Reviewer: Natalia Rivera

SLO #1--Rhetorical Awareness (written for the right audience and

purpose):            

1-Below Basic           2-Developing           3-Proficient             4-Advanced

SLO #2--Ethical Research (correct citations; diverse, authoritative

sources):                       

1-Below Basic           2-Developing           3-Proficient             4-Advanced

SLO #3--Persuasion (claims supported with appropriate evidence): 

1-Below Basic           2-Developing           3-Proficient             4-Advanced

SLO #4--Organization (conventional definition organization is present):

1-Below Basic           2-Developing           3-Proficient             4-Advanced

SLO #5--Language and Design (middle-level language and user-friendly, logical

design):

1-Below Basic           2-Developing           3-Proficient             4-Advanced

Part 2:  Successes and Challenges 

Two Successes:

1. Introduction is very strong, background information about the time period is

good and helps direct the reader and help them understand exactly what you
will be talking about, and is tied nicely to the book itself. 

2. The way you state an idea and support it with evidence flows nicely and the
connection between the two is clear, among all your body paragraphs. 

Two Challenges:

1. Didn't incorporate quotes from a criticism lens or connect it to the book, so

make sure you do that, as well as introduce it in your paper and how it helps
explain the struggles Woodson goes through. 

2. There is a bit too much general information about this particular time period
in your body paragraphs. If you do want to include it make sure it still connects
specifically to the book and the criticism essay you are analyzing. 
Reviewer: Chantal Jimenez

SLO #1--Rhetorical Awareness (written for the right audience and

purpose):            

1-Below Basic           2-Developing           3-Proficient             4-Advanced

SLO #2--Ethical Research (correct citations; diverse, authoritative

sources):                       

1-Below Basic           2-Developing           3-Proficient             4-Advanced

SLO #3--Persuasion (claims supported with appropriate evidence): 

1-Below Basic           2-Developing           3-Proficient             4-Advanced

SLO #4--Organization (conventional definition organization is present):

1-Below Basic           2-Developing           3-Proficient             4-Advanced

SLO #5--Language and Design (middle-level language and user-friendly, logical

design):

1-Below Basic           2-Developing           3-Proficient             4-Advanced

Two Successes:

1. I understood what you were attempting to portray in the blog. I

could see the argument that you were making. 

2. Your use of the book was helpful in understanding the story because
for the audience that we are supposed to be speaking to. You made it
simple to understand for the audience we are speaking to.

Two Challenges:

1.In your intro paragraph I would make it clear that you are talking
about feminism and define it for the audience. So that it is made clear
from the beginning that you are analyzing the feminism criticism.

2. I would explain your quotes more go into more depth about how
they fit with the criticism you are talking about. How they are an
important to what you are trying to portray.