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We normally use the passive voice when we are more interested in what is
done, not who or what does it. If we say, “the rooms are cleaned by the maid
every day,” we are more interested in the fact that the rooms are cleaned every
day than in the person who cleans the rooms (the maid).
The voice of a verb tells whether the subject of the sentence performs or receives
the action. In English there are two voices, passive and active.
Passive Voice
In passive voice, the subject receives the action expressed by the verb: A song
was written by the student.
In active voice, on the other hand, the subject performs the action of the verb:
The cats climbed the curtains.
Grandma and Grandpa raced grocery carts across the parking lot.
Active and passive voice in writing
The choice between using the active or passive voice in writing is a matter of style,
not correctness. However, most handbooks recommend using active voice, which
they describe as more natural, direct, lively, and succinct. The passive voice is
considered wordy and weak (except when used in cases above). Examine the
following examples.
weak, passive:
The skater was slammed into the wall by Maria.
strong, active:
Maria slammed the skater into the wall.
weak, passive:
The book was enjoyed by me because the events of her childhood were described
so well by the author.
strong, active:
I enjoyed the book because the author described the events of her childhood so
well.
An active verb may or may not have a direct object, but the passive verb almost
never does.
"It is...That" construction (It is clear that... It is noted...)
Use of the verbs To Be, Make, or Have (Passive: Your exits should be made
quickly. Active: Leave quickly.)
Endings that turn verbs into abstract nouns: -ion,-ing,-ment:
You can recognize passive-voice expressions because the verb phrase will
always include a form of be, such as am, is, was, were, are, or been. The
presence of a be-verb, however, does not necessarily mean that the
sentence is in passive voice. Another way to recognize passive-voice
sentences is that they may include a "by the..." phrase after the verb; the
agent performing the action, if named, is the object of the preposition in this
phrase.
There are two main reasons for using the passive voice in English:
The focus of the sentence is on the object rather than the subject
The subject of the active sentence is unknown or general.
• passive (indirect):
The entrance exam was failed by over one-third of the applicants to the
school.
The brakes were slammed on by her as the car sped downhill.
Your bicycle has been damaged.
• active (direct):
Over one-third of the applicants to the school failed the entrance exam.
She slammed on the brakes as the car sped downhill.
I have damaged your bicycle.
Sentences in active voice are also more concise than those in passive voice
because fewer words are required to express action in active voice than in
passive.
If you want to change a passive-voice sentence to active voice, find the agent in
a "by the..." phrase, or consider carefully who or what is performing the action
expressed in the verb. Make that agent the subject of the sentence, and change
the verb accordingly.
• passive:
• active:
While active voice helps to create clear and direct sentences, sometimes writers
find that using an indirect expression is rhetorically effective in a given situation,
so they choose passive voice. Also, as mentioned above, writers in the sciences
conventionally use passive voice more often than writers in other discourses.
Passive voice makes sense when the agent performing the action is obvious,
unimportant, or unknown or when a writer wishes to postpone mentioning the
agent until the last part of the sentence or to avoid mentioning the agent at all.
The passive voice is effective in such circumstances because it highlights the
action and what is acted upon rather than the agent performing the action.
• active:
• passive:
In each of these examples, the passive voice makes sense because the agent
is relatively unimportant compared to the action itself and what is acted upon.
• active:
• passive:
In each of these examples, the passive voice is useful for highlighting the action
and what is acted upon instead of the agent.
Some suggestions
Many customers in the restaurant found the coffee too bitter to drink, but
it was still ordered frequently.
He tried to act cool when he slipped in the puddle, but he was still
laughed at by the other students.
• Revised:
Many customers in the restaurant found the coffee too bitter to drink, but
they still ordered it frequently.
He tried to act cool when he slipped in the puddle, but the other students
still laughed at him.
2. Avoid dangling modifiers1 caused by the use of passive voice.
• Revised:
Simple present
active: passive:
• The company ships the computers • Computers are shipped to many
to many foreign countries. foreign countries.
Present Progressive
active: passive:
• The chef is preparing the food. • The food is being prepared.
Simple Past
active: passive:
• The delivery man delivered the • The package was delivered
package yesterday. yesterday.
Past Progressive
active: passive:
• The producer was making an • An announcement was being
announcement. made.
Future
active: passive:
• Our representative will pick up the
• The computer will be picked up.
computer.
1
A dangling modifier is a word or phrase that modifies a word not clearly stated in the sentence.
Present Perfect
active: passive:
• Someone has made the • The arrangements have been
arrangements for us. made for us.
Past Perfect
active: passive:
• They had given us visas for three • We had been given visas for three
months. months.
Modals
active: passive:
• You can use the computer. • The computer can be used.
Subject/Object
active: passive:
• They sent the man a package. • The man was sent a package.
By
active: passive:
• Their friends often take them to • They are often taken to interesting
interesting places. places by their friends.