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2. Conciseness
3. Consideration
4. Concreteness
5. Clarity 6. Courtesy 7. Correctness
Completeness
Your business message is complete when it contains all the facts, the reader or listener needs for the reaction you desire. Communicators-Sender and receivers-differ in their mental filters; they are influenced by their backgrounds, viewpoints, needs, experiences, attitudes, status, and emotions. Because of these differences, communication senders need to assess their messages through the eyes of receivers to be sure they have included all relevant information. Provide all necessary information Who, what, where, when, why, how? Answer all questions asked
Completeness - examples
Q: How come my request for an interview did not receive a response?
A: When was the letter sent? To whom? Who sent it?
Q: Im new to the city, and would like to join your club. When is the next open day?
A: Where are we? How to get here?
Conciseness
Conciseness is saying what you have to say in the fewest possible words without sacrificing the other C qualities. Eliminate wordy expressions Include only relevant material
Stick to the purpose of the message
Conciseness
Eliminate Wordy Expressions:
At this time Now
Conciseness
Omit unnecessary expressions
Allow me to say how helpful your last response was Your last response was helpful
Conciseness
Omit which and that clause whenever possible.
She bought desks that are of the executive type. She bough executive-type desks
Consideration
Consideration means preparing every message with the message receiver in your mind. You are considerate when you do not lose your temper, you do not accuse, you do not charge them without facts. Focus on you instead of I and we
You are foremost aware of their desires, problems, circumstances, emotions, and probable reactions to your request. This thoughtful consideration is also called you attitude, empathy, the human touch, and understanding.
Consideration
Examples:
I am delighted to announce that we will be
Concreteness
Communicating concretely means being specific, definite, and vivid rather than vague and general. Often it means using denotative (direct, explicit, often dictionary based) rather than connotative words (ideas or notions suggested by or associated with a word or phrase) Thus, the term female may appear in a personal folder as a part of a job description, yet widely different connotations may occur when using terms as wife, mother, spinster, widow, maiden, matron, or dowager.
Concreteness
Guide Lines for creating concrete messages: Use specific facts and figures
It is desirable in both oral & written communication
Example:
Shes a brain
(Vague, General, Indefinite)
Her grade-point average in 2006 was 3.9 on a four-point scale. (Concrete, Precise)
Concreteness
Guide Lines for creating concrete messages: Put action in your verbs
1. 2. 3. 4.
Verbs propel thought: Verbs can activate other words and help
make your sentences alive, more vigorous. That is to have dynamic sentences in your communication. Active verbs help your sentence more: Specific: The dream decided is more explicit than A decision has been made Personal: You will note is both personal and specific; It will be noted is impersonal. Concise: The passive requires more words and thus shows both writing and reading. Compare Figures show with It is shown in the figure. Emphatic: Passive verbs dull action. Compare The students held a contest with A contest was held by the students.
Clarity
Getting the meaning from your head into the head of your reader accurately
Pretentious circa (L) subsequent domicile e.g. (L) remuneration statement for payment
Clarity
Example of Unfamiliar/Familiar sentences: Unfamiliar: After our perusal of pertinent data, the conclusion is that lucrative market exists for the subject property. Familiar The date we studied show that your property is profitable and in high demand.
Clarity
Guideline No. 2 for Communicating with Clarity
Your audience will understand better if you construct effective sentences and paragraphs. This includes:
Length of sentence: Try for 17-20 words per sentence
Unity: In a sentence keep one idea at a time. If you want to add another idea, it should be closely related to the first one.
Example: I like Jim, and Eiffel Tower is in Paris
Clarity
Example of Coherent and non-coherent sentences:
Unclear: Being an excellent lawyer, I am sure you can help us Clear: Being an excellent lawyer, you can surely help us Unclear: Our report is about testing, broken down in unit and functional methods Clear: Our report on testing focused on unit and functional methods Unclear: After planting 10, 000 berry plants, the deer came into our botanists arm and crushed them. Clear: After our botanist had planted 10,000 berry plants, the deer came into his farm and crushed them
Courtesy
The courtesy involves being aware not only of the
perspective of others, but also their feelings. Knowing your audience allows you to use statements of courtesy Be sincerely tactful, thoughtful and appreciative Use expressions that show respect Choose non-discriminatory expressions, for example in order to avoid gender discrimination you can use:
Entering student instead of freshman Workers, employees instead of manpower The best candidate for the position instead of the best man for the position.
Courtesy
Clearly, you did not read my latest fax
reduced
Students who come late to class will have their grades
Correctness
At the core of Correctness is proper grammar,
messages, also means the following three characteristics: Use the right level of language Check accuracy of figures, facts, and words Maintain acceptable witing mechanics.
Correctness
Use the right level of Language: There are three levels of language: formal,
informal, and substandard.
Formal writing this often associated with scholarly writing: doctoral dissertations, scholarly articles, legal documents, top level government agreements, and other material where formality is demanded.
Informal writing is more characteristic of business writing. Here you use words that are short, well known, and conversational as follows:
Correctness
Check accuracy of figures & facts
Verify your statistical data. Double-check your totals Avoid guessing at laws that have an impact on your, the sender and your message receiver Have someone else read your message if the topic involves data Determine whether a fact has changed overtime.
Correctness
Avoid using substandard language:
Substandard vs. more appropriate Aint vs. isnt Aim at proving vs. aim to prove Irregardless vs. regardless Should of vs. should have
Correctness
Accept vs. except
Accept is a verb and means to receive; Except is a verb or a preposition and relates to omitting or leaving out.
Imply, infer
Imply means suggest; infer means to conclude