SAR 1

by kaitlyn holcomb

Submission date: 11-Jul-2019 12:42PM (UTC-0500)

Submission ID: 1151065697
File name: 109688_81413601_1081767978_SAR_1.docx (12.25K)
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C/S

"You" Prounoun
Referent
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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

87
Very well done Kaitlyn.

There are some mechanical issues that i have

identified that you need to look out for when you are
proofreading, but your content here is solid.

B+ 87

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QM WW
You have used the incorrect word to convey your meaning.

QM vrg
Avoid very, really, and great

QM vrg
Avoid very, really, and great

Comment 1
misplaced comma.

QM vrg
Avoid very, really, and great

QM C/S
Comma splice:
A sentence must have both a subject and a main verb in order to be complete, but it cannot have
more than one subject or main verb. A comma splice is a variety of run-on sentence that occurs
when two complete sentences, each with its own subject and verb, are joined mistakenly by a
comma. There are generally three methods of correcting this problem: 1) Replace the comma with a
stronger mark of punctuation such as a period or semicolon, 2) use a coordinating conjunction
("and," "but," "or," "nor") to join the two constructions, or 3) make one of the two sentences a
dependent construction by linking it to the other with a subordinating conjunction ("if," "when," "so
that," "although," "because") or relative pronoun ("that," "which," "who," "whom," "whose").

QM "You"
 2nd person isn't appropriate for academic writing. Do not directly address your audience.

QM Prounoun Referent
Pronoun referent issue. See pg. 704

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