Dear Facebook Hiring Manager,

My name is Ariel Arrellin I’m a soon to be Computer Engineering graduate dedicated to

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the further improvement of my skills within the framework of a large corporation. I’m an

adequate programmer with experience in C, C++, Python, Java, C#, and Objective-C. My main

fields of interest are machine learning algorithms such as Tensor Flow models, and the Python

library Pytorch. Within these disciplines my focus is the automation of key infrastructure and

data solutions. I’ve worked on the automation of aeroponics systems that consider the

horticultural needs of plants to produce heads of lettuce as efficiently as the system can consider

the differences within sunlight and nutrient mixture. In my day to day work I slowly automate

parameter within the java script code that automates my ecommerce ventures. The rate at which

things are bought and sold are tracked and referenced with prior data to produce more efficient

return on investments. I’ve had a lot of experience within automating systems towards efficiency
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as I also worked on a Bitcoin mining operation that required a constant observation of an

extremely fluctuating markets and hardware demands. Critical system failures meant half our

Asics miners would be down and when the profit margins are razor sharp immediate solutions

are necessary. I’m continuously looking at the skills that are desirable within the tech sector and

coopting them to my toolbelt for the means of automation and efficiency. Within my schoolwork

I have experience designing and analyzing circuits, logic design, and embedded systems. My

major allows me an area of focus and I’ve chosen an enfasis on software. My further aspirations

are to continue school until I get my PHD in artificial intelligence as I hold resolve that

automation is the future. I sincerely hope I’m a right fit for the job and look forward to hearing

back.

Best, Ariel Arrellin – Arrellinariel@gmail.com

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1. You absolutely cannot write an effective cover letter that is one paragraph.
2. You have the potential for a good story in here. Don't recap the stuff (mostly at the beginning here) that is
already more effectively presented in your resume. Tell us about a challenge you overcame, how you were
recognized for it, and how it relates to the job for which you are applying.