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Student Writing Goal: My goal was to score at least an 80 percent or higher with minimal grammar errors. Also, to
make sense and not go off topic throughout the paper.
How did you perform in relation to the expectations of the writing rubric?
I did not perform well in relation to the expectations of the writing rubric. I did stay on topic but may have
had to many run-on sentences that sounded repetitive. I also missed out many grammar errors like commas.
What aspect of this piece did you do well? (give example/quotes to support claims)
What I did well on was elaborating my thoughts, facts, and evidence. I was strong minded in the topic I was
writing about so I researched many evidences I can use for blind ambition. For example, when it came to
writing about Kim Kardashian’s tape, there was good evidence how she was ambitious to be famous.
What will you do better in your next writing assignment, and how will I do it?
My next writing assignment I will be confident and turn in my work on time. I will also revise my paper over
and over again until I feel it is good to turn in. I will also have others revise and edit my paper because I
know they will catch things my eyes couldn’t.
To what degree of success did you achieve your previously stated goal(s)?
I scored a low score, which was due to me turning in the assignment late. I had more grammar errors than
usual like adding commas where they needed to be. My work cited was not fully correct and my citations
were not complete. I also had to many contractions.