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Acknowledgements
The Association of Southeast Asian Nations (ASEAN) was established on 8 August 1967. The Member
States of the Association are Brunei Darussalam, Cambodia, Indonesia, Lao PDR, Malaysia,
Myanmar, Philippines, Singapore, Thailand and Viet Nam.
The ASEAN Secretariat is based in Jakarta, Indonesia.
General Information on ASEAN appears online at the ASEAN Website: www.asean.org.
All text is produced by William Angliss Institute of TAFE for the ASEAN Project on “Toolbox
Development for Priority Tourism Labour Division”.
This publication is supported by Australian Aid through the ASEAN-Australia Development
Cooperation Program Phase II (AADCP II).
Copyright: Association of Southeast Asian Nations (ASEAN) 2012.
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are not responsible for any injury, loss or damage as a result of material included or omitted from this
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Table of contents
Glossary ....................................................................................................................... 7
Element 1: Demonstrate the ability to take messages from oral input ............................... 9
Element 3: Write short messages of appreciation, apology and explanation for absence 41
Recommended reading................................................................................................... 65
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Introduction to trainee manual
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Front Office
Travel Agencies
Tour Operations.
All of these competency standards are available for you to look at. In fact you will find a
summary of each one at the beginning of each Trainee Manual under the heading „Unit
Descriptor‟. The unit descriptor describes the content of the unit you will be studying in the
Trainee Manual and provides a table of contents which are divided up into „Elements‟ and
„Performance Criteria”. An element is a description of one aspect of what has to be
achieved in the workplace. The „Performance Criteria‟ below each element details the
level of performance that needs to be demonstrated to be declared competent.
There are other components of the competency standard:
Unit Title: statement about what is to be done in the workplace
Unit Number: unique number identifying the particular competency
Nominal hours: number of classroom or practical hours usually needed to complete
the competency. We call them „nominal‟ hours because they can vary e.g. sometimes
it will take an individual less time to complete a unit of competency because he/she
has prior knowledge or work experience in that area.
The final heading you will see before you start reading the Trainee Manual is the
„Assessment Matrix‟. Competency based assessment requires trainees to be assessed in
at least 2 – 3 different ways, one of which must be practical. This section outlines three
ways assessment can be carried out and includes work projects, written questions and
oral questions. The matrix is designed to show you which performance criteria will be
assessed and how they will be assessed. Your trainer and/or assessor may also use
other assessment methods including „Observation Checklist‟ and „Third Party Statement‟.
An observation checklist is a way of recording how you perform at work and a third party
statement is a statement by a supervisor or employer about the degree of competence
they believe you have achieved. This can be based on observing your workplace
performance, inspecting your work or gaining feedback from fellow workers.
Your trainer and/or assessor may use other methods to assess you such as:
Journals
Oral presentations
Role plays
Log books
Group projects
Practical demonstrations.
Remember your trainer is there to help you succeed and become competent. Please feel
free to ask him or her for more explanation of what you have just read and of what is
expected from you and best wishes for your future studies and future career in tourism
and hospitality.
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Unit description
Unit description
This unit deals with the skills and knowledge required to write short messages in the
workplace.
Unit Code:
D1.LAN.CL10.09
Nominal Hours:
60 hours
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Assessment matrix
Assessment matrix
Showing mapping of Performance Criteria against Work Projects, Written
Questions and Oral Questions
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Glossary
Glossary
Term Explanation
Confirm To verify.
Mistake An error.
Sequence In an order.
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Term Explanation
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Element 1: Demonstrate the ability to take messages from oral input
Element 1:
Demonstrate the ability to take
messages from oral input
1.1 Write a concise, clear message from oral input
Introduction
Writing messages from oral input in a foreign language
can be extremely challenging. In order to write an effective
message you must understand all of the important
information that has been shared, be able to summarise
the information, and be able to write the information in a
clear and concise manner. Trying to remember every word
is not effective and will usually mean you miss important
information. Listening for key information is a necessary
skill for being able to take notes effectively.
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Activity 1
Listen to the recording and fill in the missing words in the transcript below. Check your
answers with your partner.
Transcript
I am phoning to leave a message for _____________________ Could you tell him his
Thanks
Useful language
When listening to someone providing information for a message, there are certain words
that signal important information.
Nouns
Nouns are important words as they tell us about people, places and things.
Verbs
In messages, verbs tell us what to do. Just having information is not enough to write a
clear message. You need to know what the action the person giving the message wants
you or someone else to take.
Time, days, numbers and dates
Listening for time, days, numbers and dates is important and when you hear them you
should write them down.
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Signal words
If the message you are listening to describes how to do something or it is long, you need
to write down the steps or stages in the process. Sequencing words like first, next, then,
after that, let you know that important information is coming up and that you should get
ready to listen carefully.
Many words in English are not required to understand the meaning of a text or message.
Example
You trainer will read out a message. Listen to the message from some parents to their son
and answer the questions:
1. What is the boy‟s name?
2. Where are the parents?
3. How many things must the boy do while the parents are away?
4. What things must he do?
Check with your partner to see if you have the same answers. Your trainer will now put
the message on the screen. Check your answers. How many did you get correct?
Look at the summary of the message below. Does it provide all of the important
information? Check the full message.
Message summary:
Take out rubbish – Mondays
Feed cat and dog – 5pm every day. Food in fridge. Dog =1kg meat, Cat = 1 tin
Bring in paper every morning
Pick up sister from train station Thurs. 10th March, 8pm Phone: 123 456789.
Michael,
Your mother and I go on holiday tomorrow. While we are away don‟t forget to do the following
things.
Firstly, every Monday you need to put all of the rubbish in the bin outside. This is important
otherwise the house will smell horrible. Next, you need to feed the dog and cat each day at 5pm.
The dog eats 1kg of meat and the cat eats one tin of cat food. Their food is in the fridge. The paper
gets delivered every morning at 6am, so you should bring it inside when you wake up. On Thursday
the 10th March, you will need to pick your sister up from the train station at 8pm. Her phone number
is 123 456789, if you need to call her.
Love
Mum and Dad
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Summarising a message
Read the message below and write a summary of the message using only the important
words. Check with your partner when you have finished.
Hi Chris,
I will be out of the office tomorrow for a meeting.
Could you do some things for me?
First, I need you to unlock the training room doors first thing in the morning (8am). The keys are in
the top drawer under the cash register. Also, can you put the class lists on the training room doors,
please? Finally, can you tell the teachers that their books are on their desks in the training rooms.
Thanks! See you on Friday.
Ruth
Activity 2
Your trainer will play a recorded phone message. Listen to the recording, take notes and
then write a message summarising the message. When you have finished, tell the
message to your partner and check if you have shared all the information required.
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Handwriting examples
Handwriting
a a a A b b b B c c c c
d d d D e e e E f f f f
g g g G h h h H i i i I
j j j J k k k K l l l L
m m m M n n n N o o o O
p p p P q q q Q r r r R
s s s S t t t T u u u U
v v v V w w w W x x x X
y y y Y z z z Z
Here are three examples of the same sentence written by three different guests:
We found the service rather poor but the staff were friendly.
We found the service rather poor but the staff were very friendly.
We found the service rather poor but the staff were
very friendly.
We found the service rather poor but the staff were very friendly.
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Activity 3
Examples
Sometimes when you are taking a message from the phone or from someone speaking to
you, there isn‟t a lot of time to complete the notes or details of the message. This is often
when your handwriting becomes messy or difficult to read. Look at the examples below
and summarise each message. Discuss with your partner. Are they easy to read?
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Important information
Although messages will differ greatly depending on the situation, certain language is
common in most messages. It is important that you are able to hear key words or
information and often this language will include:
Days of the week
Dates
Times
Phone numbers
People‟s names
Place names
Company names
Measurements: kilograms, distance, heights
Directions.
There are also often signal words that let you know important information is coming. When
you hear these words you should get ready to write down the details. These signal words
include:
Sequence words: first, then, next, after that, also, finally
Requests: Could you..?, Would you…?, Don’t forget to…?, I need you to…?, You
should…?, Please,…, Remember…
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Activity 4
Read the messages below and circle all of the important words such as dates, times,
people‟s names, places, phone numbers. Then look to see if there are signal words that
come before the important information. Write a summary of the important information using
as little amount of words as possible. Share with your partner and see who was able to
identify all of the important information with the least amount of words.
Message 1:
Matt,
I ordered the food for the party tomorrow
night. All of the food will arrive at 8am at
the venue, The Golden Pig, 45 Main Street.
The supplier’s number is 0903 678 999 and his
name is Mike. Could you collect the food from
him in the morning? Also, Mary from Spring
Florists will bring the flowers at 10am.
Remember to get a receipt from them. One more
thing, don’t forget to bring my knives! I
left them in the kitchen at work.
See you tomorrow.
Vicky
Message 2:
Hi Susie,
Could you arrange the meeting room for the
management meeting at 6pm tonight? You will need to
organize 15 chairs and notebooks for everyone. Also,
put a bottle of water and a glass in front of each
participant. You should set up the laptop and
projector as well and order some light snacks. Mixed
sandwiches should be fine. If you need me you can
call me on 01212 494742.
Thanks
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Larry
Message 3:
Hi Paul, this is Mary from Front Office. We had a family check in this morning and their
son was quite ill. It seems he ate something that wasn’t fresh. I said I would check on
them later but I have been too busy. Could you go to their room and check that the boy is
OK please? Their room number is 1703 and their name is Jones. The boy’s name is
Phillip. Also, it might be nice if you take some lemonade to give to the boy. I left a can in
the staff fridge so you can take that with you. One more thing, Doctor Matthews’
number is 061287678 and you should take his number with you just in case.
Cathy
Practice
Your trainer is going to play a video for you. Listen to the message
and take notes. You will only watch the recording once. Write the
message and give to your partner to check. Watch the recording
again and check if your partner wrote down all of the information
correctly.
When you have finished write a short message and read it out to
your partner. Your partner should write down notes and then tell
you what the message is. Check to see if your partner is correct.
Only read the message once.
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Context or location
It is not always necessary to write full grammatical sentences to convey meaning,
especially in a short message. If the context is strong, that is you know what the person
sharing the message is talking about or where they are, then it is easier to understand
what the content of the message might be. Look at the example dialogue below. Is there a
lot of grammar? Are there any verbs? Do you understand what the message or
conversation is about? Discuss with your partner.
Conversation in a coffee shop
Waiter: Tea or coffee?
Customer: Coffee, please.
Waiter: Milk, sugar?
Customer: Both, please.
Waiter: 4.50, please.
Customer: Thanks!
Waiter: Thank you!
Useful language
Grammar is not always required to understand a message. There are also many ways
that language can be shortened or abbreviated to make it easier to write a message. Each
industry or profession has its own abbreviations that are understood by most people who
work in these fields. Some abbreviations are common to more general areas such as
position titles in the workplace.
Look at the common job titles below. Have you seen them before? D you know any other
abbreviations?
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HR Human Resources
GM General Manager
Dir Director
Dr. Doctor
AM Assistant Manager
PA Personal Assistant
VC Vice-Chairman
VD Vice-Director
There are many more abbreviations for job titles. Look at the Hotel organisational chart
below and match the abbreviations with their full spelling. The Hospitality and Tourism
industry has its own set of abbreviations that are very common and specific to the
profession.
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Activity 5
Read the message below and re-write it in full. Check with your partner to see if you have
the same understanding.
Message:
Hey Linh,
I’m writing re: the function for 200pax tmw night.
Who’s in charge of F&B? Also, is the GM attending?
CUL8R
Chris
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Activity 6
Text message:
GR8 2 CU last nite! Can u snd me your adr asap, plz? G2G OTW.
CUL8R!
Activity 7
In small groups write down all of the English text message abbreviations you know. The
group with the most abbreviations wins! There are some examples below to help you.
GR8 OTT G/F B/F TBC TBA B4 DV8 OTB KISS TLK2ULTR
Write a message to your partner using text message abbreviations. See if they understand.
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The Alphabet
Say each letter of the alphabet then write the letter into the correct sound group.
Some are already done for you.
A B F I O U R
__ __ __ __ __
__ __ __ __
__ __ __
__ __
__ __
__ __
__
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A Alpha N November
B Bravo O Oscar
C Charlie P Papa
D Delta Q Quebec
E Echo R Romeo
F Foxtrot S Sierra
G Golf T Tango
H Hotel U Uniform
I India V Victor
J Juliet W Windy
K Kilo X X-Ray
L Lima Y Yankee
M Mike Z Zulu
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Activity 8
Now spell your own name, and other trainees’ names, using these NATO phonetic
alphabets.
For example:
My name is Andrew. That‟s A for Alpha, N for November, D for Delta, R for Romeo and E
for Echo and W for Windy.
You should learn this system because during this course, and in your future work, you
may need to use it.
Activity 9 – Mingle
Move around the class and ask students for their full name and address. If you cannot
understand, ask them to spell. Use the NATO alphabet.
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Work Projects
It is a requirement of this Unit that you complete Work Projects as advised by your
Trainer. You must submit documentation, suitable evidence or other relevant proof of
completion of the project to your Trainer by the date agreed to.
1.1 Bring in three examples from your workplace of notes you have written from a
meeting with your supervisor or from a telephone call.
1.2. Provide your trainer with three messages you have written by hand from your
workplace.
1.3. Provide your trainer with a list of common abbreviations used in your workplace.
Explain the meaning of each abbreviation to your trainer.
1.4. Bring three examples of bookings, orders or messages you have taken which include
names, dates, numbers or addresses.
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Summary
Demonstrate the ability to take messages from oral input
Taking messages from oral input is challenging in a foreign language. To be able to write an
effective message you should:
Listen for key words
Use abbreviations where appropriate
Use clear handwriting so others can understand the message
Include all necessary information
Spell names and addresses correctly.
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2.1 Structure a message into a logical set of
instructions
Introduction
Short written messages are common in the workplace and
in everyday life. Text messaging has become one of the
most popular ways to communicate and is also used as a
means of communication for work-related matters. It is
important to summarise the main points when writing a
message and to use abbreviations where appropriate but it
is also necessary to put instructions or actions into a logical
order. If you put your instructions in the wrong order, the
task will not get completed properly.
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Method
First, preheat the oven to 180 degrees Celsius and line a muffin pan with paper cases.
Next, beat the butter, vanilla and sugar in a bowl until light and fluffy. Then add the eggs
one at a time, beating after each egg is added to the mixture.
After that, put the mixture into a big bowl and add half of the flour then stir in half of the
flour. Next, repeat with the remaining milk and flour.
Finally, put two tablespoons of mixture into the prepared muffin pan and bake in the oven
for 15-17minutes.
After cooking, take the cupcakes from the oven and let them cool.
Useful language
Sequencing words that you can use to order a set of instructions include:
First, second, third…..
Firstly, secondly, thirdly….
Then
Next
After that
Also
Finally, lastly.
You could also write your message using dot points ▪ or numbers 1/, 2/, 3/.
Activity 10
Read the sequence for responding to a complaint. Summarise the main points and put it
into the correct order. Use the sequencing words from above.
Responding to a complaint
Apologise again
Offer a solution
Summarise the problem so you show you understand
Apologise
Let the customer know you understand their feelings
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1.
________________________________________
________________________________________
________________________________________
2.
________________________________________
________________________________________
________________________________________
3.
________________________________________
________________________________________
________________________________________
4.
________________________________________
________________________________________
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_________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
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Activity 11
Look at the message below. What is the main point of the message? Is it clear? What
language or words make the message unclear?
Hi Eddie, I would like you to complete some things for me, if that is OK with you. I
need you to try and fix the dishwasher which broke last night. The thing on the inside is
not working properly, I think but I am not sure. Maybe it is the other thing with the red
handle on it but perhaps that is not it either. You could try to ask a professional but that
might cost a lot of money which is not really the best idea but they know how to fix it I
would imagine as this is their job. Anyway, do the best you can and if you can’t fix it, it
doesn’t matter because we can use the one in the main kitchen.
Bye
Olga
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Now rewrite the message to make it clearer. Use simple language, point form and
clear instructions. Check your message with your partner.
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
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Activity 12
Look at the sentences below. Write please or thank you in the appropriate place.
Useful language
Often, when giving instructions, it is necessary to use imperatives or commands. For
example, ‘Take out the rubbish!’ or ‘Take the guest’s luggage first, then give them a drink’.
In the right context, using commands for instructions are quite acceptable. When
requesting someone to do something for you, there is language that you can use that is
more polite than commands. ‘Could’ and ‘would’ are polite modal verbs that are useful
when requesting someone to do something.
Remember that when you write an email do not use capital letters as this may mean you
are shouting. For example, you should write ‘Please call me later’ not ‘CALL ME!’.
Look at the examples below. Which is the most polite sentence? Why?
1. Get me a towel!
2. Get me a towel, please!
3. Could you get me a towel?
4. Could you get me a towel, please?
5. Would you mind getting me a towel?
6. Would you mind getting me a towel, please?
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Sentence 6 is the most polite. Adding ‘please’ makes any request more polite and you
should always use it. Using ‘could’ and ‘would’ are more polite because they are asking
the person if they can do something unlike imperatives or commands which direct or tell
someone to do something.
Activity 13
Rewrite the requests below to make them more polite. The first one has been done for you.
Use ‘could’ or ‘would’.
Use ‘Would you mind….?’ to politely ask someone to do something. You can add ‘please’ to make
the request more polite.
Would you mind telling me your room number, please? (instead of „Tell me your room
number.‟)
Would you mind picking up your coat from the floor, please? (instead of „Pick up your coat
from the floor.‟)
Would you mind smoking outside, please? (instead of „You must smoke outside.‟)
A strange thing about asking ‘Would you mind..?’ is that when the other person answers ‘No’, they
mean ‘Yes’.
A: Would you mind moving your things, please?
B: No, not at all.
This means B does not mind – so they will move their things.
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Activity 14
Look at the request below and the responses. Does the second person agree or not? Write
agrees or does not agree. The first one has been done for you.
Response Answer
No problem!
Why should I?
Not at all.
I would actually.
Sure!
I will.
Yes.
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Work Projects
It is a requirement of this Unit that you complete Work Projects as advised by your
Trainer. You must submit documentation, suitable evidence or other relevant proof of
completion of the project to your Trainer by the date agreed to.
2.1 Provide your trainer with five messages from your workplace which show:
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Summary
Write short instructional messages
When writing short instructional messages, it is important to put instructions in the correct order. It
is not helpful when instructions are stated in a disorganised manner. This leads to confusion and
delays. When writing short instructional messages, you should:
Use a logical order for any instructions
Use sequencing and signal words to help explain the order in which to carry out the actions
Use simple language, point form or numbering to ensure instructions are clear and
unambiguous
Use polite forms when requesting someone to carry out a task or tasks for you.
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Element 3:
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apology and explanation for absence
3.1 Write a short message of thanks and apology
to develop and maintain good working
relationships
Introduction
Everybody makes mistakes sometimes and everybody
does a good job sometimes. It is important, in the
workplace, to admit when we have made a mistake and
apologise for it. It is also important to recognise and
acknowledge when someone has done something to
help you. A short message or email apologising for a
mistake or thanking someone for their help, makes a
work environment comfortable and pleasant.
Message of thanks
In any job you will often need help whether to lift something because it is too heavy, or
because it is so busy that you need extra staff. When you request people to help you, it is
important to acknowledge their assistance. Writing a short message of thanks is an
effective way to show you appreciate the help. Below are some useful expressions that
you can use to say thanks:
Thanks so much for……
Thanks a lot for …….
Thanks, I really appreciate……
Thank you, I couldn‟t have ……….. without your help.
It is important to be specific about why you are thanking someone when you write a
message of appreciation. Always write why you are thanking the person. For example:
‘Thanks for helping with the function last night. We couldn’t have done it without
you.’
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Activity 15
Look at the situations below. Write a short message of thanks for each situation. The first one
has been done for you. Remember to use somebody‟s name!
1.
Working
late
2.
_____________________________________________
3.
_____________________________________________
4.
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5.
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Apologising
Thanking someone for their help is an important part of work and apologising for making a
mistake is just as important. You should always admit when you have made a mistake
and apologise to the person or people affected by the mistake. Like a message of thanks,
a short apology message should also explain what you are apologising for.
There are many situations in the workplace where you need to apologise. Some common
mistakes include:
Forgetting to do something
Doing something the wrong way
Not knowing how to do something
Being late
Getting angry
Not communicating effectively.
When writing a short message of apology, it is important to say ‘sorry’ and what you are
sorry for. For example:
I‟m sorry for being late yesterday.
I apologise for forgetting to ……
I‟m sorry I was angry with you.
I‟m sorry for not informing you. I should have sent you an email.
Activity 16
Look at the examples below. Write a short message apologising for each situation. The
first one has been done for you.
1.
2.
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Be back in 5 mins!
There will be times when you are working that you will have to leave your position to
attend to something else. This is quite common but it is important that you inform people
where you have gone and when you will return. Leaving a message is an effective way to
let your colleagues know where you are. A message can be handwritten, sent by phone
(text) or emailed. It is important to write it down though so you have evidence that you
informed other staff about why you left your station.
Look at the diagram below. In pairs write some common reasons for why people have to
leave their work place temporarily.
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Useful language
There are many reasons why you might have to leave work temporarily. When writing a
message to explain where and why you have gone you can use:
I had to ……
I have gone…..
I will be…..
I am in/at/….
I needed to ……
I‟ve gone to….
It is also important to write when you will return to work. You can use ‘will’ in this situation
if you are certain when you will return or ‘should’ if you can‟t be sure when you will be
back. For example:
I had to go to the toilet. I will be back in 5 mins
I‟ve gone to the cool room. I should be back in 15 or 20 mins
I am in the bar helping with the function. I should be back in half an hour. Call me if
you need me sooner
Sorry, I missed the bus. I will be late to work. I should be there by 10.00am.
Activity 18
Look at the situations below. Write a short message explaining why you had to leave. The
first one has been done for you.
1.
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Activity 19
Look at the messages explaining a temporary absence below. Are they appropriate?
Discuss why or why not in small groups.
1. Sorry I was late. I was watching the football and I forgot the time.
2. Jack, I have gone to the toilet. I will be back in 1 hour.
3. Mary, I have gone to the hospital with the Commis Chef. He cut his hand. I should be
back by 2pm.
4. Dear Phil, I won‟t be coming to work today. Thanks!
5. Owen, I am in the restaurant helping Fiona. They are really busy and don‟t have
enough staff. Call me if you need help.
Starting a message
When you begin a message, you should always address the person that you are sending
or leaving the message for. This stops any confusion in who you are addressing. Like a
letter, you can address the receiver using „Dear‟ or you can just use their name. You can
also say ‘hi’ which is less formal. For example:
‘Dear Jim, I had to help in the kitchen. Will be back in 30 mins.’
‘Hi Mary, I have gone to the toilet. I will be back in 10 mins.’
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Activity 20
Write a short message to explain that you have gone somewhere. Use another student‟s
name from your class. Remember to say when you will return. Give the message to the
person in the class and see if they can understand. Use the situations below to help you.
‘Hi Jane, I had to go to head office to pick up some things. I will be back at 2pm. Call me
if you need anything. Thanks.
Julie’
Example 2:
„It‟s Mike here. Am running late. CU @ 9.15am. Thx!‟
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Example 3:
Dear Fiona,
Thank you so much for working late last night. It was really busy and you did a great job. I
hope you aren‟t too tired today. Can I take you for lunch today to say thanks? Let me
know if you would like to go.
Once again, thanks!
Sincerely,
Adam
Adam Smith
F&B Manager
The Beach Hotel
Activity 21
Write three different messages: a text message, a handwritten message and an email
message. One message should explain a temporary absence, another thanking someone
and the last message should apologise for something.
Remember to start the message correctly by using the receiver‟s name and greeting them.
Use the correct level of formality depending on who you are writing too. There are some
examples below to help you.
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Go to
Use go to + place
I go to work at 8am.
I went to the cinema last night.
The Management team has gone to the Magnolia Terrace restaurant.
Go for
Use go for + activity
Let‟s go for a walk.
I went for lunch.
John and Michelle have gone for a swim.
Go on
Use go on + longer activity
Let‟s go on a trip.
They went on a tour.
The Smith‟s have gone on a river cruise.
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Activity 22
Complete the sentences below using: go, go to, go for, go on. The first one has been done
for you.
Activity 23
Put the words into the right order. Remember to use capital letters and punctuation. Follow
the example.
Example:
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Grammar
Which preposition do you use with these time words? Put the words into the correct
column. One has been done for you.
No preposition at on in
April
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No preposition at on in
Write at, on, in or x (no preposition) to complete the sentences. One has been done for
you.
1. Shana and Frank checked in on the 25th and checked out on the 28th.
3. They bought sunscreen ________ the morning from the gift shop.
4. The restaurant opens _______ 7pm and closes ______ 1am every day.
10. The night market is open _______ Saturdays and Sundays ________ summer.
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Read the text below and write the best word in each space. If the noun doesn‟t need an
article, write X in the space.
Write the best word into each space. If the noun doesn’t need an article, write x in the spa
a an the some X (no word necessary)
The hotel restaurant is very popular with ________ guests. _______ menu has
_________ wide range of ________ Chinese, Thai, Japanese and Western dishes,
to cater for all ________ tastes. ________ most popular dishes are La Zi Ji Ding
(very spicy chicken), Fried Rice, Ginger Beef, and Peking Duck. ________ food is
well-cooked, tender, and non-oily, and ________ portions are generous. ________
noodles are fresh – they are made every morning on ________ noodle-making
machine. Most of ________ dishes are served with ________ rice, and ________
guests can choose from ________ wide range of ________ fine wines and beers.
There are ________ traditional dance performances every Friday and Saturday
night.
________ restaurant is on ________ level three, and is open daily from 11.00am to
1.00am. It seats up to ________ 150 diners (60 in the smoking section and 90 in the
non-smoking section).
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Vocabulary – collocations
Collocations are two or more words that go together well. Collocations are used by Native
English speakers all the time as they sound natural. For example, a Native English
speaker would use „take a quick shower‟ not „take a fast shower‟. Learning collocations is
a great way to increase your vocabulary quickly by learning groups of words that go
together rather than learning individual words. Some words have lots of collocations and
these groups of words are good to learn.
For example – money
Money combines with verbs, adjectives and nouns to form
collocations.
Verbs:
Save money, spend money, make money, earn money, take
money, steal money.
Adjectives:
Pocket money, spending money, prize money, holiday money.
Nouns:
Money system, money machine, money order, money supply.
Learning vocabulary in topics is an excellent way to widen your
vocabulary. Learning collocations within a topic or word group can
increase your vocabulary quickly.
There are lots of collocations that combine with ‘break’ and these
expressions are very common:
Break in, break out, break up, break a glass, break a record
Take a break, have a break
Weekend break or mid-week break
Short break, long break, work break, lunch break, tea break, coffee break
Half-time break, quarter break.
‘Work’ has many collocations as well.
For example:
Work for, work on, work at, work in, work out, work under
Work mate, work colleagues, work time
Work long hours, work break, work too much, work hard, work smart.
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Activity 27
Look at the diagram below. Add as many words that you can think of that combine well
with „football‟. You can use your dictionary if you like. Some examples have been done for
you.
manager
team
club
football
Activity 28
Many verbs have strong collocations that are very common. Look at the examples below
and in pairs write as many collocations that you can think of for the verbs. Some examples
have been done for you.
out the
rubbish
from
over the
the
reins
poor
Take
away on a
food project
in a
stranger
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early
out of
bed
Get
home
to bed
go shopping
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Work Projects
It is a requirement of this Unit that you complete Work Projects as advised by your
Trainer. You must submit documentation, suitable evidence or other relevant proof of
completion of the project to your Trainer by the date agreed to.
3.1 Provide your trainer with two messages of thanks and two messages of apology from
your workplace. Explain the situation and contexts to your trainer and what
happened after you sent the messages.
3.2. Provide three examples of messages explaining a temporary absence from the
workplace. Include:
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Summary
Write short messages of appreciation, apology and explanation
for absence
When writing a short message of appreciation, apology or explanation for absence, it is important
to:
Use appropriate ways to start and finish the message
Use accurate grammar
Use specific vocabulary that is relevant to the message
Use the correct level of formality.
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Presentation of written work
2. Style
Students should write in a style that is simple and concise. Short
sentences and paragraphs are easier to read and understand. It helps to
write a plan and at least one draft of the written work so that the final
product will be well organized. The points presented will then follow a
logical sequence and be relevant. Students should frequently refer to the
question asked, to keep „on track‟. Teachers recognize and are critical of
work that does not answer the question, or is „padded‟ with irrelevant
material. In summary, remember to:
Plan ahead
Be clear and concise
Answer the question
Proofread the final draft.
Format
All written work should be presented on A4 paper, single-sided with a left-hand margin. If
work is word-processed, one-and-a-half or double spacing should be used. Handwritten
work must be legible and should also be well spaced to allow for ease of reading. New
paragraphs should not be indented but should be separated by a space. Pages must be
numbered. If headings are also to be numbered, students should use a logical and
sequential system of numbering.
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Cover Sheet
All written work should be submitted with a cover sheet stapled to the front that contains:
The student‟s name and student number
The name of the class/unit
The due date of the work
The title of the work
The teacher‟s name
A signed declaration that the work does not involve plagiarism.
Keeping a Copy
Students must keep a copy of the written work in case it is lost. This rarely happens but it
can be disastrous if a copy has not been kept.
Inclusive language
This means language that includes every section of the population. For instance, if a
student were to write „A nurse is responsible for the patient‟s in her care at all times‟ it
would be implying that all nurses are female and would be excluding male nurses.
Examples of appropriate language are shown on the right:
Mankind Humankind
Host/hostess Host
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Recommended reading
Recommended reading
Parkinson, D., 2002, Really Learn 100 Phrasal Verbs, OUP, UK
Swan. M. & Walter. C., 2009, Oxford English Grammar Course – Basic, OUP, UK
Underhill, A., 2005, Sound Foundations: Learning and Teaching pronunciation,
Macmillan, UK
Websites and online learning
Clearinghouse of ESL Lesson Plans and Resource
www.csun.edu/~hcedu013/eslplans.html
Dave‟s ESL café www.eslcafe.com/
Delta‟s ESL Links www.delta-systems.com/links.cfm
English as a Second Language www.rong-chang.com/
English Club.com www.englishclub.com/index.htm
Grammar Safari www.iei.uiuc.edu/web.pages/grammarsafari.html
Mark‟s ESL World www.marksesl.com/main_page.html
Online Writing Lab www.owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/esl/
One stop English www.onestopenglish.com
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Recommended reading
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