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The purpose the writer is for people to know that we, millennials, are often called

the “the lazy generation” because according to them, the only thing we know is to just use
our gadgets and roam around. This article aims to break this stereotype. Millennials are
capable of doing so many great things that could help our country to be a better place to
work and to live in. The article persuades the people to believe in what Dr. Jose Rizal
said that the youth is the hope of our future. Millennials are so much more than being
obsessed to gadgets or being rebel and woke. We do have great minds that have fresh
and brilliant ideas that could revive a dead world.

The position of the writer on the topic about “Are millennials the future of our
country?” She is agreed on the way she describes the capability and ability of the youth.
She also included that this generation is so exciting especially in the use of modern
technology and the constant desire on having something new. Because of that the youth
bring a support to the opportunities and business leadership that cause to improve the
economic status of the country in the future. Lastly, on the last part of the article she
implies that “we have to believe on the brand-new day to become empowered to do the
positive change they are capable of”.

The article tackles about the becoming future of our country. It tackles about the
big role of millennials in order to our country to be a better and developed one. Different
famous innovators and entrepreneurs were featured in the article to show that even
simple idea can turn to a success. The older generation were also entasked to a crucial
task of guiding the young ones.

The intended reader of this article are the Filipino citizens. They are the one that
will do the roles of millennials, innovators, entrepreneurs, and older generations. They
were the prodigy of change. The chosen one that can dictate the future of the country.
Even though millennials are the main subject to this article we can’t neglect the fact that
all the Filipino citizens are intended readers of the article. They are the ones that can
change the country for the better good for its citizens.

The strengths of the paper are, the millennials are the future of our country. They
are the generation that can make and create changes. They have the advantage of living
a life with technology present in their side, that can make a better and a wider access for
bringing the youth with a good opportunity and help them boost their business leadership
capability. The individuals of this generation have constant desire for entrepreneurial
community, it can help us to lift the economy of our country making it better for the present
and future generation. This article does believe that they could do more to develop the
country in terms of being a leader and being business minded for making the country
productive enough to supply the needs of everyone in this community.

On the other hand, the paper is only favorable for millennials who are interested in
pursuing entrepreneurial jobs and businesses without considering those who are inclined
in other different fields. Also, a huge number of millennials aren't taken into account when
mentioning their goals and aspirations. Furthermore, on the technical aspect, the first few
paragraphs were about factual evidences and statements that serve as bases of the
paper, but on the latter part, the statements became unstable and inconsistent. It only
appeals to millennials who need motivation and encouragement to follow their
entrepreneurial dreams.

James Abenes

Kate Danao

Brent David

Jan Patrice de Guzman

Destine Dimaculangan

Dominic Garcia

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