things, do great things, and then you are "happy." T h e
p r o b l e m is that you never get those things written, never get those
t h i n g s d o n e . N o s e l f - d i s c i p l i n e . Y o u ' r e n o t w i l l i n g t o m a k e the sacri-
fices n e c e s s a r y t o g e t the j o b d o n e . G r e a t c o n c e p t s , n o p e r f o r m a n c e .
O r , m o r e a c c u r a t e l y , g r e a t c o n c e p t s , g o o d start, n o f i n i s h . Y o u w o u l d
be a g r e a t " r a b b i t " in a r e c o r d - b r e a k i n g m i l e r u n .
George: Y o u c e r t a i n l y a r e s h a r p today, fatso. O f c o u r s e , y o u a r e r i g h t .
B u t not c o m p l e t e l y . A f t e r all, S a m u e l J o h n s o n c o n t i n u a l l y b e r a t e d
h i m s e l f for his l a z i n e s s a n d sloth. H e felt h e w a s a c c o m p l i s h i n g n o t h -
ing. B a s e d o n a n a b s o l u t e m e a s u r e m e n t , m y life i s p r e t t y w o r t h l e s s —
b u t a l m o s t e v e r y o n e ' s is. B u t j u s t b e c a u s e I c a n ' t p e r f o r m u p t o m y
i d e a l s t a n d a r d d o e s n o t m e a n I d o n ' t h a v e t o p e r f o r m a t all. I ' m g o i n g
to fail, h a v e false starts, sit w h e n I s h o u l d be d o i n g . B u t that's n o t
g o i n g to excuse me from getting up and starting again. A n d I'm going
to finish s o m e of the t h i n g s I start. O t h e r s I w o n ' t ; they c a n wait.
I f y o u w o r r y t o o m u c h a b o u t b e i n g p e r f e c t , p e r h a p s these t w o
s t o r i e s w i l l f r e e y o u to l i g h t e n up a n d m a k e a few m i s t a k e s . I am told
t h a t a n e x q u i s i t e T u r k i s h t a p e s t r y h a n g s a t the U n i t e d N a t i o n s . O n l y
the t o u r g u i d e c a n f i n d the d e l i b e r a t e m i s t a k e i n the l o w e r c o r n e r . " T o
m a k e the t a p e s t r y p e r f e c t w o u l d b e a n affront t o A l l a h , " h e e x p l a i n s .
In t h e s a m e v e i n , Irish k n i t t e r s , w h e n c r a f t i n g a sweater, also d e l i b e r -
ately i n c o r p o r a t e a m i s t a k e , for " o n l y G o d is p e r f e c t . " So tell y o u r
Critic you do not want y o u r work to be sacrilegious; a mistake or two
helps keep you humble.
Rewards
A s k for clarification, k e e p o n the track, d o not a c c e p t p u s h i n e s s . B e
a s s e r t i v e . It pays to p e r s e v e r e at the i n t e r v i e w w i t h the C r i t i c . For o n e
t h i n g , the t e c h n i q u e s y o u u s e t o d e a l w i t h his o f t e n - a b r a s i v e p e r s o n -
ality a r e e x t r e m e l y u s e f u l i n c o p i n g w i t h difficult p e o p l e i n g e n e r a l ,
so it is g o o d t r a i n i n g for y o u to l e a r n how n o t to let y o u r s e l f g e t
trampled. As p e o p l e improve their relationships with their Critics, I
s u s p e c t t h e y m a y g e n e r a l l y i m p r o v e their o w n s e l f - e s t e e m a n d m a k e
p a r a l l e l c h a n g e s i n t h e i r i n t e r a c t i o n s w i t h c o m b a t i v e p e o p l e i n their
lives.
A l s o , s i n c e the C r i t i c w o r k s i n o t h e r a r e a s o f y o u r life b e s i d e s
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w r i t i n g , the f r e e d o m y o u a c h i e v e w h e n y o u s i l e n c e h i m h e r e will
definitely e x t e n d t o the g o a l s a n d d r e a m s y o u have i n o t h e r a r e a s . A n
office m a n a g e r at a l a r g e h o s p i t a l w r o t e to me a f t e r a w o r k s h o p :
Transformation
F i n a l l y — a n d I c a n d o c u m e n t this f r o m p e r s o n a l e x p e r i e n c e , a s well
as from h u n d r e d s of interviews people have shared with m e — a s you
c h a n g e y o u r r e l a t i o n s h i p w i t h y o u r C r i t i c , the C r i t i c c h a n g e s i n his
i n t e r a c t i o n s w i t h y o u . O v e r the y e a r s , the C r i t i c a c t u a l l y b e c o m e s less
combative, more supportive. O n e writer I know shared with me some
e a r l y i n t e r v i e w s i n w h i c h the C r i t i c w a s p u n c h i n g h e r i n t h e s t o m a c h .
A f t e r f i v e y e a r s o f i n t e r v i e w s , y o u w o u l d h a r d l y r e c o g n i z e this c o u p l e
now. H e r C r i t i c affirms her, a g r e e s that she is p r o g r e s s i n g nicely,
e x c l a i m s o v e r h e r g o o d p a s s a g e s , says " K u d o s t o y o u ! " a t h e r s m a l l e s t
victory. O f c o u r s e , h e still g o a d s h e r o n a n d k e e p s h e r m i n d f u l o f h e r
g o a l s , b u t their r e l a t i o n s h i p i s truly a d u l t t o a d u l t .
T h e f o u r i n t e r v i e w e r s q u o t e d a b o v e all r e p o r t their r e l a t i o n s h i p s
w i t h t h e i r C r i t i c h a v e i m p r o v e d . C l a r i c e , for e x a m p l e , n o w g o e s t o h e r
C r i t i c e v e r y m o r n i n g , t o h e l p h e r set the day's g o a l s a n d establish a
r e a s o n a b l e w o r k s c h e d u l e . H e i s o n h e r side. R i c h a r d was a s t o n i s h e d
w h e n h e a s k e d his C r i t i c for a g i f t a n d r e c e i v e d the m o s t e x t r a o r d i n a r y
p r e s e n t , w h i c h he c h e r i s h e s to this day.
G e n t l e yet f i r m i n s i s t e n c e that y o u will not let the C r i t i c g e t the
u p p e r h a n d l e a d s g r a c e f u l l y t o s u c h m a g n i f i c e n t c o n v e r s a t i o n s a s this:
Critic: H e m u s t h a v e the c o u r a g e t o w r i t e , c o u r a g e t o w o r k h a r d a t
t h e j o b o f w r i t i n g , w h e n he's t i r e d , b o r e d ; c o u r a g e t o l e a r n n e w w o r d s
and to use old ones better; courage to read other writers and learn
f r o m t h e m , not b e i n t i m i d a t e d b y t h e m ; c o u r a g e t o face the C r i t i c ;
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c o u r a g e t o f a c e h i m s e l f ; c o u r a g e t o w r i t e t h i n g s that a n y o n e , e v e r y -
o n e — o r no one—may r e a d . He m u s t h a v e c o u r a g e to be c a l l e d a fool
b y a n y a n d all; c o u r a g e a l w a y s t o w r i t e his b e s t ; c o u r a g e t o w r i t e freely
a n d w i t h o u t i n h i b i t i o n ; c o u r a g e t o b e financially s u c c e s s f u l a t his
w r i t i n g . He m u s t h a v e c o u r a g e for all t h a t — a n d m o r e . I h a v e the
p o w e r to g r a n t it. I h a v e that a m o u n t to s p a r e , a n d m u c h m o r e . I h a v e
infinite c o u r a g e to w r i t e . So I lose n o t h i n g by g r a n t i n g a g o o d a m o u n t
t o the w r i t e r R i c h a r d .
I do so h e r e g r a n t it, now, in this p e n , in these w o r d s , on this p a p e r .
H e m a y h e r e r e a d m y g r a n t i f h e e v e r q u e s t i o n s his m e m o r y o f it.
W h a t i s g r a n t e d will not b e t a k e n away.
Richard: T h a n k y o u , Mr. C r i t i c . I call y o u M i s t e r o u t o f r e s p e c t . Y o u
shall be h o n o r e d by y o u r g i f t . I shall u s e it freely a n d wisely. I t h a n k
y o u m o s t s i n c e r e l y f r o m the b o t t o m o f m y h e a r t a n d f r o m the t o p o f
m y m i n d . M y s e l f i s n o less d i v i d e d , b u t i s m o r e h a r m o n i o u s for the
gift.
B u t let's n o t b e t o o g u l l i b l e h e r e ; R i c h a r d w a s s m a r t e n o u g h t o h a v e
this g r a n t n o t o r i z e d , in triplicate, a n d it s e r v e s h i m well to this day.
Y o u a r e w e l c o m e t o ask y o u r C r i t i c for a s i m i l a r b o o n . B e b r a v e ! Y o u
d e s e r v e it.
CHAPTER 8
Re-Vision: C a l i b a n Returns,
at Your Invitation
There are days when the result is so bad that no fewer than five
revisions are required. In contrast, when I'm greatly inspired, only
four revisions are needed.
— J O H N KENNETH GALBRAITH
A M A T T E R OF A T T I T U D E
. . . t e l l i n g me e v e r y t h i n g I n e e d e d to c o r r e c t , a m e n d , r e v i s e , r e s t o r e ,
e l a b o r a t e , e l i m i n a t e , clarify, a n d s u p p o r t . I was r e a d y ; I was p r i m e d
for it. W o u l d n ' t y o u b e ?
T a k e that o p e n i n g p a r a g r a p h . W r a p i t a r o u n d y o u . Feel s n u g a n d
w a r m i n s i d e o f it. A n d n o w tell m e . W o u l d y o u b e w i l l i n g t o m a k e the
corrections suggested by such an editor?
I n fact, the w o r d s " n e v e r d e m e a n i n g o r d i s c o u r a g i n g " a p p l y e q u a l l y
t o m y e d i t o r ' s c o n t r i b u t i o n . A n d t o that I c o u l d a d d , " n e v e r d e m a n d -
i n g , " for he c o n t i n u a l l y c o u c h e d his c o m m e n t s in s u c h qualifiers as "I
t h i n k y o u n e e d . . . "; " M a y b e y o u c o u l d n o t e . . . "; " W o u l d y o u be
willing to . . . " He raised important questions without supplying an-
s w e r s ; h e t r u s t e d m e t o p r o v i d e the a n s w e r s . " T h i s i s c o n f u s i n g h e r e . "
" C o u l d y o u c l a r i f y ? " " S o m e t h i n g ' s m i s s i n g . P l e a s e s u p p l y the transi-
tion." " C a n y o u c o n s t r u c t s o m e link b e t w e e n this c h a p t e r a n d the
p r e v i o u s o n e ? Do y o u t h i n k a l i n k is n e c e s s a r y ? I g u e s s I t h o u g h t the
t r a n s i t i o n was a bit b u m p y , a n d I like it w h e n c h a p t e r s h o o k u p . If
n o n e s e e m s n a t u r a l , f o r g e t it." H e always left m e w i t h the g o o d f e e l i n g
that I was the one in c h a r g e ; the options of choice were mine.
W h a t I a m a s k i n g y o u t o d o i s t o b e that s a m e k i n d o f g e n t l e ,
practical friend to yourself when you edit y o u r o w n writing. K e n n e t h
K o c h , w h o t e a c h e s c h i l d r e n i n N e w York C i t y t o w r i t e p o e t r y , has this
lovely l i n e : w h e n h e l p i n g s t u d e n t s e d i t , h e h a s t h e m r e a d t h e i r o w n
w o r k a l o u d a n d t h e n asks, " H o w c a n I h e l p y o u ? "
E v e n a y o u n g w r i t e r o f t e n k n o w s h e r s e l f the t r o u b l e spots i n h e r
p i e c e , w h a t is w o r k i n g a n d w h a t is n o t w o r k i n g ; it c h a n g e s the t e m p e r
o f the c o n f e r e n c e f r o m the o u t s e t for the t e a c h e r t o c o m e a t the e d i t i n g
task w i t h s u c h a tone. N o w the s t u d e n t n e e d not d e f e n d to the d e a t h
t h e o p e n i n g p a r a g r a p h that, d e e p i n h e r h e a r t , she i s not p l e a s e d w i t h ,
either.
How can I help you?
A r e y o u w i l l i n g t o ask y o u r s e l f that s a m e patient a n d r e s p e c t f u l
q u e s t i o n a n d trust that the a n s w e r i s w i s e ?
It is in that l i g h t , a n d w i t h that a t t i t u d e , that this c h a p t e r r e v i e w s
the w h o l e - b r a i n e d w r i t i n g p r o c e s s a n d p r e s e n t s s o m e tips a n d t e c h -
n i q u e s that will b e h e l p f u l a t the e d i t i n g p o i n t i n y o u r v e n t u r e .
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W H O L E - B R A I N E D W R I T I N G : T H E F I V E R*S
E v e r y p i e c e that y o u w r i t e , w h e t h e r it is a short m e m o or a l o n g
t r e a t i s e , a letter to y o u r g r a n d m o t h e r or a l e g a l brief, will benefit f r o m
f o l l o w i n g the Five R's o f w h o l e - b r a i n e d w r i t i n g . W h o l e - b r a i n e d w r i t i n g
f o l l o w s a n a l t e r n a t i n g p a t t e r n , u s i n g the s t r e n g t h s o f the r i g h t , t h e n
t h e left, t h e n t h e r i g h t , t h e n t h e left a g a i n . T h e p r o c e s s is like a
measured march. Left-right-left-right-left-right-left: a marching cad-
e n c e o f the b r a i n .
M a n y o f y o u a l r e a d y follow this p a t t e r n n a t u r a l l y w i t h o u t b e i n g
a w a r e o f it. W h a t I w a n t t o d o i s b r i n g the p r o c e s s into a w a r e n e s s , s o
t h a t y o u m a y c o n s c i o u s l y follow the steps that will p u t y o u b a c k in
c o m m a n d of your writing.
Follow t h e s e five s t e p s r e l i g i o u s l y for a d r a m a t i c i n c r e a s e in fluency
and persuasion.
1. Ruminate
2 . Rapidwrite
3. Retreat
4 . Revise
5. Repeat
1. R U M I N A T E , T H E N 2. RAPIDWRITE
S t e p s 1 a n d 2 p u t i n t o p r a c t i c e m u c h of w h a t y o u have l e a r n e d so
f a r i n this b o o k . B y n o w I t r u s t y o u r e a l i z e that the r u m i n a t i o n s t a g e ,
s o m e t i m e s c a l l e d p r e w r i t i n g , i s i n t e g r a l t o the w r i t i n g task a n d n e e d s
t o b e a c k n o w l e d g e d a s p a r t o f the p r o c e s s . T h i s i s the t i m e for s t a r i n g
o u t t h e w i n d o w , t a k i n g a shower, t h i n k i n g a b o u t y o u r ideas in a m o s t
g e n e r a l way, a n d a l s o t h i n k i n g a b o u t y o u r a u d i e n c e . I n a low-key,
desultory fashion, address such questions as
W h a t a r e s o m e o f t h e t h i n g s I w a n t this w r i t i n g t o a c c o m p l i s h ?
W h a t a r e s o m e o f the p o i n t s I w a n t t o c o v e r ?
W h a t effect w i l l i t h a v e o n m y r e a d e r s ?
T h e w o r d rumination c o m e s f r o m the L a t i n w o r d rumen, w h i c h is the
c o w ' s s e c o n d s t o m a c h . B e like the c o n t e n t e d b o v i n e , c h e w i n g m e d i t a -
tively on h e r c u d , g a z i n g s e r e n e l y into the d i s t a n c e , sans souci, w i t h o u t
concern.
Follow this m u s i n g w i t h r a p i d w r i t i n g . " P o w e r i t o u t " past the C r i t i c ,
g e t w o r d s o n p a p e r . Jot y o u r i d e a s d o w n e v e n i f t h e y s e e m d i s o r g a n -
i z e d ; p u t d o w n y o u r d o u b t s a n d h e s i t a n c y r i g h t a l o n g w i t h the initial
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t e x t . D o y o u r b r a n c h i n g , t o o , i n the s a m e b r a i n s t o r m i n g f a s h i o n a s
t h e n o n s t o p w r i t i n g . T h i s i s n o t a time for j u d g m e n t o r e v a l u a t i o n :
p u t the e d i t i n g side o f y o u r b r a i n o n h o l d .
R e t r e a t b y s t e p p i n g b a c k o r away f r o m y o u r m a n u s c r i p t . T o d o s o i s
not to desert, but to r e g r o u p . T h i s extraordinarily important step in
the writing process is too often underplayed or omitted altogether.
R e t r e a t i s i m p e r a t i v e t o t h e q u a l i t y a n d the effectiveness o f the f i n i s h e d
p r o d u c t , a n d i t i s the o n e s t e p t h a t h u r r i e d e x e c u t i v e s a n d o t h e r b u s y
w r i t e r s t h i n k t h e y c a n d i s p e n s e w i t h . W r o n g ! T h i s t h i r d s t e p i n the
cycle o f c o m p o s i t i o n g i v e s y o u n e w p e r s p e c t i v e a n d m a k e s r e v i s i o n (re-
vision) live up to its n a m e . R e - v i s i o n : to l o o k at a g a i n . T a k e a s t e p
b a c k o r away f r o m y o u r m a n u s c r i p t , t u r n y o u r attention t o o t h e r
matters, and c o m e back renewed, to look at it again. C o m e back fresh,
r e a d y t o j u d g e the i m p a c t o f y o u r w o r d s e x a c t l y a s the i n t e n d e d
a u d i e n c e will.
O n c e I saw a c a r t o o n that d e p i c t e d a b u s i n e s s m a n w i t h his feet up
o n the d e s k a n d his h a n d s b e h i n d his h e a d . T h e c a p t i o n r e a d , " I m a y
n o t l o o k busy, b u t I ' v e g o t e i g h t e e n p e o p l e o n h o l d r i g h t now." W h e n
y o u r e t r e a t , y o u let y o u r w r i t i n g a g e : " I m a y n o t l o o k busy, b u t I h a v e
a m a n u s c r i p t on h o l d r i g h t now."
I tell the p e o p l e I w o r k w i t h that this p e r i o d of r e t r e a t f r o m the
m a n u s c r i p t , o f m o v i n g a w a y a n d l e t t i n g y o u r p a p e r " a g e , " i s nonnego-
tiable— it is t h a t i m p o r t a n t a n d that i m p e r a t i v e . T h e r e t r e a t that I
r e f e r to is m o r e a p s y c h o l o g i c a l a p a r t n e s s t h a n a p e r i o d of t i m e away;
t u r n y o u r a t t e n t i o n , e v e n m o m e n t a r i l y , t o s o m e t h i n g e l s e . Ideally, i f
y o u r s c h e d u l e p e r m i t s , let y o u r w o r d s lie fallow o v e r n i g h t ( D o r o t h e a
B r a n d e s u g g e s t s a w e e k ! ) , b u t e v e n i f y o u d o n o t h a v e that l u x u r y o f
t i m e , d o n o t e l i m i n a t e this s t e p . G e t u p f r o m y o u r w o r k table, w a l k away
a m o m e n t , t a k e a d e e p b r e a t h , a n d r e t u r n . S h i f t y o u r attention away
f r o m w h a t y o u h a v e w r i t t e n , a n d w h e n y o u r e t u r n t o it, w h e t h e r i t i s
the n e x t d a y or o n l y s e v e r a l m o m e n t s later, y o u will s e e it w i t h a new e y e .
I t i s a n i n g r e d i e n t o f g e n i u s t o r e c o g n i z e the i m p o r t a n c e o f r e t r e a t .
Y o u a r e i n g o o d c o m p a n y w h e n y o u i n c l u d e this e l e m e n t i n y o u r w o r k
style. J u l i a n J a y n e s r e c o u n t s stories a b o u t H e l m h o l t z a n d E i n s t e i n a n d
t h e g r e a t m a t h e m a t i c i a n s G a u s s a n d P o i n c a r e , all o f w h o m e x p e r i -
e n c e d r e m a r k a b l e b r e a k t h r o u g h s i n t h e i r w o r k after p u t t i n g i t a s i d e
for a w h i l e a n d n o t t h i n k i n g a b o u t i t a t all. T h e p r o j e c t w a s w o r k e d
o n , t h e n f o r g o t t e n , b e f o r e the f i n a l i l l u m i n a t i o n that b r o u g h t i t t o
f r u i t i o n . " I n d e e d , " says J a y n e s , "it is s o m e t i m e s a l m o s t as if the p r o b -
lem had to be forgotten to be solved."
C h a r l e s B r o o k s says t h a t w r i t i n g i s a k i n d o f " b a c k - s t o v e c o o k e r y . "
He c o n t i n u e s his pot au feu m e t a p h o r by d e s c r i b i n g h o w o u r w o r d s
s i m m e r o v e r a little flame:
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Pieces of this and that, an odd carrot, as it were, a leftover potato, a pithy
bone, discarded trifles, are tossed in from time to time to feed the composi-
tion. Raw paragraphs, when they have stewed all night, at last become tender
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to the fork.
A n d , a s a wit i n o n e o f m y w o r k s h o p s a d d e d , " T h e n y o u c a n s k i m
the fat o f f the t o p ! "
4. REVISE
5. REPEAT
I N MEDIAS RES: V I E W S O F A W O R K I N P R O G R E S S
t o s h a r e s o m e v e r s i o n s o f m y w o r k s o y o u will k n o w t h a t i t d i d n o t
a r r i v e o n the p a g e a s a f i n i s h e d p r o d u c t . T h e e d i t e d v e r s i o n s a p p e a r
on pages 94 to 95. T h e final product is on pages 93 and 96.
I M P R O V E Y O U R W R I T I N G I N S T A N T L Y I N T H R E E EASY LESSONS
I c a n r e c o m m e n d several b o o k s o n c l e a r a n d effective w r i t i n g , m o s t
notably W i l l i a m Zinsser's On Writing Well a n d S t r u n k a n d W h i t e ' s
Elements of Style. A fine, s l e n d e r g u i d e to g o o d b u s i n e s s w r i t i n g is E l l e n
R o d d i c k ' s Writing That Means Business: A Manager's Guide. S o m e of the
b e s t p u r e g r a m m a r b o o k s w e r e w r i t t e n i n the 1 9 4 0 s a n d 1 9 5 0 s . A s i n
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a g o o d b o o k o f e t i q u e t t e , the e x a m p l e s a n d a p p l i c a t i o n s m a y c h a n g e ,
b u t the r u l e s h o l d s o u n d , a n d the u n d e r l y i n g p r i n c i p l e s d o n o t c h a n g e
w i t h t h e f a s h i o n . I s u g g e s t that if y o u a r e l o o k i n g for a s o l i d , r e a d a b l e
g r a m m a r , get an old one from a used bookstore. K e e p it on your desk
for t h o s e p i c a y u n e p o i n t s that p l a g u e y o u .
P u t t i n g all the w r i t i n g b o o k s a s i d e for a m o m e n t , I w a n t to p i n p o i n t
three places where corporate prose bogs down, and if you never do
a n o t h e r t h i n g t o y o u r w r i t i n g b u t m a k e c h a n g e s there, I g u a r a n t e e
t h a t y o u r w r i t i n g will b e m o r e effective. E a c h t i m e I g i v e a n i n - h o u s e
w o r k s h o p , I p u t t o g e t h e r a h a n d b o o k of the firm's w r i t i n g s t r e n g t h s
and weaknesses, based on samples furnished in advance. I am never
at a loss for e x a m p l e s to illustrate t h e s e t h r e e a r e a s . I am o f t e n a b l e
t o g l e a n , f r o m a s i n g l e p a r a g r a p h b y the t o p m a n a g e r , all t h r e e e x -
amples of how not to write.
T h e m e m b e r s o f e v e r y law f i r m , c o r p o r a t i o n , h o s p i t a l , a n d s c h o o l
a d m i n i s t r a t i o n I w o r k w i t h m a k e d r a m a t i c d i f f e r e n c e s i n their c o m -
munication by incorporating these three rules. If you want y o u r writ-
i n g t o b e clear, c o n c i s e , a n d p e r s u a s i v e ;
1. A v o i d the passive v o i c e
2. T r i m the fat
3. Watch parallels
T h e y c o n v e y c o n v i c t i o n a n d a c k n o w l e d g e responsibility, e n g e n d e r i n g
c o n f i d e n c e a n d s e c u r i t y i n y o u r reader.
O f c o u r s e , the passive voice i s s o m e t i m e s n e c e s s a r y a n d u s e f u l .
T h e r e a r e t i m e s , e s p e c i a l l y i n l e g a l d o c u m e n t s , w h e n y o u d o not w a n t
t o a s s u m e r e s p o n s i b i l i t y for a n y t h i n g . M y favorite e x a m p l e o f this c a m e
f r o m a p r o p e r t y m a n a g e m e n t letter:
Of added benefit was that a turnover was created by the increase, bringing a
higher quality tenant.
P e r h a p s a m o r e c h i l l i n g e x a m p l e o f a v o i d i n g r e s p o n s i b i l i t y was the
n o w - f a m o u s stark f o u r - s e n t e n c e r e p o r t f r o m the C o u n c i l o f M i n i s t e r s
i n M o s c o w a f t e r the a c c i d e n t a t C h e r n o b y l . S e v e r a l d a y s a f t e r the
i n c i d e n t , this terse s t a t e m e n t " w a s i s s u e d " :
An accident has taken place at the Chernobyl power station, and one of the
reactors was damaged. Measures are being taken to eliminate the consequences
of the accident. Those affected by it are being given assistance. A government
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commission has been set up.'
letter c a m e h o m e f r o m s c h o o l ; I h a d t o r e a d i t o v e r several t i m e s
b e f o r e I k n e w w h a t it said.
W h y n o t this, i n s t e a d ?
Each year, the Federal Government (Public Law 875) contributes to our
general fund budget. We need to contact every family to receive the district's
full entitlement. [1 preposition]
Please fill out the enclosed card, even if you do not believe that you are
eligible, especially if your parents worked on federal property on October 1st.
[2 prepositions]
Even if one of the parents is in the military and does not live with the family,
the district is still entitled to federal payment. [4 prepositions; Total: 1 prepo-
sitions, 78 words]
Instead of
Try
Instead of
Try
L a w y e r s a r e e s p e c i a l l y fond o f m u l t i p l e p r e p o s i t i o n s , w h i c h t e n d t o
c o n f u s e r a t h e r t h a n clarify.
In the event that there is a waiver of the attorney-client privilege by the client,
the letters must be produced by the attorney for the purpose of inspection by
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the adversary party. [Total: 7 prepositions; 33 words]
T h a t could possibly be c h a n g e d to
If the client waives the attorney-client privilege, the attorney must produce
letters for the adversary party to inspect. [Total: 1 preposition; 19 words]
3. Watch Parallels
Y o u t h r o w y o u r r e a d e r s o f f b a l a n c e w h e n y o u n e g l e c t the r e l a t i o n -
ship of words in your sentence or headings on your paper. W h e n e v e r
y o u list o r u s e h e a d i n g s a n d s u b h e a d i n g s , a p p l y the p r e p o s i t i o n s ,
a r t i c l e s , a n d v e r b s consistently. For e x a m p l e , this s e n t e n c e is u n s e t t l i n g :
T h e overall objective of the audit was to determine the store's effectiveness
in meeting customer needs, compliance with company policies, and providing
adequate internal controls of daily store operations.
It is totally e m b a r a s s i n g w h e n a d e s c r i p t i o n of a w r i t i n g c o u r s e is
poorly written, but I had the w o r d including b e f o r e developing in the
c o p y I g a v e to the e d i t o r of the c o l l e g e b u l l e t i n , a n d I s u p p o s e the
c o p y editor, t o e c o n o m i z e , c h o s e t o o m i t it. T h i s c o m p l e t e l y n o n p a r -
allel c o u r s e d e s c r i p t i o n , t o my mortification, ran:
Dr. Klauser's class will address how to write and sell articles, developing
saleable ideas, slanting, writing a query letter and dealing with editors.
H e a d i n g s a n d s u b h e a d i n g s i n a p a p e r , c h a p t e r , o r m e m o also r e a d
b e t t e r w h e n y o u k e e p i n m i n d the g u i d e l i n e o f p a r a l l e l c o n s t r u c t i o n
(as in "Avoid the Passive V o i c e , " "Trim the Fat," "Watch Parallels").
EXERCISE 12: I M P R O V E T H I S S A M P L E
U s i n g the f o l l o w i n g s a m p l e , o r o n e o f y o u r o w n , c h a n g e the p a s s i v e
v o i c e t o the active, slash the n u m b e r o f p r e p o s i t i o n s , c o m p a c t the
w o r d i n e s s a n d r e p e t i t i o n , a n d c o r r e c t the faulty p a r a l l e l i s m :
TONE
T o n e is a m a t t e r of r e s p e c t for the r e a d e r . S o m e t i m e s w r i t e r s a r e
r u d e w i t h o u t r e a l i z i n g it. R e a d y o u r letter o r m e m o o r w h a t e v e r b a c k
to yourself out loud. A r e you offended?
I f y o u a r e c o n s c i o u s o f y o u r a u d i e n c e , a n d i f y o u i n c o r p o r a t e the
t h r e e r u l e s d e t a i l e d a b o v e into y o u r w r i t i n g , the t o n e w i l l take c a r e o f
itself.
For e x a m p l e , a letter b e g u n in passive v o i c e a l r e a d y sets the t o n e for
distancing and coolness. I knew an executive director who b e g a n every
letter he wrote with this chilling phrase: "Reference is m a d e to your. . . "
W i t h s u c h a n o p e n e r , the rest o f the letter w a s s u r e t o b e a r c h a n d
diffident.
I f y o u n e e d t o say s o m e t h i n g h a r s h , o f t e n the s i m p l e e x p e d i e n t o f
p u t t i n g the h a r s h w o r d i n the m i d d l e o f the letter softens the blow.
T H E FOG INDEX
C o l u m b u s , O h i o , t o g u i d e n e w s p a p e r w r i t e r s , the F o g I n d e x i s a n
a c t u a l m a t h e m a t i c a l f o r m u l a that y o u c a n a p p l y t o any w r i t i n g s a m p l e
to d e t e r m i n e the grade level t h a t it t a k e s to easily u n d e r s t a n d w h a t y o u
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just wrote.
T o u s e the F o g I n d e x , p i c k a s a m p l e o f w r i t i n g a b o u t 1 0 0 - 1 2 5 w o r d s
l o n g . C o u n t t h e n u m b e r o f w o r d s i n s u c c e e d i n g s e n t e n c e s : for e x a m -
p l e , 8 + 21 + 11 + 3 + 19 + 7 + 23 + 10 = 102 w o r d s in 8
sentences. Dates a n d o t h e r n u m b e r combinations c o u n t as single words.
I n d e p e n d e n t clauses qualify as separate sentences. "In school we stud-
i e d ; w e l e a r n e d ; w e i m p r o v e d " i s t h r e e s e n t e n c e s . D i v i d e the total
w o r d s b y the n u m b e r o f s e n t e n c e s : i n the e x a m p l e , 102 w o r d s d i v i d e d
b y 8 s e n t e n c e s e q u a l s 1 3 w o r d s , the a v e r a g e s e n t e n c e l e n g t h .
N e x t , c o u n t the n u m b e r o f w o r d s t h a t h a v e t h r e e o r m o r e syllables.
D o n o t i n c l u d e w o r d s m a d e u p o f short w o r d s , s u c h a s yellowtail o r
pawnbroker. A l s o , d o n o t i n c l u d e p o l y s y l l a b i c w o r d s that b e g i n a s e n -
t e n c e ; p r o p e r n a m e s ; o r v e r b s m a d e i n t o t h r e e syllables b y a d d i n g -es
or -ed (for e x a m p l e , concluded). D i v i d e this c o u n t by the p a s s a g e l e n g t h
t o g e t the percentage o f l o n g w o r d s . For e x a m p l e , i f y o u c o u n t e d 1 6
polysyllables out of 102 words, you would divide 16 by 102 and get 15
percent.
N o w a d d the a v e r a g e s e n t e n c e l e n g t h t o the p e r c e n t a g e o f l o n g
w o r d s . M u l t i p l y the total b y 0.4 t o g e t the g r a d e level o f r e a d i n g
c o m p r e h e n s i o n . ( I g n o r e the d i g i t s f o l l o w i n g the d e c i m a l p o i n t ; d o n o t
r o u n d o f f n u m b e r s . ) I n o u r e x a m p l e , 1 3 + 1 5 = 2 8 ; 2 8 x 0.4 = 1 1 .
T h e F o g I n d e x i s relative. T h e r e i s n o r i g h t o r w r o n g s c o r e , a l t h o u g h
I p e r s o n a l l y g e t a little t i g h t a r o u n d the c o l l a r w i t h any s c o r e o v e r 1 5 .
If y o u are writing to an educated, but not an erudite audience, 11 or
12 is an a p p r o p r i a t e level. Harper's a n d Atlantic Monthly a r e 1 2 ; Time,
Business Week, a n d the Wall Street Journal a v e r a g e 1 1 . For a g e n e r a l
a u d i e n c e , 1 0 s e e m s a b o u t r i g h t : the G e t t y s b u r g A d d r e s s a n d R e a d e r ' s
Digest both have a Fog I n d e x of 10. Most best-selling books have a
Fog I n d e x of from 8 to 10.
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1 . C h o o s e a s a m p l e 1 0 0 - 1 2 5 w o r d s long.
2. C o u n t the w o r d s and s e n t e n c e s . C o u n t the
i n d e p e n d e n t c l a u s e s as separate s e n t e n c e s .
Divide the word count by the sentence count.
3. C o u n t w o r d s of three or more s y l l a b l e s . D i -
v i d e by the length of the p a s s a g e to get the
p e r c e n t a g e . A d d this to the a v e r a g e s e n t e n c e
length.
4. Multiply the total by 0.4.
A Self-Help Tool
O n e o f the b e a u t i e s o f the F o g I n d e x i s that i t c a n o p e n the eyes o f
those whose writing tends to m a k e others cringe. It is especially useful
as a tool b e c a u s e it is s e l f - a p p l i e d a n d thus s e l f - c o r r e c t i n g . T h e of-
f e n d i n g w r i t e r m e r e l y s h r u g s i n c h a g r i n a n d m a k e s the n e c e s s a r y
changes.
T h e h e a d o f a l a r g e g o v e r n m e n t a g e n c y a n d s e v e r a l o f his staff o n c e
t o o k m y c o u r s e a t the s a m e t i m e . T h e boss w a s fond o f b i g w o r d s a n d
l o n g , c o n v o l u t e d s e n t e n c e s , w h i c h o v e r w h e l m e d his r e a d e r s . H i s staff
h a d t r i e d w i t h o u t success t o c o n v i n c e h i m t h a t his w r i t i n g w a s l a b o r i -
o u s a n d t o g e t h i m t o c u t d o w n o n the p o l y s y l l a b l e s a n d s h o r t e n his
s e n t e n c e s . N o w h e r e h e w a s i n m y class, s c o r i n g his o w n w r i t i n g : h e
a p p l i e d the F o g I n d e x f o r m u l a a n d c a m e o u t w i t h a g r a d e level o f 1 8 .
T h e b o s s s m i l e d , a little e m b a r r a s s e d a t himself, a n d o n the s p o t
v o w e d t o u s e s h o r t e r s e n t e n c e s . I n o n e stroke, the F o g I n d e x d i d w h a t
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the s t a f f h a d b e e n t r y i n g t o a c c o m p l i s h for y e a r s . T h e y s i g h e d i n
relief.
It's s i m p l e . I f the F o g I n d e x i s l o w e r t h a n y o u r a u d i e n c e a p p e a l , a d d
a few c o m p o u n d s a n d s e m i c o l o n s a n d s u b s t i t u t e m o r e s o p h i s t i c a t e d
v o c a b u l a r y . I f i t i s h i g h e r t h a n y o u w a n t i t t o b e , c u t d o w n o n the b i g
w o r d s a n d v a r y the s e n t e n c e l e n g t h .
T h e n o r m for b u s i n e s s s e n t e n c e s i s n o m o r e t h a n t w e n t y - t w o w o r d s ,
w h i c h is s o m e w h a t r e s t r i c t i v e ; t h e r e will be t i m e s w h e n a l o n g e r s e n -
tence is appropriate, and even fun, as long as you keep control. T h e
last s e n t e n c e i n E x e r c i s e 1 2 h a s s e v e n t y - o n e w o r d s , a n d a s y o u c a n
s e e , the w r i t e r lost c o n t r o l of it; b u t it is possible, e v e n p o w e r f u l a n d
h y p n o t i c , to w r i t e a l o n g s e n t e n c e that w o r k s . O n l y , p l e a s e , do not p u t
t w o of t h e m in a row. A p p l e C o m p u t e r is w e l l - k n o w n for its " u s e r -
f r i e n d l y " m a n u a l s , o f t e n w r i t t e n e n t i r e l y i n active voice. H e r e i s a n
e x a m p l e of a fifty-five-word s e n t e n c e f r o m the Apple II Reference Man-
ual t h a t w o r k s . N o t i c e that the l e a d s e n t e n c e h a s o n l y e l e v e n w o r d s .
A n d h e r e is a h u n d r e d - w o r d s e n t e n c e that I w r o t e j u s t for f u n to
m y n i e c e J e n n i f e r w h e n h e r trip t o m e e t h e r new b a b y c o u s i n was
canceled:
A n d , Jenny, if you can understand the peculiar logic of this, think of it this
way: come September, our visit will be in front of you, not behind you;
something still to look forward to, not to look back on; something exciting yet
to happen; rather than a has-been, a will-be—and since your darling cousin
Emily gets cuter by the day, she will be all that more the darling by the time
you see her and all that less, I guess, had you seen her earlier than you will,
had you seen her when you meant to. So there.
So, to see it in terms of right and left brain (or hemispheres) is another way
of looking at the phenomena of Ariel and Caliban, of noticing that one part
of your brain works best for ideas and one part helps with editing and
structure. This division of labor is not strict, but it is a useful way of looking
at. . .
To m a k e it s o u n d m o r e a u d i t o r y , I m a d e five s m a l l c h a n g e s .
So, to speak in terms of right and left brain (or hemispheres) is another
way of expressing the phenomena that I have been calling Ariel and Caliban,
of paying attention to the fact that one part of your brain works best for ideas
and one part helps with editing and structure. This division of labor is not
strict, but it is a useful way of talking about. . .
A later p a r t was r e c a s t :
Whether you choose to call it Caliban and Ariel or think it sounds better to
use the labels left brain and right brain, the important thing to realize is that
what you have is there all along. To be whole-brained, you need only quiet
down the noisy static side of you and listen to your own imagination.
I f y o u ' r e like m e , y o u n e e d t o c o n s i d e r a d d i n g m o r e a u d i t o r y v o c a b -
u l a r y t o y o u r overall text s o that the a u d i t o r y l e a r n e r s c a n h e a r y o u .
If your worldview is auditory, be conscious of your verbs so y o u r
r e a d e r c a n see y o u r p o i n t o r feel a t o n e w i t h y o u r p o s i t i o n .
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1, The Echo
I n s t a n t p r o f e s s i o n a l i s m : a v e r b a l e c h o at the e n d of y o u r p i e c e that
h a r k s b a c k t o s o m e t h i n g y o u said i n the b e g i n n i n g . M a n y n e w s p a p e r
c o l u m n i s t s u s e this d e v i c e in t h e i r daily w o r k , a n d it n e v e r gets o l d .
T h e trick i s t o t a k e s o m e w o r d o r p h r a s e f r o m y o u r o p e n e r o r f r o m
e a r l y on in y o u r p i e c e a n d e c h o it verbally at the e n d , o f t e n w i t h a
twist. N o w that I h a v e t o l d y o u that trick, y o u a r e g o i n g to find it
e v e r y w h e r e . ( A f t e r w r i t i n g this section, my h e i g h t e n e d awareness found
this d e v i c e i n f i v e o f six articles i n the C o l u m b i a a l u m n i m a g a z i n e . )
B e f o r e , y o u o n l y k n e w that y o u w e r e satisfied w i t h a p i e c e . N o w y o u
k n o w why.
E c h o e n d i n g s p r e s u p p o s e that the b e g i n n i n g i s a l s o a s u m m a r y . I n
m y b r a n c h i n g t r e e s the o p e n i n g a n d c l o s i n g c o n c e p t s a r e o f t e n o n the
s a m e m a i n b r a n c h , r e m i n d i n g m e t o g i v e the r e a d e r a s e n s e o f h a v i n g
c o m e full c i r c l e .
R e m e m b e r the o l d c o l l e g e essays, i n w h i c h y o u f i r s t s t a t e d w h a t you
w e r e g o i n g t o d o i n y o u r b l u e b o o k answer, t h e n d i d it, a n d t h e n t i e d
it all t o g e t h e r w i t h " a n d thus we c a n s e e . . . " or s o m e t h i n g e q u a l l y
obvious?
Y o u c a n be less t r a n s p a r e n t a b o u t it, b u t it is a g o o d i d e a to tell the
r e a d e r w h e r e h e i s g o i n g , h o w h e will g e t there, a n d w h e n h e h a s
a r r i v e d . O f t e n the e c h o c r e a t e s that u n i t y effortlessly.
O n e o f m y s t u d e n t s w r o t e a N e w Year's p i e c e for the local p a p e r
w i t h a n i c e u s e o f the e c h o d e v i c e . S h e h a d e x p e r i e n c e d a t r a g e d y a t
C h r i s t m a s : h e r o p e n i n g p a r a g r a p h told o f the c l e a n w h i t e c a l e n d a r
o n h e r d e s k , s y m b o l o f h e r r e l u c t a n c e t o g e t b a c k i n t o the s w i n g o f
t h i n g s a f t e r the h o l i d a y s : " T h e u n b l e m i s h e d c a l e n d a r was t a n g i b l e
p r o o f that I could remain home, within my comfort zone, secure and
u n t o u c h e d b y the o u t s i d e w o r l d . " G r a d u a l l y , f r i e n d s r e a c h o u t t o h e r
a n d h e l p h e r o u t o f h e r c o c o o n , a n d a t the e n d o f the p i e c e , she m a k e s
a n e n t r y o n the c a l e n d a r : t o w r i t e a n d t h a n k the friends a n d l o v e d
ones w h o were so supportive.
T h e line that y o u e c h o n e e d n o t b e r i g h t u p front; s o m e t i m e s the
e n d i n g r e s o n a n c e c a n c o m e f r o m a n i d e a b u r i e d i n the m i d d l e o f y o u r
w r i t i n g . C o l u m n i s t D a v e B a r r y uses that t e c h n i q u e all the time, o f t e n
w i t h his c h a r a c t e r i s t i c b i z a r r e twist. O n e t i m e , i n the m i d d l e o f a
c o l u m n , h e a c c u s e d his r e a d e r s o f h a v i n g " n o m o r e m e d i a sophistica-
tion t h a n a l u n g f l u k e " a n d t h e n w e n t m e r r i l y o n w i t h his topic. F o u r
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EXERCISE 14: A C C E N T E D E N D I N G S
R e c a s t t h e s e s e n t e n c e s s o t h a t they e n d o n a n a c c e n t e d syllable.
STRIP MINING
S o m e t i m e s y o u h a v e w r i t t e n a p i e c e that d o e s not h a n g together, b u t
y o u c a n n o t q u i t e f i g u r e o u t the g l i t c h . S t r i p m i n i n g t o the r e s c u e . I
c a m e u p o n this u s e f u l t e c h n i q u e a l m o s t b y a c c i d e n t , w o r k i n g w i t h
f i r s t - g r a d e r s . W h e n y o u a r e j u s t l e a r n i n g t o print, i t i s difficult t o e d i t ,
b e c a u s e y o u r i d e a s a r e s o s p r e a d o u t t h a t y o u easily lose s i g h t o f the
r e l a t i o n s h i p o f y o u r s e n t e n c e s t o e a c h other. O n e s e n t e n c e c a n take
u p a w h o l e fat-lined p a g e a n d trail o n t o the n e x t . M y s t u d e n t s w e r e
h a v i n g s u c h t r o u b l e e d i t i n g that I k n e w w e n e e d e d s o m e t h i n g s m a l l e r
t o m a n i p u l a t e . S o I t y p e d u p their p o e m s a n d stories line b y line, e a c h
s e n t e n c e o r t h o u g h t o n a s e p a r a t e line, a n d t h e n w e c u t t h e m i n t o
s t r i p s . A s a n e x a m p l e , h e r e i s a p o e m a b o u t w h a t i t w o u l d b e like t o
be t e n f e e t tall, by a first-grader, J a s o n .
If I were ten feet tall, I would put clouds in my pillowcase.
I would climb the Empire State Building like King Kong.
I could pick up that lady in my hand like King Kong.
I would have the biggest ears in the world.
I would be a basketball player.
I could catch all the bugs in the world and throw them all away.
I would be taller than anybody in the world.
I would climb the biggest ladder in the world.
I would climb that ladder up and out of the universe and I would
climb back down with thousands of stars in my arms.
I would have the biggest arms in the world.
I would have the biggest feet in the world.
I would kick a ball up to Mars.
I'd have the biggest house in the world.
N o t b a d for a s i x - y e a r - o l d . S o m e n i c e i m a g e s a n d i d e a s , a n d J a s o n
w a s p l e a s e d b e c a u s e h e h a d n e v e r w r i t t e n that m u c h b e f o r e . B u t h e
d i d n o t t h i n k it s o u n d e d like a p o e m . We laid o u t the s t r i p s on his
d e s k , a n d I a s k e d h i m t o g r o u p like t h i n g s together. S o h e p u t t o g e t h e r
t h e s t r i p s a b o u t the feet a n d the e a r s a n d the a r m s a n d t h e n f i g u r e d
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N o w that's a p o e m !
Y o u n e e d not literally c u t u p y o u r s e n t e n c e s into strips, a l t h o u g h i t
is f u n to m a n i p u l a t e y o u r w o r d s that w a y : a s i m p l e a n d effective
a p p r o a c h is simply to circle the key w o r d in e a c h s e n t e n c e in a p a r a -
g r a p h . T h e n you'll h a v e 5 o r 6 w o r d s t o j u g g l e a r o u n d r a t h e r than
150.
A t the b e g i n n i n g o f this c h a p t e r , I u s e d this m e t h o d t o h e l p o r g a -
n i z e a p a r a g r a p h that was not h a n g i n g t o g e t h e r . O r i g i n a l l y , it r e a d
R a t h e r t h a n m a n i p u l a t i n g 80 w o r d s to find the p r o b l e m , I c i r c l e d
the key w o r d in e a c h s e n t e n c e : Caliban, editing a n d difference. N o w I
c o u l d s e e that Caliban h a d t o g o i n the m i d d l e b e c a u s e i t w a s p a r t o f
the w h o l e , a c a t e g o r y u n d e r the g e n e r a l h e a d i n g of editing. I a d d e d
" t h o u g h " a n d r e a r r a n g e d the s e n t e n c e s t o r e a d
Editing invites the left and logical side of your brain to return with you to
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your written piece and offer specific advice on improvement and rearrange-
ment. Remember, though, Caliban returns now at your invitation, as your
guest, and so he comes back as your friend. T h e difference between this sort
of editing and the premature edit voice is that, where before the edit voice
put you down, now Caliban is ready to offer adult-to-adult suggestions on
improving your writing.
E X E R C I S E 1 5 : Strip Mining
U s e a p a r a g r a p h o f y o u r o w n w r i t i n g o r the o n e p r o v i d e d below.
C i r c l e t h e m a i n w o r d s o f e a c h s e n t e n c e t o see the i n g r e d i e n t that d o e s
n o t f i t , the n e w i d e a that i s i n t r o d u c e d w i t h o u t t r a n s i t i o n .
It was inevitable that the attempt should be made. T h e Canadian Opera
Company in Toronto was the first to experiment with the idea of projecting a
translation on a screen over the stage. A similar system was inaugurated by
New York City Opera during their abbreviated 1982—83 season, with numer-
ous additional major American and foreign companies quickly following suit.
T h e translation being used in the current production of La Traviata was first
devised at the suggestion of Francesca Zambello, a young, live-wire opera
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director who staged La Traviata during San Francisco's 1983 Fall Season.
l b a r m y o u i n the m e a n t i m e , I h a v e p u t t o g e t h e r this s h o r t g u i d e . 1
have cast my e x a m p l e s predominately in terms of parent-child d y n a m -
ics, f i r s t , b e c a u s e w e c a n all identify w i t h that sort o f r e l a t i o n s h i p ( e v e n
if y o u a r e n o t a p a r e n t , y o u o n c e w e r e a c h i l d ) , a n d s e c o n d , b e c a u s e
y o u c a n u s e this k n o w l e d g e n o t o n l y i n w r i t i n g b u t also i n y o u r v e r b a l
i n t e r a c t i o n s w i t h y o u r o f f s p r i n g (or y o u r b o s s , s p o u s e , f r i e n d , b a n k e r ,
o r the T V r e p a i r m a n ) .
K n o w i n g fallacies will p r e p a r e y o u t o w r i t e incisively a n d logically,
u s i n g s o u n d a r g u m e n t s o r k n o w i n g w h e n t o e m p l o y r h e t o r i c for effect
a n d p e r s u a s i o n ; y o u will a l s o h a v e a n a d v a n t a g e i n a n y a r g u m e n t a n d
y o u w i l l a u t o m a t i c a l l y b e c o m e a m o r e j u d i c i o u s listener a n d r e a d e r o f
p o l i t i c i a n s a n d the d a i l y n e w s .
I N S A N I T Y I S H E R E D I T A R Y : Y O U G E T I T FROM Y O U R KIDS
1. Fallacy of Accent
Mother: P l e a s e d o n ' t leave y o u r c l o t h e s on the floor, dear. W o u l d y o u
kindly pick up your jacket, and don't throw it there again.
Child: It's n o t my j a c k e t , it's my c o a t .
T h e fallacy o f a c c e n t d e l i b e r a t e l y o r u n i n t e n t i o n a l l y p l a c e s the e m -
p h a s i s o n the w r o n g p a r t o f y o u r s e n t e n c e , l e a d i n g y o u t o a r g u e a
p o i n t that is n o t at issue. Or it g i v e s w e i g h t to a m i n o r a s p e c t of y o u r
s t a t e m e n t , c l o u d i n g the m o r e i m p o r t a n t issue. M o v i e a d v e r t i s e r s o f t e n
d e l i b e r a t e l y c o m m i t the fallacy o f a c c e n t . T h e r e v i e w e r w r i t e s , " I f they
g a v e O s c a r s for p o o r a c t i n g a n d s t a g i n g , this m o v i e d e s e r v e s a n O s c a r . "
T h e a d w r i t e r c o n v e n i e n t l y o m i t s p a r t o f that s e n t e n c e a n d a n n o u n c e s
on the m o v i e p a g e that ". . . this m o v i e d e s e r v e s an O s c a r ! " Fallacy of
accent.
K i d s love t h e fallacy o f a c c e n t . W h e n y o u tell t h e m t o s t o p b a n g i n g
o n the table, they c o m p l y b y b a n g i n g o n the w a l l , a n d w h e n y o u ask
" D i d y o u tell y o u r b r o t h e r t o stop s p r a y i n g the h o s e a t the h o u s e ? "
S i s t e r c o m e s b a c k i n s o p p i n g w e t : " Y e s , I told h i m . "
A n d L o r d B y r o n , w h e n t o l d that s t u d e n t s a t C a m b r i d g e w e r e not
a l l o w e d t o k e e p d o g s i n t h e i r r o o m s , o b e y e d the r u l e s a n d c o n f o u n d e d
the d e a n . He k e p t a bear.
2. Generalizations
(a) Hasty
T h e h a s t y g e n e r a l i z a t i o n a s s u m e s a g e n e r a l p r i n c i p l e o n the e v i -
d e n c e o f a few e x a m p l e s .
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(b) Sweeping
A s w e e p i n g g e n e r a l i z a t i o n , c a l l e d in L a t i n dicto simpliciter, r e v e r s e s
that s c h e m e , t a k i n g a g e n e r a l p r i n c i p l e a n d a p p l y i n g i t b r o a d l y w h e r e
it d o e s n o t apply.
Another example:
3. Personal Attack
An ad hominem ( " a g a i n s t the m a n " ) attack d i r e c t s attention away
f r o m the a r g u m e n t t o the p e r s o n m a k i n g the a r g u m e n t . O n e t y p e
takes a d i r e c t , a b u s i v e shot by n a m e c a l l i n g : for e x a m p l e , c r i t i c i z i n g
the t e a c h e r i n s t e a d o f a c c e p t i n g r e s p o n s i b i l i t y for a p o o r g r a d e , o r
c a l l i n g y o u , the p a r e n t , u n f a i r i n s t e a d o f e x a m i n i n g the issue sur-
r o u n d i n g y o u r decision. (See how fallacies overlap? " Y o u are so mean!")
A n o t h e r v e r s i o n of the ad hominem attack is c a l l e d p o i s o n i n g the
well. B e f o r e the p e r s o n has h a d a c h a n c e t o p r e s e n t h e r s e l f o r h e r
a r g u m e n t , this fallacy b e s m i r c h e s h e r r e p u t a t i o n . It is a f o r m of ad
hominem b e c a u s e i t g o e s for the j u g u l a r o f the p e r s o n r a t h e r t h a n the
h e a r t o f the a r g u m e n t .
N o t i c e that the fallacy o f p o i s o n i n g the well o f t e n i n c l u d e s o t h e r
fallacies to b r i n g h o m e its d e v i o u s p o i n t .
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Another example:
L e e I a c o c c a , in his b e s t s e l l i n g a u t o b i o g r a p h y , u s e d a v e i l e d ad homi-
nem a r g u m e n t t o d i s c r e d i t o n e o f his o p p o n e n t s i n the C h r y s l e r bail-
o u t . H e s p e a k s a t l e n g t h o f this c o n g r e s s m a n ' s m a n i p u l a t i o n o f the
m e d i a t o t u r n p e o p l e a g a i n s t a f e d e r a l l o a n g u a r a n t e e , a n d t h e n takes
w h a t was, no doubt, an irresistible swipe. T h i s same c o n g r e s s m a n , he
r e p o r t s , " t h e g r e a t d e f e n d e r o f the A m e r i c a n way o f life, was c o n v i c t e d
t w i c e i n the A b s c a m affair a n d s e n t e n c e d t o a t e r m i n j a i l . H e lost the
e l e c t i o n , a n d w e n t o u t in d i s r e p u t e . . . .
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" P o e t i c j u s t i c e ! " c r o w s I a c o c c a . P e r h a p s , b u t a l s o , i n t e r m s o f his
a r g u m e n t , tu quoque.
W h o the s p e a k e r is or h o w he lives his life is i r r e l e v a n t to the
soundness of an argument.
4. Appeal to Authority
Q u o t i n g an expert to lend credibility to an a r g u m e n t is known as
an a p p e a l to authority, or, in L a t i n , ipse dixit ("he h i m s e l f said it"). It
is a p o w e r f u l p e r s u a d e r :
b e s t r o n g l y a g a i n s t y o u r son o r d a u g h t e r d r i v i n g a t a g e s i x t e e n , for
e x a m p l e , until, o n e a f t e r another, his o r h e r f r i e n d s d r i v e u p i n t h e i r
c a r s , a n d y o u start t o w e a k e n . T h i s i s a n i n d i r e c t a p p e a l t o a u t h o r i t y .
their p a r e n t s (authority) t h i n k it is o k a y to d r i v e at s i x t e e n ; what's
w r o n g with you?
I see the a p p e a l to a u t h o r i t y as a t e e n a g e r ' s s t r o n g e s t suit, e v e n
p l a y i n g o n e p a r e n t a g a i n s t another.
Be wary!
In w r i t i n g , it is o f t e n useful to q u o t e o t h e r p e o p l e to b a c k up y o u r
o w n a r g u m e n t s . I d o i t m y s e l f q u i t e o f t e n t h r o u g h o u t this b o o k . T h e r e
i s n o t h i n g intrinsically w r o n g with q u o t i n g e x p e r t s for c o l o r a n d e v e n
s u p p o r t , b u t b e c a r e f u l that the a r g u m e n t stands o n its o w n m e r i t s
w i t h o u t the p r o p .
5. Bifurcation
A classic e x a m p l e of m a n i p u l a t i o n b a s e d on fallacies is the "either-
o r " fallacy, w h i c h o v e r l o o k s a t h i r d o p t i o n , " n o n e o f the a b o v e . " T h e
c o r r e c t t e r m for it is b i f u r c a t i o n , c o m i n g f r o m the L a t i n bifurcus,
m e a n i n g " t w o - p r o n g e d " (bi is the L a t i n p r e f i x for " t w o " ; furca m e n a s
"fork or b r a n c h " ) . It is the " e i t h e r - y o u - h e l p - m e - w i t h - m y - h o m e w o r k - o r -
I-fail" t y p e o f a r g u m e n t , w h i c h e x c l u d e s the a l t e r n a t i v e " D o y o u r o w n
h o m e w o r k . " " I f y o u d o n ' t b u y me a car, I will be late for w o r k e v e r y
d a y " s i d e s t e p s a t least two o t h e r possibilities: " B u y y o u r s e l f a c a r " o r
" G e t u p e a r l i e r a n d catch the bus." " L e t m e g e t m y e a r s p i e r c e d o r I'll
be a social outcast. N o n e of the kids in s c h o o l will talk to m e . " T h i s
last is also an a p p e a l to pity (see b e l o w ) . Do not g e t t r a p p e d . B i f u r -
c a t i o n forces you t o c h o o s e b e t w e e n two a l t e r n a t i v e s w h e n y o u r c h o i c e s
a r e actually not so l i m i t e d . You t h i n k y o u a r e in a b i n d , but y o u a r e
not. M a k e the d e c i s i o n b a s e d o n its o w n m e r i t s .
Advertisers often make use of bifurcation because it conveniently
gives the c o n s u m e r only t w o c h o i c e s : the o n e , s o m e d i r e c o n s e q u e n c e ;
the other, t o b u y their p r o d u c t . N e w York A i r p u b l i s h e d a n a d s h o w i n g
a c a s t - o f f w e d d i n g r i n g a n d a n o t e f r o m a wife w h o h a d r u n o f f w i t h
a n o t h e r m a n w h i l e h e r h u s b a n d was o n a b u s i n e s s t r i p . H o w sad,
when, "for j u s t $25," he could have taken her with h i m . T h e ad
c o n c l u d e s that this s p e c i a l f a r e is " c h e a p e r t h a n a lawyer."
6. Appeal to Pity
If all else fails, the ad misericordiam ("to m e r c y " ) a r g u m e n t , the
a p p e a l to pity, o f t e n sways.
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7. False Analogy
False a n a l o g y c o m p a r e s t w o activities that a r e alike i n i n s i g n i f i c a n t
a n d trivial w a y s — b u t d i s s i m i l a r i n s i g n i f i c a n t w a y s — i n o r d e r t o a t t a c h
the o n u s o f o n e t o the situation o f the other. False a n a l o g y u s u a l l y
a p p l i e s an e m o t i o n - p a c k e d simile to a less volatile o n e or tries to
r e d u c e the s i g n i f i c a n c e of a h i g h l y c h a r g e d issue by c o m p a r i n g it to a
m u n d a n e o n e . C h i l d r e n u s u a l l y e s c a l a t e the situation u p w a r d , a n d
t h e i r u s e o f false a n a l o g y i s s u b t l e a n d thus p o t e n t . I t c a n b e e n o u g h
t o t h r o w y o u o f f b a l a n c e . O n c e y o u d i s c e r n h o w easily this sort o f
a r g u m e n t s e d u c e s y o u away f r o m the issue a t h a n d , y o u will b e a l e r t
t o i t i n o t h e r a r e a s o f y o u r life a n d o n g u a r d a g a i n s t i t i n y o u r o w n
writing.
I f y o u r s o n a c c u s e s y o u o f c h i l d a b u s e b e c a u s e y o u w o n ' t let h i m
h a v e c a n d y b e f o r e d i n n e r , that i s false a n a l o g y . E s p e c i a l l y b e c a u s e
c h i l d a b u s e i s s u c h a n e m o t i o n a l l y c h a r g e d topic, the issue o f c a n d y
n o w t a k e s o n a w h o l e n e w c o l o r a t i o n — i f y o u allow y o u r s e l f t o b e
s i d e t r a c k e d . L e a r n t o s e p a r a t e the e m o t i o n - p a c k e d issue f r o m the
reality and you learn an important rule of logic.
T h e a r c h b i s h o p o f D u b l i n w a r n e d that i f d i v o r c e b e c a m e l e g a l i n
I r e l a n d , " D i v o r c e w o u l d s p r e a d t h r o u g h I r e l a n d like the r a d i a t i o n t h a t
s t a r t e d a t C h e r n o b y l a n d t h e n c o v e r e d all o f E u r o p e . " T h i s w a s a
p a r t i c u l a r l y p o t e n t i m a g e s i n c e , a f t e r the a c c i d e n t i n Russia, r a d i a t i o n
levels i n I r i s h l a m b h a d i n c r e a s e d five h u n d r e d p e r c e n t , a n d p e o p l e
w e r e s c a r e d . B u t r a d i a t i o n s p r e a d s t h r o u g h i n d i s c r i m i n a t e fallout, a n d
d i v o r c e i s c h o s e n o r not c h o s e n b y p e o p l e i n c o n t r o l o f their o w n lives.
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8. False Cause
T h e fallacy o f false c a u s e o c c u r s w h e n w e c o n f u s e c a u s e a n d effect,
a s s u m i n g that a n e v e n t i s the d i r e c t r e s u l t o f s o m e t h i n g that o c c u r r e d
previously, w h e n no such connection has been established. In Latin, it
is k n o w n as post hoc, ergo propter hoc; t h e n a m e d e s c r i b e s the fallacy
("after this, t h e r e f o r e b e c a u s e o f this").
S u p e r s t i t i o n s a r e o f t e n e x a m p l e s of post hoc:
Walking under a ladder brings bad luck; I knew a man once who walked
under a ladder—two days later, he fell down and broke his neck.
Carrots are good for your eyes and I can prove it. Have your ever seen a
rabbit with glasses?
False c a u s e r e a s o n i n g a b o u n d s i n a d v e r t i s i n g , s u g g e s t i n g s o m e a b -
s o l u t e c o n n e c t i o n b e t w e e n the p r o d u c t a n d a d e s i r e d o u t c o m e . C o m -
p u t e r a d s o f t e n i m p l y that d o i n g well i n s c h o o l i s tied i n w i t h h a v i n g
a h o m e c o m p u t e r , a n d conversely, n o t o w n i n g o n e l e a d s t o f l u n k i n g
o u t . A p a p e r p r o d u c t s a d tells o f a c o n c e r n e d m o t h e r w h o w o r r i e s
t h a t h e r d a u g h t e r c a n ' t c o n c e n t r a t e b e c a u s e she i s t o o fidgety. " I was
s h o c k e d t o find that h a r s h toilet tissue was the c a u s e . " A n d a n a d for
b r a n c e r e a l e x p l a i n s that a m o t h e r s h o u l d not b e a n g r y w i t h h e r
d a u g h t e r for a p o o r r e p o r t c a r d : c o n s t i p a t i o n is at fault. Post hoc, ergo
propter hoc: all o f t h e s e e x a m p l e s c o m m i t the m i s t a k e o f e r r o n e o u s
c a u s a l c o n n e c t i o n . S e q u e n c e d o e s not p r o v e c o n s e q u e n c e .
It is f u n to be a b l e to c a l l fallacies by n a m e (and e s p e c i a l l y u s e f u l to
h a v e t h e L a t i n p h r a s e s h a n d y ) , b u t w h a t w e a r e after h e r e i s r a i s i n g
y o u r consciousness a b o u t the existence of fallacies a n d lapses in l o g i c —
i n y o u r o w n a n d o t h e r p e o p l e ' s w r i t i n g . O n c e you a r e a l e r t t o e v e n a few,
y o u w i l l start t o listen m o r e s h a r p l y t o any a r g u m e n t a n d s e n s e the
i l l o g i c i n y o u r o w n w r i t i n g a n d t h i n k i n g . I f the fallacy y o u d e t e c t d o e s
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n o t fall i n t o o n e o f t h e s e c a t e g o r i e s o r y o u n e e d m o r e i n f o r m a t i o n i n d e -
f i n i n g y o u r t e r m s , c h e c k Make the Most of Your Mind or With Good Reason.
FALLACIES AND THE CRITIC
K n o w i n g a b o u t fallacies h e l p s y o u t o d e a l w i t h the C r i t i c , w h o
c o n s t a n t l y tries t o t h r o w y o u o f f the scent w i t h a r e d h e r r i n g o r t w o —
n o t i n y o u r w r i t i n g b u t i n his d e a l i n g s w i t h y o u , w h i c h a r e a l w a y s less
t h a n s t r a i g h t . For e x a m p l e , w h e n y o u a r e w o r k i n g o n a p i e c e o f w r i t i n g
a n d the Critic b e l e a g u e r s you with, " W h a t took you so l o n g ? " or " Y o u
k n o w y o u ' l l n e v e r a m o u n t t o a n y t h i n g " o r " T h i s will n e v e r fly" o r
" Y o u ' r e g o n n a b e shot d o w n " o r w h a t e v e r , r e m i n d h i m that all o f t h e s e
c o m p l a i n t s a r e i r r e l e v a n t t o the task a t h a n d a n d , ultimately, i r r e l e v a n t
t o t h e q u a l i t y o f t h e w r i t i n g y o u a r e p r e s e n t l y d o i n g . A n y tricks y o u
l e a r n i n d e a l i n g w i t h y o u r k i d s ' illogic o r y o u r o w n c a n s e r v e you well
i n p u t t i n g the C r i t i c b a c k i n p l a c e .
C . S . L e w i s o n c e said t h a t w r i t i n g was like " d r i v i n g s h e e p d o w n a
r o a d . I f t h e r e i s a n y g a t e t o the left o r r i g h t , the r e a d e r s will m o s t
c e r t a i n l y g o i n t o it." K e e p o n the s t r a i g h t a n d n a r r o w i n y o u r t h i n k i n g ,
a n d y o u r w r i t i n g w i l l follow the s a m e d i r e c t p a t h .
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G o i n g to the M o v i e s : Creative
Visualization and Writing
I learned. . . that inspiration does not come like a bolt, nor is it kinetic,
energetic striving, but it comes to us slowly and quietly and all the
time, though we must regularly and every day give it a little chance to
start flowing, prime it with a little solitude and idleness.
—BRENDA UELAND, IF YOU WANT TO WRITE
CREATIVE VISUALIZATION
C r e a t i v e v i s u a l i z a t i o n i s the t e c h n i q u e o f u s i n g y o u r i m a g i n a t i o n t o
c r e a t e i m a g e s a n d f e e l i n g s i n s i d e y o u r h e a d ; it is a p o w e r f u l w a y to
t a p i n t o t h e m e s s a g e c e n t e r o f the r i g h t b r a i n . C r e a t i v e v i s u a l i z a t i o n
i s like g o i n g t o the m o v i e s inside y o u r o w n h e a d . I n t o d a y ' s w o r l d o f
h i g h - p r i c e d e n t e r t a i n m e n t , it is a h a n d y talent to c u l t i v a t e . V i s u a l i z a -
tion i s n o l o n g e r a n e s o t e r i c p r a c t i c e , r e s e r v e d for B u d d h i s t m o n k s
a n d C a l i f o r n i a p s y c h i c s . N o w i t i s i n the m a i n s t r e a m t o see p i c t u r e s i n
y o u r h e a d . It's e v e n in Time m a g a z i n e .
W h e n the A m e r i c a n s w h o were held captive in Iran were relased,
t h e y t o l d o f o v e r c o m i n g the stress o f 4 4 4 d a y s i n c a p t i v i t y t h r o u g h
various strategies. O n e hostage mentally remodeled a whole house,
n a i l b y n a i l , b o a r d b y b o a r d ; a n o t h e r w e n t , i n his m i n d ' s e y e , o n the
O r i e n t E x p r e s s a n d r e c o r d e d m e n t a l l y e v e r y d e t a i l d o w n t o the m e n u .
A c c o r d i n g t o Time, the S t a t e D e p a r t m e n t d o c t o r s a t W i e s b a d e n , G e r -
many, c a l l e d these s u r v i v a l tactics " G o i n g t o the M o v i e s " a n d c o n s i d -
e r e d t h e m g o o d d e v i c e s for " w a r d i n g o f f the h e l p l e s s n e s s that c o m e s
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w i t h captivity."
Not only captives in Iran need to ward off feelings of helplessness,
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P A R T O F Y O U KNOWS T H E ANSWER
D i d y o u e v e r w a l k over, say, to a c u p b o a r d or a d r a w e r a n d f o r g e t
w h a t y o u w e n t t h e r e for a s y o u s t o o d i n front o f it? T h e i n t e r i o r
m o n o l o g u e a t s u c h times u s u a l l y g o e s s o m e t h i n g like this:
" D u m b m e ! W h a t d i d I c o m e o v e r h e r e for? I m u s t b e l o s i n g m y
mind. How dumb!"
W h e n that h a p p e n s t o m e now, I say i n s t e a d , "Wow. W h a t s m a r t
f e e t I h a v e . T h e y k n e w t o c o m e this w a y e v e n t h o u g h I c a n n o l o n g e r
a r t i c u l a t e w h y I am h e r e . "
T h e n I t a k e a d e e p b r e a t h , close my e y e s in a satisfied way, a n d let
the i m a g e o f w h a t I c a m e t o g e t c r o s s b a c k o v e r m y c o r p u s c a l l o s u m
into words.
W h e n w e sit d o w n t o w r i t e , w e a r e o f t e n a t the s t a g e o f " k n o w i n g
b u t not k n o w i n g , " a s Perl a n d E g e n d o r f n a m e i t i n t h e i r study o f the
3
process of creative discovery.
" K n o w i n g b u t n o t k n o w i n g " i s that s e n s e that y o u k n o w w h a t t o say
b u t d o n o t k n o w h o w t o say it. Y o u r feet w e r e s m a r t e n o u g h t o g e t y o u
t o t h e d e s k . Y o u k n e w e n o u g h t o p u l l o u t the p a p e r a n d p i c k u p the
p e n . N o w y o u m u s t s o m e h o w , a s the c o m p u t e r p e o p l e say, " a c c e s s " t h e
n o n v e r b a l i n f o r m a t i o n that will tell y o u w h a t t o w r i t e a n d h o w t o w r i t e
it.
Listen to what I am saying here! It is very important. We h a v e a l r e a d y
s e e n i n c h a p t e r 5 that a t t e n d i n g t o y o u r n o n v e r b a l side, q u i e t i n g d o w n
t h e static a n d l i s t e n i n g t o y o u r i n n e r self, will h e l p y o u g e t i n t o u c h
with y o u r feelings about a particular writing project and what may be
blocking you. W h a t I am suggesting here is even more radical, more
p o w e r f u l . I a m s u g g e s t i n g that the t h o u g h t itself (in n o n v e r b a l f o r m ) ,
t h e s h a p e a n d d i r e c t i o n , the w h o l e p i e c e that y o u k n o w b u t d o not
know, the c o n t e n t as well as the c o n t e x t , c a n be d i s c o v e r e d by this
s a m e pathway. A n d that i s w h a t this c h a p t e r i s a b o u t .
T h e right brain sends messages in terms of pictures and feelings.
Attend t o t h o s e i m a g e s a n d y o u will b e r e w a r d e d w i t h k n o w l e d g e .
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I f y o u a r e w r i t i n g f i c t i o n o r d o i n g c h a r a c t e r sketches o f any k i n d ,
l e a r n i n g t o s e e the w o r l d f r o m b e h i n d a n o t h e r ' s e y e s i s i n v a l u a b l e . B u t
e v e n for t h o s e o f y o u w h o a r e w r i t i n g nonfiction b u s i n e s s letters,
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r e p o r t s , or p r o p o s a l s , this e x e r c i s e is a f u n w a y to k e e p y o u r m o v i e
a p p a r a t u s i n g e a r , t o k e e p all that m i l l i o n - d o l l a r e q u i p m e n t i n g o o d
w o r k i n g order. A s w e will s e e below, i t w i l l a l s o s h a r p e n y o u r wits i n
p r e p a r a t i o n for u s i n g a p o w e r f u l e d i t i n g t o o l : g e t t i n g inside the h e a d
o f the p e r s o n w h o will r e a d y o u r stuff.
Y o u c o u l d be sitting on a p a r k b e n c h or d r i v i n g in the car. Pick a
p e r s o n i n front o f y o u a n d i m a g i n e w h a t i t m i g h t b e like t o e x p e r i e n c e
the w o r l d f r o m his o r h e r p e r s p e c t i v e . W h e r e d i d h e j u s t c o m e f r o m ?
W h e r e i s she g o i n g n e x t ? T u n e i n t o h e r m i n d : t u r n u p the v o l u m e a
bit s o y o u c a n h e a r t h e c o n c e r n s a n d w o r r i e s , the m u t t e r i n g s . Sit d o w n
i n the m o v i e t h e a t e r o f his m i n d for a m o m e n t a n d w a t c h the p i c t u r e s
o n his s c r e e n . D o not force a n y t h i n g , j u s t let the i m a g e s a n d s o u n d s
come.
Here's an e x a m p l e of how it works. W h i l e driving t h r o u g h m o r n i n g
traffic d o w n a b u s y c o m m e r c i a l s t r e e t in t o w n , I saw t w o t h i n g s a l m o s t
s i m u l t a n e o u s l y . O n e was a s i g n in front of a g a s station. In l a r g e
letters i t r e a d , " R E D E Y E I S B A C K ! " A t the s a m e m o m e n t , m y e y e
c a u g h t a m a n s t a n d i n g at a b u s s t o p , w i t h his s h o u l d e r s b e n t a n d his
h e a d d o w n . H e was w e a r i n g a b o w l e r (true!) a n d c a r r y i n g a n u m b r e l l a ,
e v e n t h o u g h i t w a s only o v e r c a s t , not r a i n i n g . H e l o o k e d d e f e a t e d a n d
d i s c o u r a g e d , a s t h o u g h h e w e r e f a c i n g yet a n o t h e r d r e a r y day. B e f o r e
I k n e w w h a t w a s h a p p e n i n g , the t w o i m a g e s c o a l e s c e d . I k e p t on
d r i v i n g , but inside my h e a d was a n e w v o i c e , n o t my o w n . It was h u s k y
and depressed.
"I wish I w e r e R e d E y e . S u r e , he's g o t a foul m o u t h a n d d r i n k s t o o
m u c h , b u t e v e r y b o d y loves h i m . H e c a n g e t away w i t h m u r d e r . R o u g h -
h e w n , b u t d a m n g o o d . T h e y love h i m . T h e y p u t u p a b i g s i g n w h e n
he comes back.
" H a ! N o b o d y c a r e s w h e t h e r I ' m a t w o r k o r not. C a n y o u p i c t u r e
t h e m p u t t i n g up a s i g n for m e ?
" A n d M i l d r e d ! I f 1 h a v e o n e m o r e fight w i t h M i l d r e d g o i n g o u t the
door, I ' m not. . . "
M i l d r e d ! T h a t ' s w h e n I hit the b r a k e s . W h o let M i l d r e d in?
Y o u g e t the i d e a . Y o u s e e h o w e a s y it is.
By the way, I do not n e c e s s a r i l y r e c o m m e n d that y o u m a k e any
a t t e m p t t o verify y o u r c i n e m a t i c s n o o p i n g . S e v e r a l m o n t h s a f t e r the
e x p e r i e n c e d e s c r i b e d a b o v e , I was i n that v e r y g a s station b u y i n g g a s .
S a i d I , " I ' d like t o m e e t y o u r m e c h a n i c , the o n e y o u call R e d E y e . "
T h e attendant looked at me queerly.
I c o n t i n u e d . " A few m o n t h s b a c k , y o u p u t u p a b i g s i g n w h e n h e
r e t u r n e d . ' R e d E y e Is B a c k ' it said." I g a v e my s h o u l d e r s a little self-
e f f a c i n g s h r u g . " I ' d j u s t like t o m e e t the g u y . "
" L a d y . T h e r e a i n ' t n o g u y n a m e d R e d E y e . R e d E y e i s the n a m e o f
a n oil. W e ' v e b e e n o u t o f i t for a w h i l e , a n d s o w e p u t u p a s i g n w h e n
we g o t it b a c k in stock. S o r r y to d i s a p p o i n t y o u . "
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E X E R C I S E 17: T H E SUCCESS S C E N A R I O
Professional writers call it writer's block, but panic before a blank page is
not exclusive to writers who are professional. Writing anxiety can immobilize
anyone: business executives behind in correspondence, students struggling
over term papers, lawyers laboring over legal briefs, nurses or social workers
dreading report deadlines. People with writing apprehension have been known
to let it determine the paths of their lives, choosing majors in college, and
later jobs, that have few writing demands. Some let it limit their earning and
advancement potential. Or those who have been writing successfully for years
suddenly find their creative juices run dry. Others have stories inside them
that they want to tell, but they just can't get the words out. This workshop is
for all o f you.
Perhaps you've even taken some courses, or read some books that have given
you hints and tips on breaking out of this syndrome. This workshop does
more than give tips and strategies to fight the immediate problem—it arms
you with tools to be your own best strategist from now on. Discover why you
can't write on those days when the writing drags, and why you can write on
those days when everything flows. Armed with that information, your writing
will be productive for the rest of your life.
If you ever hesitate in writing, this workshop is for you.
We are all part of a family here, and as any growing family knows, there
are times when we need to pitch in together to make changes necessary for
the betterment of the whole.
A s h e r e a d it, i t p l e a s e d h i m . H e w r o t e i t d o w n .
H e c o u l d h a r d l y w a i t t o g e t b a c k t o his office a n d m a k e that m e m o
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a reality. H e m a d e a few m i n o r c h a n g e s i n w h a t h e h a d c o p i e d f r o m
his m i n d ' s m e m o a n d sent i t o u t t o the p e o p l e i n his c o m p a n y the n e x t
day. G u e s s w h a t ? T h e r e s u l t s w e r e a l m o s t e x a c t l y a s h e h a d e n v i s i o n e d
t h e m . O n c e a g a i n , his c o m p a n y w a s a p l e a s a n t p l a c e t o w o r k , a n d a n
almost tangible team spirit prevailed.
E X E R C I S E 18: C A R R Y Y O U R P E R F E C T W R I T I N G E N V I R O N -
MENT WHEREVER YOU GO
E X E R C I S E 19: B E C O M E T H E A U D I E N C E
I do all I can to prepare for a production ahead of time, with reading and
thinking and working with designers. But once the rehearsals begin 1 have to
turn into someone else too. Without forgetting what it is I set out to do, I
must become like a member of the audience, see it all as they will see it, so
that I can help the singers know what is the effect that we make. What they
bring to it now is what matters most, because it is only that which makes it all
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come together and come to life.
E v e n t h o u g h e d i t i n g is b a s i c a l l y a l e f t - b r a i n e d task, the r i g h t c a n
c o n t r i b u t e i n its s t r e n g t h t o m a k e the task easier, m o r e p l e a s a n t , m o r e
f u n — a n d m o r e e f f e c t i v e . R e m e m b e r the g o a l i n w r i t i n g o n b o t h sides
o f t h e b r a i n i s t o g e t that c o r p u s c a l l o s u m c r a c k l i n g , a n d this e x e r c i s e
i s o n e s u r e way t o m a k e that h a p p e n .
I n c h a p t e r 8 I t o l d y o u t o b e c o m e the a u d i e n c e b e f o r e e d i t i n g a n d
r e a d y o u r p i e c e a s t h o u g h y o u w e r e s e e i n g i t for the first time. C r e a t i v e
v i s u a l i z a t i o n b u i l d s a u d i e n c e a w a r e n e s s in a p r o f o u n d way. I s u g g e s t
t h a t y o u h a v e a little f u n w i t h this. U s i n g the a p p r o a c h o u t l i n e d i n
E x e r c i s e 1 6 , g e t i n s i d e the m i n d o f y o u r i n t e n d e d r e a d e r . Y o u m i g h t
k n o w specifically w h o t h a t p e r s o n w i l l be (such as a difficult p e r s o n to
w h o m y o u h a v e d r a f t e d a t a c t f u l letter), or it m i g h t j u s t be a g e n e r i c
type.
So quiet d o w n inside. Take a d e e p breath. ("Your breathing is your
g r e a t e s t f r i e n d , " says d e M e l l o , q u o t i n g a T i b e t a n s a g e . " R e t u r n t o i t
i n all y o u r t r o u b l e s , a n d y o u will f i n d c o m f o r t a n d g u i d a n c e . " ) C l o s e
y o u r e y e s , r e l a x , a n d b r i n g t o m i n d the p e r s o n w h o will b e r e a d i n g
your piece.
T h i n k o f w h e r e h e m i g h t b e w h e n h e r e c e i v e s this letter, w h a t she
m i g h t b e d o i n g r i g h t b e f o r e this m e m o c r o s s e s h e r d e s k . I s the j u d g e
r e a d i n g y o u r b r i e f i n his c h a m b e r s ; h a s y o u r boss g o n e t h r o u g h a
stack of infuriating papers and finally worked her way d o w n to your
p r o p o s a l ; i s the e d i t o r u p t o h e r e w i t h q u e r i e s a n d now o p e n i n g u p
yours?
N o t i c e the b o d y p o s t u r e a n d the e x p r e s s i o n o n the f a c e . W h a t
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E X E R C I S E 20: C O N F E R W I T H E X P E R T
O n c e y o u l e a r n , u s i n g any o f the f o r m s a b o v e , t o t a p i n t o y o u r
c r e a t i v e center, ask for a g u i d e t o m e e t y o u t h e r e . T h i s g u i d e m i g h t
arrive in the form of a friend or an animal or someone famous in
y o u r field. I like to invite J o h n Fowles, G e o f f r e y C h a u c e r , or J a n e
A u s t e n t o h e l p m e e d i t . J a n e A u s t e n , i n p a r t i c u l a r , was a g r e a t f r i e n d
t o m e d u r i n g the e d i t i n g stages o f this b o o k . A t o n e p o i n t , w h e n I w a s
f e e l i n g o v e r w h e l m e d b y the s h e e r a m o u n t o f w o r k a h e a d o f m e , I t o o k
a breather. I m o v e d to a c o m f o r t a b l e c h a i r (my R u m i n a t i n g C h a i r , in
fact). W h a t w o u l d J a n e A u s t e n d o ? I w o n d e r e d . I k n o w she r e w o r k e d
h e r novels m e t i c u l o u s l y r i g h t u p t o h e r d e a t h . I s l o w e d m y b r e a t h i n g ,
letting relaxation flow over me. In my imagination, I was w a l k i n g
a l o n g a forest path, an actual spot that is a favorite c o m f o r t i n g
place. T h e r e are majestic e v e r g r e e n s all a r o u n d , but it is not a
closed or confined place, nor is it dark and forbidding. T h e trees
line a p a t h that b e c k o n s f o r w a r d t o a n e x p a n s i v e vista. T h e s u n
was s t r e a m i n g a l o n g that p a t h in an i n v i t a t i o n a l way, a n d it was
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f r o m this c l e a r i n g that J a n e A u s t e n c a m e f o r w a r d t o g r e e t m e . S h e
hailed me warmly. She was dressed in an Empire gown of antique
i v o r y h u e , w i t h a n u m b e r sash b e n e a t h the b o d i c e . S h e was b u s i n e s s -
like b u t k i n d .
S h e t o o k m e b y the e l b o w a n d , d e m o n s t r a t i n g for m e e v e n a s she
l e d m e t o follow, she said, " H e n r i e t t e . L i k e this. L o o k a t y o u r feet.
O n e s t e p . G o o d . N o w the n e x t s t e p . G o o d . N o w another. S t e p b y s t e p .
Y o u c a n d o it. O n e step a t a t i m e . C o m e o n — " (still u r g i n g m e o n b y
m y e l b o w ) " — I ' m w i t h y o u now. S t e p b y step."
I w e n t b a c k t o m y w o r k r e n e w e d , a n d i n s t e a d o f k e e p i n g the g i a n t
m a s s o f raw u n w o r k e d p a g e s o f the c o m p l e t e m a n u s c r i p t o n m y d e s k ,
I p u t the b u l k of it a s i d e a n d t o o k o n e c h a p t e r at a t i m e , o n e p a g e at
a t i m e . W h e n e v e r I f a l t e r e d , I said, " L o o k at y o u r feet, n o t a h e a d .
O n e foot a f t e r the other. C o m e o n , o n e f o o t — t h a t ' s i t — a f t e r the
other." I t w a s g o o d . a d v i c e . I a m g r a t e f u l t o J a n e A u s t e n for p a s s i n g
it o n .
A n o t h e r t i m e , I i n v i t e d J o h n Fowles t o m e e t m e i n the l i b r a r y o f m y
m i n d , and when he showed u p , he had b r o u g h t a friend, Tony B u z a n .
T o n y w a s e x a c t l y the fellow I n e e d e d to talk to then, so I was flabber-
g a s t e d a n d d e l i g h t e d that J o h n h a d b r o u g h t h i m along.
M a u r e e n M u r d o c h , in h e r b o o k Spinning Inward, tells of u s i n g a
t e c h n i q u e w i t h c h i l d r e n that she calls " S k i l l R e h e a r s a l w i t h a M a s t e r
T e a c h e r . " T h e r e s u l t s a r e a s t o n i s h i n g . " C h i l d r e n r e p o r t i n v o k i n g Pele
to improve soccer kicks, Haydn to tutor piano, and Mark Twain to put
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s o m e h u m o r i n t o their w r i t i n g , " she r e l a t e s .
I n v i t e m e , i f y o u d o n ' t m i n d y o u r w o r k b e i n g a bit c a v a l i e r i n s p o t s .
I'll be g l a d to h e l p y o u in any way I c a n .
C h u c k L o c h , i n a n article m e n t i o n e d earlier, s u g g e s t s a n i n t r i g u i n g
v a r i a t i o n o f this e x e r c i s e . H i s i d e a i s t o " i m a g i n e y o u r s e l f g o i n g b a c k
i n t i m e , b a c k t o a n o t h e r lifetime w h e n y o u w e r e a f a m o u s w r i t e r o f
t h e past," T h e m o r e v i v i d y o u c a n m a k e the s c e n e , the better. " F e e l
y o u r s e l f in that writer's study, sitting at that writer's d e s k , t a k i n g p e n
i n h a n d , w r i t i n g a 'lost' m a n u s c r i p t . " T h e n all y o u n e e d t o d o i s w r i t e
t h e w o r d s a l o n g w i t h the c e l e b r a t e d a u t h o r a n d p r o d u c e y o u r o w n
m a s t e r p i e c e . L o c h g i v e s s e v e r a l e x a m p l e s o f students w h o h a d s u c c e s s -
fully e m p l o y e d this p l a y f u l t e c h n i q u e , a n d h e o n c e told m e that h e
u s e s i t i n his o w n w r i t i n g .
T h e s e i d e a s , a n d o t h e r s like t h e m , w o r k , a c c o r d i n g t o L o c h , b e c a u s e
t h e y " g e n e r a t e s t r o n g s y n c h r o n i z e d b r a i n w a v e s , " w h i c h e m u l a t e the
p a t t e r n , c o n f i r m e d b y r e s e a r c h , o f the electric w a v e activity i n the
brain d u r i n g p e a k moments of creative inspiration. Such exercises
" r e e s t a b l i s h the b a l a n c e b e t w e e n b o t h sides o f the b r a i n . T h e y r e c r e a t e
t h e b r a i n w a v e p a t t e r n for c r e a t i v e i n s p i r a t i o n i n w h i c h all p a r t s w o r k
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together."
I n o t h e r w o r d s , y o u a r e w r i t i n g o n b o t h sides o f y o u r b r a i n .
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A PARTING WORD
We h a v e a p a r t i n g e x p r e s s i o n in o u r f a m i l y that I w o u l d like to
s h a r e w i t h y o u . W h e n o u r c h i l d r e n have s t u d i e d h a r d for a test, o r
w o r k e d l o n g h o u r s on a d r a m a t i c recital, or p r e p a r e d c a r e f u l l y for a
p r e s e n t a t i o n o f a n y sort, w e d o n o t s e n d t h e m o f f w i t h t h e u s u a l
" G o o d l u c k ! " T h e y h a v e w o r k e d h a r d for w h a t e v e r t r i u m p h awaits
t h e m , a n d their w o r k n e e d s t o b e a c k n o w l e d g e d a n d v a l i d a t e d . T h e y
h a v e u s e d p a r t o f their b r a i n that was theirs t o c l a i m . L u c k h a s n o t h i n g
t o d o w i t h it.
W o r k i n g t h r o u g h the e x e r c i s e s i n this b o o k t o o k d e d i c a t i o n a n d
c o m m i t m e n t o n y o u r p a r t , a n d w h a t e v e r was r e v e a l e d was talent y o u
h a d i n y o u all a l o n g . T h e w o r l d o f f l u e n t , p r o d u c t i v e , o n - t i m e w r i t i n g
is at y o u r c o m m a n d . It's a l r e a d y y o u r s . It's a l r e a d y t h e r e .
T h e h u m a n m i n d h a s all k i n d s o f s o f t w a r e w e a r e not u s i n g , simply
b e c a u s e n o o n e e v e r s h o w e d u s how. R e c l a i m y o u r b i r t h r i g h t ! A n d
when you do, give yourself tremendous credit. Give yourself a big pat
on the back. S e n d y o u r s e l f off with a b i g smile on y o u r face and a
s p r i n g i n y o u r s t e p . You a r e w o n d e r f u l . Q u i t e brilliant. G e n i u s class.
A n d i t w a s t h e r e all a l o n g . W h a t a m a r v e l y o u a r e !
S e n d y o u r s e l f off with these words of praise and a c k n o w l e d g m e n t
r i n g i n g i n y o u r e a r s . B e f o r e y o u b e g a n r e a d i n g this b o o k , you h a d
e n o r m o u s talent that y o u b r o u g h t t o the w o r k . N o w y o u k n o w h o w t o
g e t at it. It is o n l y the b e g i n n i n g . A time c a p s u l e of i n t e r n a l c o m b u s -
tion i s p l a n t e d inside y o u . G o for it, 100 p e r c e n t !
G o o d skill!
A P P E N D I X 1
W h o l e - B r a i n e d Spelling
I h a v e a f r i e n d w h o h a s t a u g h t s p e l l i n g in h i g h s c h o o l for twenty
y e a r s . He b e g i n s e a c h s e m e s t e r by s a y i n g , " S p e l l i n g is a v e r y i m p o r t a n t
i n d i c a t o r . I f y o u consistently, a s s u r e d l y s p e l l c o r r e c t l y 100 p e r c e n t o f
the t i m e , i t i s a n i n d i c a t i o n that y o u a r e a n e x c e l l e n t speller. O n the
o t h e r h a n d , i f y o u consistently m i s s p e l l w o r d s , o r d o n o t t r u s t y o u r
s p e l l i n g , it is an i n d i c a t i o n that y o u a r e not an e x c e l l e n t speller."
In other words, g o o d spelling has nothing to do with being "smart"
o r " d u m b " ; i n fact, m a n y g r e a t t h i n k e r s h a v e b e e n t e r r i b l e s p e l l e r s .
S o f i r s t g e t rid o f a n y m o r a l j u d g m e n t s y o u m i g h t h a v e a b o u t y o u r s e l f
i f y o u a r e a p o o r o r fair-to- m i d d l i n g speller. G o o d s p e l l i n g simply h a s
t o d o w i t h y o u r v i s u a l m e m o r y a n d how b r i g h t l y y o u c a n t u n e i t u p ,
a n d that is a skill that e v e r y o n e c a n master. Y o u are n o t d o o m e d , y o u
a r e n o t " d u m b . " Y o u n e e d n o t r e s i g n y o u r s e l f t o y o u r fate o r w a s t e
t i m e l o o k i n g u p w o r d s . A n d y o u d o not h a v e t o g o b a c k t o s c h o o l all
o v e r a g a i n a n d g e t r e a d y for w e e k l y s p e l l i n g tests.
W h y i m p r o v e ? First, for c o n f i d e n c e a n d s e l f - e s t e e m , a n d for the
t i m e saved f r o m l o o k i n g w o r d s u p . A l s o , a n i m p r o v e d v i s u a l m e m o r y
i s u s e f u l for o t h e r t h i n g s a s w e l l . I f y o u g e t i n s h a p e for r u n n i n g , the
i n c r e a s e d l e g s t r e n g t h will h e l p y o u i n b i c y c l i n g , t o o . V i s u a l s p e l l i n g
r a i s e s y o u r a w a r e n e s s o f the i m p o r t a n c e a n d effectiveness o f v i s u a l
memory.
VISUAL MEMORY
K I N E S T H E T I C MEMORY
T o i m p l a n t the s p e l l i n g i n y o u r k i n e s t h e t i c m e m o r y , w r i t e i t i n the
air, u s i n g y o u r w h o l e a r m , w i t h two f i n g e r s e x t e n d e d . W r i t e i t o n the
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WORDS T O W A T C H O U T FOR
I f s p e l l i n g i s a crisis p r o b l e m for y o u o r o n e o f y o u r c h i l d r e n , y o u
m a y be p l e a s e d to k n o w a b o u t an i n t r i g u i n g b o o k , The Reading Teacher's
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Book of Lists, w h i c h p r o v i d e s , a m o n g o t h e r lists, c o m p u t e r w o r d s ,
s c i e n c e w o r d s , a n d the " 1 , 0 0 0 M o s t C o m m o n W o r d s i n the E n g l i s h
L a n g u a g e . " T h e a u t h o r s c l a i m that this last list m a k e s u p a b o u t 9 0
p e r c e n t o f all w r i t t e n m a t e r i a l .
The Book of Lists a l s o c o n t a i n s a s e c t i o n on " S p e l l i n g D e m o n s " ; w o r d s
f r e q u e n t l y m i s s p e l l e d b y s t u d e n t s . O f the 3 9 2 w o r d s listed, I h a v e
s e l e c t e d 2 1 0 that also p l a g u e a d u l t s , a n d I h a v e a d d e d a few m o r e that
s e e m t o c r o p u p o f t e n i n the p a p e r s I r e v i e w for c o m p a n i e s . S k i p the
o n e s that look c l e a r l y r i g h t to y o u . P u t the o t h e r s on strips of p a p e r .
H a v e s o m e o n e h o l d t h e m a n d flash t h e m for y o u , o r m o u n t t h e m o n
the w a l l a n d t h e n follow the steps o u t l i n e d a b o v e t o i m p l a n t t h e m
firmly in y o u r visual and kinesthetic memory.
It is g r e a t to g e t y o u r k i d s i n v o l v e d in this, b e c a u s e it will h e l p t h e m
w h i l e h e l p i n g y o u . H a v e t h e m c h e c k the list t h e m s e l v e s , a n d h e l p t h e m
m a k e u p t h e i r o w n strips. T h e w h o l e activity will b e less t h r e a t e n i n g
i f y o u a r e a l s o d o i n g it.
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M O S T C O M M O N L Y MISSPELLED W O R D S
E v e n m o r e effective t h a n c o n s u l t i n g r e a d y - m a d e lists i s g e n e r a t i n g
y o u r o w n p e r s o n a l list o f s p e l l i n g d e m o n s . S i n c e they a r e d e m o n s , I
call my list t h e S p e l l h o l e .
I k e e p a r u n n i n g tally in the b a c k of my P r o g r e s s L o g . (I c o u l d
n e v e r r e m e m b e r w h e t h e r occurred h a d t w o c's a n d t w o r's or o n e c a n d
o n e r, a n d fascinate a l w a y s l o o k e d funny.) I j o t d o w n any w o r d s that
a n n o y m e , e s p e c i a l l y t h e o n e s that I l o o k u p i n the d i c t i o n a r y b e c a u s e
t h e y do not " l o o k r i g h t " arid t h e n find to my frustration that I s p e l l e d
r i g h t in the first p l a c e . I k e e p a stack of p a p e r strips, 8V2 X 2V4" (a
s t a n d a r d 8V2 X 1 1 " s h e e t c u t i n t o q u a r t e r s ) , a n d a w h i t e c a r d b o a r d
" c o v e r , " t h e s a m e s i z e , in my t o p d e s k drawer. O n c e a w e e k , I take the
list f r o m m y l o g , p r i n t e a c h w o r d o n a s e p a r a t e s t r i p , a n d g o t h r o u g h
t h e s t e p s o u t l i n e d e a r l i e r until the w o r d is solidly at h o m e in my v i s u a l
memory.
A f t e r a w h i l e , j u s t to show off, y o u will w a n t to test y o u r n e w - f o u n d
a c u i t y a n d f l e x y o u r m e n t a l m u s c l e s . S o t h r o w i n a few o f w h a t the
Book of Lists a u t h o r s call " w i s e g u y s " w o r d s , like t h e s e :
O r , t w o o f m y favorites:
triskaidecaphobia (fear o f the n u m b e r t h i r t e e n )
pachycephalosaurus (thick-headed d i n o s a u r with a minute brain; h e n c e ,
a large, dim-witted person).
Y o u w i l l b e d e l i g h t e d t o f i n d that, o n c e p u t i n y o u r v i s u a l m e m o r y ,
t h e s e w o r d s a r e as easy to r e c a l l as is, for e x a m p l e , k n o w i n g for all
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t i m e t h a t occurred h a s two r's a n d two c's.
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W r i t i n g w i t h a w o r d p r o c e s s o r is a w h o l e - b r a i n e d e x p e r i e n c e . In the
b e g i n n i n g , w h e n y o u f i r s t g e t y o u r c o m p u t e r , y o u n e e d t o take a left-
b r a i n e d , l o g i c a l a p p r o a c h a n d follow the s e q u e n c e o f steps. B u t the
l o n g e r y o u c o n t i n u e to a p p r o a c h it as a l e f t - b r a i n e d task (the way the
c o m p u t e r m a n u a l s w a n t y o u to), the m o r e f r u s t r a t i n g i t b e c o m e s .
Finally, y o u let g o a n d r e c o g n i z e the c o m p u t e r for the truly r i g h t -
b r a i n e d , s p o n t a n e o u s , a n d p l a y f u l tool that i t is. Y o u b u r n the m a n u a l ,
o r y o u a t least d e c i d e that r e a d i n g i t s e q u e n t i a l l y t h w a r t s y o u r efforts
to be friends with y o u r machine.
T h e c o m p u t e r i s v e r y literal, b u t a n y s u c c e s s f u l h a n d l i n g o f i t n e e d s
t o b e i n t u i t i v e . K n o w i n g this h a s h e l p e d m e o u t o f m a n y a s n a g . W h e n
t h i n g s go awry, I say, " W h a t d o e s the c o m p u t e r t h i n k I a s k e d it to
d o ? " a n d the a n s w e r gets m e d i r e c t l y t o the h e a r t o f it.
M a n y p e o p l e e x c l a i m n e w f l u e n c y w h e n they use a w o r d - p r o c e s s i n g
p r o g r a m , a n d t h e n g i v e the c o m p u t e r the c r e d i t for t h e i r prolific
o u t p u t . When it comes to words, it's a matter of who's to be master, that's all.
T h e s a m e r u l e a p p l i e s t o c o m p u t e r - g e n e r a t e d w o r d s . You a r e the o n e
t h i n k i n g u p the w o r d s . S o the q u e s t i o n is, w h a t c a n y o u r n e w f l u e n c y
w i t h a c o m p u t e r tell y o u a b o u t the w a y y o u r b r a i n f u n c t i o n s ? W h a t c a n
y o u l e a r n a b o u t y o u r s e l f a n d h o w you o p e r a t e that will t r a n s f e r o v e r
t o w r i t i n g away f r o m the c o m p u t e r ? ( H i n t : i t has t o d o w i t h the C r i t i c . )
M a y b e i t i s a s s i m p l e a s the f r e e d o m o f s u s p e n d i n g j u d g m e n t , e i t h e r
b e c a u s e o f y o u r c o m p u t e r ' s d e l e t e f u n c t i o n , w h i c h gives y o u the f r e e -
d o m t o w r i t e j u n q u e , o r p e r h a p s its ability t o m o v e b l o c k s o f t e x t
a r o u n d , which gives you permission to write nonsequentially. Maybe it
is the s e n s e of p r o l i f e r a t i o n y o u get as y o u w a t c h a h i g h - s p e e d p r i n t e r
r e e l o u t p a g e a f t e r p a g e o f copy. T h e r e ' s a healthy s e n s e o f a b u n d a n c e
h e r e , a s e c u r e " t h e r e ' s - m o r e - w h e r e - t h a t - c a m e - f r o m " f e e l i n g that h e l p s
immeasurably in editing.
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T h e s e are useful points to know about yourself and what works best
for y o u . W i l l i a m Zinsser, in Writing with a Word Processor, reveals that
his p r o c e s s o f w r i t i n g , e v e n w i t h a c o m p u t e r , still i n c l u d e s e d i t i n g a s
h e g o e s a l o n g , s o that's w h a t w o r k s b e s t for h i m . H i s style i s s m o o t h
a n d i n v i t a t i o n a l ; I e n v y his r e s u l t s , if n o t his a p p r o a c h .
C o m p a r i n g Z i n s s e r ' s p r o c e s s to that of D o n a l d M u r r a y is a lesson in
d i f f e r e n c e s . Personally, I am of the D o n a l d M u r r a y s c h o o l . I love his
c o n c e p t o f w r i t i n g a s the' " m o m e n t o f s u r p r i s e " that n e e d s t o b e
c e l e b r a t e d a n d a n t i c i p a t e d . T h a t i s the m o m e n t a t w h i c h the w r i t e r
l e a r n s w h a t h e d i d n o t e v e n k n o w h e h a d t o l e a r n . " W r i t e r s a r e , like
all artists, r a t i o n a l i z e r s o f a c c i d e n t , " says M u r r a y . " T h e y f i n d o u t w h a t
t h e y a r e d o i n g a f t e r t h e y have d o n e it." M u r r a y s u g g e s t s that w r i t i n g
i s b e s t a c c o m p l i s h e d w h e n w e g o a t i t w i t h "this p u r p o s e f u l u n k n o w -
i n g , for w r i t i n g i s n o t the r e p o r t i n g o f w h a t w a s d i s c o v e r e d , b u t the
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a c t o f e x p l o r a t i o n itself." T h e f r e e d o m o f the w o r d p r o c e s s o r l e n d s
i t s e l f brilliantly t o this p l e a s u r a b l e d i s c o v e r y , this p l a y f u l p l a n n e d
spontaneity.
D r . P e t e r S c h a r f raises the p r o v o c a t i v e q u e s t i o n " W i l l w r i t i n g o n a
w o r d p r o c e s s o r c h a n g e the aura o f b o o k s , c h a n g e the smell o f a g o o d
b o o k ? " I t h i n k not, a s l o n g a s w e r e m e m b e r w h o i s i n c h a r g e . T h e
h u m a n i t y that c o m e s t h r o u g h in any g o o d w r i t i n g will be there whether
i t p o u r s forth f r o m a n O l i v e t t i o r a n A p p l e .
• It is a l s o p o s s i b l e to k e e p on e a c h d i s k s u c h h a n d y files as B 4 P R O
( B e f o r e P r o c r a s t i n a t i o n ) , w h i c h a l r e a d y lists for y o u the q u e s t i o n s
s u g g e s t e d i n c h a p t e r 6 for the B P entry. T h e n , i f y o u f i n d y o u r s e l f
p r o c r a s t i n a t i n g , call u p the f i l e r i g h t i n t o the m i d d l e o f y o u r text,
a n s w e r the q u e s t i o n s , a n d c a r r y o n .
• Y o u m i g h t w a n t a l s o to set up a file that k e e p s a r u n n i n g tally of
w o r d s y o u n e e d t o b e r e m i n d e d t o i n c o r p o r a t e into y o u r w r i t i n g . I n
my c a s e , I c a l l t h e file A u d i t o r y , since I n e e d to r e m i n d m y s e l f to u s e
m o r e a u d i t o r y v o c a b u l a r y . Periodically, I a d d n e w w o r d s to this file,
especially if I come across useful additions in my reading of auditory
a u t h o r s . W h e n I c o m e to final e d i t i n g of a p i e c e , I call up this file to
p r o v i d e s u g g e s t i o n s for s u b s t i t u t i o n s . I f y o u a r e a n a u d i t o r y learner,
you m i g h t want to create a Visual or Active word file.
• I h a v e a l s o c r e a t e d a s p e l l i n g file, w h i c h I u s e to flag a n y w o r d s I
n e e d to verify. If I h a v e a n y d o u b t of a w o r d , I a d d that w o r d to my
list of s p e l l i n g d e m o n s . I d a t e my Waterloo w o r d s a n d , o n c e a w e e k ,
p r i n t the f i l e a n d c o p y e a c h w o r d o n t o strips for v i s u a l i z a t i o n , a s
d e t a i l e d i n a p p e n d i x 1 . T h e n I c a n e r a s e the f i l e a n d start a n e w e a c h
w e e k or, for my o w n satisfaction, c r e a t e a b a c k - u p file that r e t a i n s all
t h e o n c e - p r o b l e m w o r d s , so I c a n note h o w far I h a v e c o m e . I k e e p a
f r e s h file for m y w e e k l y w o r d s .
• M o r e s o p h i s t i c a t e d p r o g r a m s a r e a v a i l a b l e that will h e l p y o u d i a -
g r a m i n a free-flow p a t t e r n s i m i l a r t o b r a n c h i n g , a n d t h e r e a r e p r o -
g r a m s t h a t w i l l h e l p y o u e d i t , a l e r t i n g y o u t o passive v o i c e a n d c l u t t e r
i n y o u r p r o s e . T h e r e a r e e v e n p r o g r a m s t h a t will e l e c t r o n i c a l l y c h e c k
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y o u r F o g I n d e x a n d g i v e y o u t h e g r a d e level o f y o u r a u d i e n c e .
A n d , o f c o u r s e , any o f the e x e r c i s e s i n this b o o k c o u l d easily b e
u s e d in conjunction with a w o r d p r o c e s s o r . B r a n c h i n g a n d c o m p u t e r s ,
for e x a m p l e , w o r k h a n d i n h a n d . B r a n c h o u t all t h e p o i n t s y o u w a n t
t o c o v e r o n a s h e e t o f p a p e r b e f o r e y o u start, a n d simply k e e p that
b r a n c h e d o u t l i n e n e x t t o y o u r m o n i t o r a s y o u w o r k . M a n y s t u d e n t s tell
m e that p r e p a r i n g that s i n g l e s h e e t b e f o r e b e g i n n i n g w o r k o n t h e
w o r d p r o c e s s o r h a s e x p e d i t e d their w r i t i n g considerably. B r a n c h i n g
d o e s s o m e o f the " c u t - a n d - p a s t e " w o r k for y o u i n a d v a n c e b y establish-
i n g a p a t t e r n for y o u r r a n d o m t h o u g h t s .
N o m a t t e r h o w m a n y fancy p r o g r a m s y o u f i n d , n o m a t t e r how
w o n d e r f u l y o u b e l i e v e y o u r c o m p u t e r t o b e , n e v e r lose s i g h t o f the fact
t h a t t h e f u n c t i o n o f the c o m p u t e r i s t o h e l p y o u d o faster w h a t y o u
already do well. W h e n you ruminate, w h e n you rapidwrite, w h e n you
revise—whether with paper and pen or at a keyboard—you are busy
p r o c e s s i n g w o r d s i n the u l t i m a t e a n d b e s t w o r d p r o c e s s o r o f all, the
human mind.
Notes
1. Carl Sagan, The Dragons of Eden: Speculations on the Evolution of Human Intelligence
(New York: Random House, 1977), 16.
1. I refer you to Buzan, Use Both Sides of Your Brain, especially the chapter "Brain
Patterns—Advanced Methods and Uses," pages 97 to 107.
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1. John Leo, "How the Hostages Came Through," Time, February 9, 1981, 52.
2. It sounds more like something Yogi Berra might say, but, according to Time, August
15, 1983, the remark belongs to Wohlfbrd.
3. Sondra Perl and Arthur Egendorf, "The Process of Creative Discovery: Theory,
Research, and Implications for Teaching," in Donald McQuade, ed., Linguistics,
Stylistics, and the Teaching of Composition, Studies in Contemporary Language, No. 2,
University of Akron, Department of English, 1979, 118-34. The underlying thesis
of their research is that you have the answer inside your own head without knowing
(yet) how to articulate it. Perl and Egendorf point out that "many thinkers since Kant
have claimed that all valid thought and expression are rooted in the wider realm of
pre-representational experience." Yet, "for all their concern with the realm beyond,
even such powerful thinkers as Wittgenstein and Heidegger have not made clear how
we have this realm available to us."
4. Eugene T. Gendlin and Linda Olsen, "The Use of Imagery in Experiential Focusing,"
Psychotherapy: Theory, Research and Practice (Winter 1970): 221-23.
5. Chuck Loch, "How to Feed Your Brain and Develop Your Creativity," Writer's Digest,
vol. 61, no. 2, (February 1981), 20-25.
6. Francois Rochaix, the stage director of the Seattle Opera's production of Die Walkiire,
quoted one week before opening night in the Weekly, July 1 7 - 2 3 , 1985, 35.
7. These were some of the responses from a group of third-graders: "I was with Haydn
again today. He told me 1 must practice more to get better. He said that I must look
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at the notes and then I would get a new book." "As I breathed in I felt like I was
going down the steps. Then I found myself going into the sea and Neptune taught
me how to swim." "I wanted to practice running and my teacher was Bruce Jenner.
He said, 'Keep your pace and keep running.' " Reprinted with permission from
Maureen Murdoch, M.A., M.F.C.C.; Spinning Inward, p. 79; 121 Wavecrest Avenue,
Venice, CA 90291.
8. Loch, "How to Feed Your Brain," 25.
A P P E N D I X 2: W R I T I N G ON B O T H SIDES OF T H E B R A I N W I T H A WORD
PROCESSOR
1. Donald Murray, "Writing and Teaching for Surprise," College English 46 (January
1984), 1.
2. For example, see such "outline processors" as KAMAS, Thoughtline, and Idea! and
the prose check, Rightwriter, which analyzes text for errors in grammar, usage,
punctuation, style, and spelling. Rightwriter marks cliches, slang, jargon, and the
passive voice, and it also calculates a readability index similar to the Fog Index.