Final Draft of Defining

Musculoskeletal System.docx
by Esteban Cruz

Submission date: 31-Oct-2018 02:01PM (UT C-0700)

Submission ID: 1030590056
File name: Final_Draf t_of _Def ining_Musculoskeletal_System.docx
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Character count: 4762
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ORIGINALITY REPORT

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orthoreader.com
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W.L. Buford, C.R. Andersen. "Definition of the
Kinematic Plant for the Human
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Musculoskeletal System", 2005 IEEE
International Conference on Systems, Man and
Cybernetics, 2005
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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

87
Esteban,

Overall nice work. You clearly def ined your term,

and I have a better understanding of why it's
important. T hat said, you needed to have at least

/100
two images here. Other than that, well done.

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