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(c) To avoid breaking up elements that belong together:

write
No action may be taken against the Corporation in respect of the Corporation's obligation to
Legistics make a payment in relation to a deposit held by a member institution that is being wound up.
Possessives
avoid
No action may be taken against the Corporation in respect of the obligation of the Corporation
Introduction to make a payment in relation to a deposit held by a member institution that is being wound
up.
Legislative counsel have traditionally been reluctant to use the "'s" form of the possessive (e.g., "in the
Minister's opinion") in the English version of legislative texts; they have generally preferred the "of" Because "to make a payment" relates to "obligation", the provision reads more naturally when these
form (e.g., "in the opinion of the Minister"). However, the "'s" form may often be the better choice from two elements are not separated.
the point of view of the readability and ease of use of the text: besides being shorter, it is the most
frequent option in everyday English. The "'s" form is not slang or substandard English. It has been in
(d) To put new or complex information in final position:
the language for hundreds of years, surviving from the time when English nouns had case endings,
like Latin. There is a general tendency in English to place new information and relatively more complex
information at the end of a sentence. Using the "'s" form may be advisable if it achieves one of these
aims and therefore makes the sentence read more naturally:
Recommendation
write
Drafters should not be reluctant to use the "'s" form of the possessive, or the possessive pronouns The Commissioner is the chief executive officer of the Agency and is responsible for the
"its", "his or her" and "their" (see the article Gender-neutral Language), when appropriate. The Agency's [old information][1] management [new information].
examples that follow should help legislative counsel decide when one of these choices is appropriate,
and at times the criterion will simply be what constitutes idiomatic English (for example, "the arrest of avoid
the suspect" can be redrafted as "the suspect's arrest", but "member of Parliament" cannot be The Commissioner is the chief executive officer of the Agency and is responsible for the
redrafted as "Parliament's member"). Legislative counsel who wish to obtain more information on the management [new information] of the Agency [old information].
subject are invited to consult the sources listed at the end of this article.
write
The Board is responsible for the management of the Agency's [simpler information]
resources, services, property, personnel and contracts [more complex information].
Discussion and examples
avoid
The Board is responsible for the management of the resources, services, property, personnel
1. Use of the "'s" form instead of the "of" form to indicate possession and contracts [more complex information] of the Agency [simpler information].
In addition to the general considerations noted above, the "'s" form of the possessive may be
preferable to the "of" form for a number of reasons:
2. The possessive pronouns "its", "his or her", and "their"

(a) To avoid ambiguity: In the first example provided under 1(d), the expression "the Agency's" could have been replaced by
the pronoun "its". As noted above, the second mention of "the Agency" is old information, and the role
write of pronouns is generally to represent old information:
For greater certainty, a candidate's representative who is present at a polling station is not an The Commissioner is the chief executive officer of the Agency and is responsible for its management.
election officer. A candidate shall, within three months after polling day, send to his or her official agent a written
avoid statement in the prescribed form that sets out the amount of any personal expenses that he or she
paid and details of those personal expenses, including documentation of their payment.
For greater certainty, a representative of a candidate who is present at a polling station is not
an election officer.
3. Use of the "'s" form with collective nouns and inanimate nouns
(b) To avoid repeating "of" several times:
One question that can arise is whether the "'s" form can be used with collective nouns and inanimate
write nouns. The answer is yes with respect to collective nouns, especially if they denote organizations or
"appropriate provincial minister", in relation to a provincial institution, means the minister of other groups of living beings:
the Crown of the institution's province of incorporation who is responsible for the institution's
supervision. • in the Board's absence
(or "in the absence of the Board")
avoid • the partnership's registered office
"appropriate provincial minister", in relation to a provincial institution, means the minister of (or "the registered office of the partnership")
the Crown of the province of incorporation of the institution responsible for the supervision of
the provincial institution.
• the herd's vaccination date
(or "the vaccination date of the herd")

With respect to inanimate nouns, there is no single general rule. It is acceptable to write "in the
absence of fraud", but not "in fraud's absence"; "the incidence of mortality", but not "mortality's
incidence". However, one can say either "the vessel's condition" or "the condition of the vessel"; "the
drug's effectiveness" or "the effectiveness of the drug"; "Canada's multiculturalism policy" or "the
multiculturalism policy of Canada". The choice depends on what is idiomatic and appropriate in a
given case.

4. Use of the apostrophe in expressions of time and measurement

For a considerable period it was customary, in legislative texts, to omit the apostrophe after the "s" in
certain plural expressions indicating time or measurement (e.g., two days notice, six months wages).
The reasons for this departure from ordinary English practice are no longer clear, and there is now
agreement that it should cease. Legislative counsel should therefore use the apostrophe in both
singular and plural expressions of this type, as indicated in the following examples:

one day's notice


five days' notice
one month's wages
six months' wages
one year's experience
three years' experience
one dollar's worth
two dollars' worth

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