Essay no 1 {Class Work} Type : Agree / Disagree

In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT).
However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future.

To what extent do you agree with this view?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Introduction:

{Hook}Today’s world is driven by Information Technology; it is something all of us cannot do without.

{Background}The last two decades have seen enormous changes in the way people's lives have been affected
by IT, with many advances in this field. Information from across the globe is available via the internet also
communication has become very simple and quick with the invention of Emails.{Thesis} Even though I agree,
that these technological advances have brought many benefits to the world, but at the same time it can very
well be argued that these developments in IT will result in more negative impacts than positive.

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To begin, development in information technology especially the use of the internet has hugely benefitted us. It
has definitely made our lives much easier. {Supporting Idea} email has made communication, especially
abroad, much simpler and faster, resulting in numerous benefits for commerce and business. Communicating
with near and dear ones has become quick and simple. Furthermore, the World Wide Web means that
information on every conceivable subject is now available to us. {Development sentences} For example,
people can access news, medical advice, online education courses and much more via the
internet. {Continuing sentence} It is evident that these improvements have made life really convenient for
large numbers of people and will continue to do so for decades to come.

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{Controlling idea/ topic sentence}Nevertheless, the effects of this new technology have not all been
beneficial. {{Supporting Idea} many people feel that the widespread use of email is destroying traditional
forms of communication such as letter writing, telephone and face-to-face conversation. This could result in a
decline in people's basic ability to socialize and interact with each other on a day-to-day basis. In addition, the
large size of the Web has meant that it is nearly impossible to regulate and control. {Development sentences}
For instance, It is almost impossible for parents to keep a check on their children accessing unsuitable
websites. Unfortunately, this kind of problem might even get worse in the future at least until more regulated
systems are set up.

Conclusion

{Restate Argument}In conclusion, developments in IT have brought many benefits, {Opinion reinforced} yet I
strongly believe developments relating to new technology are likely to produce more negative effects than
positive ones. {Purpose/ Take away Msg} It is really important that the ever growing advancements in the field
of information technology must be addressed if we are to avoid damaging impacts on individuals and society.
Essay no 1 Version 2 {Class Work} Type : Agree / Disagree

In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for
example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT are likely to
have more negative effects than positive in the future.

To what extent do you agree with this view?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Introduction:

{Hook}Today’s world is driven by Information Technology; it is something all of us cannot do without.

{Background}The last two decades have seen enormous changes in the way people's lives have been affected
by IT, with many advances in this field. Information from across the globe is available via the internet also
communication has become very simple and quick with the invention of Emails.{Thesis} In my opinion, the
advancements in the field of IT may have some undesirable effects on the society as a whole, but having said
that I believe that, overall the positives from development of IT will clearly out number the negatives.

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{Controlling idea/ topic sentence}To begin, the effects of developed Information technology may not all be
beneficial. {Supporting Idea} many people feel that the widespread use of email is destroying traditional forms
of communication such as letter writing, telephone and face-to-face conversation. This could result in a decline
in people's basic ability to socialize and interact with each other on a day-to-day basis. In addition, the large
size of the Web has meant that it is nearly impossible to regulate and control. Cases of online financial frauds
are not only on the rise but are also almost impossible to detect. {Development sentences} For example, It is
almost impossible for parents to keep a check on their children accessing unsuitable websites. Unfortunately,
this kind of problem might even get worse in the future at least until more regulated systems are set up.

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{Controlling idea/ topic sentence} on the other hand, development in information technology especially the
use of the internet has hugely benefitted us. It has definitely made our lives much easier. {Supporting Idea}
email has made communication, especially abroad, much simpler and faster, resulting in numerous benefits
for commerce and business. Communicating with near and dear ones has become quick and simple.
Furthermore, the World Wide Web means that information on every conceivable subject is now available to
us. {Development sentences} For example, people can access news, medical advice, online education courses
and much more via the internet. It is evident that these improvements have made life really convenient for
large numbers of people and will continue to do so for decades to come

Conclusion

{Restate Argument}In conclusion, developments in IT may have brought in some cause of concern, which
needs the attention of appropriate authorities, but I strongly believe that information technology
advancements will play a crucial role in making lives easier and convenient for people across the world.
{Purpose/ Take away Msg} All new developments tend to break some traditional norms of the society, it is for
us accept changes and be prepared to adapt our lives accordingly.
Essay no 2 {Class Work} Type: agree/ disagree

As people live longer and longer, the idea of cloning human beings in order to provide
spare parts is becoming a reality. The idea horrifies most people, yet it is no longer mere
science fiction.

To what extent do you agree with such a procedure?

Have you any reservations?

Introduction:

{Background}The cloning of animals has been occurring for a number of years now, and this
has now opened up the possibility of cloning humans too. {Opinion}In my opinion, cloning
humans is not the right thing to do.{Thesis}Although, it is evident that there are clear benefits
to humankind from cloning to provide spare body parts, however it also raises a number of
very crucial and worrying ethical issues.

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{Topic Sentences}Due to breakthroughs in medical science and improved diets, people are
living much longer than in the past. This, though, has brought with it problems. {Supporting
idea}As people age, their organs can fail so they need replacing. If humans were cloned, their
organs could then be used to replace those of sick people. Moreover, it is currently the case
that there are often not enough organ donors around to fulfil this need, so cloning humans
would overcome the issue as there would then be a ready supply.{Development sentence}
For example , An individual who’s existence holds extreme importance can be cloned and he
could be provided with the required body parts as and when he/ she gets older and needs
replacement of the aging body part.

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{Topic Sentences}However, for good reasons, many people view this as a worrying
development. {Supporting idea} Firstly, there are religious arguments against it. It would
involve creating another human and then eventually killing it in order to use its organs, which
it could be argued is murder. This is not only a crime is eyes of the law but also a sin
according to religious texts. In addition, dilemmas would arise over what rights these people
have, as surely they would be humans just like the rest of us. Furthermore, human cloning is a
very expensive process, which would mean that only the rich could afford it? {Development
Sentence}For example, a wealthy person will effectively use his wealth to clone himself to
remain alive for several years, a privilege that comes to him for being wealthy. This will not
set a right example for the society.

Conclusion

{Restated argument}To conclude, cloning may have both positives and negatives for the
mankind. However, I definitely do not agree with this procedure due to the ethical issues,
complexity and dilemmas it would create. Cloning animals has been a positive development,
but this is where it should end. {Purpose}Birth and death are natural process created by the
almighty; we shouldn’t try and be god.
Essay no 3 {Class Work} Type: Agree/ Disagree

As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more
and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalization. Some people fear that
globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent do
you agree or disagree with this statement?

Globalisation has become integrated through the global network of trade, transportation,
communication and immigration. It is feared by many to eventually bring an end to cultural
identity. However, in my opinion, I am convinced that not only will globalization help retain
and improve local cultures, but it also will strengthen cultural bonds between distant
communities along with increased level of religious tolerance.

First of all, people can realise how they are different from others in distant lands, which may
lead to their interest in learning about other cultures. This means every culture will have to
preserve and present its unique features such as local cuisine or craftsmanship in order to
maintain foreign interest in itself and have something to offer in competition with other
communities. As a result, a sense of cultural identity can be reinforced – even rekindled and
restored where it has already been lost.

Secondly, cultures in different parts of the world familiarise themselves with the ceremonies,
food and clothes of other people, it is highly likely that they will begin to improve on their
own, thus developing more efficient ways of life while retaining their original characteristics.

Finally, although some people might think that the aforementioned “trade” of cultural
features can doom the unique identity of a culture, they need to consider that this will not
necessarily result in local people abolishing their culture and fully embracing another.
Instead, the communication and exchange involved in globalisation can improve
understanding and tolerance in the international community, which certainly can help with
the conservation of older cultures and their sense of identity.

In conclusion, I think if the positive aspects of globalisation are considered and stressed, it is
not likely to pose any threats to the cultural identity of local communities and will instead
contribute to it in a variety of ways.
Universities should take equal number of men and women in each major
{specialization}.

To what extent you agree or disagree.

Introduction:

{Hook} Universities are the source of the cultural evolution for the society. {Background
statement}The institution of university is responsible for advancing generations through a
higher level education and research. Some individuals believe that universities should
encourage equality among men and women by accepting equal numbers into every subject.{
thesis} Although gender equality is important, I believe that universities should admit
students into each major according to their grades and interests.

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{Topic sentence}Academic scores should be used by universities to decide which applicant

are admitted into a specific major regardless of their gender.{ Supporting sentence}Many
majors require students to be hard working and smart , so the best way to make sure that
candidates are academically sharp, is by checking their academic scores. { Supporting
sentence 2}
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{Development sentence} For instance, students who wish to major in medicine must
demonstrate high academic aptitude because they will have huge responsibility to take care of
, i.e people’s health. {Concluding sentence}Therefore, university must consider grades rather
than having the same number of men and women in a major because gender does not
necessarily reflect on academic acumen.

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Conclusion : { Argument restated}In Conclusion , with regards to university accepting

similar number of male and female students in each of the major courses, I strongly believe
that academic potential and inclination towards the subject should be the criteria’s based on
which, selection into a particular specialization of education must be done. {take away
statement}.............................