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Ma’am Rhoda 5  face-to-face  Direct

interviews were interviews were
used to gather used to gather
data. Face to data. Personal
face personal interview is
interview is considered to
considered to be the most
be the most common data…
common data…

 Please tell us a  Remove -

little bit about Unnecessary
yourself and
what you do for
the
cooperative.

Sir John  Contents of the  The contents of

questionnaire the
questionnaire
will solely be
based on the
objective of our
research which
is how the CDF
are being
effectively
manage and if
there are ways
on how it can
be improved

 The concept of
 How will it be effective fund
validated management
will be
validated by
gathering
information
that was
disclosed by
well-established
cooperatives in
both local and
international
  Reliability
testing will be
 If reliability used to see
testing is how effective
needed the strategic
CDF
management is
being executed
Uncle Rhad  Interview  To appendix
questions

 Interview  Do you
question no.11 personally see
– leading an opportunity
for the
improvement
on how the
fund is being
manage?

 Change the  Change the

respondent to respondent to
subject subject
Elton John 4, 5  Use the word  Use the word
“Question” “Question”
instead of the instead of the
word word
“Questionnaire” “Questionnaire”

6  The words  Change to

“Developing the “making the
questionnaire” questions”
is inappropriate

7  Elaborate how  Add to Data

the data procedures
collection “During the
procedures informed
respect the consent
privacy of the process, it will
participants be informed to
the participants
that their
confidentiality
will be kept
hidden and with
 the expectation
that it will not
be divulged to
others without
permission in
ways that are
inconsistent
with the
understanding
of the original
disclosure.”

7  It is not  Add to data

mentioned that procedures
there is a “After
provision made concluding the
for the study,
participants to participants
be informed of shall have the
the results of right to be
the study informed of the
results of the
study”
Ma’am Nona  Remove  1, 2, 4, 9, 10,
questions that 14, 15, 16, 17,
are not part of 18, 20, 23
the objectives

 Include consent  Add to data

on how will the procedures
interview be “The
conducted, will researchers will
you use a use video or
recorder? voice recorder
upon
conducting the
interview, the
tools will be
using will be
informed to the
participant
prior to the
conduct of the
interview and
will only
conduct a video
recording if the
participant
permits to do
so.”