“Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life.

Is it a positive or negative
development?”
Body 1: positive aspects of adverts

- Create more jobs

- More choices for people
- Gain money for companies.
- Be informed about new products or services.

Body 2: my opinion and negative sides of it.

- Attract children unhealthily in terms of health, of pressure they put on their parents.
- Leads to a more consuming world, consumerism
- Certain brands is associated with certain status/ discriminate
- Distract people attention.

Nowadays, it’s not uncommon to see a great amount of advertisements on not only televisions but also online networks at the
same time. While it is true that there are some benefits of advertising, I personally believe that advertising does more harms
than goods.

As it is mentioned, there are advantages of advertisements. Firstly, there would be more jobs for people. The advertising field
can contribute to the lessening of unemployment by giving out jobs regrading to marketing, IT, employing actors, actress and
other staffs. Secondly, once a new product or any service is broadcasted, people will experience more choices. They will not be
any more confined with any certain products. Finally, people will be more knowledgeable and informed about the products that
they want to use. For example, a kind of milk supporting the height of children was introduced to people on TV, it would help
parents to get it for the development of their children. Moreover, those products shown on TV will be normally more assuring
about the quality than those which are not.

Though we cannot deny the positive side of advertisement, we cannot also ignore the harmful effects of it and which I believe
has more disadvantages. Advertisements will just distract people from their other necessary work. There are tons of people
who just spend their time looking for goods or for their shopping stuffs. This will lead to the ineffectiveness in working. Further
than that, it can also lead people to get more stress because once they cannot focus on their work, and when it gets to the due
time, people will just get stressed. And certainly it negatively affect their mental health. Moreover, discrimination can also be
an outcome from the advertisement. Each brand might have association with a certain status, and thus it automatically cause
inequality. To illustrate this, I would say like many people nowadays has associated LV products, a famous fashion brand, with
only wealthy person, and when someone owns an LV, he could disregard the presence of others. In brief, I would say that it is
to me that advertising brings a lot of downsides to our world.

To conclude, I once again repeat my point that advertisement is truly beneficial, but it’s harmful impact is worth more
considerations.