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Mrs. Hooks
6 May 2019
Reflection Essay
The best essay I have written throughout my entire academic career at Great Oak is one
of the first ones I ever wrote, my S.P.I.R.I.T. Personal Statement. It had all the elements of a five
star essay and I don’t believe I have ever written a paper better than that one. In my opinion,
that essay is absolutely supreme in the most literal way. The essay breaks down each letter of
I am proud of that essay because it has met every requirement to be considered a top
notch piece of writing. The introduction is impeccable. It captures the reader's attention
follows a theme that I like to use throughout most of my essays, which is to tell the audience
exactly what it is that the essay is going to tell them. By doing so, the essay becomes much
Statement is structured beautifully. It is a very well organized piece of writing that reign supreme
among all others. The flow of any the essay is a big part of what draws the reader in and makes
them want to keep reading, and my Personal Statement that I wrote as a fourteen year old
freshman is a perfect example of mastery in the art of flow in writing. There was not a better
personal statement written by any freshman that year, in my humble opinion. The first half of the
essay does an astounding job showcasing my passion and dedication towards academics and
extracurriculars such as track and swim. Responding to the prompt in an appropriate manner is
another part of this essay that makes it so good. The way that I describe my passion for english
and writing in that essay is superb and lets the reader know that I mean business when it comes
to writing essays. My passion for basketball and getting good grades in school is highlighted in
the “P” section of the essay and is, in my opinion, one of the best descriptions of a passion that
has ever been written. My definition of integrity and how it fits into my life is one of the most
amazing parts of the entire essay, truly exemplifying my will to be a good student for all four
ending to an amazing story. The reflection portion of the essay is by far my favorite part of the
entire essay. The way I describe both my successes and my failures is an indicator of how well I
can write about my triumphs in life, while still having enough humility to recognize where I’ve
gone wrong and correct those errors. For a freshman, I believe this to be a very advanced skill,
making this essay one of the most impressive that I have produced. Keeping it real is something
that is important to me, and the reflection portion of my S.P.I.R.I.T. essay keeps it real as ever.
Everyone falls, and my ability to get back up was showcased wonderfully in that essay. My
was a huge part of my life and I highlight that perfectly in this essay. I loved that sport with
everything I had at the time and this essay proves it. Finally, the teamwork portion of this essay
was a strong finish to this incredible piece of work. The organization and cohesiveness of the
essay is extremely impressive. Everything about that section of the essay is perfect and there
My S.P.I.R.I.T. Personal statement is the best essay ever written. Any piece of writing
that tries to challenge the superiority of that essay would be foolish to do so. Thank you, Mrs.
Hooks and Mrs. Priest for being such great teachers this year. See you guys later!