10259248_NURS30192&61192

by Hendra Kurnia Rakhma

Submission date: 11-Nov-2019 11:23AM (UTC+0000)

Submission ID: 112800230
File name: 10259248_NURS30192_61192.doc (63K)
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ORIGINALITY REPORT

14 %
SIMILARITY INDEX
9%
INTERNET SOURCES
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PUBLICATIONS
14%
STUDENT PAPERS

PRIMARY SOURCES

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Submitted to The University of Manchester
Student Paper 4%
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www.musictherapy.org
Internet Source 4%
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www.bongos.net.au
Internet Source 3%
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Submitted to Oxford Brookes University
Student Paper 3%

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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

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10259248

Thank you for submitting this draft.

Please see in text comments alongside these general

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comments to help you to improve this ready for the
summative submission.

I was confused at the start but I am now working on the

assumption that this is a plan for your presentation and
not the essay.

This is a good topic to review the literature on.

You will need more than the one paper to review

however as reviewing several papers allows you to
evaluate as well as appraise and critique . All of these
are are level 7. Currently I am unable to judge if you
are working at that level as you haven't presented me
with the level of detail I require to do that.

Overall though I think you are on the right lines apart

from the numbers of papers that you are using.

Cliff Richardson Nov 2019

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Comment 2
This isnt the objective of this essay although you can include the use of music therapy in the
Intervention section and you can focus more into the intervention section to enable yourself to do that

Comment 3
I am confused as to what this plan is for now - is it the essay or the presentation?

Comment 4
OK for the presentation I suggest you review the evidence for music therapy for cancer patients
rather than focus on one patient only although you could use the patient as a vehicle to support the
evidence that you review/appraise and critique

Comment 5
You will need more than one paper

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