Pronunciation:

English [Ihng-glish]
something [sahm-thing]
Helen [HE-Len]

Intonation Correction:
Did you hear the news about Helen?

Grammar Corrections:
Because if we live doing wrong things,
it will give us trouble in our lives.
However, if we live doing right things,
good luck will come to us in return.

Grammar Focus:
And, if we live doing right things in our life, > However, if we live doing right
things,

When you are trying to compare two opposite outcomes (for example: good vs bad),
you should use the conjuction However or But.
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Pronunciation:
something [suhm-THING]
thought [THot]
conscience [KON-shens]

Intonation Correction:
Helen doesn't seem like the kind of person who would do that.

Grammar:
If we live the wrong way, it seems we will be okay right now but we'll feel a
guilty of conscience. In Korean culture, there is a belief about rewarding virtue
and punishing evil.

And in Korean culture, there is belief that rewarding of virtue and punishment of
evil.>
In Korean culture, there is a belief about rewarding virtue and punishing evil.

Parallel Structure is following the same grammatical pattern. So instead of saying,

"rewarding of virtue and punishment of evil," we say, " rewarding virtue and
punishing evil."

PRONUNCIATION:
Helen [he-Len]
work [werk]
English [eng-GLISH]

Intonation Correction:
Helen DOESN'T seem like the kind of person who would DO that.

GRAMMAR:
Wow, Long time no see!
I never imagined that we will see each other here in Paris.
Minyoung said that you got married last year.
You seem happier than before!
I never imagined to meet you in Paris. > I never imagined that we will see each
other here in Paris.

We use the phrase, "to meet you" when you never met before in person. So, it's
better to say, " I never imagined that we will see each other here in Paris," to
say that you saw you friend again after a long time.

Did you hear the news about Japan removing South Korea from trade 'whitelist'?
I think Japan made a wrong decision. It will affect their economy negatively.
Japan will regret their stupid decision.

It will affect their economy negatively.

It will make a bad effect to Japan's economy more than Korea's economy.

PRONUNCIATION:
multiplication [Muhl-tee-lee-keyh-shuhn]

INTONATION:
But it does not work that way in life.

Recently, my computer isn't working properly.

When I turned up the power button, at first I hear the buzzing sounds that it was
working.
And then it go off without the next screen.
That situations becomes more often.

Hi! Long time no see. How have you been?

You seem like very doing well. You said that you're going to aboard to work.
You seem like very happy with your job.

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