COVER LETTER

My weakness in writing would have to be my vocabulary and creating a genuinely good story or

argument. I want to expand my vocabulary and get stronger at telling an amazing story. I feel as

though I’m a good enough writer but not a blow you away type writer. I’ve learned that me

taking enough time on my writing helps me produce a lot better material to turn in. In a way my

last-minute writings succeed just as much but they need a lot of touching up to do. My goal at the

end of my writing is to have someone to read my writing and get blown away and truly

appreciate my work. Working in the middle of the day also helps improve my writing because in

the morning I’m tired and late at night as well. To reach my goals, I must handle the little things

like go to bed on time, doing my work as soon as I get home and getting my work do before the

do date. I was shocked to find out that my senior paper had did so well but then again, I did put

seven straight hours in to it. I would have to say that my senior paper would have to be my most

accomplished essay this year. It was the essay that I put the most work time and effort into and I

actual could relate to at the end of the day. I feel like my portfolio could have a lot better work to

show off instead there is a bunch of place holders that are alright. I know that I can do much

better and my potential is greater than what I’m showing that’s why I feel like some of my

writings are just alright. Thinking back on all the work I did I put a lot of time into them it’s just

I was always racing against time and sleepiness. All and all, for future essay and papers that I

have to finish I feel as though I can better prepare myself to make them better. Learning from my

mistakes and making them better is my true end goal.

we all undergo some changes that either makes us better or worst. Life on an island is knowing you must figure out a way to survive. In the lord of the flies the boys already have enough order to understand that they need to each have jobs. This allows them to really see who’s strong enough

to take on these rolls. In the novel you can see how jack, ralph and piggy all change into dynamic characters.

Through fear and respect from others jack gets his own personal power from it. Jacks given a roll that start his identity within the group of boys stuck on the island."Jack's in charge of the choir. They can be—what do you want them be?" "Hunters. “Jack and Ralph

smiled at each other with shy liking. The rest began to talk eagerly” (1.254-257). He’s a hunter now he