Descriptive Essay of a Person

Write a composition of about 150 words on the following topic.

Describe a person who has influenced you a lot.

A person (1) has influenced me a lot is my eldest sister. Her name is Yvette. (2)
I was a little girl, her advice has guided me (3) the way I look at
life and many other things. Her encouragement contributed hugely to my success (4) my
studies.

She is beautiful, humour, hardworking as well as intelligent. She takes a lot of care (5)
her appearance. She is always well-dressed and ties her hair (6) ponytail when she
is working. Besides, she is also a kind and understanding person. Many people turn to her (7)
help and she never fails to help anyone.

She loves to dance. She has taken part in many dance (8) . When she was in her teens,
her dream was to become a dancer, but that was just a fantasy. After (9) high school, she
enrolled in a law course at a prestigious university.

Today, she is a successful and industrious lawyer. I am very proud (10) her. As a
high-flying lawyer, she earns a very high (11) and being generous, she often buys gifts
for me and my parents. She even takes us to travel abroad (12) the school holidays.

To me, she is my role model. When I grow up, I want to be like her. I want to be successful and filial
like her which would certainly (13) my parents happy.
 A person who has influenced me a lot is my eldest sister. Her name is Yvette. Since I was a little girl,
her advice has guided me in the way I look at life and many other things. Her encouragement contributed
hugely to my success in my studies.

She is beautiful, humour, hardworking as well as intelligent. She takes a lot of care of her appearance.
She is always well-dressed and ties her hair in ponytail when she is working. Besides, she is also a kind and
understanding person. Many people turn to her for help and she never fails to help anyone.

She loves to dance. She has taken part in many dance competitions. When she was in her teens, her
dream was to become a dancer, but that was just a fantasy. After leaving high school, she enrolled in a law
course at a prestigious university.

Today, she is a successful and industrious lawyer. I am very proud of her. As a high-flying lawyer, she
earns a very high income and being generous, she often buys gifts for me and my parents. She even takes us to
travel abroad during the school holidays.

To me, she is my role model. When I grow up, I want to be like her. I want to be successful and filial
like her which would certainly make my parents happy.