Comments Beginning 1. I have included a “hook” to grab the reader’s attention, title, first paragraph… 2. I have written when it was 3. I have written where it was 4. I have introduced the characters 5. Senses, actions (what the characters were doing, were feeling…) Developing the story 6. I have written what happened 7. I have followed a chronological order of the story 8. I have described how the people felt due to the situation Ending the story 9. I have written what happened in the end, the end of the story End of the story 10. I have added people’s feelings, comments, reactions and results of the story Structure of the written text 11. I have written almost 3 paragraphs
Editing, Grammar and Coherence
12. I have checked my spelling
13. I have checked the sentence structures: Subject + Verb + Object (right order adjectives & adverbs) 14. I have checked my / used punctuation marks: full stops, commas, inverted commas… 15. I have used the Past Simple & the Past Continuous Tense 16. I have used When / While & As 17. I have used connectors: First/ Firstly, Then, Next, After that, Finally, In the end…