Name:_____Yuhui Chen_____________

REVERSE OUTLINE: Use the following grid to reflect on the order of ideas within the draft. Number each
paragraph in your draft. Then, in the corresponding spaces in the left-hand column below, write down each of the
main points or topics you cover in each paragraph. Try to do so in one sentence or less. If you can’t do this easily,
you may need to regroup or divide your paragraphs. In the right-hand column, write down any changes you may
need to make to that paragraph (i.e. break into two, move to paragraph 3, delete, add to the intro, use new example).

# Sample: Paragraph 2: Generosity stems from Solutions/Improvements:

personal hardship.
 Missing evidence from Nazario
 Irrelevant information/explanation
1. Introduction: show the thesis about who should be
responsible for the cost of the fast fashion and who
can be the solution to solve the problem.
2. Body paragraph #1: fashion companies put
pressure on workers and make their lives become
worse
3. Body paragraph #2: fashion companies ignore the
right of these workers and cannot guarantee their
personal safety at work.
4. Body paragraph #3: consumers have ability to
solve these problem.
5. Body paragraph #4: companies is the fastest way to
solve the problem.
6.
 Add two quotes: Giving aid after loss
 Remove discussion of the father-daughter
(para 4)
 Analyze the way the woman sacrifice all
 Companies should be responsible for the cost of
fast fashion
 Companies and consumers have ability to solve
the problem which provide by companies.
 Add two quotes : about how companies put
pressure on workers
 Explain the point
 Show some information to support the point.
 Add two quote: companies always ignore
workers’ right and themselves.
 Explain the point
 Show some information to support the point
 Add a quote: show some situation about the
problem
 Basic on the situation, drawing forth that
consumers have ability to solve the problem.
 Add a quote: show some information about the
situation of clothes products and provide the
benefit of this situation
 In order to avoid and solve these problems, the
companies should make a change.

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