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Introduction
The analogy
Think of an essay as a jigsaw puzzle, and each paragraph a puzzle piece. The
image that the collected pieces form when together is the topic of the essay.
The pieces must fit together well, and they have to support the image.
Terms
Coherence: a sense of the whole (also called “global coherence” or “unity”)
Cohesion: a sense of flow (sentence to sentence, and paragraph to paragraph)
Coherence
What students need to know
All the sentences and paragraphs of an essay should add up to something, like the pieces of a jigsaw
puzzle creating a picture.
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Belinda Braunstein (bbraunstein@ucmerced.edu) Saturday, 10/27/12
University of California, Merced ISAW Workshop Series
Cohesion
What students need to know
Put old information before new information (old-new, old-new, old-new)
Refer back to old info with pronouns and determiners (him, it, this, that, these, those)
Connect sentences & ideas (e.g. However, Additionally, Because of these new policies, etc.)
1. Students get into groups. All students in a group have the same first sentence (see above).
2. Each student copies the first sentence (above) and then adds a sentence. Pass to left.
3. Each person adds two sentences and then passes to the left. Be sure the stories are cohesive!
4. When a student gets her own story back, she adds a final two sentences to create a good ending.
5. Students underline the cohesive elements of the story they began and finished. (*Important step)
6. When ready, each original writer reads the whole story aloud to the group.
7. Each group chooses their best story, or the one with the best cohesion. They explain their choice.
Note: The focus here is on cohesion, not coherence. Unlike an essay, the story may “wander.”
Your notes/ideas/additions:
Source: Style: Lessons in Clarity and Grace, 9th edition, by Joseph M. Williams (Pearson/Longman).