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MSLW 2
Business Communication
Dear Participant
You have selected a course that will help you sharpen and refine your
writing skills. In today’s business world the ability to communicate well can
determine the difference between the success or failure of a project, a
business transaction, an organization, or an individual.
The ability to communicate well in writing is critical. Those who have that
ability have an advantage, an edge.
In this program, we will focus on the four imperatives of Writing , using the
“LESS” Technique for Effective Business Writing.
1. Structure
2. Style
3. Language
4. Etiquette
“Beneath the rule of men entirely great, The Pen is mightier than the sword”
Edward Bulwer Lytton - 1803 – 1873
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Business Communication
EXERCISE 1.1
Subject Line
Signal words signal the intent of the email. Examples of a few signal words:
Request for
Clarification on
Confirmation on
Update on
Status of
Recommendation for
Approval on/for
Invitation to
Presentation on
Review of
Response to
Do/ Know statements signify what the reader of the mail should do or
know.
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Business Communication
Sample 1
I recommend we request a new copier in the annual budget. For the past 6
months, we have had to repair our copy machine on an average of twice
weekly. Needless to say, repair costs and productivity losses have been
substantial.
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Sample 2
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Business Communication
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EXERCISE 1.2
“Good writing takes more than just time, it wants your best
moments and the best of you” – Anonymous
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Business Communication
Keith,
This letter is a follow-up to a conversation we had sometime ago about
switching your networks to WebWare. As you may be aware, WW has been
selling network products since 1995 through our direct dealers. Our WW
product is a second generation product tested in direct dealership for the last
two ears.
I think we have a great product and we could go on and on, but I really
wanted to remind you that WW has just opened a direct channel office in your
area. Pls consider visiting our office and talking with some of our
representatives about our full-featured network product. Enclosed please find
a customer survey I would like you to fill out. I hope all is going on well with
you. If you have any questions, please revert back.
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Business Communication
Hi Keith
In our discussion last Monday in your office, we determined three challenges
we can help you meet. Please consider a visit from our new local
representative to explore these challenges further:
You mentioned your desire for all networks to operate as one big network.
The advantage is rapid exchange of information in the office and in the field.
The WebWare family of products permits this kind of bridging.
Your team of engineers and sales representatives need to enter, retrieve and
manipulate data remotely. With WebWare, all they will require is a modem
and a piece of access software.
Ensuring Security
With remote access you will always have to worry about security. With
WebWare, you can design several levels of security, restricting access to
databases.
Request your consent for a meeting with our local representative- Ajay
Kulkarni.
Thank you.
Regards
Rahul
040-27847333 ext 6445
MSLW 8
Business Communication
Exercise 1.3
“Untold years are lost when we do not communicate well”- Hyrun Smith
Providing Explanation
Your customer writes to you expressing his dissatisfaction about not receiving
an upload. You are stunned on receiving the email as you had uploaded the
weekly status file on time. You presume the delay to have been caused due
to a technical snag. How would you respond .
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Business Communication
EXERCISE 1.4
EXERCISE ON STYLE
2) Be Specific
1. Would appreciate if you could send me the design document asap.
2. We are forwarding the report for your perusal. Request your feedback at
the earliest.
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Business Communication
2. The Interface Team will be responsible for integrating the functional units
developed by the QA Team and for the execution of the model test matrix.
MSLW 11
Business Communication
MSLW 12
Business Communication
EXERCISE 1.5
LANGUAGE EXERCISE
“ Words, once they are printed have a life of their own” – Carol Burnett
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Business Communication
Hello Dave
This is to update your status. Unless you fill your people finder details you will
not be imported to the portal .So i request you to get in touch with the GIO
team and ask them to reset the password. So that you can try with new
password to update the details. If any issues please revert.
Hello Michael
This is regarding the above ticket. Can you please provide me some
information ,which helps in investigating the problem. Are you able to view
the i.unilever.com home page? Also i want to find out what user name you
are using while login to the portal.Can you please update me the requird
information
2. Let us hold a meeting for the purpose of discussing the status of the
project.
Fog Index
The Fog Index is a proven method of analyzing written material to see how
easy it is to read and understand. The steps you can use to calculate the Fog
Index are outlined below. The numbers in the right column are based on this
paragraph. When using these steps to analyze your writing, choose a sample
that contains at least one hundred words. The "ideal" Fog Index level is 7
or 8. A level above 12 indicates the writing sample is too hard for most
people to read.
length.
Divide the number of sentences
into the number of words
5 Calculate the percentage of big 6/88 = 7%
words.
Divide the number of words into
the number of big words
6 Add the avg sentence length to 7+14= 21
the % of big words
7 Multiply the result by .4 21 x .4 = 8.4
8 Fog Index 8.4
1. Find the average number of words you use per sentence. Take a fair
sample of 5 to 8 sentences. Count clearly independent clauses as
separate sentences. Example: "By and by I ran; I jumped; I hid." This
counts as three sentences.
2. Calculate the percentage of words that are three syllables or more.
Don't count proper names. Don't count verbs that make three syllables
or adding -es or -ed.
3. Add these two figures. Example: if your average number of words per
sentence was was 15, and the percentage of words three syllables or
more was 12%, you would add 15 and 12 to get 27.
4. Multiply that sum by 0.4. The resulting number is your Fog Index, a
rough measure of how many years of schooling it would take to
understand what you have written. In our example, multiplying 27 by
0.4 equals a Fog Index of 10.8. The Bible, Shakespeare, Mark Twain all
have Fog Indexes of about 6. Time, Newsweek, and the Wall St. Journal
average about 11. If you find your Index soaring - beware --- you've
lost most of your audience in the dense fog.
Sourced from Hawkhill Associates, Inc. 125 E. Gilman St., Madison, WI 53703
It was attended by 45-50 PM’s/PL’s and has been received very well. The
snowballing and certifying process has begun. (Pl find the latest
snowballing chart for the Insurance BU on VDS).
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Business Communication
EXERCISE 1.6
ETIQUETTE
“Untold years are lost when we do not communicate well”- Hyrun Smith
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Business Communication
ASSIGNMENT
Request you to write an email on the situation given below and email them to
Selina_repoody@mahindrasatyam.com I shall review it for you.
Situation:
Write an email to your customer, sharing some concerns which you have
been facing in the project. Request his/her ideas on that.
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Business Communication
ACTION PLAN
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Notes:
Expressions not Expressions recommended
recommended
Resource Matrix
Books 101 ways to improve your communication skills instantly - Jo Condrill,
Bennie Bough
Mastering Business Communication - Woolcott, L A, Unwin, W R
Crystal Clear Communication: Skills for understanding and being
understood - Kris Cole
Developing Communication Skills - Krishna Mohan Meera Banerji
Giving and Receiving Feedback - Patti Hathaway
Great Communication Secrets of Great Leaders - John Baldoni
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Business Communication
Links
http://satyamworld.satyam.com/circles/slc/aoc/index.asp
Sites http://www.selfgrowth.com/comm.html
www.essayfinder.com
www.articles911.com
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Business Communication
Action Plan
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Thank you
Mahindra Satyam Learning World
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