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Research Tittle:
Design of a Valve Lapping Machine for the Cylinder Head of an ISUZU C – 240 Engine
Author:
Melquisedee L. Canete
Ruffa A. Espanola
Francisco C. Malubay
Kristofer Roy M. Parafina
John Carlo M. Waje
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Methodology They explain They base on the They need more ideas to
and conduct an study and explain the design of valve
experiment to theoretical ideas. lapping machine.
show how the
parts may work.
Results and They gathered Some of the For me, they need explain it
Discussions the data so they explanation are very well even they have
can explain it not qualified their evidence that it
very well. They because it gives performs efficiently than
conducted data an idea that was manual valve lapping. For
on manual valve not include to the results, they have their data
and valve research. for project testing.
lapping machine
to prove the
efficiency and
difference
between the two.
Conclusions and They have their The data may be Even though they have
Direction for data and disregarded their data they need to
Future Use evaluation. because they use explain more directly.
too much word
that leads the
audience
confusion.
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