EAPP GRADE 11

ENGLISH FOR ACADEMIC AND PROFESSIONAL

PURPOSES
INSTRUCTIONAL PACKETS
FIRST QUARTER – MODULE 4

OBJECTIVE (MELC): State the thesis statement of an Academic Text

CODE: CS_EN11/12A-EAPP-Ia-c6

SUBJECT MATTER: THESIS STATEMENT

LOGGING IN

When writing something we do not just write for any reason, we write

because we wanted to convey something to our readers. When

writing it often takes the form of persuasion- convincing others that

you have an interesting, logical point of view on a topic. How to

convince readers? Facts and supporting evidences are needed to

create good and well elaborated paragraphs. Thesis Statement is

important in Academic Writing for it aids the writer to organize its

ideas in planning essays and presenting them. It also serves as guide

for the reader to easily navigate ideas presented in the text.

A LITTLE THROWBACK TO YOUR MEMORY LANE!

In line with the topic in your past module, read and summarize the

text given below using your own words applying effective

summarizing techniques you learned in your previous lesson.

 Filipino children use mobile and computer technology in their

daily lives for numerous activities including surfing the net, playing

computer games, logging in social networking sites, and doing

homework, the question of how this can affect their well-being and

lifestyle becomes even more relevant in the present time. This study

aims to identify the positive and negative effects that could possibly

arise from the early exposure of Filipino children to these

technologies in three areas: (1) physically, (2) socially and (3)

educationally. This article finishes with an evaluation of the

advantages and disadvantages of computer exposure tackled and a

recommended use of such devices.

More often than not, positive effects on physical well-

being associated with mobile and computer technology are not direct

results of their actual use, but are brought about when these gadgets

are utilized as a medium by programs and software dedicated to

promoting overall physical wellness. Examples of which are activity-

promoting gaming systems and mobile games that promote healthy

eating (Subia & Tatel, 2014).

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 If you have noticed, writers use summarizing techniques in

writing to highlight important details in the text. This strategy is

helpful to writers in planning and presenting their ideas in the text.

Writing is an activity that requires organization. Although it

sometimes starts with chaotic process, much preparation is needed.

Therefore, as ideas arise there are two important components to

consider- the thesis statement and the outline.

Score: _______/10pts.

DIG IT DEEP, THIS LESSON TO KEEP!

What is THESIS STATEMENT?

The thesis statement is the overall idea or argument of your

work. It is a general statement that presents essential points that

leads the reader to the right direction. Your thesis statement makes

all parts of your work stick together.

A good thesis statement should be focused and succinct,

and must be framed as a declarative sentence. Ideally, the

statement should have at least three ideas that will be developed in

succeeding sections of the work.

Consider this example:

The ASEAN region is a dynamic system because it capitalizes on

cultural diversity, rich resources, and a variety of perspectives.

In the example presented above, the main idea in the

statement is the ASEAN region is a dynamic system. In order to

support this, there are three points that need elaboration- (1)

cultural diversity, (2) resources and (3) a variety of perspectives.

These three points are the supporting ideas that will then be

developed in each paragraph in order to make the main idea a well

elaborated one.

A good thesis statement has several qualities:

1. A thesis statement is always framed as a declarative

statement.

Poor example: What is plagiarism?

Improved version: Plagiarism can be explained from cultural and

socio-political perspectives.

2. A good thesis statement is focused, meaning it provides

supporting points that strengthen the main claim.

Poor example: An effective local government unit should have good

communication facilities and efficient resource management

programs since these initiatives will be beneficial for its citizens.

Improved version: Effective dissemination of information and

efficient resource management are indicators of effective local

governance.

3. A good thesis statement has clear boundaries. Meaning, it sets

limits to what the essay intends to explore.

Poor example: Guitar playing skills can be improved if the player is

dedicated and there are sessions devoted to technique and

investments on good equipment must be considered since these will

be influential in performing in front of an audience.

Improved version: Excellent guitar playing requires countless hours

of practice, strategic decisions in purchasing equipment, and

tireless dedication.

#HASHTAG ON YOUR MIND!

To avoid confusion in writing your thesis statements always

remember to have the main idea and two or more supporting

ideas to be elaborated.

Your thesis statement will guide you to organize your

thoughts and ideas when you write your essays.

A thesis statement is one sentence that expresses the

main idea of a research paper or essay. It makes a claim,

directly answering a question. You must be very specific,

summarizing points that are about to be made in your paper, and

supported by specific evidence. Generally, your thesis statement

can be the last line of the first paragraph in your research

paper or essay.

FLEXING IT OUT!

Directions: Identify the main idea and the supporting ideas in the

following thesis statements. Underline the main idea twice and

the supporting ideas once. (2 pts. each)

Score: _____/20pts.

1. Suspend the manufacturing of recyclable bags because it has

problematic production, it has added resources needed and it

increased cost.

2. Political dynasties should be stopped because it stifles

development, it monopolizes resources and it limits people’s

choices.

3. High levels of alcohol consumption have detrimental effects on

your personal health, such as weight gain, heart disease, and

liver complications. (samples.yourdictionary.com)

4. Americans should add exercise to their daily morning routine

because it not only keeps their bodies at a healthy weight but

also reduces the risk of high blood pressure.

(samples.yourdictionary.com)

5. Automated elections should be improved to minimize fraud,

facilitate faster turnout, and maximize voter participation.

6. Despite some risks, online businesses can be sustainable

models for doing business since they minimize operating costs

and provide greater options for consumers.

7. Reading develops child’s mind by fostering comprehension

skills, increasing vocabulary, and exposing them to new worlds

they might not otherwise encounter. (samples.yourdictionary.com)

8. Cycling should be promoted in the Philippines because it is a

cheap method of travel, it is a sustainable transport and it has

health benefits.
 9. Stop the implementation of martial law because it violates

human rights, defeats freedom of the press and it oppressed

people’s freedom.

10. Integrating technologies inside the classroom is useful because

it catches student’s attention, develops classroom discussion

and motivates learning.

CHALLENGE ACCEPTED!

Read the following excerpts from essays and identify the

thesis statement. Then with the qualities presented above,

decide if it is a good thesis statement or not. Justify your

answer. (5 pts. each)

Score: ________/10pts.

1. A person who organizes, manages, and assumes the risks of an

enterprise is called an entrepreneur. The entrepreneur starts a

business, willing to take risks in order to make money, and they are

the ones involved in entrepreneurship. Entrepreneurship started as

early as 17,000 B.C.E where the first known instance of humans

trading comes from New Guinea when locals exchanged obsidian

used for hunting arrowheads for other needed goods. The original
entrepreneurs were traders and merchants until the development of

the market system and the inventions of money. In modern society,

entrepreneurship continues to become a major factor affecting our

economy since every organization had an entrepreneurial beginning

of the organization. As modern society continues to develop, the

range of entrepreneurship also increase as it was already possible to

have young entrepreneurs. Furthermore, students already studying

entrepreneurship that can help them determine the importance and

benefits of being involved in business. The essay aims to evaluate

the benefits to evaluate the importance of being into business even

at such a young age and its benefits to graduating students (Chicago,

2014).

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2. Batman, Captain America, Superman, Wonder Woman. These are

famous super heroes that have kept their worlds safe, but they have

also helped our world. The idea of super heroes has greatly benefited

society by giving them creativity, confidence, and courage. Children

usually dress up as super heroes during Halloween, or even on a

regular basis. They do this not simply because they find their

costumes, gadgets, and superpowers cool, but also because they

look up to these superheroes as role models. There must be

something more than gadgets for these kids to admire superheroes

and not super villains. The reason is because these superheroes are

good. Not only they do fight the bad guys, but they also have the

capability of bringing out the best in us. This essay will discuss the

history of superheroes, the difference between superheroes and

other fictional characters, and how all these things have positively

affected society (Suarez, 2012).

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Prepared by:

RITCHEL C. PALOMATA

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TOTAL SCORE FOR THIS MODULE __________/50 PTS

You may proceed to the next, Module 5!!!