“Chicken Steak with Creamy Tomato Sauce”

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are sometimes not satisfied. Do not worry because now you can make it by yourself in an easy way. In
this essay we will show you about our new invention with a sauce, we will use creamy tomato sauce. Commented [YMW2]: Fix the words order.

Just follow the steps below and enjoy your cooking time. Commented [YMW3]: What kind of invention?

First you need to boil 1 quart of water and 5 tubes of chicken bouillon, while waiting marinade Commented [ap4]: Add punctuation.
the chicken breast with ½ teaspoon salt, 1 teaspoon garlic powder, 1 tablespoon onion powder, 3 Commented [ap5]: You miss a preposition.
tablespoon chili powder and 1 teaspoon ground black pepper. Then put in the marinade chicken to Commented [YMW6]: You miss some a preposition. It also
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the boiling water. Wait for the chicken untilhalf-cooked. After that preheat the pan and pour in 3
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tablespoon ofolive oil and grill the chicken until cooked. Next you need to chop the onion and stir-fry
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the chopped onion until golden then pour it in condensed tomato soup and chunky salsa. After that, put
in 2 tablespoon dried parsley and 2 (16 once) can chili beans, 1 (15 once) can kernel corn and 1 Commented [ap9]: Give a space.
(8 once) container sour cream. Serve the chicken breasts steak with creamy tomato sauce in Commented [ap10]: It’s plural noun.
separate plates. Commented [ap11]: Give a space.
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People usually eat steak in a formal situation, but that was very boring and awkward.
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Try to make a fun way to eat steak. By the easy steps of making chicken steak with creamy
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tomato sauce, you can enjoy a fancy food with interesting taste.
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Feedback and comments from Yuli,Nanda,and Septi

Good job for your second essay. It is awesome. We think, you just need to pay more
attention to your punctuation.