JACOB FLORES

DEAR MS. FIGUEROA,

The challenges and difficulties that I Have struggled with in my paper is my organization

strategies and how to put all my work together. Another thing that I am pretty bad at is

brain storming. Brian storming come and goes for me it’s like it come and then it’s just

disappear out of nowhere. Also the thing that I am not good at is the statement of

purpose I can’t focus and provide context for the main idea or topic.

2 the things that I learned while in high school is to elaboration of evidence. I can get

evidence from sources and include citation in my writing and I can use techniques in my

writing .the thing that I also learned is to use words, vocabulary, and how to write full

sentences. Organization is another thing that I leaned in school it helps me figure out

what to write and help me put stuff together. Also it helped me with the rough drafts

and how to revise and change out stuff that don’t make sense and to make it sound

better. I make reflections and revision to make and help me with my essay. It helps me

with a lot because i don’t have to brainstorm that much.

3 Some of the accomplishments that I have done in my writing was make it sound better and

putting sentences in my own word. And the essay that I am most proud is my social issue on

marijuana. I would say that this is the best essay I did because a lot of people think that weed is

bad but weed is not bad for the people that need it like medical people and people say that it’s a

dangerous drug and honestly I think the only bad thing about weed is getting caught up with it.

HaHaHa just kidding. But honestly weed can be good for your health if you got cancer or some.

4 How I’m feeling about my writing is good because I feel like I’ve gotten better as a writer then

I was before. I feel good about my portfolio because I feel like I put a lot of effort into my

writing since I got into this class because Ms. Figueroa A wonderful of a teacher helped me

become a better writer. The common theme in my essay is that we mostly write issues in society

and stuff like that. 5 how my writing accomplishments will help me in the future it is not going

to help me with my future job or anything because I don’t need writing in a concrete business or

a cooking business or anything unless u go in to like a writing business or a business something

or unless u work for the newspaper then maybe your writing skills will come to the rescue and

help other then that I don’t think I will need writing in my future job. My writing goal past my

high school is im not going to need it after high school.