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Below there are errors from your essays. There is one error from each persons essay. The sentences are written out exactly as they were in the essays handed in. Find the mistakes and correct the sentences to make the text more readable and understandable. Sentences to correct & edit: Another importance of multinational companies is when a host country gets Tax revenue from them. These include both direct and indirect taxes. Also countries may make

economic laws for the sake of its economy and its revenue.

On the other hand, also some domestic products cant get well develop, even though are cheap people are usually willing to buy those multinational companies products, because they are good quality, famous brand, nice packaging.

As what I say, multinational company against the market of the country. How can we do? We should change the direction of the company. I think that local company should create a market that has no compete which is means competition doesnt work in this market.

At the final, the multinational company usually has huge body. So they can make large employment with every countries that they are work in.

First of all, Multinational companies create new business in the country where they are situated. Theses companies may be the first of its kind in such countries.

Besides, MNCs and their products are also causing people to be less independent and lazy. They tend to rely on these products too much that when it is taken away from them, it leaves them completely clueless and choiceless. 1

The death,unemployment and crime rate also increase in areas were Multinational Companies are found because these companies often promise to create job opportunities for the indigines,but fail to do this,leaving room for the indigenes to revolt voilently,like the Oriente- Texaco case in Ecaudor,wherby the Ecuadorian Government argued that the Yadana pipeline had led to the extensive human rights abusives,specifically rape and death.

However, the disadvantages of multinational companies are that, it can result in exploiting, serious effect in global warming and it can also create unemployment. British Petroleum is one of the multinational companies. Its petrol is greatly used in all over the world for their vehicles.

On the other hand, many people argue that an increase in marketing competition from increase the number of multinational companies, which can make many small business closing down. With this situation some small businesses who do not want to go bankrupt will copy products and supervisor mode from multinational companies. technology will be discovered. Less now

People can have more choices due to so many mobile phone companies. It makes people communicate easier and more convenient. However, it makes people like comparing the styles of cell phones.

Third, the low labor environment of safety is brought about. When working overseas, it is because it is accompanied also by danger unlike its own country.

The transnational corporations would leads to globalization, which means commerce surmount the compass of countries or continents. In this case those small and unhealthy economic systems would easy be destroyed by those multinational companies if them bankrupt.

First of all, I would like to talk about the Food, which is one of the essential resources in human life. To begin with, different cultures have different types of food, and people love their traditional food for sure. However, if people want try some new types of food, they can get by multinational companies, for example Wal-Mart.

In one side, Multinational companies are more harm than good on transnational corporations, we should pay special attention to is that the technology of multinational companies, brands and developing countries cheap labor combine, can produce the worlds most inexpensive high-quality products, and can have great monopoly pricing space, we can set a low price to developing countries since the industry squeeze the others, can also be expensive access to 200%, 500% of the monopoly profits.

Thirdly, the multinational fast food companys foods are not healthy. The companies such as Mc Donald, KFC etc., this kind of fast food shop most of them are selling unhealthy food like deep fried chicken, fries and burger these all contains lots of oils and fats.

Nowadays, many multinational companies have spread in almost every country, for example NIKE, SONY, McDonalds, etc. since then, multinational companies become more and more important in this globalisation.

Cigarette companies, on the other hand, rely on their advertisements on big billboards and sports for an increase in sales. But the problem is that they are ruining the lives of people whenever their product sells, for example there is an ad that reads We are united by freedom and a passion for racing.

To sum up my opinion, I insist that the government should intervene and prevent monopolization. They keep control and give a chance to small or middle sized companies, which have got enough skills or technologies, can compete with big companies.

Moreover most companies have already been famous in the world, and they have global power to offer their products to consumers by reasonable price or useful services, because they have large power to make products or to keep a resource. So the consumers would be attracted by them, therefore the consumers support to use the companies. And the

consumers feel that it is useful and peaceful ways. So they are good for consumers.

Major products and our life respectively have a very close relation, and hence the multinational companies are often regarded as necessary. As a result, their intervention partly gives several good effects: an increase in employment rates: its convenience and partly gives serious or unfortunate damages: a decline of local industries: environmental problems.

An example of a type of company that create a lot of job opportunity in a developing country is Nescafe and in Kenya. Coffee beans are farmed in Kenya and majority of its population are into coffee farming due to a lack of job opportunity and its level of development. They also increase the wealth of the country through taxes.