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Read more in his speech Flaxen Threads: The Power of Our Habits to see how the power Commented [7]: This sentence felt a little
disconnected from the sentence above. Maybe we
of repentance encourages us to change bad habits and build new ones. could connect it to the object lesson by doing
something like this?
Source: BYU Speeches
I also removed "while" here and added "but" before the
next clause because the very next sentence also
begins with "while." And I added Asay because there
FEATURE IMAGE BY (the Design Team will add the name of the photographer were a lot of references to other people right above
(the teacher, the student, Satan), which made the "his"
here, also in all caps) and "he" a little unclear. Ok?
Commented [8]: I love how you sum up the article in
Find more insights six steps like this. It makes it a very quick and insightful
read.
Learn more about freeing yourself from bad habits in Marvin J. Ashton’s general Commented [9]: "This" is a little ambiguous. Maybe
conference address Shake Off the Chains with Which Ye Are Bound say something like "building uplifting habits"?
Commented [10]: Should we say "Carlos E. Asay"
instead of "his"?
For more ideas on breaking habits, check out the New Era article Idea List: Breaking Bad
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