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Rain. Lashing a windowpane. A PIANO PLAYS somewhere off
screen. Charles Ive’s Sonata No 2 for piano.
INT. WILL’S ATTIC PLAYROOM - DAY
GEORGIE DENBROUGH (7) -- nervous, eager, sweet -- sits on the
floor folding drawings of war into the form of a PAPER BOAT.
His brother Will (13) is in bed, surrounded by tissues,
playing video games and glancing over every so often to check
on Georgie’s progress.
WILL
Get the wax in the basement.
Georgie looks hesitant. Scared even.
WILL (CONT’D)
You want it to float don’t you?
Georgie goes.
TITLE CARD:
OCTOBER 1988
INT. WILL’S HOUSE - DAY
Georgie hurries downstairs, catching a glimpse of their
mother SHARON DENBROUGH (30s) in the parlor playing piano.
She smiles at her son running past.
INT. KITCHEN - WILL'S HOUSE - DAY
George's stomach sinks as he comes face to face with THE
EASEMENT DOOR. He scowls to steady himself, ready to face the
blackness behind it.
INT. WILL’S ATTIC PLAYROOM — CONTINUOUS
RIOAUKTE-TALKIE SQUAWKS next to Will. ‘The sarcastic voice of
RICHIE “TRASHMOUTH” GOLDFARB (13), his neighbor, filters
gh the plastic speaker.
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RICHIE
(staticky)
Oh, Willy-boy. over.
Will, annoyed, picks up the walkie and looks through his rain
blasted window.
WILL
Richie.
‘They wave at each other. Richie, bug-eyed glasses, turns the
wave into a middle-finger.
RICHIE (0.S.)
Get your ass over here. It’s all
warmed up. Over.
He holds up a SEGA remote control.
WILL
can’t. I'm sick.
RICHIE,
Is it venereal? Over-
INT. CELLAR DOORWAY - CONTINUOUS
Plinging the door open, George ventures his arm into the DARK
VOID. He gropes around and finds the LIGHT SWITCH. Nothing.
George snatches his arm back.
The dark basement glares back at him, taunting.
will “cah-cahs” - an animal like noise that Georgie responds
to with a different animal, depending on what the sound is
the word ends with. For example, a “cah-cah” would need to
have an “ah” at the beginning of the next call.
Georgie responds with his own smoke-throated baby bird “ah-
00".
GEORGIE
The lights're out!
INT. WILL'S ATTIC PLAYROOM - CONTINUOUS
RICHIE (0-S.)
What the hell was that?
will coughs hard into a tissue. Half-impatient, half-joking:Revision 3.
WILL
Every time Georgie goes down to the
basement he thinks he’s gonna die.
RICHIE
Seven year-olds are pussies.
WILL
Uh-oh, my battery--
RICHIE
No wait--
Will turns off the walkie-talkie.
WILL
(calling to his brother)
You can do it, Georgie, you're not
afraid of the dark!
INT. KITCHEN - WILL’S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
Peering down the stairway at the dark cellar, Georgie studies
the contents of the room below. A DARK FIGURE, still and
hunched over in the corner, causes him to freeze. Further
examination reveals this specter to be a wooden shelf.
Off his brother’s encouragement --
INT. CELLAR - WILL’S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
George scrambles down four steps to THE CELLAR SHELF and
sifts through junk as fast as he can: SHOE-POLISH, RAGS, a
broken FLASHLIGHT, an old can of TURTLE WAX, a dusty bag of
colored BALLOONS.
He grabs the BOX OF PARAFFIN near the back of the shelf, and
hurries back up the stairs as we quickly track towards him,
about to pounce. The door slams in our face.
INT. WILL’S ATTIC PLAYROOM - DAY
Will melts a chunk of paraffin with a match in a ceramic
bowl, then dips his finger into the hot liquid and smears the
wax along the sides of the boat.
WILL
I knew you weren't scared of that
dark old basement. There you go,
Captain. She’s all ready for ya.