NAME : PUTRI PANGARIBUAN

NIM : 2192421003

CLASS : ENGLISH EDUCATION 2019 A

ESSAY ANALYSIS

Tittle : High school and college

Essay Purpose writting : To compare “What are the differences between learning in high
and college? Some of the many aspects of differences in learning in high school and learning in
college are: the responsibility, the teachers, and the tests”.
Type of essay : Contrast and Comparison Essay( Focuses on contrast only)
Thesis : Responsibility, the teachers, and the tests in Senior high school and
college
Essay Structure : Point by Point, The each difference for one object is followed
immediately by the difference for the other.
Transition Signals : However, meanwhile, both, and.
Supporting ideas :

Supporting Ideas High School College

The responsibility
Our time is structured
by school. So, just need
to proceed from one
class to another of
hours of learning in
classes, and the classes
are arranged for you.
We will be guided and
reminded of our
responsibilities in
learning – taking the
tests, doing homework
and tasks, etc. There is
In college, we manage our
own time. We often have
time between classes; class
times vary throughout the
day and evening. We
arrange our own schedule
in consultation with our
adviser. We are expected
to take responsibility for
what we do and don’t do,
as well as for the
consequences of our
decisions. In short words,
 not much we need to there is no one taking care
worry besides getting of your responsibilities
good scores. except ourself.

The teachers Teachers in high school The lecturer don’t remind

will usually take care of us of our tasks and
us, remind we of our homework, because it is
tasks and homework, our responsibility to do so.
provide you with They will reference the
information and learning material, but it is
learning material, and not their responsibility to
are often available for provide us with
conversation before, information, instead, we
during, or after the are the one who need to
class. collect information we
need. Lecturers in college
are usually hardly available
for conversations out of
class except you make an
appointment with them
beforehand.

The tests In high school, tests are in college, tests are

frequent and cover infrequent and they cover
small amount of big amount of material.
material. Make up tests There will only be two to
are available, and if you three tests for one subject
get low score at a test, in one semester, and our
we can have a remedial scores matter a lot. There
test. will not be any make up
tests unless we need to
request one. Furthermore,
there will not be a
 remedial test if we get low
score.

Part of essay :
1. Introduction : High school students are usually eager to graduate and continue their study in
college. However, most of the time college students dream of being a high school student back
again. “If I could just go back to high school again” is a common expression heard especially in
the first semesters of college. What makes both high school students and college students
think. What are the differences between learning in high school and learning in college? Some
of the many aspects of differences in learning in high school and learning in college are: the
responsibility, the teachers, and the tests.
2. Body : The first different aspect in high school and college is the responsibility. In high school,
your time is structured by the school. We just need to proceed from one class to another of
hours of learning in classes, and the classes are arranged for you. We will be guided and
reminded of our responsibilities in learning – taking the tests, doing homework and tasks, etc.
There is not much we need to worry besides getting good scores. Meanwhile, in college, we
manage your own time. We often have time between classes; class times vary throughout the
day and evening. We arrange your own schedule in consultation with your adviser. We are
expected to take responsibility for what we do and don’t do, as well as for the consequences of
your decisions. In short words, there is no one taking care of your responsibilities except
yourself.
3. Body : The second different aspect in high school and college is the teachers. Teachers in high
school will usually take care of us, remind we of our tasks and homework, provide you with
information and learning material, and are often available for conversation before, during, or
after the class. Meanwhile, lecturers or professors in college are different. They don’t remind
you of our tasks and homework, because it is our responsibility to do so. They will reference the
learning material, but it is not their responsibility to provide us with information, instead, we
are the one who need to collect information we need. Lecturers in college are usually hardly
available for conversations out of class except you make an appointment with them
beforehand.
4. Body : The third different aspect in high school and college is the tests. In high school, tests
are frequent and cover small amount of material. Make up tests are available, and if you get
low score at a test, we can have a remedial test. Meanwhile in college, tests are infrequent and
they cover big amount of material. There will only be two to three tests for one subject in one
semester, and our scores matter a lot. There will not be any make up tests unless we need to
request one. Furthermore, there will not be a remedial test if we get low score. Instead, you
will need to fight for the upcoming test or exam to better the score.
5. Conclusion : Provided by the differences in learning in high school and learning in college, it
can be concluded that learning in college requires more attention and responsibility of the
student. Not that learning in high school does not require them, it does, but in a more flexible
way. Both high school students and college students need to focus on their study and follow the
way of the institution they are in, in order to succeed in their study.
Writter's opinion about the essay : Is it a good essay or not ?
In my opinion the essay is a good essay, because it is a structured essay. ased on the sources
which i've read a compare and contrast essay must structured by block or point by poitn and
the essay writter chose point by point. The language used in the essay is a basic so it is easier to
understand and good by analyze the gramatical term in the essay. A good essay also has a
complete structure(body) this essay is fulfill it requirement. It compose from the introduction,
body, and conclusion while nowadays not all the essay conclude the conclusion. Finally, i can
conclude that this essay is a good essay based from the structure, language used and
part(body) of essay.