Report: Heart failure leading to short and long term death

Heart failure leading to short and long

term death
by Jawi Coles

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Report: Heart failure leading to short and long term death

Heart failure leading to short and long

term death
Abstract This paper contains information taken from the
article about elevated systolic blood pressure during the
heart failure of a patient. It tackles to whom does heart
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failure is prone to. As mentioned below, this heart failure
was common in aged people or persons 50 years above.
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There are lots of topics that can use to discuss with. But
still, I choose this topic not just for myself but also for
other people to be aware of this illness. Heart failure was
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too risky for everyone. This can be lead to short and long
term death. There are issues sighted in the article, and
people should be aware of their health as a person. Most,
especially aged person, should have a monthly check-up
to maintain a healthy body. They should maintain a
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healthy lifestyle to live longer. Hildegard E. Peplau's
theory of Interpersonal Relations Theory can be used to
reconcile this issue. Keywords: heart failure, Low/high
systolic blood pressure Heart Failure is a kind of illness
that will hit a person suddenly. I choose this topic or
article, to become aware and knowledgeable enough to

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prevent this occurrence. Also, for the awareness of
everybody that this illness exists without any speci c
symptoms. According to the DOH, persons with the age of
50 above are most prone. Because they already have a
low immune system, that is why they are more prone to
diseases, and they can hardly ght for infections. Their
muscles and bones are weak. There are lots of underlying
reasons that a person may have heart disease. It was
because of fatty foods that a patient consumed, or this
disease was already in their family genes. The patients
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that were being admitted to the hospital with acute heart
failure have low Systolic Blood Pressure (SBP). SBP levels
vary among patients with different heart failure. Systolic
is the amount of pressure in the arteries during
contraction of the heart's muscle. Therefore, if the
patient was found out having a very high/low systolic
blood pressure was considered at-risk factor. It may also
lead to short and long term death of the patient. The
interpersonal relations Theory by Hildegard E. Peplaucan
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can be used in this issue. The theory talks about the
interactions between an individual who is sick or in need
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of health services and a nurse that is educated enough to

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respond for help. As a health care provider, it is their job
not just to cure illnesses but also to prevent it from
happening. It is advisable, especially for elders, to have a
monthly check-up. Let us encourage them to live a
healthy lifestyle. Avoid vices and alcoholic drinks as
possible.

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1. to Inappropriate Delivery
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3. This Intricate Text Clarity

4. ¶ Hildegard... Intricate Text Clarity

5. . Also → , also Incomplete Sentences Correctness

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9. The theory talks about the interactions between Wordy Sentences Clarity
an individual who is sick or in need of health
services and a nurse that is educated enough to
respond for help.

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