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SYMPOSIUM R
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Richard McNabb
Long Island University
Introduction1
In “Present Perfect and Future Imperfect,” Miller, Brueggeman, Blue, and
Shepherd conclude from their national survey that “by and large, students . . . are
greatly worried—or, frequently, know very little—about the ‘future tense,’ about
the broader professional realities to which they are endeavoring to adapt them-
selves” (CCC 48.3, 393). In response to their article, this Symposium offers
ways to cultivate a more future perfect outlook for graduate students by sug-
gesting the kinds of experiences faculty should be making as part of students’
professionalization.
One of the broader realities we identify as missing in graduate training is
the recognition of intellectual work as political work. We argue that giving stu-
dents greater opportunities to participate as writing program administrators en-
hances this perspective of intellectual work and makes clear, as well, that schol-
arship, teaching, and service are all manifestations of intellectual and political
endeavors. Participating in such programs as WAC, portfolio assessment, and
first-year composition, each of the contributors describes how experiences dur-
ing graduate training have given him/her a broader perspective of the profes-
sional realm of rhetoric and composition studies.
For instance, Christopher Diller and Scott Oates discuss their experience
with the University of Utah’s Liberal Education Accelerated Program, discov-
ering that their assumptions and views derived from their disciplinary training
became questioned and contested. Margaret Willard-Traub reflects on her ex-
perience developing assessment criteria for reading student portfolios. She ar-
gues that such professional work gives her first-hand knowledge of the myriad
ways in which institutional politics are woven into the very fabric of intellec-
tual work in the field. Stephen Davenport Jukuri explores how his experiences
show him that the nature of our academic communities is a function of how
individual interactions are structured by our academic programs. Suellynn
Duffey, Ben Feigert, Vic Mortimer, Jennifer Phegley, and Melinda Turnley tell
a story about collaboration, authority, and professional development in a writ-
ing program. They demonstrate how their WPA positions have given them a
first-hand glimpse into how theories of collaboration often clash with institu-
tional structures that place a premium on authoritative hierarchies. Introducing
these accounts, Roxanne Mountford—who does writing program administrative
work along with her other faculty responsibilities—contextualizes the issues
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Note
1I thank RR reviewers Thomas P. Miller and Edward White for their insightful comments. I
also thank Theresa Enos for her enthusiasm and support for our Symposium.
Richard McNabb is an assistant professor of English at Long Island University, C.W. Post
Campus, where he teaches courses in rhetoric and composition theory. He is also the Director of
Composition.
Roxanne Mountford
University of Arizona
“Would you put your job on the line to stop us from teaching more than 24 stu-
dents per section?” I remember returning his stern gaze with a smile and saying,
“Yes. Absolutely.” I have been hired to train graduate teaching assistants and to
build the curriculum; I am the Director of Writing. We look at each other, my
confusion obvious. “They didn’t tell you about me?” he asks. He takes a deep
breath, expels it. “I ran the assessment program. We give an entrance exam to
every freshman. You are taking over my job now.” He steps through the door, de-
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posits a box of files, sits in the chair next to my desk. I am stunned. During the
hiring process, I remembered no discussion of the institute-wide placement test
being a function of my job. Perhaps I managed to block this information from
my memory. Some ten minutes into the list of my unexpected duties, I can feel
my eyes begin to burn. When the graduate student finally leaves, I close the
door, put my head down on my desk and cry. I had been prepared to train gradu-
ate students and to work with them on the curriculum; I was ready to be their ad-
vocate. I was not prepared to be the gatekeeper, and I dreaded the institutional
politics that would come with this onerous responsibility.
***
Becoming a writing program administrator after graduate school is not un-
like being selected for middle management in a company in which you have
been a blue-collar worker. Like all laborers, graduate student teachers (GTAs)
spend time complaining about the writing program and all the ways it controls
their world. Indeed, all of us are skillful critics of institutions because of our
graduate school training. Louise Wetherbee Phelps argues that “the academy at
large socializes grad students to hate administration and distrust administrators”
(online posting). That is not to say that our complaints—and the complaints of
those who are now graduate students—are ill placed. On the contrary, that the
work of a GTA is work—not a kind of apprenticeship for which universities can
award poverty-level wages—has been underscored by the efforts of graduate stu-
dents to unionize nationwide. Many of us agree with Michael Bérubé that uni-
versities opposing the unionization of its GTAs because they are students is “po-
litically obtuse, shortsighted, and self-serving” (39). However, even without such
politicization, few graduate students leave their PhD programs without having
viewed the WPA as an equivocal figure in their academic lives. Unionization
only brings into sharper focus the role of the WPA as a middle manager in the
university hierarchy.
Nevertheless, many of us seek this very difficult job because we love to
teach and are thoughtful about curriculum development. If we are honest, some
of us believe we can do better than the WPA we knew. Some of us prepare our-
selves to do such work through coursework; still others take a job assisting the
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WPA in order to put some of our ideas into motion. However, graduate students
who prepare themselves for the intellectual work of the WPA may carry with
them unacknowledged feelings of conflict about the job. The graduate student
values herself as a teacher, activist, and scholar and maintains skepticism about
upper administration. As a faculty member, she values herself in the same terms:
She values autonomy in the private worlds of her classroom, research site, and
home office; she carries on with her political activism; and she retains her sense
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***
The phone call came in September. I picked up the receiver and heard a
pleasant, masculine voice say, “Hello, Roxanne. We haven’t had a chance to
meet. I’m Dick Lawrence,1 Dean of the Undergraduate College. I want to talk to
you about the writing assessment test. How do our numbers look?”
Me: Well, orientation is over, and 400 students failed the test. And frankly,
now that I’ve had a look at the exams, I’m surprised that we’re not teaching a
larger percentage of these students. Many of the students who failed are basic
writers. But the next level of student writer needs instruction, too.
He: Oh, you know that we can’t open any more sections. I’m just calling to
make sure that you don’t fail more students than we have sections for.
Me: Dean Lawrence, are you suggesting that we go back and pass students
who failed the test?
He: I know you all use that holistic scoring method, so couldn’t you reread
the exams, and just set the anchors lower?
Me: You want us to rescore the exams.
He: Well, it’s not my place to tell you how to do it, but we can’t have more
than five sections, and I’m sure you don’t want to see the ceiling raised on
course enrollments.
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***
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Nevertheless, the WPA has some power to define the terms of middle man-
agement. For example, many politicized WPAs have tackled some of the diffi-
cult labor issues in our field. One of those persons is Eileen Schell. In her book
Gypsy Academics and Mother-Teachers, Schell dispels myths about the reasons
postgraduates of English take on part-time teaching (the bottom line is that they
want to do what they were trained to do—teach in higher education) and offers
suggestions about how to change their working conditions. No longer is the Wy-
oming Resolution taken as the best strategy in all cases; for instance, institutions
like Syracuse University and the University of Arizona are creating new classes
of teaching professionals and offering them benefits and job security. Schell lists
four strategies for changing the working conditions of adjunct faculty, all of
which—with the exception of unionization—require a WPA to exert extraordi-
nary leadership and to gain the support of upper administration.2 Given the right
leader and institutional conditions, such changes are possible.
A more difficult problem is the working conditions of graduate teaching as-
sistants. Some institutions have maintained the same number of core tenure-
track faculty for twenty years or more but have managed the ebb and flow of en-
rollment figures by shrinking and swelling the number of GTAs. These teacher-
students work for poverty wages, often pay high prices for abysmal health insur-
ance, and fight for time to study. Many GTAs are required to teach two sections
of composition—with 25 students in each section—while maintaining a full-
time class load. Bérubé argues that WPAs or other sympathetic administrators at
institutions opposing unionization of graduate students should “take graduate
students out of the classrooms in which they work as graders, assistants, and in-
structors; maintain their stipend support at its current levels; and give them pro-
fessional development and training that does not involve the direct supervision
of undergraduates” (37–38). Of course, such a move requires far more than the
support of a WPA.
Institutional conditions affecting graduate student labor are complex. We are
in the midst of a decade-long downsizing of higher education. In many institu-
tions tenure lines are not being filled, and tenure itself is under attack in some
states. Yet undergraduate enrollment figures are on the rise, and students must be
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taught. Graduate student admissions offer one way to meet these demands. Yet
most agree—especially in the case of literary studies—that there is a serious
oversupply of PhDs for the number of positions available. Bérubé calls on fac-
ulty in English to begin discouraging students from pursuing the PhD and for
graduate programs nationwide to voluntarily reduce their graduate programs.
For the graduate students who remain in the PhD, Bérubé calls for job condi-
tions far closer to postdoctoral positions, in which a salary and benefits are the
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norm. Of course, one might ask who will be hired to replace the graduate stu-
dents who keep composition programs afloat. Part-time instructors?
Given these deeply disturbing trends, some composition scholars are calling
for the abolition of the universal writing requirement. The WPA could entertain
such an option, for many institutions would be happy to cut funding to the com-
position program. In her now-famous essay on the subject, “A Personal Essay on
Freshman English,” Sharon Crowley writes, “I doubt whether it is possible to
radicalize instruction in a course that is so thoroughly implicated in the mainte-
nance of cultural and academic hierarchies” (165). She argues for turning com-
position into an elective, which could rid programs of such problematic practices
as entrance exams and oversubscribed graduate programs. She, in turn, has been
supported by such scholars as Lil Brannon, David Jolliffe, and Charles I. Schus-
ter (Connors 59). In his history of the abolition debate, Connors notes that unlike
earlier periods in which abolition was seriously considered, “the New Abolition-
ists are in positions to make their critique stick” (61). However, his concern for
this radical proposal is one shared by Eileen Schell—namely, that the scholars in
rhetoric and composition who support the New Abolition will be bitterly op-
posed by the nontenure-track faculty who depend on composition for their liveli-
hood. “Working people,” says Connors, “have vested interests even in jobs from
which they are alienated” (“The Abolition Debate” 63). Given the obstacles to
abolition, Connors admits sympathy to this cause. Schell, who is interested in
improving the lives of adjunct faculty, is more skeptical. She worries that upper
administration could use the abolition of the composition requirement to dis-
mantle whatever gains part-time faculty have made (116). Dismantling the com-
position program would likely not end a need for part-time faculty, and it may
very well do away with the very person who could work to protect them: the
WPA.
***
It was the summer before my pretenure leave. My Chair was on the phone,
asking if I would attend a meeting of the Faculty Senate Curriculum Committee.
The Committee wanted to abolish the writing assessment test. Would I defend
it? Reluctantly putting my writing away as I had had to do in all the previous
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summers on the job, I moved into attack mode, firing off reports to the Commit-
tee in advance of my scheduled appearance. I wanted to use the opportunity to
expose the lack of support for writing in the university. When the day came for
my appearance, I found that I was supported by everyone around the table—ex-
cept for the dean of my own academic college. I told them that I was all for
doing away with the assessment test, but in its place I wanted writing to be made
a universal requirement. The engineers and scientists around the table were
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thrilled. The provost was not. There was no money to increase sections.
The dean of my academic college suggested to the Committee that the
writing program be dissolved and replaced by a writing-intensive program that
would spread the precious funds for GTAs then concentrated in my department
to other departments. There was no one at the table who could find fault with
this proposition. My dean suggested that there was widespread support for such
a plan in our college. From the results of a recent faculty vote, I knew that there
was not. I remember taking a deep breath, and saying to myself, “You have two
choices. You can defer to your own dean and protect yourself. Or you can save
the writing program.” I chose to save the writing program, which involved ex-
posing the dean’s misrepresentation of the will of my college’s faculty.
While my Chair was overjoyed that the writing program was spared, the
rumors of the dean’s displeasure with me began immediately. We received no
more sections. I could not support an unethical assessment test (though the
Committee voted to leave us alone). A sympathetic senior colleague proposed
that we turn the writing requirement into an elective, with the placement test
used only to give students some idea of their writing ability so that they might
choose whether or not to take a writing course. It worked. But I was left with
concerns over my relationship with the dean and the role our conflict might play
in my future bid for tenure.
***
Thus far I have drawn a picture of the context in which writing program ad-
ministrators find themselves today. There is much more to say, of course. There
are the stern debates in composition journals and in writing programs over the
nature of writing instruction. Sharon Crowley suggests that these debates largely
mask the fact that we are still relying on current-traditional, skills-based curric-
ula in our required writing courses (“Around 1971”). Anne Ruggles Gere argues
for reconsidering the genres we ask our students to engage in by looking outside
the university to the “extracurriculum” of writing. John Trimbur’s latest textbook
is based on genres of public writing and the role of civic discourse in the class-
room. The role of writing across the curriculum, the potential of computer-medi-
ated instruction, and the struggle to understand what politics we bring to our
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teaching are the day-to-day debates that rhetoric and composition faculty, gradu-
ate students, and adjunct faculty engage in. And these were the debates I most
reveled in while working with GTAs to build a dynamic writing program of
which we were all very proud. These were the academic debates that I was pre-
pared to engage in after my graduate training in rhetoric and composition.
But as the vignettes I have offered throughout this essay suggest, I was dis-
mayed by the institutional politics that are the province of the WPA. I had been
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warned by my adviser not to take a WPA job without tenure. Knowing that I was
somewhat good with people and could handle the intellectual work of writing
program administration caused me to overestimate my ability. Indeed, one might
argue that institutions that hire assistant professors to lead their writing programs
have not studied the nature of a WPA’s work. A classic middle manager, the
WPA must bear the criticism of those above and those below. Without tenure, it
is sometimes dangerous simply to do one’s job. Far savvier than I, the authors in
this Symposium were better prepared for such work by working with the hier-
archies and politics of writing program administration while still in graduate
school. Therefore, in the last part of this essay, I discuss my own experience as a
graduate student assistant to the WPA at Ohio State University and then turn to
what the essays in this Symposium teach me about that experience.
It was a beautiful spring day in Ohio. The four of us who had been hired to
assist the writing program administrator were sitting in a tiny office, knee-
to-knee, working on the curriculum. It was our job to map out the assignments
that the new GTAs would use in the fall semester to teach English 110. In the of-
fice with me were Eric Walborn, Sue Lape, and Kris Ratcliffe, three wonderful
teachers and students of composition. Over Eric’s desk was a sign that read,
“Teaching is Performance.” Our curriculum didn’t differ much from the curricu-
lum the year before, but I remember the excitement of working through sugges-
tions made by GTAs at the end of their semester-long training course and talking
about how to improve each unit.
We were lucky to be chosen to work on Frank O’Hare’s team of administra-
tive assistants, graduate students who were paid to watch over the teaching of
their peers and to provide input into both the curriculum of the composition
course and the teacher-training course that was required of all new GTAs. We
had the opportunity to learn how to handle conflicts between GTAs and their un-
dergraduate students, to motivate and support new teachers, and to think about
teaching from a programmatic vantage point. In addition, we wrote prompts and
read placement exams for the program. This administrative experience led me to
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several others, including a year with the Center for Teaching Excellence, where I
worked on research on college teaching, led workshops for faculty on active
learning, and wrote book chapters on teaching for the university. It was wonder-
ful training for the intellectual work of directing a writing program.
But it had not prepared me for the political realities of being the WPA.
Frank trusted us to represent the program when dealing with other administra-
tors, faculty, and staff and shared with us difficulties with upper administration,
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such as the constant pressure to increase class size. But he took care of the poli-
tics. Frank dealt with these difficulties with the force that came from his position
as a full professor, a lesson that was not lost on us. He was not always popular,
and it bothered him. But, I reasoned to myself when signing the contract for my
first job, Frank was head of the writing program at one of the larger universities
in the country. His job was more difficult. My job would be far smaller—a mi-
cro-WPA job compared to his. I could use the force of my personality and my
intellectual knowledge to navigate this difficult—but seemingly more manage-
able—terrain. But I was naive.
The dominant theme in the essays in this Symposium—including my own
—is that graduate students need sustained opportunities to reflect upon the na-
ture of power and authority in higher education. The informality that pervades
many graduate programs, where tenured and tenure-track faculty regularly share
responsibilities with graduate students in a kind of apprenticeship model, all the
while protecting them from the more difficult politics of the institution, has be-
gun to strike me as an inadequate form of professional training. What we need,
as Margaret Willard-Traub argues, is to begin to help graduate students under-
stand the way that “institutional politics are woven into the very fabric of intel-
lectual work in the field of Composition.” However, the unfortunate fact, as Ste-
phen Jukuri illustrates, is that informal apprenticeship models most often expose
graduate student WPAs to the internal politics within composition programs. For
instance, in his essay Jukuri illustrates the way that teachers protect “their class-
rooms and pedagogies as private spaces, under their own control and separate
from what ‘others’ do” when faced with the prospect of participating in portfolio
assessment. Such is the case in Suellynn Duffey, Ben Feigert, Vic Mortimer,
Jennifer Phegley, and Melinda Turnley’s essay, which explores the difficulties
that attended the development of a “peer group facilitator” initiative within a
large writing program. The essay develops the problems with “the range and
limits of a peer-group facilitator’s authority” and how the peer group facilitators
who authored the piece at first misunderstood their role. While valuable as train-
ing in the give-and-take world of directing writing teachers in their work, it is
clear by the end of these essays that the authors wanted more answers from the
field about the nature of negotiating power and authority in higher education as a
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scholars and deans but also graduate students and adjunct instructors; therefore,
the politics of subjectivity is complex, and authority does not improve this com-
plexity. The temptation is to focus on the actions of a particular dean or tenured
faculty member, all the while forgetting the symbiosis between those administra-
tors and oneself. Traub’s call for a Foucauldian understanding of institutional
politics in writing program administration provides a fitting close to this Sympo-
sium, for what graduate students need, finally, to become prepared for postgrad-
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uate WPA experiences is an understanding that their actions and beliefs are
imbricated in the overall intellectual and political trajectory of higher education
at the dawn of the twenty-first century.
***
I want to close this essay by remembering Eric Walborn, a man who as a
graduate student assistant to the WPA taught me much about teaching and ad-
ministration. Rebellion has often been the substance binding my emotional life
to the world, but for Eric Walborn, it was service. I fought becoming a middle
manager, but for Eric it was a calling. After graduation he stayed on as an aca-
demic professional, running the computers in the composition program. Quietly
and in countless ways, Eric served administrators, teachers, and students at Ohio
State, and he was untroubled by the politics that caused me to lose sleep and
rage up and down the halls. Eric took the long view. His grace and good humor
are a loss for the Writing Program at Ohio State, but also for those of us who
benefited from his example when we were graduate students doing WPA work.
He died of complications from AIDS in 1992, just a year after I graduated and
long before I had a chance to thank him. I am thanking him now.
My first Conference on College Composition and Communication was in
New Orleans in 1986, a year after I had begun to work with Eric as a graduate
student WPA. I remember clearly that Kris Ratcliffe, Eric, and seven others piled
into one room to save money. I remember drinking on Bourbon Street and talk-
ing with him and others late into the night about who we would be someday and
how we would run a writing program. I was still learning the answers to those
questions, but Eric had already arrived. He was passionate about teaching writ-
ing, and his passion rubbed off on me. Whatever he knew of the politics of WPA
work he kept to himself, but his commitment to serving teachers and students
while deftly interacting with administrators is his legacy. In 1996 I joined the
Rhetoric, Composition, and the Teaching of English Program at the University
of Arizona, a graduate program that has begun offering a course in writing pro-
gram administration. It is the kind of course that Eric would have taught well,
and I wish that he had lived to do it. In invoking Eric’s name, I am not merely
seeking a sentimental ending to this essay (although invoking the dead is admit-
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tedly a sentimental thing to do). Rather, I want to underscore the fact that gradu-
ate students have much to teach us about the nature of WPA work.
Therefore, I invite the readers to learn from the graduate students (some
now professors themselves) and academic professionals who in the pages that
follow have written about their experiences negotiating the power and authority
questions that surround writing program administration. Their reflections join a
conversation about the nature of the professionalization of the WPA, a conversa-
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tion that has begun at PhD programs nationwide and is being led by the Council
of Writing Program Administrators.3 It is a difficult moment to be in writing
program administration, as I have illustrated throughout this essay; more than
one rhetoric and composition scholar has urged us to abandon the job. However,
the authors in this Symposium illustrate reasons why these difficulties should
motivate us to study the politics of WPA work and better prepare current gradu-
ate students to engage it, graduate students whose good thinking about writing
instruction and teacher training should not be disabled by unexpected post-
graduation recognition of the institutional practices that surround and are part of
our work.
Notes
1Not his real name.
2The four major approaches outlined by Schell are (1) the “conversionist” model (the Wyoming
Resolution), (2) the “reformist” solution (converting part-time adjunct positions into full-time non-
tenure line instructorships), (3) the “unionist/collectivist” solution (collective bargaining), and (4) the
“abolitionist” solution (abolishing and/or restructuring the first-year writing requirement) (91–117).
3Adopted in 1992, the Council’s “Portland Resolution” offers important guidelines on the train-
ing and institutional support of WPAs (Hult, Jolliffe, Kelly, Mead, and Schuster). Interesting in the
context of this essay is the inclusion of “business administration” on the list of skills needed by the
WPA.
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Roxanne Mountford is an assistant professor in the Rhetoric, Composition, and the Teaching of
English Program at the University of Arizona where she teaches courses in research methodology,
the history of rhetoric, cultural studies and composition, rhetorical analysis, and writing. She has
published numerous articles in such journals as Rhetoric Review, Rhetoric Society Quarterly, and
JAC, as well as chapters in scholarly books. Her book Sacred Geography: Gender, Preaching, and
the Nature of Rhetorical Space is forthcoming from the Rhetorics and Feminisms Series of Southern
Illinois University Press.
Christopher Diller
Berry College
Scott F. Oates
University of Wisconsin–Eau Claire
neously displayed deep concerns “regarding development issues, job market dif-
ficulties, or the transition from graduate school into the professoriate” (397).
Likewise, we cast our contribution to this Symposium in terms of the present
tense/future tense: a cautionary tale about training graduate students for “the pro-
fessoriate,” based upon our assignment to design writing curriculum and offer writ-
ing instruction in entry level liberal education classes at the University of Utah.
In the spring of 1994, the director of the University Writing Program
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struggle for authority between graduate student teachers of writing and tenured
faculty who assign writing in their courses but do not necessarily value or
teach it as an autonomous subject. As Duffey et al. note about our “caution-
ary” title, one aspect of our tale is that we do not necessarily offer examples of
teaching experiences or institutional structures for emulation by other graduate
programs. But this is not to say that we are cautious about collaborations with
faculty across the curriculum that are designed to develop new ways of teach-
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ing writing and training graduate students. Rather, we believe that our story il-
luminates, as Jukuri notes, that the impulse toward privatization in teach-
ing—an impulse we explain as a strategy for dealing with institutional power
differences—cannot be contested on a theoretical or curricular level alone. But
before we offer anymore of our understanding of our experience in the context
of this Symposium, we need to provide a brief description of how the LEAP
program changed over a three-year period.
Table 1: Three Years of Collaborative Relations between the Core Class and the UWP
Fall Winter Spring
1994–95 Core class: Core Class: Asian Core Class: Rise of 15 credit hours
Autobiography & Cultures & Science &
UWP Instruction UWP Instruction UWP Instruction 4 credit hours
1995–96 Core class: US Core Class: Asian Core Class: Rise of 15 credit hours
Autobiography Cultures & Science &
UWP Instruction UWP Instruction 2 credit hours
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maining two quarters where LEAP students earned the final two hours of their
four-credit requirement. By 1996–97 the attempt to infuse UWP instruction into
liberal education courses had come full circle: As Table 1 again illustrates, writ-
ing teachers had lobbied for and secured an independent four-credit writing
course and thus no longer taught in the core classes or directly assisted core pro-
fessors with their writing assignments. Instead, collaboration was limited to in-
formal discussions with the core faculty and the activities of a miniwriting cen-
ter in which writing instructors provided supplementary instruction for LEAP
students throughout the academic year.
writing instructors viewed the core class texts in light of their present-tense
training in a writing program that espoused a writing-in-the-disciplines (WID)
philosophy. According to Chris Anson, WID is a strand of writing across the
curriculum (WAC) and “aims to help novice writers to acquire the disci-
pline-specific skills necessary to produce writing acceptable to members of a
specific discourse community such as the field of history, economics, or me-
chanical engineering” (773). Writing instructors, therefore, viewed the core
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A Cautionary Tale
For UWP writing instructors, this all felt like a personal and professional
failure to fulfill the standards of the UWP and to confirm emergent professional
identities. After all, we had been selected for this assignment precisely because
of our experience, leadership, and advanced training in rhetoric and composi-
tion.1 Nevertheless, what we believed to be substantial credentials—not to men-
tion the vote of confidence from our mentors and advisors in the UWP—gave us
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only enough leverage to return to where we started: our own classrooms. Even
with the return to an autonomous four-hour composition class, however, we still
felt mismatched with our assignment because—symbolically, yet quite practi-
cally and powerfully—we had been incorporated within the institutional um-
brella of LEAP and its liberal education mission. In this felt disjuncture, our ex-
periences confirm Jukuri’s contention that academic communities are grounded
in “the architecture and structure of a program” and that faculty subjectivities
may not be as malleable as some postmodern theory suggests.
We therefore view our experiences in LEAP—both in and outside of the
core classroom—as a cautionary tale for using WAC as a means for teaching
disciplinary rhetoric. Our point of caution, however, is not simply that WAC
models sometimes leave writing instructors and, especially, graduate students
vulnerable to faculty resistance. Rather, our experience suggests that a rigorous
rhetorical approach to writing may simply be incommensurable with the
“predisciplinary” reading and writing practices assigned to many first-year
students. In retrospect we now understand that LEAP was largely a pre-
disciplinary pedagogical space in which our view of rhetoric and writing
would be perceived, at best, as anomalous. Instead of focusing on the dis-
course conventions that characterize writing in the upper reaches of the aca-
demic disciplines, for instance, we might have moved more quickly to tailor
our writing assignments to the expository modes and genres of general educa-
tion that first-year students are typically expected to utilize and produce. In
other words, we might have used writing to design writing and reading assign-
ments or prompts that fostered critical thinking and active learning if not the
self-consciously rhetorical view espoused by the UWP (see Bean). Such a re-
vised view of first-year writing does not necessarily entail a capitulation to a
pedagogy of models and formalism; instead, it involves carefully modeling for
students and faculty how the literacy practices of entry-level classes are the
products of typified and recurrent social action (Miller, 1984; Berkenkotter and
Huckin, 1995).
Our advanced training in composition and rhetoric had left us largely un-
prepared for our LEAP experience: We found that the sophisticated arguments
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we had purchased in our graduate study held explanatory power within the
confines of the UWP and were not readily transferable to other institutional lo-
cations. We nevertheless consider ourselves fortunate to have grappled with
what writing means beyond the aegis of those who already subscribe to the
view of writing as discourse. Far from suggesting that writing professionals
should retreat into privatized professional or pedagogical spaces, we believe
our experiences in LEAP illustrate the value of exposing graduate students
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Note
1The graduate student instructors chosen by the UWP faculty included two students who had
worked at community colleges as directors of writing and several former UWP teaching counselors.
In addition, UWP instructors had done research and presented papers at such venues as CCCC, RSA,
MLA, and EDE.
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Christopher Diller was a PhD student in the American studies program at the University of
Utah from 1991–1999. He now works as an assistant professor of Rhetoric and Writing at Berry Col-
lege in Rome, Georgia. His teaching and research interests include nineteenth-century American lit-
erature, the history of rhetoric, analytical approaches to composition, and WAC.
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Scott F. Oates was a PhD student in Educational Studies at the University of Utah from 1992–
1998. He now works as an assistant professor of English at the University of Wisconsin–Eau Claire
where he directs the department’s undergraduate program. His teaching and research interests focus
on how students learn and negotiate new literacy practices.
Margaret K. Willard-Traub
Oakland University
ing, and about how that writing compared to the expectations of the discourse
communities they were about to enter at the university.
These collaborative, professional experiences not only gave me, early on in
my professionalization, first-hand knowledge of the myriad ways in which insti-
tutional politics are a part of the development and execution of any major curric-
ular project; they also illustrated the unique ways in which institutional politics
are woven into the very fabric of intellectual work in Composition Studies, espe-
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cially with regard to how what might be called a ‘politics of subjectivity’ is en-
acted within the context of such intellectual work.
I would suggest that such a politics can function to diminish not only the
primary subject of our intellectual work—that is, the teaching of writing—but
functions as well to reduce the complexity of the subjectivities of teachers and
students of writing. Such a politics is illustrated by Diller’s and Oates’s experi-
ences in teaching writing within the context of a Liberal Education core course
headed by general education faculty, for example. And such a politics is strik-
ingly revealed in the context of the negotiations for the research funding that I
describe below, negotiations pursued via verbal and written exchanges between
tenured, English department faculty-administrators, on the one hand, and the
untenured writing program administrators of whose group I was the only gradu-
ate student member, on the other. Though I think the particular example I sketch
out here vividly illustrates how such a politics of subjectivity might manifest it-
self and suggests as well some of the frustrating implications of such a politics,
it is important to say that this is not the only example from my time working at
ECB that I might have examined. Taken together, other moments—occurring
while we (ECB faculty and I) recruited graduate students from the department of
English to participate in the assessment research; while we shaped portfolio
reader training in ways that tried to maintain the integrity of the assessment pro-
cess during a (politically) complex period during which the English Composi-
tion Board was ‘consolidated’ with the English department; and while we collab-
orated on writing a scholarly article examining the evolution of the assessment
project—also illustrate how central administrators, tenured faculty, graduate stu-
dents and untenured faculty all may at times participate consciously or uncon-
sciously in a politics that impacts the intellectual work of teaching, of curricular
development, and of administering writing programs.
Perhaps in the past, I myself may have been complicit in such a politics, as
it operates beyond writing programs and writing centers, in the disposition—per-
haps especially prevalent at large, research institutions like the one in which I
was trained—to view teaching (and teachers) reductively. It is in institutional
spaces where the research and teaching of writing occurs that the sting of this
disposition perhaps is felt particularly acutely.
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deny them professional authority (or at least functioned to diminish that author-
ity) at the very same time these teachers were given the greatest responsibility
by the college for the teaching of writing.
Such a simultaneous denial and investment of authority can produce cognitive
dissonance in writing programs, broadly, and in the individuals who inhabit them,
specifically. The participants in this Symposium describe various manifestations of
such dissonance, for example, as they explore the complicated effects of occupying
subject positions as both administrators and students. Duffey and her colleagues
describe the various “fears” that are part of their experience of the “weird ’genre’”
of peer groups, a context within which they might “exert too much authority”—or
too little; as well as their experience of the various and changing expectations held
by the new TAs with whom they have worked. Similarly, Jukuri represents his con-
flicted experience as Assistant Director of GTA Education, in the context of which
his graduate student colleagues project onto him dual subjectivities, seeing him ei-
ther as an “outsider”/enforcer in their classrooms or as someone “natural(ly)”
capable of “resolv(ing) and orchestrat(ing) solutions” to their differences. And
Diller and Oates, in their representation contained within an earlier draft of the
‘tug-of-war’ between graduate-student teachers and core faculty, illustrate how
both ‘sides’ may have attempted to invest their own position with authority while
divesting of authority the other, as “writing teachers resorted to the frustrated belief
that their pedagogy was rhetorical while the core teachers’ humanistic approach . . .
was a-rhetorical,” and as core teachers and LEAP students in turn “perceived . . .
writing instructors as overcomplicating tasks.”
All of these pieces raise compelling questions about the degree to which
authority is constructed as an ‘all or nothing’ category within the institution;
about the advisability of assuming that graduate students’ anxieties about author-
ity are either entirely unique, or entirely ‘natural’ or inevitable; about the ways in
which the culture of the institution and the process of professionalization them-
selves might be implicated in the prevalence of such fears and anxieties; and
about how this culture and this process might be implicated in the normalization
of a politics of subjectivity that questions the authority of teachers of writing and
that also makes difficult collaborative efforts between teachers with different
amounts of institutional power.
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also as agents for institutional change. Such a view could be encouraged, I be-
lieve, even in the absence of opportunities to work on the kind of project I de-
scribe here, a project that made quite visible for me the various webs of insti-
tutional politics at Michigan within which the intellectual work of the teaching
and assessing of writing are caught up. This kind of political self-awareness
might be encouraged by formal opportunities in the graduate curriculum—oc-
curring within the context of graduate seminars, TA training workshops and
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their shifting relationships with their peers and with their students—can be crucial
information to them in their professionalization, and can be crucial as well to their
growth as scholars because of the ways in which it can make visible the powerful
influence of institutional forces on the shaping of the forms and even outcomes of
intellectual work.
In tracing postmodernity’s impact on composition’s conceptualizations of
individual students and their subjectivities, Faigley argues that “postmodern
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menting Teaching and Learning in Composition Studies (Heinemann/Boynton Cook, 2001), and La-
bor, Writing Technologies, and the Shaping of Composition in the Academy. She is currently at work
on a book project that brings together her interests in writing assessment and scholarly memoir, ex-
amining the practice and consequences of reflective writing by students and scholars across the
disciplines.
Stephen D. Jukuri
Michigan Technological University
ances ultimately pull them apart. The history of how their LEAP program at-
tempted to bring together “content” and “writing” pedagogies, only to have the
writing instructors completely withdraw themselves after three years of degener-
ating negotiation, demonstrates a pattern that I have witnessed many times as a
student, teacher, and assistant administrator: When faced with seemingly ir-
reconcilable differences, administrators, entire programs, and, especially, indi-
vidual teachers often end up defining their classrooms and pedagogies as private
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spaces, under their own control and separate from what “others” do.
Counteracting the disintegration of “community” is not easy in our field.
We all have our own idea of what it means to teach writing, what we value in
students’ work, and even what it means to teach and learn in general. But when
teachers drop those debates and discussions, and/or drive one another out of
them, they do not usually pack up and leave the academic community, much less
transfer to a position at another school of like-minded individuals. Instead, I
have learned, they often invest their differences into their classrooms, defining
them as their own private spaces and fiercely guarding their right to shape those
spaces according to their own beliefs. Their motives, I believe, are almost always
good: Teachers want to act responsibly and achieve what they believe is best for
their students. And even if they must suspend all of what we find to be valuable
about “community” to achieve it, they will nevertheless do so in order to protect
themselves and their students.
And, there are many reasons why such actions do not feel incongruous
within academics. Even within departments and programs of people with similar
professional interests, the culture of intellectual inquiry foregrounds conflict and
often rewards, albeit for good reason, intellectual independence, critique, and an
iconoclastic stance even toward those with whom one might have the most in
common. Furthermore, the hierarchies and imbalances of power between those
who teach and those who administer those who teach, like the conflicts dis-
cussed by Traub in this Symposium, easily lead to “subversive” acts whereby
teachers exercise all the autonomy they can when working “unsupervised” in
their own classrooms. And then, when we add in the fact that the work of writ-
ing programs focuses so much on language and the issues concerning all of the
social and political differences that naturally surround such studies, the potential
for collegial relations, trust, and mutual respect become more and more difficult
to fulfill.
And so it is that the academic community frequently looks and feels a lot
like an e-mail list “community”: jolly fun and collegial when you are all in
agreement, and unpleasant, coercive, and fractious when you are not. Both of
these supposedly “nice” communities seem poised, at all times, to break down
into a lot of nastiness. Yet I remain divided in my assessment of academics be-
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cause the experience I will describe here does indicate that more positive alter-
natives are possible and viable. Yes, on the one hand, it is true that I have seen
the tendency toward “privatization” in full effect with GTAs at Michigan Tech-
nological University, while serving under Diana George as the Assistant Direc-
tor of GTA Education. As past occupants of that position had warned me, it
was clear from the start that many of the continuing GTAs, particularly those
who began teaching without a structured training program, were uncomfortable
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would read (and sometimes add to) the responses and adjust some of their class-
room pedagogy to match the most common areas of concern that the responses
identified. Sometimes the instructors would collect and respond to their students’
subsequent revisions, or they might conference with their students before or after
such revisions were made.
Students were expected to include these drafts, responses, and revisions
with their final portfolios, which were then given a reading, response, and grade
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by two random members of our group, during which special attention was given
to how students had worked on revision in response to their readers’ comments
throughout the term. Grade disputes were negotiated by the two readers, or if
necessary (rarely) resolved by Diana or me. Instructors were free to assign final
course grades that were within one-half a grade level, above or below, that which
had been assigned to each portfolio.
The system was not always easy for ourselves or GTAs, for it forced a lot of
discussion about our differences in what we value at different stages of students’
writing, it required constant interpretation and revision of the program’s goals
and evaluation criteria, and it relied upon a continual, public presentation of
one’s own teaching and the work produced by one’s own students. It is not easy,
as Duffy et al. explain in this Symposium, to avoid what they describe as the
all-or-nothing situation of either forcing everyone to do everything exactly the
same or letting the program drift off into pedagogical relativism as individuals
do their very own thing. The tendency they describe is very much that which
Foucault describes in his essay “The Discourse on Language”: the shifting of
human relations between the forces of institution (highly defined and increas-
ingly oppressive structure) and inclination (the urge of individuals to break out
and go their own way without support or a clear sense of direction). And the key
to moderating our fluctuations between those two extreme tendencies, I believe,
can be found in structures like ours that try to balance those two forces, allowing
for freedom within the continual shifting of power relations somewhere between
structure and nonstructure. In other words, if we structure a program too tightly,
individuals will do anything and everything to break out of it and define their
own, individual territories and subvert our efforts to recapture them, as they
probably should. If we design something too loose, they will go off on their
own, patch together some kind of isolated structure for themselves, and then—as
one could only expect—protect that structure fiercely. I, too, would protect what
I had worked hard to create, especially if some administrator decided that the
only way to gain control and consistency in a slipshod program is by forcing
changes in my carefully constructed classroom. And so, as I have learned, one
trick to fostering a “community” of academic scholar-teachers is to slowly but
surely implement a strong but flexible structure, and in the meantime—and per-
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our program, I believe that Diane, I, and all the GTAs were together positioned
to learn a great deal about how students struggled with a range of different writ-
ing assignments. All of the GTAs learned a great deal more by working together
than they would have learned by working in isolation. They not only got to prac-
tice making their own responses to student writing, but they also got to experi-
ence and review a variety of reader responses to their own students’ writing, and
to watch how each of their students revised and reacted to such a wide range of
feedback. And when it came to reviewing and grading final portfolios, GTAs
were able to see, more clearly than if they were limited to evaluating just their
own students, how the students in other classes responded in writing to the
reader responses they had provided. And yet, as teachers, they were still able to
play off of the ways in which grades motivate students, but at the same time they
were free not to evaluate their own students and could concentrate, instead, on
tailoring their pedagogy to specific stages of the course and teaching their stu-
dents rhetorical skills and strategies for revising and responding to other readers.
GTAs still had plenty of boundaries and checks and balances on their ac-
tions, including those that they placed upon each other, and they were never en-
tirely happy about them. But they also stood to understand that those limitations
were not so much a result of “dictatorship” on our part but were instead a natural
consequence of the fact that the rest of the community was concerned about their
students and their teaching work, as well as the fact that they had become, like-
wise, responsible to and dependent upon the pedagogy of the others. Their
boundaries were defined, in a sense, by the mutual responsibilities that they held
toward one another and all students, and the entire group’s success depended
upon everyone’s continual improvement in their pedagogy. Diana reminded us,
frequently, that the students were truly “all of ours”: Much in the same way it
takes a whole village to raise children, it takes an entire program’s cooperation
to effectively teach writing to a class of students.
And on a programmatic level, this system of partial, continually revised
structure also provided a kind of negotiated “norming” without the oppressive-
ness that people fear when working with an imposed normative evaluation.
When differences first appeared—complaints about other GTAs’ responses, con-
fusion over incomprehensible assignments, disputes over grades and interpreta-
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tions of course goals, and very intensely different views over what should be
taught in a writing course and how a teacher should go about doing it—the most
natural reaction of GTAs was to look for and invoke a dominant hierarchy: They
came to Diana and me to resolve and orchestrate solutions. But Diana quickly
realized that we had to send them back to the group to try to work out those
problems among themselves. And as it turns out, I learned that turning GTAs
back to their academic “community,” rather than invoking our institutional au-
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thority to “protect” their students from “others,” was a very important step to-
ward moving GTAs out of their “private” classrooms. It brought into existence a
somewhat more social space in which they had to “live together” as teachers, in
a shared program, in collegial (but not always smooth and easy) relationships
that were continually being renegotiated across difficult differences.
In other words, GTAs could not simply drop out of the program and the dis-
cussion by enclosing themselves within a private classroom space. Instead, they
were positioned to develop a more constructive community, one that inextricably
included everyone who was part of the new GTA program. Their differences—
even intense ones—become more publicly debated and negotiated, with work-
able solutions continually developed and revised simply because the people in-
volved were structured with no choice but to go on living (teaching) together.
And to minimize our desire to simply mandate GTAs to change their pedagogy
to accord with our own, we had positioned ourselves somewhat like Duffy et al.
had done with their teaching groups: We structurally held back our authority in
key places in order to see, and rely upon, the teachers’ own abilities to observe
and assess the effectiveness of a wide range of pedagogies. Thus we helped to
preserve their authority and their capacity to exercise a great deal of freedom in
how they made changes in their own work, in ways that would make sense to
them. At the very least, I like to think that we made progress toward overcoming
one significant limitation of the more traditional apprenticeship model of GTA
education that Long, Holberg, and Taylor describe:
Condon are perhaps better elaborations of such systems, for they discuss the tre-
mendous surge in community and collaboration that can follow from the intro-
duction of portfolios. And both works refer to the efforts of Pat Belanoff and Pe-
ter Elbow, and many others who have laid groundwork for the same conclusions.
But it is also true that some aspects of our system have not been so widely dis-
cussed by others, including the fact that the system served the purpose of GTA
training more than it did the more common purposes of providing students and
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programs with a more meaningful and consistent evaluation. And within the
realm of pedagogical considerations, I believe that it is worth noting that in our
program the sharing of student writing happened consistently throughout the
term rather than at the very end (or for evaluation only) and that continual re-
sponse from outside readers helped reinforce for students that writing well is a
continual act of negotiation between themselves and an audience of readers
who, in turn, are continually negotiating and communicating to them the criteria
for evaluation.
And yet what I find most important, when I step back a little further from
the experience, is the same thing that spoke to me across the class divide in that
old discussion of e-mail lists as communities. On the other side of the class-
room, students did not feel that such lists were “true” communities because of
the very fact that people often do, at the first sign of differences and tension,
simply pack up and leave. Real communities, those students said, stick together
through difficult times, even times of internal differences. Unlike real communi-
ties, e-mail lists have no routine and continual “contact points” structured into
them to keep people in negotiation with one another when things get uncomfort-
able. They have no structure to assure that individuals will maintain relation-
ships long enough to see how different approaches can still converge to achieve
shared goals. And they have no hierarchy with enough authority to nudge mem-
bers to seriously consider and learn from one another across seemingly irrecon-
cilable divides. Instead, participants simply seek out confirmation of what they
already believe and go off to wherever they might find it. It appears that just as
our democratic nation requires a hierarchical structure and authority, based on
the constitution, to keep people in some kind of common process of interaction,
any well-functioning subcommunity requires a structure as well, maintained by
some hierarchy of authority, to keep members of the community in balance and
assure some measure of both freedom and responsibility for all, and to all.
I think that most of us know, of course, the futility of debating true and intrinsic
definitions for social phenomena like community. One group of students, we might
say, were realists: They recognized community in the world of e-mail because
those lists operated in ways that are just as pleasing, and just as coercive, as their
own communities. The other group, perhaps more optimistic, was holding out for
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the ideal picture of community, one in which people wouldn’t drop out so easily,
presumably because they would be able to productively deal with continual con-
flict and fully participate in shaping their lives together. All groups are real com-
munities, but in the spirit of Michel Foucault, I would simply point out that what we
really need to care about is not what any community is, but rather how each and ev-
ery community of ours functions. And the key to understanding function is in ex-
amining the particular way that human relations are structured.
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Thus it is that the structure that Diana implemented required that we take on
some of the real challenges of maintaining a healthy and somewhat self-balanc-
ing community: that is, using hierarchy to create a more democratic and shared
system that would support equality; negotiating through good faith rather than
through force, intimidation, or hierarchy alone; and developing a structure that
included ourselves in much—but not quite completely—the same position as
those we supervised, a perspective from which we, also, stood to learn and
change and negotiate our own pedagogies and our administrations with those
who were doing all of the actual teaching. I see great merit in Traub’s critique in
this Symposium that demonstrates the failures of an institutional politics that
gives one group all the responsibility for teaching and another group all the au-
thority to govern that work. But I also believe, from my experience, that it is
possible to carefully define a program where some do almost all of the teaching,
others maintain most of the ultimate responsibility for their work, and at the
same time the mutual respect, integrity, and professionalism of both is continu-
ally maintained.
And true, one might say that the details of the LEAP program failure dis-
cussed by Diller and Oates are too different from my own experience to draw
comparisons: Although the GTAs we worked with had vastly different levels of
experience and entirely different academic backgrounds, the participants in the
LEAP program were working across even greater differences in power, experi-
ence, and values. But I do think that we can also look at the structures to account
for much of the difference in outcome: Unlike our system, the design of their
program placed writing instructors into a subordinate position from the very
start, and it provided few contact points for continual discussion and good-faith
negotiation of differences in pedagogy. In their case, I don’t fault the writing in-
structors for insisting on privatization of their own domain; it appears to have
been, considering the nature of the system they were in, their only means to fight
for their pedagogical beliefs and, in accordance with those beliefs, act responsi-
bly toward their students. But again, I would conclude that alternative begin-
nings, and thus alternative endings, are possible.
Catherine Latterell states, in support of what I have been saying, that the
most impressive GTA education programs “combat the damaging notion that
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that same challenge as we move out of the position of “graduate student” and into
increasingly more administrative positions where we will bear more and more re-
sponsibility for shaping and structuring the work of others. But the details, far from
clear, will of course depend on every unique situation, and thus the future tasks ap-
pear, to be perfectly honest, daunting. In fact, in drawing my conclusions for this
piece, I am supposed to include some explanation of how this professional experi-
ence will ease my transition from graduate school to the professoriate. Ironically,
the opposite is true, for it has created a great unease— albeit a healthy one—as I
consider future possibilities. How much easier it would be, I think, to imagine that I
am merely crossing some line that divides subservience from real power, continual
learning from absolute knowing, sacrifice and servitude from moderate monetary
and scholarly rewards. How easy it would be to merely maintain the status quo and
get my “just rewards” when I cross over, and how nice to simply, finally, be “on the
other side” of the hierarchical divide. I have observed a lot of activity on the part of
professors and graduate students alike that indicates that such an operational un-
derstanding is common.
But how could I continue to see it in such simple and straightforward terms,
given my experience with our program and how differently one can approach one’s
role as a scholar-administrator? And how difficult—though rewarding—it might
be, should I even continue to work in academia, to remain a student of others even
though a professor, and to use authority to shape hierarchies that share and distrib-
ute both power and responsibility, rather than enforce top-down dictations of effi-
ciency, consistency, and the values and practices that I believe are right and best.
Thus I remain dutifully suspicious of ease, and respectful of the sort of unease
that will help keep me, as well as others, in check as I move into positions of greater
responsibility for how individuals come together to work and learn from one an-
other. No small task, as others in this Symposium have demonstrated.
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Hamp-Lyons, Liz, and William Condon. “Questioning Assumptions about Portfolio-Based Assess-
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Stephen D. Jukuri received his PhD in Rhetoric and Technical Communication from Michigan
Technological University in May 2000. He currently resides in Benton Harbor, Michigan.
Suellynn Duffey
University of Wisconsin–Eau Claire
Ben Feigert
University of Texas at Austin
Vic Mortimer
Stevensville, Montana
Jennifer Phegley
University of Missouri–Kansas City
Melinda Turnley
Purdue University
And how can we do so without reifying the either/or dichotomy between private,
individual space and public, communal arenas that Jukuri explores in his essay
for this Symposium?
We will argue that graduate student experiences in collaborative writing
program administration can, under the right conditions, begin to provide answers
to both of those questions. Through our story of the generative conflict that arose
out of our work together, we will suggest that collaboration can foster critical
self-reflection in peer teaching groups and establish a community of teachers
with their own professional identities—identities that will allow them to under-
stand and enact, in powerful ways, their roles as agents of change when they be-
come faculty members.
Great Expectations
In “Feminist Writing Program Administration: Resisting the Bureaucrat
Within,” Amy Goodburn and Carrie Shively Leverenz narrate their shared expe-
rience as graduate student WPAs in a collaboratively structured writing program.
They explore their surprise at discovering the degree to which they had internal-
ized, even at times yearned for, hierarchical power structures in which the lines
of authority, ownership, and power are clearly and decisively defined. They
name this desire “the bureaucrat within,” and they argue that this inner bureau-
crat must be resisted if feminist notions of collaboration are to transform institu-
tional structures.
Goodburn and Leverenz’s initial optimism about collaboration and their
efforts to resist their inner bureaucrats are remarkably similar to our own exper-
ience. We began our tenure as peer-group facilitators with a similar optimism
and ideal: that a collaboratively structured program would invite new graduate
student instructors—and new writing program administrators—to develop, pro-
actively, their own professional identities, philosophies, and practices. This
professional involvement, we believed, would generate energy for change, en-
courage critical pedagogies, and develop an exceptionally complex writing pro-
gram shaped by the experiences, knowledge, and needs of many people rather
than by the single vision of the program director. We expected few difficulties,
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among ourselves, since we had spent the previous year collaboratively revising
individual syllabi as well as the core syllabus that the next group of new teachers
would use. In the process we addressed many pedagogical issues and conse-
quently the belief systems surrounding them. By the time we began working as
peer-group facilitators, most of us thought that we had reached agreement on the
relevant theoretical issues concerning the curriculum and collaboration.
We were surprised, however, to find that in the following year we never
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tional trappings of authority. Early on, Jennifer wrote of her conflict about hier-
archical authority:
These peer groups are a weird ‘genre.’ Although they do have pro-
fessional motivations, they also have personal ones. . . . I want . . .
[our] casual interactions . . . [in] other contexts to make their way
into the ‘official’ site of the group. But, how do I balance this with
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Another example shows, further, how our peer group members also compli-
cated their teaching roles. In a peer group evaluation written at the end of the
first quarter of teaching, one new TA has this to say about Jennifer: “I think you
could have been less tentative about having ‘authority.’ I certainly would not
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have been offended.” Some TAs in her group were dissatisfied because, rather
than give definitive answers, Jennifer turned questions back to the group in a
gesture that asked for critical thinking.
However, just as our perceptions of authority changed over time, so did the
TAs’, as Jennifer found when speaking to two members of her peer group a year
later. At that point, they recognized that not getting easy answers had allowed
and, indeed, required them to think critically about their own teaching practices.
Speaking from the vantage point of a year of teaching experience and thought-
fully constructed teaching identities, the former peer group members understood
how much they had learned from questioning and experimenting with possibili-
ties rather than getting “easy” or “official” answers from a peer-group facilitator
the first time. In order to foster in new TAs the kind of collaborative, critical
pedagogy that we espoused, Jennifer and the rest of us had to resist adopting the
directive authority that many TAs believed they needed.
As we have shown, one of the first steps in negotiating our conflict was
addressing the concern that we would exert too much authority in the peer
groups. This concern was alleviated by the realization that even in the absence
of the institutional power that accompanies the subject position of “teacher,”
we still were, by virtue of our teaching experience and other training, more ex-
pert than most (if not all) our group members. Indeed, that absence of authori-
tarian power enabled us to enact, no matter how haltingly and hesitantly, a col-
laborative pedagogy in our peer groups. Unlike Traub and Diller and Oates, we
worked in a bureaucratic environment—the writing program—that made a con-
scious push toward a relatively egalitarian collaboration between senior and ju-
nior group members. Nevertheless, we still had to learn how to resist the bad
old bureaucrats within us (and the TAs in our groups) as we struggled to enact
our ideals.
We know now that while we were facilitating peer groups, we were actively
constructing our roles, our authority, in resistance to institutional and TA expec-
tations: a resistance to authoritarian hierarchies echoing from the bureaucrat
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within. This was a mostly intellectual resistance since we didn’t have much “bu-
reaucratic” authority anyway. More critically, we resisted TA expectations that
we would dispense wise advice, and we resisted our own and each other’s ideal-
ized criteria for good peer-group facilitating. These criteria having originated in
part because we idealized our predecessor peer-group facilitators. Our idealistic
(perhaps even utopian) theories were fruitfully complicated by our practice, in
both our teaching groups and our facilitator meetings.
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The story we tell illustrates that asserting one’s authority through collabora-
tive structures shapes a particular kind of identity formation. Melinda observed:
room space in a way that is, we contend, more ethically responsible to the
need for our discipline to educate graduate students fully about the politics in-
herent in our field.
Epilogue
Diller and Oates, as well as Traub, remind us of how fortunate we were.
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leagues who are, it can be argued, among the most profoundly individualistic
of all our citizens.
Note
1While we write as a unified “we,” the pronominal construction is clearly a fiction. During the
academic year 1994–95, Suellynn Duffey directed the First-Year Writing Program at Ohio State Uni-
versity. The rest of us were part of a group of eight graduate students who assisted in the administra-
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tion of the First-Year Writing Program by working as peer-group facilitators (PGFs). In the peer-
group facilitator meetings, each of us assumed different roles. Nonetheless, a collective “we” strug-
gled in those weekly meetings, and subsequently, to articulate, from our varied positions, the nature
of the conflicts surrounding administration and authority. We tell this story from our collective, doc-
umented memory, those documents including written logs and position papers created for staff meet-
ings during our initial collaboration.
In the process of drafting this essay, we struggled to make the “we” that tells our story reflect
our multiple viewpoints. This struggle has been, to our minds, only partially successful (thus this
lengthy note). For example, we suggest that we like collaboration because it allows room for differ-
ence, yet we elide differences by trying to unify our voices textually. During conference presenta-
tions on this topic, this contradiction was avoided by our physical presence as different bodies. In
turning this account of our work into a disembodied text, however, we don’t have that luxury. Still,
we feel that we have come to a consensus that reflects the kinds of productive compromises we en-
acted as participants in a collaborative administrative structure. The graduate student instructors cho-
sen by the UWP faculty included two students who had worked at community colleges as directors
of writing and several former UWP teaching counselors. In addition, UWP instructors had done re-
search and presented papers at such venues as CCCC, RSA, MLA, and EDE.
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Ben Feigert teaches ninth- and eleventh-grade English at Seattle Academy of Arts and Sci-
ences. He is also a PhD candidate at the University of Texas at Austin, where he is writing a disserta-
tion about literacy instruction in nineteenth-century American common schools.
Vic Mortimer lives in western Montana, where he studies the poetics of place, the composition
of mountain ranges, and the rhetoric of rivers.
Jennifer Phegley is an assistant professor of nineteenth-century British and American literature
at the University of Missouri–Kansas City. She has published articles on writing program adminis-
tration and collaborative textbook production as well as nineteenth-century periodicals and women
readers. Currently, she is working on a book titled Educating the Proper Woman Reader: Victorian
Family Literary Magazines and the Professionalization of Literary Criticism and coediting a collec-
tion of scholarly essays called Reading Women: From Literary Figures to Cultural Icons.
Melinda Turnley is a PhD candidate at Purdue University, where she continues her collabora-
tive administrative work as a comentor in both the computer composition and professional writing
programs. Her dissertation, Re-Mediating Writing and Re-Writing Media: A Critical Investigation of
Mediological Assumptions in Composition Pedagogies, focuses upon the pedagogical and adminis-
trative implications of incorporating various media (both new and familiar) into writing instruction.