Name: _Luisa Fonseca _ Group: _9_ Code: 0000197849_

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TITLE: A REVIEW ON Application FOCUSING ON Booking flights and hotels

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Hopper is an app to help people booking flights and hotels around the world. Also this
app is used for the people to booking travels and hotels and the app compare different
apps and websites, for example Booking, makemytrip, expedia, etc, due to usually this
1. Topic app help the people to take a better decisions about that season is better to travel in the
Sentence year.
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The app gives users the possibility to find a hotel and flights a good prices and complete
information. At first Hopper compare the prices with other apps and website and give the
customer the better price for him travel, Is fantastic because the app show the airlines is
1. Topic available with prices and give the customer better experience in addition is useful to
Sentence business people because send a notification about the prices. Moreover the information
2. 1st about the hotels and travels in general is good and show the service than give during
Positive flight or in hotel room for example if the hotel receive pets, if have wifi, breakfast, room
Feature service and this helpful because some people need specific thing when travel. Is a
3. 2nd fantastic app to people likes that travel and give a good experience to costumer.
Positive
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On the other hand the application has also negative issues for explain how is the pay
and sometimes not show the all hotels available The app have differents problems
because show a price in pesos Colombianos but this price depend the conversion of the
bank than you pay, for example, the page show a “normal” conversion but when the
1. Topic person pay the bank discount more money because have a higher conversion.and this a
Sentence negative point to the users. Hopper sometimes decide not show some hotels since have
2. 1st 3 or less stars but some customers don't have problem with that grade and is a
Negative disadvantage to people want a cheaper hotel The app give to user a best hotels no
Feature matter the prices, and the customer appreciated if the app show the real prices in correct
3. 2nd conversion also informate the real conversion to bank.
Negative
Feature
4. Opinion

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