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Name: Sam

Content: homework writing no.2

1. There is no need to complete an education beyond a primary school level.

Agree or not?
Nowadays, the question of whether having access to an education beyond
an elementary school level is necessary or not has been receiving a great
deal of public attention. Although the pursuing an education from primary
school to university can cause some problems, the advantages will be far
more significant.
There are a number of reasons for getting further than a primary school
level. First, since students want to land a decent job which require a good
grasp of knowledge, completing elementary education just provide the
base that is exiguous to help people become competitive on the labor
market. In fact, people who leave school early and do not keep studying
higher have difficulty finding a job due to the lack of complicated
specialized knowledge and fundamental theories, this means that spending
more time studying in higher level is essential. Second, by only finishing
primary school, students are eleven years old that is not mature enough to
find a job. For example, in some countries according to labor law people
only from the age of 15 are acceptable for work, which requests student to
complete at least secondary education.
2. There are some compelling reasons why television causes the downfall of
society’s interpersonal communication. First, since everyday there are a
whole host of TV programs which are broadcasted, people tend to glue
eyes into screen in order to get a sense of relaxation in lieu of go out to
catch up. In fact, the motion and attractive content from TV bring mental
rewards to people, which trigger curiosity rather than daily conversations.
3. There are a number of reasons why young couples delay parental hood.
First, since young people have to face with intense competition on the
labor market, many couples decide to give birth later with a purpose of
concentrating time, money and effort on their career. In fact,
procrastinating parenthood allow people get more done with higher
commitment in lieu of spend time taking care of their children all day,
result in better salaries and wages.
Name: Sam
Content: homework writing no.2

Writing No.02

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Ý 01 viết ở mức độ cá nhân

First, since many noble jobs, such as educators or medical practitioners, require Bachelor’s or Master’s
degrees, higher education is a necessity. In fact, one cannot become a doctor without having medical
knowledge, or one cannot become a designer without being armed with designing theories taught in
higher education, not primary school, which implies that students should pursue higher education for
noble jobs.

Có thể viết ở tầm quốc gia

Since a decent educational system can help with lowering the rate of unemployment nationally, children
should not be deprived of all-rounded education(giáo dục toàn diện) as they will become high qualified
employees now and down the road. In fact, being armed with full knowledge and skills of higher
education, they can find jobs more easily, either in domestic or foreign markets, which will help them
improve their quality of life.


Một là, bởi vì cấp 1 không cung cấp đủ kiến thức đi làm (specialised knowledge), học sinh khó tìm việc
sau này (students find it hard to land high-paid jobs later on). Cụ thể, cấp 1 chỉ dạy kiến thức cơ bản
(fundamental knowledge) như nghe nói đọc, không đủ để phục vụ cho môi trường lao động trong tương

Hai là, bằng cách tham gia các giáo dục cao (higher education), học sinh sẽ có cơ hội hoàn thiện các kỹ
năng mềm(foster soft skills). Cụ thể, giáo dục cao sẽ dạy cho học sinh về các kỹ năng sống, như là giao
tiếp, suy nghĩ logic, tinh thần đồng đội, thông qua các hoạt động như là, tranh luận hoặc thuyết trình, từ
Name: Sam
Content: homework writing no.2

này giúp các bạn tự tin hơn trong công việc và cuộc sống sau này .

Đáp án dịch thuật

Bài 1

There are a number of reasons why television destroys people's communication skills.
First, since there are thousands of shows at disposal (cụm này nghĩa là lúc nào cũng có sẵn, phát
sóng), people tend to stick with the screen to relax instead of hanging out with others. In fact,
fascinating contents and motions from Tv bring people mental rewards, which triggers people's

Bài 2

There are a number of compelling reasons why a growing number of young couples may give
birth later in life. First, since the competition in the labor market is becoming fierce, many
couples choose to give birth later in life with the aim of focusing time, effort and money on their
careers. In fact, delaying parenthood allows couples to work longer hours with higher
commitments, resulting in better wages and salaries.