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Understanding of the Directive several geographical, economic and
cultural reasons.

One or the more favourable factors

needed for tea cultivation such as soil
quality, humidity, temperature,
rainfall etc were available in Darjeeling
region but not in other regions. For
example temperature in too low in Kangra
valley to grow tea. Similarly, rainfall is
more than what is required in areas east
of Darjeeling region and less than what is
required in areas west of Darjeeling
region.

The economic factors which contributed

towards the success of Darjeeling regions
were easy availability of cheap labour
from Bengal-Bihar region, relatively
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to ports in Bengal.

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preventing other regions from developing
as a tea growing region. For example, to
some extent strong ethnicity in North-
eastern India prevented British from
dominating and commercializing the area.
The presence of large indigenous and
tribal population in other areas reduced
the scope of commercial activities like tea
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