rhetorical analysis

by jennifer burn

Submission date: 22-Sep-2020 09:17AM (UTC-0500)

Submission ID: 1393874742
File name: rhetorical_analysis.docx (17.55K)
Word count: 1105
Character count: 5396
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file name

Rhetorical Analysis Word Count 1302

head
2

28+
not on works cited

7
thesis in

ts
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ts

ts

ts
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plag

PFI3
 page number

cs5 frag5 fused5 ss5 sv5

wcp--separate
not cited in paper wce

not cited in paper

rhetorical analysis
ORIGINALITY REPORT

26 %
SIMILARITY INDEX
16%
INTERNET SOURCES
2%
PUBLICATIONS
23%
STUDENT PAPERS

PRIMARY SOURCES

1
work.chron.com
Internet Source 12%
2
Submitted to Dalton State Colege
Student Paper 9%
3
Submitted to Southern New Hampshire
University - Continuing Education
4%
Student Paper

4
Submitted to Mississippi State Board for
Community & Junior Colleges
2%
Student Paper

Exclude quotes Off Exclude matches Off

Exclude bibliography Off
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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

/100 Instructor

PAGE 1

QM page number
Your last name and the page number must be here.

Comment 1
This assignment is an academic essay. You MUST write in third person. Eliminate all forms of “I,”
“we,” and “you” from your essay.

QM file name
Please use the assigned naming format when you save your file.

QM Rhetorical Analysis Word Count 1302

Your word count:

Minimum required: 1000

Maximum: 1400

Additional Comment

1040

QM head
improper heading format--See the "How to Set Up a Word Document in MLA Format" handout in the
Instructions with Screen Shots folder in the Information area of Blackboard.

Comment 2
Use the due date.

QM 3
Your title needs to reflect the main idea of your thesis more directly.

QM 28+
 improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.
Additional Comment

Check all of your introductions to quotations to make sure you use complete sentences (independent
clauses) and colons as required.

QM not on works cited

Everything you cite in your paper must be on the works cited page.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form
Additional Comment

Check all of your parenthetical citations to make sure you have used the assigned format.
Remember that each parenthetical citation must match the beginning of its corresponding works
cited entry.

QM thesis in
inadequate thesis
Additional Comment

See rhetorical analysis yellow card 3

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See rhetorical analysis blue cards

PAGE 2

QM page number
Your last name and the page number must be here.

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See rhetorical analysis blue cards

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See rhetorical analysis blue cards

QM 8
 Missing citation
You must provide a parenthetical citation for each quotation or paraphrase.
Additional Comment

From the assignment page: "You must document the sources you use for quotations and for ideas,"

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See rhetorical analysis blue cards

PAGE 3

QM page number
Your last name and the page number must be here.

QM plag
plagiarized

QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

See rhetorical analysis green cards

PAGE 4

QM page number
Your last name and the page number must be here.

Comment 3
I have not marked grammar and sentence structure errors. Make sure to eliminate the errors listed
below: (Look for other errors as well; all errors count against you in the final draft.

QM cs5
comma splice, Section S-3, Comma Splices, Fused Sentences, pp. 258-259 and Grammar Unit III
on Blackboard

QM frag5
fragment, Section S-2, Fragments, pp. 256-257 and Grammar Unit III on Blackboard

QM fused5
fused sentence, Section S-3, Comma Splices, Fused Sentences, pp. 258-259 and Grammar Unit III
on Blackboard
QM ss5
faulty sentence structure (rephrase & Section S-1, Elements of a Sentence, pp. 252-255)

QM sv5
subject-verb agreement, Section S-5, Subject-Verb Agreement, pp. 273-276 and Grammar Unit III on
Blackboard

QM wcp--separate
The works cited must be on a separate page.

QM not cited in paper

You cannot include references on your works cited page that are not cited in the paper.

QM wce
Your works cited entries contain a lot of errors. Please use your textbook to fix the problem.

QM not cited in paper

You cannot include references on your works cited page that are not cited in the paper.