Editor’s Log WP3 

From my initial A comment or question I Textual change(s) How this change
assignment: received from De Piero or a I made to what I impacts my piece:
classmate:  initially wrote:
Independent   This changes the impact
Study: Why all Zack suggested that I make my Tylaya: Seeking of my piece because it
teachers should subject a bit shorter to make it Independent Study changes whether or not it
be trained to more attention grabbing.  Help catches his attention
teach and within his many emails.
motivate special
education
students

Originally my intro Zack suggested making my intro I made the intro This changes the impact
paragraph was paragraph a bit smaller and paragraph only of my piece because
very large and breaking it up into two separate about where I know small paragraphs make
needed to be paragraphs. the teacher from an email more appealing
broken up. and the second and separates the email
paragraph about into different points.
sort of “kissing up”
to him in a way.

Initially, I didn’t Zack suggested saying exactly I was also thinking This makes my purpose
specify what I what I wanted to do during the that we could and goal with the
wanted to do with study. interview students independent study more
the independent and teachers to get clear to the reader.
study. their input as well.