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WRITING
QUÝ III –
2017
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Contents
OPINION ................................................................................................. 3
DISCUSSION......................................................................................... 28
(255 words)
47. Nowadays, some buildings such as offices and schools have open-space design instead of
separate rooms. Why is it so? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
At the current time, many institutions adopt a more open style of workplace design rather than
the traditional type of discrete rooms and departments. This essay will present the reason for this
trend, together with a discussion in terms of benefits and drawbacks of this open style.
First of all, a lack of walls or other physical barriers in offices makes it easier for employees to
interact with each other on a regular basis. The constant intermingling not only generates a sense
of camaraderie among personnel, it also enhances the flow of information and teamwork.
Colleagues can turn to each other for advice or assistance without having to knock on doors or
schedule a formal meeting. Interactions in an open-plan office space generally are more frequent
and informal than in closed environments where everyone has a separate office space.
On the downside, the high level of everyday interaction that takes place in an undivided work
space may lead to noise and distractions that make it difficult for employees to focus on their
work and conduct business. Lack of privacy is another potential problem with open-plan office
spaces, where computer screens are easily visible by those walking by and telephone
conversations are likely to be overheard. Open-plan layouts also facilitate the spread of disease,
so if a colleague comes to work with a cold, it can affect the health of the entire staff.
To conclude, this open style of office design possesses both advantage and disadvantage. It is
suggested that there should be a combination between this style and the conventional one to
further exploit the benefits of both, which consequently makes the offices more fascinating for
the workers to fulfil the duties
(278 words)
48. Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for
children? What are the consequences when they grow up?
Parental approach to bringing up young people surely has a deciding role to play in their
development. Some parents often raise their children with over-indulgence, and I feel this
method would be a hindrance to their individual growth and adult life.
It is human nature to love their offspring, and yet over-indulgence is a poor choice of rearing.
Children need to learn through punishments, which means that they should be punished for what
they do wrong and rewarded when they achieve something. Punishments like withdrawal of
privileges or even those of physical nature could sometimes be needed to educate children.
However, if they are allowed to do whatever they want, they will not understand the difference
between right and wrong and become ignorant, thoughtless individuals.
Providing youngsters with whatever they desire would teach them nothing but to have no regard
for what they already have. For example, they will pester their parents to buy them a new toy if
they are bored with the one they are having. This is extremely dangerous because it could be the
basis of their character when they grow up.
When there is no limit to the indulgence parents show toward their kids, these children will
become needy and dependent, and therefore are unable to live on their own. In some cultures like
Vietnam, parents pick up their kids at school even during high school, buy their clothes and cook
at home. Children do not have to do anything, which is mainly why many of them cannot stay
away from their parents and live independently even when they are in their 20s.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that indulgence should be within certain limit. Otherwise, it would
badly shape children’s personalities and restrict their ability to have an independent life later.
(296 words)
49. In recent years, the structure of a family and the role of its members are gradually
changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive and
negative?
It is true that the there is a significant change in terms of family structure. Recently, the man
could do the housework such as cleaning or cooking, while more and more women go out to earn
money for their family. Personally, having a number of factors led to this situation, and I
consider it to be a positive trend.
The major reason of this case is a developing of the gender equality around the world.
Nowadays, because women have higher position and education than the past, they able to do
most anything as men do. Therefore, instead of cooking or looking for children, they could go
out to work and earn money for their family, and it is an equally if the men have to do their
housework and help their wife. Moreover, parents must change to adapt in our society. It is
agreed that many families will have financial problems, if there are merely men working to pay
living expenses. Consequently, parents need to share responsibilities in their family.
In my point, this trend is actually creating a profound positive influence not only in the society
but also among the family as well. In fact, in some case female display a better perform in their
work than male such as nurse or tailor, so this will bring many benefits for society. Furthermore,
by doing housework, the husbands could understand how rough of their wife job. This leads a
tied relationship among them which absolutely have positive impact on their child as well.
In conclusion, although the changing in role of husband and wife in family is the result of many
reasons, I think that it should be seen as progress in society.
(283 words)
50. More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending a short time doing
unpaid work such as teaching or building houses for communities in poorer countries. Why
young people choose to do so? Who will benefit more: young people or the communities?
There has been an ongoing trend of many youngsters from prosperous nations deciding to spend
their time doing voluntary work in underprivileged countries. Some of the prominent reasons for
this phenomenon will be discussed, before the benefits of both individuals and developing
countries are analyzed.
There are several convincing reasons associated with this practice. The most significant factor is
that doing such unpaid work in poor countries would be a comparative advantage for the young
when applying for a job in the future. In other words, in this fierce and competitive job market, a
candidate possessing an application file accompanied by only great scores could not be the ideal
one that a recruiter is finding; therefore, he or she needs outstanding volunteering experience to
be able to surpass other rivals. Another reason that is worth mentioning is that young generations
could engender the feeling of community when participating in unsalaried work. Their voluntary
efforts help to give prominence to the value of sharing and the sense of social responsibility to
secure improved humanity and international awareness about disadvantaged places.
It is undoubted that both the young volunteers and emerging countries could equally gain from
this phenomenon. Concerning the young, it is apparent that the aforementioned meaningful work
not only brings the doers unforgettable life lessons, gives them hands – on experience but also
helps expand their network of relationships. Throughout these journeys of youth, they gradually
grow more mature and confident, realizing the diversity of life by getting to know many walks of
people. In regard to poorer countries, they may have a chance to raise the living standards of
their dwellers. For instance, knowledge related to environment protection or health care which
they have acquired from overseas volunteers possibly improves their living conditions
afterwards.
To sum up, the requirement of more competitive profile and the determination to support
financially disadvantaged countries are the two principal elements that make young people join a
wide range of voluntary activities. I would contend that both the doers and the receivers are the
beneficiaries of the practice above.
(344 words)
51. Some people choose to have their first child at an older age. What are the reasons? Do
the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
There is a growing proportion of the world’s population who decide to have children later in life.
The underlying reasons for this trend are varied, and I suppose that the merits would eclipse the
downsides.
There are two main factors leading to the decision of delaying childbirth. The first one is because
people have the propensity for prioritizing their careers over taking parental roles. Especially in
the US and other developed countries, not only men but also women want to stabilize their
finance before becoming parents so as to provide their kids with sufficient living condition for
their future development. Another explanation for this is that many modern individuals have
adopted a fear of taking unwanted custody due to the recent alarming rate of divorce. It is
because premature marriages have become common, which usually goes with many couples’
doubt of their marital harmony, deterring their early desire for raising a child. There would be,
consequently, fewer kids growing up without fatherhood or motherhood.
However, the drawbacks should not be overlooked. That too many couples following such a
trend might exert adverse effects on the population structure, which potentially results in the
future aging workforce and hinders social development in the long term. Additionally, it could
both heighten the possibility of infertility among mothers at their old age and risk the new-born
babies’ mental and physical health. Down Syndrome could be a typical example of the problems
that those kids might have to suffer from.
In conclusion, the occupational prioritization and the hesitation over the likelihood of single-
parent responsibility could be seen as the root of late childbirth, and I am convinced that the
advantages are of more significance.
(279 words)
52. Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not
popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity?
The unpopularity of using bicycle in numerous places has been brought into question although
there is little doubt about its friendly effects on the environment compared to cars or airplanes.
The reasons for this are varied and several feasible solutions would be proposed in the essay
below.
There are two main underlying explanations for the uncommon use of bicycles. Firstly, it would
consume a considerable amount of time to travel by this means of transport, which, according to
many, justifies the price of potential environmental damage caused by other types of vehicles.
This is because it fails to benefit dwellers of major cities in particular when their pace of working
life would eclipse the values of using bicycles to the environment. Secondly, modern people are
becoming less concerned about the negative impact that their daily use of cars and public
transportation would inflict on their surroundings. Therefore, it is rather impractical to expect
cycling in cities, or even the countryside.
The government play a vital role in encouraging the use of this environmentally friendly vehicle.
They could conduct monthly green days that by law require citizens to cycle to work to get
people involved in protecting their environment. In the long term, such an initiative would help
to gradually form a habit of cycling among occupied individuals. More importantly, propagation
via various means of media along with optional courses about the advantages of cycling to the
environment at schools seem imperative to heighten social awareness of this matter.
In conclusion, cycling, regardless of its positive influences on the environment, has become a
rare picture in the modern world for a number of reasons; and the government should take
immediate actions to improve this situation.
(284 words)