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Social media and the internet is one of the most widely used resources in today’s society
and every year it is further integrated into the education system as a tool for teaching and
learning. It gives educators the tools to efficiently teach but it can also come with some severe
drawbacks for students. I would like to tackle the issue of censorship of social media and the
internet and why it is necessary, to an extent, in the world of education. In doing so, I am going
to take a look at some of the negative effects of social media and the internet on students such as
depression, lack of attention, and false information and how it can hinder their ability to be
The first thing I want to address is depression caused by social media and how it presents
difficulty in the classroom. It can be a very serious detriment to anyone's life but especially to
college students like yourselves. It can cause such a lack of performance and focus in your
everyday lives. As a student myself I don't suffer from depression in this form, but I do in others
such as seasonal depression and the effects are the same. It is becoming more and more common
among teens who use sites such as Instagram, Facebook, Twitter or Snapchat to develop
depression. Have you ever felt diminished by these sites when people don’t follow you back or
like your posts? Have you ever felt personally targeted or bullied while using social media? A lot
of teens and college students feel this way quite often due to extensive use and their search for
validation through these sites. “Researchers have proposed a new phenomenon called ‘Facebook
depression,’ defined as depression that develops when preteens and teens spend a great deal of
time on social media sites, such as Facebook, and then begin to exhibit classic symptoms of
depression. Acceptance by and contact with peers is an important element of adolescent life. The
intensity of the online world is thought to be a factor that may trigger depression in some
adolescents,” (O’Keeffe, 3). Sites like these feed off of the need to always gain attention and can
trigger self esteem issues in young adults and teenagers that can lead to depression. When
teenagers develop these symptoms and bring them into the classroom, it can cause numerous
problems in their academic performance that educators have to teach around. “Individuals with
depression may be unable to complete tasks that require high-motor and cognitive skills. They
may feel confused, scatterbrained, overwhelmed or easily frustrated. Even basic everyday tasks
become difficult,” (How Depression Affects Learning). When faced with this many problems it
can make educators hit roadblocks when trying to teach their students the curriculum necessary
possibly the amount of time students and teenagers spend on these sites can decrease depression
and self esteem issues among teens and students and make their daily academic performance
better, while making it easier for educators to teach without having to address these symptoms of
depression.
Another aspect that can hinder your learning as a student and make teaching more
difficult is the effect social media and the internet has on our attention. “Lady Greenfield, an
Oxford professor of synaptic pharmacology, argues that social media risks ‘infantilising’ the
human mind. Brain development, in a world of fast and transient action, might be accustomed to
operate over short timescales. Then, in response to tasks with greater longevity – for example
book reading or paying attention in classes – attention is in relative deficit,” (Valentine). This
shows that the more time students spend using social media and moving at a fast pace on their
phones can actually shorten their attention span due to the speed at which they move and change
activities on social media. “A study conducted in 2013 by an American research group found that
4 year old children’s attention spans significantly predict their maths and reading skills in later
life, even up to their early twenties. Children with higher attention span scores were even found
to be more likely to have completed a university degree by the age of 25 than their lower scoring
counterparts,” (Valentine). This can pose challenges for educators ranging from K-12, and can
cause a domino effect within student learning because their limited attention spans may keep
them from attaining critical curriculum that builds up throughout the years of learning. When
students do not have as strong of foundations in their learning it can make it difficult for
educators to teach more complex concepts in students’ later years of learning. From this, we can
see that it would be more effective to implement the censorship of social media usage from an
earlier age so we can maximize the development of the children's attention span and set them up
The last aspect I would like to touch on is fake news/information on the internet and
social media. “Individuals are able to access and spread false information by tapping a phone
screen or clicking a mouse. This presence of false information on social media platforms
provides another off-ramp for students to take toward unreliable information,” (Thompson). This
can lead to students forming false preconceived ideas before entering the classroom which adds
extra steps in the teaching process for educators because they must help the student unlearn the
false information and then teach the correct ideas. “Students trek year by year through the
American educational system, gaining essential life skills, knowledge, and understandings, to
eventually graduate with minimal knowledge of how the media affects their daily lives and
thought processes. Students receive information from a variety of sources, but are not equipped
with the mental tools necessary to determine the validity of what the sources deliver,” (Golding).
If we can further build upon the censorship of social media and the internet and not only filter
information form the internet to students but also teach them how to spot false information and
how to find strong factual sources, we can make sure our students come into the classroom with
a strong grasp on concepts that teachers can help build upon to create strongly rooted academics.
So looking back, I believe it would be beneficial to combat the effects of depression, lack
of attention and false information on students by implementing a system of censorship for social
media and the internet early on in your life as a student.. By continuing censorship throughout
your academic career, we can build upon the positives of censorship by teaching strong media
literacy to increase academic performance and to make teaching for educators an easier and
smoother process.
Works Cited
AMLE - Association for Middle Level Education. “Fact or Fiction: Fake News and Its Impact
on Education.” AMLE,
www.amle.org/BrowsebyTopic/WhatsNew/WNDet/TabId/270/ArtMID/888/ArticleID/848
/Fact-or-Fiction-Fake-News-and-its-Impact-on-Education.aspx.
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O'Keeffe, Gwenn Schurgin, et al. “The Impact of Social Media on Children, Adolescents, and
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“The Goldfish Effect: Social Media Shortens Our Attention Span.” The Goldfish Effect Why
www.mytutor.co.uk/blog/attention-span-social-media/.
iowareadingresearch.org/blog/identifying-false-information.
Zak,
Thank you for your essay and I enjoyed hearing from your perspective from the education
system. It is very interesting to see how the internet impacts students growing up and how that
shorter attention spans impacts the student. The information that you were able to bring in
about different types of issues is very good because it is informative to the reader. Like how
children may come into school with false information that they have already seen online but
did not do their own research. It does make it harder for teachers to be able to teach their
students when they have shorter attention spans and have false information already.
The quotes that you have used are good, but I think that there may be a few too many
quotes. To me it seems like you are just quoting the articles more than really stating a
position. I do understand your position and what you are trying to get at, but the quotes take
up too much space in the essay. You can talk about what the quotes say, so we can see more
of your writing more than other authors. You could also talk about how some media could be
used in the classroom setting because there are positives that come with social media. I
understand that it is hard to really state your position and have a good bit of information in
less than 1000 words, but taking away some quotes that are not the most important to the
essay would be able to give you more of an opportunity to influence your readers what you
are trying to get at. Overall, I liked how you were able to share your thoughts on this.
-Matthew Becker
Zak,
I really enjoyed reading your essay and found it to be very interesting throughout. It was
very enlightening to read about how social media impacts students and their education. This is
a great topic because readers of the Appalachian State community are all students and most of
them interact with social media or fake news on a daily basis. I think that your introduction is
amazing and I wouldn’t change a thing about that. Addressing exactly what you are going to
discuss in your paper with a thesis statement at the end gives the reader a clear understanding
proper sources and background information. I appreciate that you added the study about
children’s lack of focus due to social media and I believe this adds a great piece to your
writing. However, I would like to see more of your opinions in this paper. You have great
information but it is from scholarly sources and not your own thoughts. It would be great if
you could take your quotes and information, and expand on that. Overall, I think you did a
good job and I enjoyed reading your paper. Just try to add a few more of your own thoughts
-Maddy