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Do you find it hard to write a good business proposal? Can your present your ideas clearly and
persuasively? Are you very good in choosing the best word that fit your meaning? If your answers are no then
maybe it is time for a good Business Writing classes.

Assalamualaikum and a very good morning Mr Kamal, the chairman of Semporna Sdn Bhd; Mr Jamal, the head
of sales department, my respectable senior staffs and of course my beloved colleagues. Today I would like to
seek your attention to a small idea that might bring you huge result. This tiny idea that I would like to address
today is about having Business writing classes in our company.

Ladies and gentlemen,

Do you know that employees like us often spend up to three hours each day struggling to express our thoughts
and ideas in writing? With awkward sentence structure, poor organization, and murky language, most written
communication failed to be delivered due to information clutter. In order to boost business competitiveness, we
must cut through the clutter and communicate clearly. For that reason, I believe that the best and the only way
to do so is by going through a series of business writing classes. By having good business writing skills we can not
only enhance our image, but also increase our confidence, boost our productivity, and achieve our objectives.

These business classes are designed for proficient writers of English who wish to apply their knowledge of
English efficiently in the business world. As these classes focus on grammar and the preparation, writing and
editing of a variety of business correspondence, as well as providing required knowledge of style, organization
and format, I strongly believe that after having business writing classes we could be a much better businessman
and our organization will greatly benefit from this.

Ladies and gentleman,

I strongly urge all the ladies and gentleman on the floor to give a thought about these business classes. We are
responsible for our own development and should constantly strive for excellence. With that I thank you for
listening.
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To : All staffs and interns.

From : Sumiyati, secretary to Director Jamal

Date : August 20, 2013.

Subject : Donations for “Mercy-Aids Flood”

As we are all aware last week a terrible storm had hit many areas in Pahang and Johor. This storm was then
turned into a great flood that had devastated many towns and villages. Thousands have lost their precious
homes and belongings, while thousands more are fleeing and seeking shelters from the authorities. This is
indeed a great test for the nations and to fellow Malaysians as well. Thus, Semporna Jaya Sdn Bhd is organizing
an event called “Mercy-Aids Flood” to collect donations and contributions for the flood victims.

For your information, this “Mercy-Aids Flood” event will be held on 20th until 25th of August 2013, in the
Semporna Jaya Convention Hall. The event will start from 8.00am until 5p.m. There is no limit to how much or
what do you want to donate. We will take all sorts of donations, either cash money, cheque or items such as rice,
food, drinks, and clothes and so on. For those who wish to donate money you may do so by visiting the counter
8, 9 and 10 in the Semporna Jaya Convention hall during the event. You may also wire the money to Maybank
account number 7162 821, under the name of “Mercy Semporna” starting today. However please take note that
the deadline for money contribution is on 25th of August 2013.

On behalf of Semporna Jaya Sdn Bhd and Director Jamal, I would like to thank you for your time and kind heart.
If you have any enquires you may contact me at 089-192222 or write an email to sumiyati@semporna.com.
May God protect our brothers and sisters in Pahang and Johor.

Thank you,

Sumiyati
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(A) The main difference between a solicited application letter and an unsolicited one is whether the company
receiving the letter announced a job opening or not. If the company announced an opening, the letter is
considered solicited because it was asked for. If the company had not asked for applications, the letter is
considered unsolicited. The goal of a solicited application letter is to obtain an interview for a specific job
position which the writer mentions in the letter. When a person writes an unsolicited letter, she hopes that the
company has any position, within a certain area, available. This letter is more general and the writer states that
she is applying, for example, to any type of managerial position within the company.

(B) i)

222, Kampung Keramat,


91308, Semporna,
Sabah
February 2, 2013

Ms. Ayuni Clarkson


Director of Administration
Semporna Jaya Sdn Bhd,
91308, Semporna,
Sabah.

Dear Ms. Ayuni:


In response to your advertisement which appeared in today's issue of Sabah Star, please consider this letter of
application.

Presently I am working in Tawau Jaya Sdn Work as a clerk. However, considering my long experience working as
a clerk, I believed that I am more qualified to become your personal assistant. For your information, I have
completed a two year course on Microsoft Word and Power Point; a three year course of business writing and a
2 year course in Cambridge English Centre on English Speaking and Writing Literacy. I am not married and able
to work long hour and have no problem in travelling. For a more comprehensive appraisal of my qualifications,
please see my data sheet attached.

Should my qualifications merit your consideration, I shall be glad to discuss with you personally any further
details you may require. Please contact me at 089-877 888 or write me an email to sumiyati@gmail.com.

Sincerely
Sumiyati
B ii)
12, Banglo Keramat,
91308 Semporna, Sabah.
04 April, 2005

Semporna Jaya Sdn Berhad,


Peti Surat 122, 91308
Semporna, Sabah.

Assalamualaikum,

I know that Semporna Jaya Sdn Berhad has not publicized any job openings recently, but I thought it might be
worth my while to sending you a resume to keep on file for future reference.

I am an interior designer. I am actively seeking a new position at this time, and I thought that Semporna Jaya Sdn
Bhd would be an excellent company to stay in contact with. Right now I am working with Midvally Sdn Bhd and I
have attached a few photos of the projects that I had done with the current company.

If you do have any openings that would appropriate for my skills and experience, please contact me and let me
know your application procedures. If not, please keep my resume on file until such time as an appropriate
position becomes available.

Thank you very much for your time.

Regards,

Sumiyati.
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2.0 Site Assessment

The proposed area is located at the northwest of Sungai Beranang, 500 meters from the main bridge of
Beranang. To get here, one may travel from Tawau taking the north expressway heading to Semporna and exit
at Beranang. One may also take the Lahad Datu-Semporna expressway and exit at Sungai Nibong before heading
west to Sungai Tohok.

The proposed area is close to a few infrastructure and services. There is a primary school 3km away and a
secondary school 4 km away. The nearest town would be Semporna Town which is only 5 km away. In this town
there are basic infrastructures such as banks ( BSN, Maybank, Agro and Citibank), bus stations, 4 stars hotels and
supermarkets (Giant Supermarket, Gmart and Century). There are also a government hospital and a few private
clinics in the town. Postal services are also available here in Semporna town, with providers such as Pos Malaysia,
Gdex and DHL Express. In terms of telecommunication and internet coverage, the coverage of Maxis and Digi are
poor while Celcom is excellent in the proposed area. Through Celcom, one can have access to the internet via 3G
connections.

3.0 Recommendation

After surveying the area, I strongly believe that the proposed area is ideal for our company’s 150 units of 2 story
terrace houses project. The land here is not too soft and not filled with giant rocks. The area is not polluted by
factories or deforestation and therefore is an ideal place for people to start up their new home. Moreover, this
proposed area is near surrounded by beautiful scenery of Bukit Beranang and Pantai Beranang. This would
attracts potential buyers and greatly increase the houses’ value. Last but not least, the proposed area is closed
to a town and able to acquire all the basic facilities. I believe that within a few years time this area will merge
with Semporna town and become a big city.

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